Magnet Soldier Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 [quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286313001' post='4681885'] That post was not a example of mini modding. The only thing about that post that may be mini modding is that it was about the 4th post by you to try and correct people like god or me in some places. Yes it is necessary to point out mistakes the first time but its not neccesary to repeat yourself and take on the burden of being a corrector in that for more then one insdent. Also as part of squad 11 in the soul society club im in carge of this rp when you submit your character you use the character but (1)[b]I have the right to lock it or keep you from using it if you break The rules set by this rp or forum rules.[/b] When you quit the rp your character traditionally dissapears in the wind unless your not quiting I decide wether to keep it throw it out or give it to someone else. Also I havent touched your character yet (2)[b]I am just talking for lazaruz on this (and if you do not agree then I apologise laz) but he is running now two characters.[/b] Now I didnt set a limit but im advising to stick to two. So its best for him not to run someone elses character. If you care so mutch about who seizes control of it then dont leave. [/quote] (1) I know this, but when did I break the rules? (2) A) It is his choice. If he did not wish to control him(As I stated) he becomes an NPC. I also thought him capable of controlling more than two characters, which is why I chose him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 [quote name='magnet soldier' timestamp='1286473276' post='4685899'] (1) I know this, but when did I break the rules? (2) A) It is his choice. If he did not wish to control him(As I stated) he becomes an NPC. I also thought him capable of controlling more than two characters, which is why I chose him. [/quote] (1) You didn´t (as far as I know), I was just informing that (the post I quoted previously) could maybe be counted as a form of mini-modding (which is against the rules). And Tomiix was mainly talking about what happens IF we break the rules or quit from now on. (2) I will make an attempt at controling him too but if I feel it´s to much, I will either have to leave him as an NPC or pass him to someone else you are ok with. School has already begun to hit me hard regarding tests and homework which is making the time I can spend on YCM much more slim right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I understand that. Ycm is gonna get hit by a plague of teens because of school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [Spoiler=Tomiix] Eventhough your character have met Victor in the future, I have a hard time believing that he would know that Victor called the victims of his forced hollowfication. He may have done it in the future but Victor gave no direct hints that he did it now. That passes it of as Meta-Gaming. Also [quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286488298' post='4686512'] kills all the clones misses the captain and stabs through victors back through the front then the spear explodes but for some reason it barely did any damage. [/quote] [quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286488298' post='4686512'] Tomiix slashed his back while he was attacking the captain stab the two inside him twisted and pulled back the blades. Then he flashsteped to avoid a counter attack he was expecting. [/quote] Makes it Power-Playing to a small degree but I can let that one pass for now since the most common examples have it ending directly in a very good way for your character. (Quoted from the RP section rules) [Quote][b]Meta-Gaming[/b] – This means using information that your character would have no way of knowing in character. For example, if Alice’s father recently died and hasn’t told anyone about it or let information slip, then Bob, who she just met on the street, isn’t going to console her about the loss of her father. Why? He would have no way of physically knowing. Doing this is disrespectful to a character’s intentions and plotting. [b]Power-Playing[/b] – Probably the worst of them, this means taking control over another character or their actions. Like in the previous example, if Alice is going to throw a tomato at Bob, your post with her shouldn’t involve her throwing it and watching it splatter over Bob’s face, because that’s taking away Bob’s controller’s opportunity to dodge it. A better alternative is to have the tomato leave her hand and fly toward Bob, but not mention hitting him.[/quote] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=The God of Darkness] Your post contains a clear example of Power-Playing and God-Moding in a mixed format, it is messy and in dire need of structure through paragraphs. Towards the end, there is also a example of Meta-Gaming. Victor called the hollows through his mind and they have not arrived yet, wich means Tyshio have no way of knowing that Victor summoned Hollows, not even that he is capable of doing that. Victor never became an arrancar, only a powerfull Adjucha before he was defeated by a Soul Reaper and sent to hell. "The Angel of Death" was what he nicknamed himself after hearing other hollows describing him as one while he still was an Adjucha (Most of this is described in the "Hollow" part of his Bio) Unless you don´t edit your post, Victor is as good as dead but regardless, It would be realy hard to respond to that chain of events in a way that made sense (Quoted from the RP section rules) [Quote][b]God-Moding[/b] – This means giving you and your character invulnerability and not giving the other players