Serenity the Candyman Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 exactly! Sorry Ash, but you should be dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 ok then. Srry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Don't forget ash can fly XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Sorry for what? \ And how is he the chosen one! What so special about him or that Pikachu....I swear if i saw him I would steal that pikachu. No tools or anything. Just wear rubber gloves and go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Forget it. My diglett faints after your Surf. Quick question, was our battle 1 on 1 or 3 on 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 I was going to end it there and talk to your character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 By all means, go ahead and post it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Oh. Well, my next post ends it. Cuz you made my Diglett faint from Surf. So now Ill post and our characters can talk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 @BlackDiamondDuelist - You're a pretty awesome guy/girl. You learn how to take defeat and you even gave up your first battle The rest of us (including me) can learn from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Aww, I'm happy now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Username: Ultima Master RP Name: Wasin Age:17 Hometown: Johto Reigon Appearance: Tall, Skinny, Long Hair, (Brown), Biography: Grew up in the johto, always dreaming to be a pokemon gym leader, going to cygrus region with high hopes to battle many great trainers. his parents never really cared about him, and neither did he, but now, hes got high hopes for himself Personality: Quite, to himself, leader, mysterious Trainer Type: (Normal Trainer - we need a lot of these, Gym Leader, Elite 4) Gym leader Gym Leader/Elite 4: Which number: which leader spots are open Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 *sighs* again... ultima master, no Gym Leader spots are open. No Elite 4 spots are open. Only Normal Trainers and Team Draconius Commanders (second in command) are needed. And your bio is a little small, in my opinion. Maybe go in to a bit more detail with it. And "Johto Region" isn't a town/village/city. Be specific. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAGNOROK6 Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 [color="#00FFFF"][/color][color="#00FFFF"]I Understand the rules above[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted September 27, 2010 Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Zero can you please response to my response Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2010 Sparkplug, in each post for the RP, you must post at least 4-7 lines. Otherwise, it is considered shortposting, which is against the rules. In addition, try to make your post more detailed. For example, you should have it put up a fight. One attack killing the Scyther doesn't make too much sense. Scythers won't just stand there waiting for the attack to hit. Illustrate the fight out so we as readers can visualize it in our heads. Finally, you didn't mention anything about a Pokeball, yet you said you caught it. All these things when added not only makes the pos. Interesting and fun to read, but it also lengthens the post so it is up to RP standards. Sorry to sound harsh, but I'm just trying to help you become a better RP'er. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 ugh i hate when i get deadlock because ppl don't pay attention to my posts... [quote name='DeathSDelano' timestamp='1285480833' post='4656107'] "Who needs Defense. Darkfire use Flamethrower" Delano grinned Darkfire saw the grin than let out a flamethrower at the oncoming bird. [i]good think i have that other pokemon to help out against this pokemon[/i] "No matter how strong your bird is Darkfire's flamethrower can still cause some damage to your bird. And unforunately aerial ace is a frontal attack". [i]lets see if this works out as planned[/i] [/quote] this the post that you missed on pg 17 Zero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 look i dont have much time right now but i will tell you wat my pokemon will be and were he lived. Blackthorn city and here are my pokemon Lapras: lv40 blizzard zen headbutt hail surf Castform lv37 weather ball sunny day sandstorm rain dance Amphoros lv39 Zap cannon Focus punch Bide Signal beam (yes he can learn that move) Togetic lv 39 metrenome healing wish fly psybeam Muk lv 41 Toxic Slam slduge acid aerodactyl lv 39 Flamethrower rockblast slash super sonic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Unless you want to be a Nebulus Commander or a Draconius Ckmmander, then you MAY ONLY HAVE ONE POKÉMON TO START WITH! Why don't people read the rules?! Also, your Pokémon can learn more than four moves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Um, Zero, in addition to our battle, Shubura is still battling Delano (which you seem to have forgotten) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 I haven't forgotten. I'm just waiting for you to respond to my attacks. I had both my Pokémon attack yours, and you didn't do anything except launch another attack of your own. What's the deal, Zex? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Yeah, sorry. Didn't catch that. I wasn't reading carefully enough... I only saw Substitute and Detect. I'll edit it.Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyTyranitar Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 then ill tkae nebulus commander Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 Well, that's good, I guess, but just make sure that you follow your roll. Being a Nebulus Commander, you work under the team leader, and your main goal is to awaken Palkia and Dialga. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAGNOROK6 Posted September 28, 2010 Report Share Posted September 28, 2010 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1285631213' post='4662142'] Sparkplug, in each post for the RP, you must post at least 4-7 lines. Otherwise, it is considered shortposting, which is against the rules. In addition, try to make your post more detailed. For example, you should have it put up a fight. One attack killing the Scyther doesn't make too much sense. Scythers won't just stand there waiting for the attack to hit. Illustrate the fight out so we as readers can visualize it in our heads. Finally, you didn't mention anything about a Pokeball, yet you said you caught it. All these things when added not only makes the pos. Interesting and fun to read, but it also lengthens the post so it is up to RP standards. Sorry to sound harsh, but I'm just trying to help you become a better RP'er. [/quote] It's OK, I'm just your normal clueless 11 year-old Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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