JadenxAtemYAOI Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Well my online friend BTP wanted help on creating his manga series and he only has the first manga novel done. It needs artist though and he's trying to get his friend IRL to help but he needs a title and suggestions on how to extend the series. This is a basic explanation on what the series is like. There is a group of students each with their own past that the others don't know much about. This is a prep school like the one in Code Lyoko except the boys are allowed in the girl's dorm under certain conditions. The big bad guy Kyuubi(a Japanese mythical legend not something created by the naruto writer) who has been sealed in a temple long seen as myth. His counterpart Jehovah, his brother as well split himself into 9 crystals to bind Kyuubi. Kyuubi has command over the demon versions of the Japanese Zodiac. the demons have classifications on strength. Dorian(high level) Shiniki(mid level) Spurdon(low level) The warriors that are human in this manga are called Reapers or Children Born of Death. the standards weapons and spells are these things Shizoku(sword) Tamarie(twin daggers) Spiron(energy gun) Enezon(weapons or spells made of chi) Jehovah has been silent but he will later guide the secret villain Salathan Bones to good. Jehovah commands the Spirit version of the Japanese Zodiac. Jehovah and Kyuubi have parents as well whose names are Duskis and Lumiski. Duskis and Lumiski are the gods of this manga. Duskis is male and is the god of Darkness, Lumisksi is female and is the god of Light. Duskis raped Lumiski and she bore him two sons who are Kyuubi and Jehovah. Lumiski cursed Duskis and Duskis became the moon and Lumiski became the sun. Jehovah came down on Earth as a human and impregnated a woman and she gave birth to Salathan who would later sell his service for his fiance being brought back to life. Kyuubi waits until Salathan falls in love and gets engaged which he does at the age of 16. Kyuubi sends Miroto, the best fighter of the Demonic Monkey tribe to kill Salathan's fiance. Salathan sees his fiance's dead body and sees Miroto and gives him a gruesome death giving him the nickname Salathan Spoundo Bones. Salathan comes to Kyuubi for help and Kyuubi promises to bring back his fiance if Salathan releases him. Kyuubi strips Salathan of his birth name and gives him the nickname Salathan Spoundo Bones which in Demonic tongue means Heartless Reaper. Salathan loses all his memories and only knows that once he releases Kyuubi he will get back everything he lost. The supposedly head of all the tribes James Connor is a Reaper that was kidnapped at a young age and raised by the Dorian parts of all the tribes. James had one friend in his whole upbringing. The demon tiger is the demon tiger of sand and his name is Sytuso. Now here are the descriptions of the good guys in this manga. Takashi Shizaki age 16 and apparently BTP is still planning what to do with him. His weapon is a Shizoku Marina Conner-16 weapon of choice- spiron An American girl that just arrived to japan but quickly became friends with the main Character Tsuki Koyomoti. Marina's little brother James disappeared when she was 3 years old so she doesn't have that many memories of him. James Connor- 14 weapon of choice- tamarie a teenage boy that serves for Kyuubi. He was kidnapped by Miroto at age 1. Salathan Spoundo Bones- 16 weapons of choice. Twin shizoku, tamarie, twin spiron, enezon Losing his fiance drove him to near madness so he seeked out the temple of Kyuubi. Kyuubi promised him his lost love if he released him. Salathan was stripped of all his memories and his name leaving behind the wedding ring for his beloved. Salathan's job is to search out the 9 crystals that bind Kyuubi. Salathan is untouched by time as his fiance as promised by Kyuubi Tsuki Koyomoti-17 (main character) Weapon of choice- Shizoku a teenage girl with a spirit guardian by the name of Shikinati, a spirit dragon. Marina, Tsuki and Takashi protect the school against the hordes sent by Kyuubi. She doesn't quite know why they attack the school or who commands them but her and her friends protect the school with their lives [b]Demons and Spirits[/b] Systuso- a demon tiger of sand. As long as their is oxygen in the air he came take any attack and regenerate. He is James' demon guardian Pyron- a demonic dog of fire. He is the embodiment of Salathan's sanity and emotions. Whichever emotion Salathan feels (which is neutral most of the time) Pyron gets stronger and he receives an element based off of the emotion. The more emotional Salathan gets the stronger Pyron's attacks become. Miroto- a demonic monkey that was brutally slaughtered by Salathan. Miroto killed Salathan's fiance and kidnapped James. Shikinati- a spirit dragon that became apart of Tsuki's heart after Shikinati died. Shikinati has no memories of her human life but she bears a heart on the center of her forehead. Kyuubi- the nine-tailed fox. Kyuubi was the first born and first to scream. When Kyuubi screamed all of Japan burned and every living thing died. When Jehovah screamed everything that Kyuubi had done was fixed. Kyuubi is Salathan's uncle Jehovah- The Wise Owl. Jehovah sealed Kyuubi away for reasons unknown and is the father of Salathan. This is basically the layout of the first graphic novel Tsuki wakes up Tsuki wakes Marina up for breakfast and class Tsuki is in class and Salathan catches her eye and she becomes curious Kyuubi wakes up the Dorian demons and tells them to invade the school at night Takashi passes out from training the shiniki rat demon swarm invades the school at night Tsuki and Marina sense the demons Marina and Tsuki split-up The shiniki rats swarm the school Marina and Tsuki fend the rats off The dorian tiger tribe invades the school Takashi wakes up and runs to help Tsuki and Marina Takashi reaches Tsuki and Marina and helps them fend off the Shiniki Rats and Dorian tigers. The dorian rams rush in and overcome the 3 reapers Salathan appears in a black coat and charges his twin Spiron and kill half the shiniki rats forcing them to retreat. James appears in the battle and quickly knocks out his sister Marina and Takashi without them seeing him. Tigres, the general of the Dorian Tigers charges after Tsuki and scratches her causing her to bleed Salathan enezon dashes to Tsuki and Tsuki passes out from exhaustion. Salathan quickly kills Tigres with ease. James enezon dashes in front of Salathan and starts talking about Salathan's missing past Salathan's ring glows bright Salathan takes out his shizoku and James and Salathan fight Salathan knocks James tamarie out of his hands. James summons Sytuso and summons his Tamarie back to his hands. James laughs at Salathan's ability to remember anything and continues to insult him further Salathan's ring glows fiery and Pyron appears Pyron rushes and tries to Sytuso but fails to do so James continues to insult Salathan while fighting then Pyron's fire turned into electricity Pyron jolts Sytuso turning him into glass James picks Sytuso up and carries him away Salathan heals Tsuki but passes out Marina opens up her eye for a second a sees a blurry James running Pyron incinerates the entire Dorian tigers forcing the dorian rams to retreat Tsuki wakes up and gets Marina to help carry Salathan to their room to help him. Salathan wakes up to see Marina waiting for him to wake up Marina alerts Tsuki so Tsuki walks in Tsuki asks Salthan about who he is and other things Night time. Salathan and James are seen at Kyuubi's temple planning their next move Systuso has been healed End of Novel 1 summary so what does everyone think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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