fair chance over the course of battle. Instances of god-moding include dodging every attack, using an attack that never misses no matter what, giving yourself an unplanned power up halfway through a battle, not properly responding to an attack’s strength, etcetera etcetera etcetera. Just don’t do this; it’s rude and unfair. [b]Meta-Gaming[/b] – This means using information that your character would have no way of knowing in character. For example, if Alice’s father recently died and hasn’t told anyone about it or let information slip, then Bob, who she just met on the street, isn’t going to console her about the loss of her father. Why? He would have no way of physically knowing. Doing this is disrespectful to a character’s intentions and plotting. [b]Power-Playing[/b] – Probably the worst of them, this means taking control over another character or their actions. Like in the previous example, if Alice is going to throw a tomato at Bob, your post with her shouldn’t involve her throwing it and watching it splatter over Bob’s face, because that’s taking away Bob’s controller’s opportunity to dodge it. A better alternative is to have the tomato leave her hand and fly toward Bob, but not mention hitting him.[/quote] [/spoiler] (I think I need to let someone inside my head regarding what I´ve planned for Victor) If you are new to the RP section or just unfamilliar with the rules of the RP section, I advice you to read through them so this doesn´t have to risk getting locked. Also, I apologize if this seems like possible mini-modding but I do not want to see this thread locked. (I´m almost done with a reply for Victor and Atsushi + a possible one for Kazuki (magnet´s old chracter) but right now, my intended reply for Victor heavily conflicts with The god of Darkness´s post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Name: Solitario Luisão Age: 19 Appearance: A tall Caucasian male, short hair, physically fit. Bio: Luisão was an adjucha in the Hollow Forest. He killed most of his followers because he hated them. They were weak, so that Luisão would be on top. He was found by Aizen, were he was told to remove his mask. He refused. Aizen told him of how strong he would become after he removed his mask. Promptly, Luisão decided to do. After he'd done so, A number appeared on his chest. Number 2. Luisão was the second member of the original Espada. After the King of Hueco Mundo, Barragan was appointed the second Espada, Aizen decided to kill Luisão. He escaped, with minor cuts and contusions. He has not been seen since. Hollow Abilites (Cero, Bala, Sonido, etc.): Cero, and Sonido Zanpakutou Name: Diablos-maldición Ressurecion Release Command: Bienvenido Ressurecion Appearance: Vasto Lorde, White Cloak, Mask much resembling Ichigo's Vasto Lorde's mask. Ressurecion Abilites: Super sonic speed, Alma Dividida. (Alma Dividida meaning the ability to rip the soul from a person's body.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 coyote accsepted. laz I was making a assumption, I made a educated guess that he would most likely do that. Also I was making a precausion that he may counter attack this was just a precausin i didnt say he did i said, a counter attack he was expecting, not the counter attack, he expected a counter attack dosent mean a counter attack will occur. God warning two you controled another character and your making your self seem to strong, also you delibritly interupted the battle. Also your at the other side of the soul society then suddenly you happen to be next to use, the demon magically knows cero? That should count for multible warnings but I told you id give you three chances didnt I? Read the rules and dont risk your last chance. Delete that post make it neater make more sence and stop being ignorant by not reading the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Ok, I must have misread your post then. The part about Victor suddenly knowing how to use Cero acctually didn´t bother me so much since I´ve recently started to think that I made a mistake in his app, or to be exact, possibly two. namely: No combat ability that doesn´t require physical contact at some point. (Reaper Mark can be used from a distance but he needs to "mark" his victim first with his hand, The puppets are close combat and relatively to weak to bee considered effective units) And he is unable to quickly transport himself. (He can hide his presence by bending shadows but he would still be moving at regular speed) Soul Reapers know how to use Kido and Flash Stepp Arrancars can use Cero + variations of it and Sonido. But unfortunately, It is to late for me to realise it now when the app is made and accepted so I´ll have to suffer the consequences . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Ill let you edit i want to add a ability to my app too. It wont cost anything as long as it still falls under the original rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 I'm sorry, I'm afraid I'm going to have to quit this RP. I'm having a hard time tracking everybody and everything and went back and reread the entire RP and got even more confused. Thanks a bunch, I recall that at the last time I posted I was being attacked so I'll just leave it at I died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 ok... yeah you wernt really that active, dang it this rp is diein T.T common guys try harder to follow the rules people arent joining cause of the noob mistakes! heck the ooc has more pages then the rp!