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[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[zaneko]

[b]Name:[/b] Tyson Kale

[b]Age:[/b] 16

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Appearance:[/b] Tyson is what most people would call average. He is a bit short for his age, about two inches shorter than average, but compensates with thick heeled sneakers. His hair is light brown with golden highlights and is rather wild most of the time, despite his parent’s efforts to get it otherwise. He has a rather childish look to him, with a baby face and wide, innocent almond shaped green eyes. His skin is olive tones, but he has a series of darker spots across his back and shoulders as his birthmark. More often than not, he wears dark coloured cargo pants with various hoodies or high-collared shirts. He has an assortment of smiley face buttons and always has one pined on him. He is accident prone and often has several scratches, bruises and cuts on his body, some covered with bandages.

[b]Personality:[/b] Tyson is a friendly person and likes to interact with his peers. He is eager to help others out anyway he can, but is also rather private, avoiding talking about himself or his life outside of school as much as possible. He can be very sensitive or aggressive, especially about his height. While he is a talented child, he rarely applies himself to his school work, preferring to read a good fantasy novel or play games. As a result, he comes across barely more than subpar. He does better in athletics; and is much faster and more nimble than most would expect. He has a habit of losing touch on reality and has a rather short attention span. Another bad habit of his is his random panicky reactions to some situations.

[b]Superpower:[/b] Concussive and Pressure force manipulation- He can generate and release bursts of concussive energy that can crack stone walls as well as form high pressure barriers. His power reacts to his emotions as well as his subconscious; a thin layer of pressured air forming over his body when he thinks he is about to be injured. The energy is generally invisible, but can be detected a a slight waver or ripple in the air.

[Kakkon_Wolf]

sorry for multi post

[Otaku-sama]

Zaneko accepted. His power is like using the Force, which I have no complaints about as long as the protection technique is not abused.

[Kakkon_Wolf]

Hey, how about energy manipulation, to be able to turn my own energy into any form,for example a sword or an animal, but the bigger the form and the longer i maintain it, the more energy i use and the more exhausted i get, if i use too much i could die.

[zaneko]

Thanks Otaku-sama. The protection is more like a thick pad between him and blow than a full barrier. It will still hurt, just less.

[grassman131]

here is my app! Hope I make the cut!
Name:Chance Tanner

Age:16

Gender:Male

Appearance:He is tall with spiky orange hair. He has muscles from training hard but is not buff. Often wears a red and black shirt with black shorts and a pair of running shoes. Is tan but not in some places like where he wears his shirt and shorts. Has a pouch on his shorts for carrieing scrolls of paper. Also carries around a red backpack with food in it.

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Personality: Is always itching for a fight and is over confident all the time. He has been known to take on whole gangs of super villains without even asking for help. When he gets his but handed to him on a silver platter he runs away and makes random excuses for why he chickened out. He hits on every girl he sees and gets denied every time. Likes to have a large supply of self-pity when bad things happen to him. Has very little friends.

Superpower: Has the ability to clone himself for small periods of time. He can make up to 5 and can only last for 5 minutes and then needs a 3 minute break. There is no "main Chance" all of them are equal and when one of them gets an injury he only feels a fraction of it (however may of him there is ie. one out of two gets shot 1/2 bullet wound which is still lethal.)

[Kakkon_Wolf]

I edited my app and i think it will suffice

[The Final Messenger]

[quote name='grassman131' timestamp='1284068779' post='4612106']
Superpower: Has the ability to create things with his mind and use telepathy on them, once he has created something he has complete control over it (can make it smaller, bigger, can move it, and make it dissipate). One of his most common moves is the finger gun (makes a finger gun shape with hand, creates a bullet at the tip of his index finger and propels it forward at incredible speeds). Weakness is that it takes him a lot of energy and time to make bigger things, such as anvils, brick walls, and a hut.
[/quote]
I tried a very similar power, as in almost the same.

[grassman131]

Oh, sorry TFM, i didnt know, i didnt read your app.

[The Final Messenger]

i never said it was accepted

[grassman131]

i know... i never said you did.

[The Final Messenger]

[quote name='Otaku-sama' timestamp='1283646243' post='4600860']
To be able to create anything you want, like a hundred foot death machine, is god modding. Try again.
[/quote]
Here is the reason it was not accepted.

[grassman131]

But see for that that would take an enourmous amount of energy and time so it is very improbable that Chance would do that, and if it was he would have to work on it for like a day with complete concentration and with the energy he had left it would only be there for three seconds at the most.

[Otaku-sama]

Grassman, app needs work:
1. I don't like it how he carries weapons to school. No has has weapons or supplies until received in the plot.
2. Your power is boring and can be abused easily. Choose something new and fresh.

[grassman131]

there, i edited, but i like the original one

[Otaku-sama]

Grassman accepted.

[The Final Messenger]

Since it doesnt have how many characters you can make. Would it be okay if I made another ome?

[Otaku-sama]

I don't think I need more characters, so no, you can't have another for now.

Also, Blind Monkey, fix your post. Those periods haven't started yet. The Host decides when to move time ahead.

[Otaku-sama]

Double post, but it is important. It's lunch and you have the option of your character sitting at the table with Sata or not. The post was a little half *ssed, because I'm tired right now.

[Mugendramon]

All right. In a second.