Bleach: Beyond a Hollow [PG:13] (Accepting Now!)

[Tomiix]

since the captain of squad nine isnt particapating you can be captain until he decides to come along if he dose.

[Magnet Soldier]

If he comes along, I'll say he was acting captain, while the other one was away.

[Tomiix]

thats good

[Ghoulish]

just be4 i make an app i have a question, the captains and luitenants are all the ones from the club right? then really all othr characters will be at a disadvantage in terms of strength yes?

[Tomiix]

no anyone who isnt captain can be just as strong as one also if members of the club who are captians arent signing up for the rp you can be a captain but when they decide to join you wouldve been acting captain until he "returned"

[Ghoulish]

Name: Hiroten Izanagi
Gender: Male
Age: 17
[spoiler=Appearance]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/9kmdcm.jpg[/IMG]

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Personality: adopts a Hatsaguya personality, quite strict however not to the same extent as Hatsaguya however in battles he is smiling more and is confident, not so much as talking himself up but more talking his opponent down. Outside of battle he is a rule follower and does not care for excuses, he expects things to be done according to order.

bio: Growing up in a poor town with his two best friends who were both 8 years older them him wasn't an easy life, they scourasged the poor town for food and often starevd through out many days. After his two best friends were accepted into the shinigami academy at age 20, they rarelyvisited him anymore, they were much to busy with studying and practicing training. At age 13, Hiroten had stolen a loaf of bread and was hunted down and trapped in an alley corner byt the 3 shop owners, he pleaded for them to be merciful however that was not going to be their intention. Hiroten was twisting his ehad searching of soemhting to fight with, unbealiably their was a katana blade stuck to the wall next to him, it looked to have been impaled into it. Hiroten dropped the loaf of bread and went to pull it out but couldn't. As the men began to approach, 2 other hands grabbed the sword with hiroten, they were wearing long white gloves and had a white aura around them, Hiroten turned his head to his right so see quite a tall angel like figure wearing a white suit top that branched off into a robe, he had long white wings and white hair the dripped over his face and had 2 strains going down his chest. The Angel smiled at the shocked hiroten saying. "My Name is..." Hiroten then called out with furry. "Tenraigachi!!!" Hiroten then pulled the long thin katana out, it had a long white hilt and caused the wind to pick up in the area. The spirit pressure released from the action caused the 3 men to fall to the ground. They all began to plea for forgiveness, Hiroten then walked away. After witnessing this he was recruited into the academy by a captain and now, 4 years later has been told that althought there are no captain spots remaining, that he is no doubt captain-level, he doesn't belong to a squad but rather serves as a hollow/arrancar slayer.
[spoiler= Powers & Abilities]

Swordsmanship: He stands as one with his sword, his swings and slashes are emitted gracefully. He is very well matured as a swordsman as he is said to have the fluency of a head captain.
Flash Step: What he lacks in distance he makes up in both consistency and speed. He mainly performs 3 metre max lengths of flash steps, this allows him to expend less energy and perform several flash steps instead of 1.
Endurance:To accompany his overwhelming speed, he is very fit. He is very toned and able to perform 1,000 mini flash steps before expending his total amount of energy
Hand to Hand: His quick reflexes and speed allow for him to perform various dodging techniques, his fitness is displayed by his front and back flips and ability to throw an onslaught offence of punches and kicks.
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[spoiler=Zanpakuto]

Name: Tenraigachi (Divine Grace)
Shikai Appearance: From the start the katana blade has a white hold instead of a black with silver lines over it. when released the entire blade glows white and grows 2 foot extra, the hilt of the katana then becomes white and turnes into a diamond shape with silver markings through it. The blade gets covered by a 5cm wind of aura that is invisible tot he eye, the wind serves as both a form of protection for the blade and a slightly boost in length, Hiroten sometimes purposely swings slightly in front of the enemy as they think he missed when the extra length provides him with the distance left. When performing techniques with tenraigachi Horoten's eye pupils turn silver.
Abilities:
* Flash steps become more faster
* Faster in general
* Creates a mini cyclone of wind to move in the direction of the sword
* Creates a barrier of wind by twirling the sword above him - this is used as a defensive strategy

Drawbacks:
* Only able to perform 6 cyclones
* Only able to perform 2 barriers


Bankai Name: Lafine' Tenraigachi (The End of Divine Grace)
Bankai Description: The hilt grows slightly remaining white but is attached by 3 long torn white sheets of a mythical cloth like material, they are approximately 1 metre long starting off small and growing to be 20 cm wide. The blade also grows becoming slightly thinner but standing at a total of 2m long. Hiroten also grows a small hite wing on his back and his back becomes covered by a white long cape like clothing that has 2 long strips going down the front of his chest.