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Knox Posted October 13, 2010 Report Share Posted October 13, 2010 Name: Knox Star Age: 18 when died. (134 in the Soul Society) Bio: Knox was the son of the founder of Star Inc. a very powerful business in his country. Knox was killed after being in a car accident when he his car was hit by a drunk driver. Knox was sent to the soul socitey where he was very poor. When he got accepted into the academy his family was so proud of him. While at the academy he was at the top of his class just like when he was in high school. Knox is new to his squad and hardly knows anyone in it. Appearance: [spoiler=pic][img]http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p75/je3n/Hot%20anime%20boys/carnagesword.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Certain abilities( Kido, Hoho, Endurance, etc.): Speed. What squad you want to be in: 3 Shikai Name: Vicrow Shikai Appearance:the small sword in my pic Shikai Abilities: Vicrow produces a second sword larger then itself. Shikai drawbacks (You must at least have some): The second sword can only last for a few attacks then it cant be summoned again for a 4 days. Bankai Name: Vicrow Storm Bankai Appearance: Same as my shikai the sword doesn't change. Bankai Abilities: A wall of lightning forms around the battle field. As the battle goes on the wall closes in on those inside of it. Random strikes of lightning hit those in the battle. Bankai drawbacks (You must at least have some): The lightning can hit me also. When the walls touch each other they shoot out a sonic boom knocking both players out for a small period of time (like an hour or two). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 [b]The God Of Darkness[/b]: You are controling my character withouth my permission and that is against the rules. Your post is messy, hard to read and in dire need of paragraphs. Tyshio may be an arrancar but you are also going past God-Moding, another thing that is against the rules. Also, I once again direct you to the bio of Victor. He was poisoned by one of his servants and most his people where left withouth a scratch untill he became a Hollow. The Bio is there for a reason and right now it does not add up with Tyshios since Victor managed to kill the person who poisoned him before even becoming a hollow. Not to mention the age since Tyshio is almost twice as old as Victor. Please edit your latest post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Knox Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Yeah i am reading the rp and their is some character control going on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 god thats strike three you are banned for a month from this rp hone your rp skills somewhere and come back with organised paragraphs and understandable context, also learn not to try to take total control. Templar you are accsepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 O.o I don´t know why, But I enjoy playing Victor A LOT more then Atsushi + I have a much easier time fleshing out his posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 Yeah your victor is real good. Check out the rp imma DRAGON!!! =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Can I joinz. I'll be making my App. Soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Once a app is made you can join monkey that is blind! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Name: Hafuki Kotori (Nicknamed The Blind Monkey)[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Age: Born in Rukongai. Currently 100 years old.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Bio: [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Once a neglected child in the Rukongai, he earned his life by acting as a thief for other people, while stealing some to himself. About to be killed by somebody who caught him, a black-clothed figure with a badge in his arm stopped the man’s hand. As the stranger turned he distinguished tattoos in his forehead, half covered in a white piece of cloth. The red-haired guy smiled at him and gave him an apple from the guy’s post and told him to go to the large door in the great walls. The man jumped in the air and vanished in a dark mesh. Ever since he’s tried to get through those walls, always failing. As he trained and trained he noticed weird markings coming out of his skin. Over the time he grew the Snake Spots, and realized his growing Reiatsu was being manifested in the shape of a blade. As he used it he got tired faster, and decided he would instead focus on Physical Strength. He never stopped training with his Sword though; he just practiced hand combat more often. As he became a grown-up, he became aware of his Zanpakuto’s presence; although couldn't manifest Shikai. That’s when he remembered what the White covered man told him. He enrolled into the [/size][/size][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shinigami[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Academy [/size][/size][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]and took the six-year course. He failed in Kido exams several times, and made it up by passing an Extra Credit Physical Combat Test against his Professor. He first came to the 6[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]th[/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] Squad a year after he graduated. He was recruited by its Lieutenant.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size] [size="2"]Appearance: Hafuki’s hair is a very dark brown colour. He covers his left eye with several locks of his hair. His eyes are light green, his skin is little to white, yet he is constantly smiling. In the back of his head, his hair is messy and spreads to both sides of his neck. He is somehow skinny, but hides some muscle under his Shinigami Uniform. His Shinigami Uniform opens in his chest revealing one of his Snake Tattoos.