So Legit You Quit Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [IMG]http://a.imageshack.us/img831/7457/bleachigo.png[/IMG] Lighting seems off to me, What do you think? I give permission to wear, if you credit <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 it looks like ichigo just put on deodorant and the awesomeness within his armpits caused the deodorant to materialize into a visible gas. I'd say not to have do the blue lights and it would be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Blue goes alright with the Yellow-Orange. And i cant edit it. I saved the PSD like 10 layers in, and forgot to save the finished tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr420QuickScopes Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Super deodorant! This card gives the wearer to have glowing blue arm pits, it has no useful effect whatsoever just used to look cool, +2 to style. Looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milano Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Ichigo: "If... If I just focus my reiatsu into my armpits!" - 20 minute flash back - Someone get's their arm blown up. - Fin.<3 Bottom line, you've got to get rid of the blue. </3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Stfu about the blue. I get the point. Kay, someone actually good at CnCing give me some critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 I don't like the big black space on the right. The tag just feels unfinished. The lighting would look better if you set it do screen or addition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Okay, the blue spots really are a big deal, they are horrible. Lighting seems pretty soft and natural, I think it's succeeded well here. I don't feel the render blends too well with the rest, and I think it's a little too big as a focal. Try also something like a star stock to give it a better atmosphere You wanted CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 @25000st, The way i did the lighting was a blue brush under the render, a clip mask which changed the lighting on the render, and a blue brush on top of the render set on screen. @Seta, What i really meant about the blue spots was to stop talking about deoderant and shiz, and comment on the rest of the tag. I know now there horrid, but as i said i saved less than half way through the tag, and cant edit it and get the same result. As for the render being to big, i did it like that because i didnt want to follow the flow of this sword "since he is 'swinging' it". And i know it doesnt well, its just i didnt have another render with the same flow this had. and this was the best i could do at the moment xD. And I did add a star stock, there are about 2-3. There is one on top of the render, but i erased most of it, so it wouldnt be on the focal. two in the Background (the cloudy look in the right). I asked for CnC and i recieved. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Add more star stocks and don't erase so much, or make a new layer, get a nice color, fill it & put on screen. Then lower the opacity until it gives the tag a nice feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 I see what your sayin now. Ill take it into consideration in the new tag im making:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Strawberry armpits are blue? xD But for srs, depth is pretty good, but the tag's boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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