Abilities:
* The defining ability of the bankai is that for a radius of 50 metres the air becomes heavier increasing the gravity of the area making the enemy slower and harder to perform regular actions, although at first thought this would affect Hiroten, it doesn't, hiroten trains with his bankai for long periods of time which is displayed through the toning of his body.
* Hiroten performs a flash step every 2 metres of movement, the flash step lasts for 2 metres, due to the speed increase of the Bankai.
* Speed is increased drastically
* Able to point his Tenraigachi forward at the opponent the spin with the blade horizontally surrounded by winf heading for the opponent.
Drawbacks:
* The air slowly loses the heaviness it gained
* Strength not increased by much

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just need to add a bio

[Tomiix]

do that and your good.

[Ghoulish]

kk added bio soa ccepted?

[Tomiix]

yep

[Ghoulish]

so how should i come in lol
?

[Shalltear Bloodfallen]

Random fact I thought I could share.

The thing my character is fighting is an idea for a demon that I´ve had for a while now.

Edit:
Here is the app

[Spoiler=[b]App[/b]][b]Name:[/b] Victor von Viridian "The Angel of Death"

[b]Age:[/b] 493

[Spoiler=[b]Appearance[/b]][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/3346j41.jpg[/IMG]
The lower part of his face is the remaining part of "mask" he had as a hollow and now, demon[/spoiler]

[Spoiler=[b]Bio[/b]][spoiler=[b]Life and Death[/b]]Born as the only child in a noble family ruling over a small village in the southern parts of Transylvania.
His family was harsh rulers, ruling with iron fists and, the male parts of his relatives, including Victor, even hunted villagers and prisoners for sport in their spare time.

In the middle of the night, after Victor had turned 19, his mom and dad, the current rulers, were
murdered by a secret group of of the inhabitans that supported the thought of a revolution, and Victor was named the new ruler to fill the void spot.
Victor, his heart destroyed by the loss of his parents, became an even more rutheless ruler than any of his
relatives had ever been, officially making the inhabitants call their once beloved home, the hell on earth.

Those who tried to leave where hunted down and killed in the most brutal ways possible.
If someone was caught plotting against him, the person in question was arrested and executed in front of every
single inhabitant of the town.
Those who did not attend the public executions were arrested thrown into the dungeons to rot for all eternity.

However, He joined his parents three years later when one of his servants, unbeknownst to him, poisoned his wine
and caused Victor horrible pain and eventually death.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=[b]Hollow[/b]] After his death, his spirit refused to leave the town, attacking every single shinigami that came
to help and haunted the remaining people in the village, even managing to kill his servant that had poisoned him.

This caused him to rapidly turn into a hollow and eradicating the entire village, leaving nothing left.

Unfortunately, this was not nearly enough as he began to hunger for more souls and even started attacking fellow hollows,
gaining the form of a Gillian and, two years later, Adjucha.

In a secret raid by the Soul Society on the Menos forest to keep the number of Menos in check,
three years after Victor became an Adjucha, he was killed and sent to Hell to be purified from his sins as a human.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=[b]Demon[/b]]When he arrived in Hell, its ruler, only known in human tales as The Devil, gave him an offer.
The Devil offered to greatly increase his powers and a chance to return to the world of the living at the only cost of Victor swearing complete loyalty to him and killing 100 humans to replace his soul.

Nedless to say, he accepted the offer and after 6 months, Victor was turned into a demon, raising his powers several times over, and assigned the role as a commander of an invasion on soul Society.

Now he is a fearsome beast, completely void of emotions except a burning bloodlust and a longing for hunting opponents worthy of his power.
He helps in leading the hollows that have been sent to hell and his masters own creation, the symbiotes, in the assault on Soul Society.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[Spoiler=[b]Kiritateru (Your basic abilities):[/b]] [Spoiler=[b]Shadow Puppet[/b]]He can control his own shadow, making it an exact copy of himself, even able to inflict
minor physical damage, only downside being the puppet won´t cast a shadow and will dissapear after a pretty low ammount of damage[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=[b]Reaper Mark[/b]] One of his more advanced abilites.
By touching his victim with either his left or right hand, it will leave a mark like the victim was burned on that spot by the hand and Victor can then summon an hourglass. When the sand in the hourglass has dissapeared from the
upper part of the hourglass,(roughly after one hour=Four posts after stating the victim is marked and hourglass is summoned) the victim dies.

If the hourglass is destroyed before the time is up however, the victim will survive and Victor can´t summon a new hourglass for a while.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=[b]Shadow seal[/b]] He can infuse the ground with shadows that momentarely incapacitates everything that steps on that area except those with exceptionally high reiatsu (mainly captain level shinigami and arrancars on Espada level)

This ability however needs to bee recasted each time after activation and those with exceptionally high reiatsu
(those who would resist it) will hear a faint whispering in their ears that step by step becomes stronger the closer
the person gets to the affected area.