[/size][size="2"] His sandals are decorated with snakes. He seems to hiss when he sleeps, for some reason. His voice is light and undisturbed, much like Kyoraku’s was.[/size] [size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][spoiler=Abilities][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font]Expert Swordsmanship: Hafuki can easily keep up to any Lieutenant; his many years of training have given him a superb sword experience. He is more experienced with using his sword in the shape of whips, but is skilled with the sword nonetheless. [/size][size="2"] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Flash Step User: Considered the slowest of Shinigami in the 6th Squad Sates, his flash steps were just enough to achieve his position. Surprisingly enough, he has created a variation of it designed to deal repetitive kicks into one same spot, as an alternate way of attack to the usage of his life-draining Zanpakuto.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Spiritual Pressure: He out bests even Lieutenants when it comes to Reiatsu. An unique technique of his is to channel his Reiatsu and send it in the shape of a hook into his opponent, cancelling out a portion of his opponent’s Reiatsu. This attack is unfortunately slow, and thus is a risky move. His Reiatsu glows a golden-yellow color and is shaped like a Cobra. He can compress it in one spot to maximize its effect, or to protect himself from others’.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Strength:He can hold up his bare hands in the Maggot’s Nest with the same ease as the 2[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]nd [/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Squad’s third seat. His blade can resist a Lieutenant’s blow, but would not withstand longer combat. He can only keep his strength for small periods of time; as his unsheathed sword constantly drains his Reiatsu involuntarily.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Endurance: Conditioned by his Zanpakuto, his durability varies and fades through the fight faster than it should. His natural capabilities enroll little to no effort, and abilities he uses are designed to waste as little Reiatsu as possible, sometimes even draining it.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Durability: He is not really affected by injuries, unless they are localized in specific spots in his body, which are marked with snake tattoos all over him. Hitting these deals heavy damage to him. His personal mark in battle has reached ten minutes and six seconds.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Hand to Hand: He prefers it to using his Zanpakuto, and has found ways to combine it with Kido and Flash Step. He is often seen walking eccentrically with his hands while hitting the floor. He says it’s ‘to train’. No one really believes that. His Captain often punishes him for doing so.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Kido Usage: He specializes in no type of Kido. He has never got his Grade from the [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shinigami[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Academy [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]because of his Kido. Instead, he uses what he call ‘negative level’ Kido to enhance his physical abilities.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/font][/spoiler] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][spoiler=[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"]Zanpakuto Info:[/font][font="Arial"]][/font]Name: Hebidansu (Namely Snake Dance) [/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Release Phrase: Twist[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shikai: As Hafuki calls the release command, he hands his sword to his left. Then, slides a finger through the blade as it splits like a zipper. When his finger hits the hilt the two pieces of the blade will glow golden and will start to overlap until reaching their tips. When the glow stops both pieces are now two-edged individual blades. He can summon snakes which will dissolve after biting or being cut. The bite is paralyzing, but is only local and will fade within some minutes. He can call his Shikai ability; [/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"]Ability: [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][u]Danrio:[/u] Both the hilt and blades separate into whips. These are poisonous.[/size][/size][/size][/size] The poison consists of an odd neurotoxin. When the whip cuts through flesh, a snake-shaped tatto will appear to come out of the wound. Each time a wound is inflicted after the first, the serpent will creep a bit from where it came towards the back of the victim's head. When it reaches its destination; it bites, and the target dies. This is rendered useless in a way similar to Suzumebachi.[/size][size="2"] Drawbacks: Drains Energy while unsheathed. [size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Bankai Name: Komiya no Hebidansu (Namely Forbidden Snake Dance)[/size][/size][/size][/size] Bankai Desctiption: As Hafuki calls Bakai he pierces his right hand with the tip of the overlapped blades. The blades unhatch from the hilt and run through his arms as golden streams of light and dissappear into the floor. Seconds later, two enormous golden snakes emerge from the ground below him. These huge serpents can release thousands of the small snakes released in Shikai, and they both have single and combined abilities:[/size][/size][/font] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font] [/size][/size][size="4"][size="2"]Abilities:[/size][/size] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]-[u]Kamagi:[/u] One of the snakes takes the form of a sealed Hebidansu and can go Shikai. It cannot use Danrio, but uses its poison as if in use. Due to the sword being a Reiatsu copy, it is as heavy as the original, but holds the strength of its current size.