When activated, a mark appears on the ground, shaped like a demonic pentagram, and after a split-second,
a large ammount of dark energy, namely shadows, errupts from the mark and incapacitates the target,
giving of slight shrieks while doing so.[/spoiler]

[Spoiler=[b]Forced Hollowfication and control[/b]]This ability is much more simple since Victor bites the target near the neck, infecting them with a dark substance that causes the target to undergo forced hollowfication.

The target needs to be incapacitated for this to work and beings with high reiatsu can slow down the infection.

When the newborn hollow is formed, a mental link is created between it and Victor that allows him to silently command
the creature.[/spoiler]

[Spoiler=[b]Death Shriek[/b]](At the moment of death) He can emit a ear piercing shriek that attracts every hollow in a 10 mile radius from Victors location.

Other demons will be made aware of his location but still have the option to ignore it[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b]Weapons:[/b] A scythe

[b]Other Special Abilites:[/b] Like the rest of the other demons, he can open a gateway to hell at will, passing through it withouth trouble.
He can manipulate shadows to make himself invisible, however, he can´t attack withouth making himself visible.

[Spoiler=[b]Second Form Appearance[/b]][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/oqxcnr.jpg[/IMG]
The robe is pitch-black and his body (the skelleton) is white with a slight grayish tone.[/spoiler]

[b]Second Form Abilities:[/b] Mainly the same as his first form but much more powerfull versions.

[b][Grand Reaper Mark][/b] He can mark more people and the time for the hourglass is shorter.

[b][Chaos Puppet][/b] His shadow can duplicate seemingly endless but will still dissapear after a very low ammount of damage.

[b][Nightmare Seal][/b] The same as Shadow Seal but can be reused up to three times withouth being recasted.

[b][Death Shriek][/b] 15 miles instead of 10 miles.

His speed, endurance and strenght is also improved in his second form[/spoiler]

[Tomiix]

ohh k well since its a monster unless its gonna be a character, (which i recomend not doing its better to have one some times unless your gonna be completly commited to both in a non confusing way.) i wont accsept it untill you tell me, but cool idea.

[Magnet Soldier]

I'm quiting, because I feel that this Roleplay, although interesting, is hard to understand and work off. God, you are still Scripting, even though I told you not to twice. You also said you were flying, even though you never said anything previously, and you didn't noticed I was aiming a blade at you. Tomiix, although you stopped scripting, you have been posting under the 4 line minimum, therefore you only have one post that actually conforms to the rules. I apologize, but I'm leaving. [b]I now give my character to Lazarus, as he is the only one here I cannot seem to find fault in.[/b] If you do not want him, He is an NPC.

[Shalltear Bloodfallen]

[quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286122993' post='4676186']
ohh k well since its a monster unless its gonna be a character, (which i recomend not doing its better to have one some times unless your gonna be completly commited to both in a non confusing way.) i wont accsept it untill you tell me, but cool idea.
[/quote]

He was acctually intended to be a character and I would just divide the post when I switched point of view (Example is my third RP post and the post before my most recent).

For dialogue, mainly to make it easier if they are both at the same place, I will color the dialogue in a unique color for the character (I tried colouring Victor´s dialogue black but it made no noticable difference).

I can agree on it´s easier to just have one character at some times since it makes it much easier to be active.
However, I have noticed that this RP is having a very slow pace and is becoming less and less interesting regarding what is currently happening.
+ There have currently been little to no interaction between a lot of the other characters and that seems to make it troublesome for a lot of people to make decent post.

My second character would be an attempt to solve those problems
(Hence why I choosed to make him a demon and not an Arrancar)

But I´m fine with having him as kind of an NPC.

[quote name='magnet soldier' timestamp='1286123551' post='4676218']
I'm quiting, because I feel that this Roleplay, although interesting, is hard to understand and work off. [b]God, you are still Scripting, even though I told you not to twice. You also said you were flying, even though you never said anything previously, and you didn't noticed I was aiming a blade at you. Tomiix, although you stopped scripting, you have been posting under the 4 line minimum, therefore you only have one post that actually conforms to the rules.[/b] I apologize, but I'm leaving. I now give my character to Lazarus, as he is the only one here I cannot seem to find fault in. If you do not want him, He is an NPC.
[/quote]

First of all, I guess I should say thanks, and I´m sorry to see that you are leaving the RP since your posts where enjoyable to read and Kazuki didn´t seem to be the generic "badass anime hero that wins every fight no matter what" (a.k.a Ichigo , eventhough that is kind of redundant to say because that is probably what Atsushi is starting to look like)

Secondly, I will try controling him but if Victor is accepted, Kazuki is probably not going to be in every post I make from now on, already kind of classifying him as kind of an NPC.

+ Eventhough it deffinetely didn´t hurt, I advice you to calm down since (Bolded part of quote) may count as mini-moding, wich is not allowed.

[Tomiix]

If you want to quit instead of sticking too its fine ill run the character as a npcsince me and you are already conversing and next to each other.

Also lazaruz your character can be a secound character he is accsepted.

If you want to quit instead of sticking too its fine ill run the character as a npcsince me and you are already conversing and next to each other. Also this is the third time i belive that you did something similar to mini moding. Yes its good to give helpfull advice but its not goood to repeat so and to act like its your job. You do this again and ill report you for mini modding. Its good to help others but if they dont get it then leave them be and thell get in trouble not you. Obiously your not mature enough to realise that.

Also lazaruz your character can be a secound character he is accsepted.

[Ghoulish]

tommix u didnt answer my question? how and where can i come into the story?

[Tomiix]

right now the soulsociety is in chaos say you were fighting the monsters and noticed me and the others also fighting and come to help us. or depending on who you are "i didnt bother re looking at your app" do something your type of character would do.

[Ghoulish]

kk so there are hollows in soul society? Ill bring my characters in slaying some hollows and seeing your chrcter in the distance or summfin

[Tomiix]

yeah but you can spice it up if you want. Add some backround make us feel the character inside and out!

[Magnet Soldier]

First of all, I gave my character to Lazarus, not you. And it is my decision, as it is not your character. Second, I was just saying that A ) God was ignoring me and using a format clearly displayed in the rules as not acceptable. B ) That I had seen a lot of too small posts & C ) that this RP didn't seem to be going anywhere. I wasn't minimodding, I was explaining the reasons I was leaving.

[Tomiix]

That post was not a example of mini modding. The only thing about that post that may be mini modding is that it was about the 4th post by you to try and correct people like god or me in some places. Yes it is necessary to point out mistakes the first time but its not neccesary to repeat yourself and take on the burden of being a corrector in that for more then one insdent. Also as part of squad 11 in the soul society club im in carge of this rp when you submit your character you use the character but I have the right to lock it or keep you from using it if you break The rules set by this rp or forum rules. When you quit the rp your character traditionally dissapears in the wind. unless your not quiting I decide wether to keep it throw it out or give it to someone else. Also I havent touched your character yet I am just talking for lazaruz on this (and if you do not agree then I apologise laz) but he is running now two characters. Now I didnt set a limit but im advising to stick to two. So its best for him not to run someone elses character. If you care so mutch about who seizes control of it then dont leave.

[The God of Darkness]

[quote name='magnet soldier' timestamp='1286302138' post='4681338']
First of all, I gave my character to Lazarus, not you. And it is my decision, as it is not your character. Second, I was just saying that A ) God was ignoring me and using a format clearly displayed in the rules as not acceptable. B ) That I had seen a lot of too small posts & C ) that this RP didn't seem to be going anywhere. I wasn't minimodding, I was explaining the reasons I was leaving.
[/quote] when did i ignore you?


[quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286313001' post='4681885']
That post was not a example of mini modding. The only thing about that post that may be mini modding is that it was about the 4th post by you to try and correct people like god or me in some places. Yes it is necessary to point out mistakes the first time but its not neccesary to repeat yourself and take on the burden of being a corrector in that for more then one insdent. Also as part of squad 11 in the soul society club im in carge of this rp when you submit your character you use the character but I have the right to lock it or keep you from using it if you break The rules set by this rp or forum rules. When you quit the rp your character traditionally dissapears in the wind. unless your not quiting I decide wether to keep it throw it out or give it to someone else. Also I havent touched your character yet I am just talking for lazaruz on this (and if you do not agree then I apologise laz) but he is running now two characters. Now I didnt set a limit but im advising to stick to two. So its best for him not to run someone elses character. If you care so mutch about who seizes control of it then dont leave.
[/quote] We can use more then 1 character? I did not know this... also when did i ignore magnet soldier?

[Tomiix]

I am not sure but magnet did warn you about rp rules and you still are short posting and scripting. Scripting means no more (Tysho:) It means paragraphs similar to what laz and I are doing. Also you need 4 or more sentences per rp post thats ic (occ dosent count if you have a pure ooc post that goes to that topic).

[The God of Darkness]

[quote name='Tomiix' timestamp='1286391465' post='4683859']
I am not sure but magnet did warn you about rp rules and you still are short posting and scripting. Scripting means no more (Tysho:) It means paragraphs similar to what laz and I are doing. Also you need 4 or more sentences per rp post thats ic (occ dosent count if you have a pure ooc post that goes to that topic).
[/quote] ohi had no idea about that i'll stop now

[Tomiix]

Thansk i dont want the rp to get knocked out cause of that.. I didnt want to take action (partily cause im too lazy to do that now.)