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [size="4"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]-[u]Sane:[/u] One of the snakes opens its mouth and the rest of the body opens with it. This forms a wing which Hafuki uses to fly as a defensive means.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [size="4"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] [size="3"][size="2"]-[/size][/size][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][u]Haziga:[/u][/size][/font][size="3"][size="2"] Both snakes bite eachother and explode, suppressing any reiatsu from anybody caught in the blast for over an hour. After performing this ability the Zanpakuto goes back to sealed form and cannot go Shikai until the effect fades.[/size][/size] [size="3"][size="2"]Drawbacks: Each of these abilities must be used separately. More than 1 power cannot be activated during the same Bankai time.[/size][/size] [size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Zanpakuto Spirit: His Zanpakuto spirit reminds of a Gorgon: Woman chest, snakes as arms and hair, and a snake tail instead of legs. She rarely speaks to his master, and often bites him with her hands. She is of a slightly golden green colou[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]r[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"].[/size][/size][/size][/size][/spoiler][/size] [size="2"]Extra:[/size] [size="2"][spoiler=Personality][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]He is a light-hearted person, though he tends to be quite stingy in some of his comments. He looks at everyone with kind eyes, and he has a somehow good relationship with all male Lieutenants. Anyway, he is really shy when it comes to women. He will blush and black out whenever the 3[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]rd[/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] Squad Captain even looks at him. Despite his mates trying to help him out, he hasn't made it up. He takes on odd training routines, strangely performing embarrassing acts in public. He greatly respects Captain Kuchiki for his previous doings. He will always slip an unneeded word and end up disliked.He seems rather careless, often jumping from building to building in the Seireitei blindfolded, Zanpakuto unsheathed, and performing back flips. He has had awful injuries because of accidentally hitting his self-called ‘Snake Spots’. He has a good relationship with the Healing Division, because of often visiting the Nursery.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/spoiler][/size] [size="2"]I hope it is of your taste.[/size][size="3"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1288826310' post='4759929'] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Name: Hafuki Kotori (Nicknamed The Blind Monkey)[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Age: Born in Rukongai. Currently 100 years old.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Bio: [/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Once a neglected child in the Rukongai, he earned his life by acting as a thief for other people, while stealing some to himself. About to be killed by somebody who caught him, a black-clothed figure with a badge in his arm stopped the man’s hand. As the stranger turned he distinguished tattoos in his forehead, half covered in a white piece of cloth. The red-haired guy smiled at him and gave him an apple from the guy’s post and told him to go to the large door in the great walls. The man jumped in the air and vanished in a dark mesh. Ever since he’s tried to get through those walls, always failing. As he trained and trained he noticed weird markings coming out of his skin. Over the time he grew the Snake Spots, and realized his growing Reiatsu was being manifested in the shape of a blade. As he used it he got tired faster, and decided he would instead focus on Physical Strength. He never stopped training with his Sword though; he just practiced hand combat more often. As he became a grown-up, he became aware of his Zanpakuto’s presence; although couldn't manifest Shikai. That’s when he remembered what the White covered man told him. He enrolled into the [/size][/size][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shinigami[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Academy [/size][/size][/size][/size][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]and took the six-year course. He failed in Kido exams several times, and made it up by passing an Extra Credit Physical Combat Test against his Professor. He first came to the 6[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]th[/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] Squad a year after he graduated. He was recruited by its Lieutenant.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"] [/size][/size] [size="2"]Appearance: Hafuki’s hair is a very dark brown colour. He covers his left eye with several locks of his hair. His eyes are light green, his skin is little to white, yet he is constantly smiling. In the back of his head, his hair is messy and spreads to both sides of his neck. He is somehow skinny, but hides some muscle under his Shinigami Uniform. His Shinigami Uniform opens in his chest revealing one of his Snake Tattoos.[/size][size="2"] His sandals are decorated with snakes. He seems to hiss when he sleeps, for some reason. His voice is light and undisturbed, much like Kyoraku’s was.[/size] [size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][spoiler=Abilities][/size][/size][/size][/size][/font]Expert Swordsmanship: Hafuki can easily keep up to any Lieutenant; his many years of training have given him a superb sword experience. He is more experienced with using his sword in the shape of whips, but is skilled with the sword nonetheless. [/size][size="2"] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Flash Step User: Considered the slowest of Shinigami in the 6th Squad Sates, his flash steps were just enough to achieve his position. Surprisingly enough, he has created a variation of it designed to deal repetitive kicks into one same spot, as an alternate way of attack to the usage of his life-draining Zanpakuto.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Spiritual Pressure: He out bests even Lieutenants when it comes to Reiatsu. An unique technique of his is to channel his Reiatsu and send it in the shape of a hook into his opponent, cancelling out a portion of his opponent’s Reiatsu. This attack is unfortunately slow, and thus is a risky move. His Reiatsu glows a golden-yellow color and is shaped like a Cobra. He can compress it in one spot to maximize its effect, or to protect himself from others’.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Strength:He can hold up his bare hands in the Maggot’s Nest with the same ease as the 2[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]nd [/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Squad’s third seat. His blade can resist a Lieutenant’s blow, but would not withstand longer combat. He can only keep his strength for small periods of time; as his unsheathed sword constantly drains his Reiatsu involuntarily.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Endurance: Conditioned by his Zanpakuto, his durability varies and fades through the fight faster than it should. His natural capabilities enroll little to no effort, and abilities he uses are designed to waste as little Reiatsu as possible, sometimes even draining it.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Durability: He is not really affected by injuries, unless they are localized in specific spots in his body, which are marked with snake tattoos all over him. Hitting these deals heavy damage to him. His personal mark in battle has reached ten minutes and six seconds.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Hand to Hand: He prefers it to using his Zanpakuto, and has found ways to combine it with Kido and Flash Step. He is often seen walking eccentrically with his hands while hitting the floor. He says it’s ‘to train’. No one really believes that. His Captain often punishes him for doing so.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Kido Usage: He specializes in no type of Kido. He has never got his Grade from the [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shinigami[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Academy [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]because of his Kido. Instead, he uses what he call ‘negative level’ Kido to enhance his physical abilities.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/font][/spoiler] [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/size][size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][spoiler=[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"]Zanpakuto Info:[/font][font="Arial"]][/font]Name: Hebidansu (Namely Snake Dance) [/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Release Phrase: Twist[/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Shikai: As Hafuki calls the release command, he hands his sword to his left. Then, slides a finger through the blade as it splits like a zipper. When his finger hits the hilt the two pieces of the blade will glow golden and will start to overlap until reaching their tips. When the glow stops both pieces are now two-edged individual blades. He can summon snakes which will dissolve after biting or being cut. The bite is paralyzing, but is only local and will fade within some minutes. He can call his Shikai ability; [/size][/size][/size][/size] [size="2"]Ability: [size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][u]Danrio:[/u] Both the hilt and blades separate into whips. These are poisonous.[/size][/size][/size][/size] The poison consists of an odd neurotoxin. When the whip cuts through flesh, a snake-shaped tatto will appear to come out of the wound. Each time a wound is inflicted after the first, the serpent will creep a bit from where it came towards the back of the victim's head. When it reaches its destination; it bites, and the target dies. This is rendered useless in a way similar to Suzumebachi.[/size][size="2"] Drawbacks: Drains Energy while unsheathed. [size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Bankai Name: Komiya no Hebidansu (Namely Forbidden Snake Dance)[/size][/size][/size][/size] Bankai Desctiption: As Hafuki calls Bakai he pierces his right hand with the tip of the overlapped blades. The blades unhatch from the hilt and run through his arms as golden streams of light and dissappear into the floor. Seconds later, two enormous golden snakes emerge from the ground below him. These huge serpents can release thousands of the small snakes released in Shikai, and they both have single and combined abilities:[/size][/size][/font] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font] [/size][/size][size="4"][size="2"]Abilities:[/size][/size] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]-[u]Kamagi:[/u] One of the snakes takes the form of a sealed Hebidansu and can go Shikai. It cannot use Danrio, but uses its poison as if in use. Due to the sword being a Reiatsu copy, it is as heavy as the original, but holds the strength of its current size.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [size="4"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] [font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]-[u]Sane:[/u] One of the snakes opens its mouth and the rest of the body opens with it. This forms a wing which Hafuki uses to fly as a defensive means.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [size="4"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] [size="3"][size="2"]-[/size][/size][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="2"][u]Haziga:[/u][/size][/font][size="3"][size="2"] Both snakes bite eachother and explode, suppressing any reiatsu from anybody caught in the blast for over an hour. After performing this ability the Zanpakuto goes back to sealed form and cannot go Shikai until the effect fades.[/size][/size] [size="3"][size="2"]Drawbacks: Each of these abilities must be used separately. More than 1 power cannot be activated during the same Bankai time.[/size][/size] [size="2"][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Zanpakuto Spirit: His Zanpakuto spirit reminds of a Gorgon: Woman chest, snakes as arms and hair, and a snake tail instead of legs. She rarely speaks to his master, and often bites him with her hands. She is of a slightly golden green colou[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][font="Arial"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]r[/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"].[/size][/size][/size][/size][/spoiler][/size] [size="2"]Extra:[/size] [size="2"][spoiler=Personality][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]He is a light-hearted person, though he tends to be quite stingy in some of his comments. He looks at everyone with kind eyes, and he has a somehow good relationship with all male Lieutenants. Anyway, he is really shy when it comes to women. He will blush and black out whenever the 3[/size][/size][/size][/size][sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]rd[/size][/size][/size][/size][/sup][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"] Squad Captain even looks at him. Despite his mates trying to help him out, he hasn't made it up. He takes on odd training routines, strangely performing embarrassing acts in public. He greatly respects Captain Kuchiki for his previous doings. He will always slip an unneeded word and end up disliked.He seems rather careless, often jumping from building to building in the Seireitei blindfolded, Zanpakuto unsheathed, and performing back flips. He has had awful injuries because of accidentally hitting his self-called ‘Snake Spots’. He has a good relationship with the Healing Division, because of often visiting the Nursery.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/spoiler][/size] [size="2"]I hope it is of your taste.[/size][size="3"][size="2"][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][/font][/size][/size] [/quote] I would accept you if I could. It seems that my character is stuck since Coyote doesn´t seem to be online anymore, thereby not being able to make a reply. I was planning to intentionaly stop posting as Victor for a while since nothing worth mentioning would hapen to him, now it seems that has to change for this RP to survive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 monkey is accsepted, ill make coyotes character a temprorary npc to move him out of the way, problem solved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 I have made some edits to my latest posts since I accidentaly wrote myself into a corner by heavily trying but failing to stall Coyotes character (He replied to his action a few times before I had time to make my response to it), but the edits shouldn´t be anything big since it mainly concerned why he would almost do everything to stall the unnamed Arrancar and not noticing Luisao had left the scene. I´m thinking about renaming the bankai ability of Atsushi´s Zanpakutou since it doesn´t fit with what it does right now, in my mind. Could someone tell me what "Judgement of the Twin Stars" (I know, It´s a bit long for an ability name) would be in Japanese. I´m thinking about starting to play Victor again relatively soon (I realy badly miss playing that little psycopath XD ) and will just inklude some details about the end of his training. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomiix Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Yeah im adding a new skill to my character, and try google translater for your problem. Demon's Scars Its a mark on the left side of his chest like a circle. With ancient symbols. When activated my strength and speed and power are raised extremly high. His apperance slightly changes to make him look sorta demonic. For example his eyes turn red, his voice gets deeper, but nothing too extreme. He is able to open the door to hell, and is able to enter undetected. It effects where off after awhile leaving Tomiix weak. His blade transforms too, but the ablility is explained in the actuall rp. How he got the mark: He was battleing a demon in the future, before it died it gave Tomiix the mark and said "Do not let me and my brethren succed, and died. Also, The god of drakness is no longer banned so look out for another person in the story again soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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