Haberdashery1 Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 [b]please lock[/b] Yu-Gi-Oh! and all cards in the fan fic (C) Kazuki Takahashi 1996 All characters apart from card spirits (C) haberdashery1 Card spirits (C) Kazuki Takahashi 1996 [Based on real cards] [spoiler=Characters] [spoiler=Protagonists] Harry - A 15-year-old boy who is a student at Academia High. He is a rival to Sebastian, a 16-year-old boy who considers himself to be the best at Academia, even though he isn't. He runs a Warrior-Type Deck and his cover card is Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning Sebastian - A 16-year-old boy who considers himself to be the best at Academia, even though he isn't. His rival is Harry. He runs a Machine-Type Deck and his cover card is Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem. Mary - A 15-year-old girl who is the daughter of Principal Zorro. She is best friends to Harry and defends her younger brother, Simon, who cannot duel, when he is in a pickle. She runs a Burn Deck and her cover card is Infernal Flame Emperor.[/spoiler] [spoiler=antagonists] Scott - Third year at Academia High, he is a mysterious character, who is always found to be missing whenever important duels are played. He runs a LIGHT Deck, although many students think he runs another and more devious Deck. He also plays the Ante rule, and his main card is Herald Of perfection. Zerato - Duel spirit of Darklord Zerato. He is the leader of the Four Card Spirits, who are all Spirits of DARK attribute Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. He runs a Fairy-Fiend Deck and his cover card is Darklord Zerato. Jinzo - Duel spirit of Jinzo. He is an agent of the Four Card Spirits. He runs an Anti-Trap Deck and his cover card is Jinzo. The Priestess - Duel spirit of Shadowpriestess Of Ohm. She is an agent of the Four Card Spirits. She runs a LV Deck and her cover card is Dark Lucius LV 8. Queen Archfiend - Duel spirit of Imprisoned Queen Archfiend, and the craziest of the Four Card Spirits. She runs an Archfiend Deck and her cover card is Imprisoned Queen Archfiend.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 This'll get locked add prolouge or chap 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haberdashery1 Posted August 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 Sorry I write my chapters to be short [spoiler=Chapter One][u]Chapter One[/u] It was a normal day in the life for Harry Markus. He was living at Academia High. He had just finished the class Duelling 101, and he had been duelling Sebastian Montezuma. Harry had long brown hair, and whenever he flicked it, he was commented on by Mary Zorro, daughter of the principal. This was the exact reason why they were bullied by Sebastian, a duellist with an ego. As they were passing the many students, they noticed Scott Powers, a mysterious duellist, duelling a young first-year. "[b]Herald of Perfection[/b]! Attack this first-year for game!" Scott liked playing for the rarest card of people, and from when they had met three years ago to now, Harry had always thought of him as being strange, peculiar, and, above all things, a mysterious character. His main card was Herald Of Perfection, with which he always managed to pull through from a tough defeat. "Give me your strongest card, kid!" he shouted. Scott duelled out in the open, but the teachers didn't abide by it - until he had persuaded them that they didn't want to duel him and lose. The first-year feebly took his [b]Cyber Ogre[/b], but Harry decided to go and stop this from happening. "Hey, Scott! You need to pick on someone your own size!" he shouted as he ran out of the entrance of Academia High. Scott turned around after receiving the Cyber Ogre and scowled. "And you are?" he asked as if Harry was as weak as a ladybird being crushed. Harry, at this, took out his Deck in anger. "Right! That's it! You! Me! Duel! Now!" Storing his new card away, Scott nodded, and Harry took his position as many first, second, third and fourth-years gathered around the scene to watch the duel. he shuffled his Deck calmly, and Harry shuffled his angrily. A Duel count of 8000 appeared on the Duel Discs, and the Duel began. "I'll start," Scott said. He smiled, and layed two cards face-down. He then summoned a monster in attack position. "Go! [b]D.D. Warrior Lady[/b]! Attack position!" He then stood down in a position that let Harry know that his turn was done. The angry boy, now breathing heavily, just drew his first card. "It's my turn!" he shouted. He looked at the card he drew. It was [b]Black Luster Ritual[/b]. He then looked at the other cards, but [b]Black Luster Soldier[/b] was nowhere to be seen. He just played a monster face-down, and ended. Scott drew his next card. He looked at it, and a cool smile swept over his face. He activated one of his face-downs. "Go! I activate the Spell Card [b]Dawn of the Herald[/b]! Now I send my [b]Biofalcon[/b] and [b]Card Breaker[/b] from my hand to the Grave to Special Summon my Herald of Perfection! Now you will lose, Duellist! Now you will lose!" [u]Cards Mentioned In this Chapter[/u] (In order) Herald of Perfection ([b]NEW[/b]) Cybre Ogre ([b]NEW[/b]) D.D. Warrior Lady ([b]NEW[/b]) Black Luster Ritual ([b]NEW[/b]) Black Luster Soldier ([b]NEW[/b]) Dawn of the Herald ([b]NEW[/b]) Biofalcon ([b]NEW[/b]) Card Breaker ([b]NEW[/b])[/spoiler] [spoiler=Chapter Two][u]Chapter Two[/u] “[b]Herald of Perfection[/b] is here!” Scott shouted in an egomaniacal tone of voice. He punched his fist in the air, and then, in a swift movement, he extended his arm and hand at the face-down. “Herald of Perfection! Attack his face-down!” The monster very quickly took out the face-down [b]Amazoness Archer[/b], and then Scott looked at the [b]D.D. Warrior Lady[/b]. “Attack him directly, my D.D. Warrior Lady!” As soon as her master commanded her to attack, she let out a piercing blow to Harries’ Life Points, and it depleted from 8000 to 6500. Scott just looked at his hand, and stood down in the same way as before. Harry then drew a card. He saw that the card was a strong monster in terms of DEF. [i]Good[/i], he thought to himself. [i]My [b]Backup Gardna[/b] can help me[/i]. He set the monster. “I end my turn,” he finally announced. Scott drew his next card, and activated a Trap Card. “I activate [b]Gift of the Mystical Elf[/b]! Now I gain 300 Life Points for every monster on the field – and since there are three monsters on the field, I gain 900 Life Points!” Suddenly, Scott developed a blue glow around himself, and his Life Point count increased from 8000 to 8900. “Then I activate [b]Pot of Greed[/b]. This lets me draw two cards from my Deck!” Drawing both cards, he smiled again, and activated a Spell Card. “Go! [b]Dark Hole[/b]! Destroy all monsters on the field!” At this, a black vortex opened up and swallowed the monsters whole. Harry grunted in anguish, and Scott hadn’t even Normal Summoned or Set yet! He took a card from his hand, and placed it face-down on the field. “I Set a monster!” he finally announced before ending his turn. Harry drew his next card, and saw that it was his [b]Black Luster Soldier[/b]. He also looked at his hand, and saw that he could fulfill the Summoning requirements of [b]Black Luster Ritual[/b]. “I activate my Ritual Spell card – Black Luster Ritual! Now I send my [b]Amazoness Chain Master[/b] and [b]Armageddon Knight[/b] to the Graveyard in order to summon my Black Luster Soldier!” A blue whirlwind swept up into the air, and, finally, to everybody’s amazement, Black Luster Soldier, the 3000 ATK point monster appeared – and even Scott was amazed! Harry finally had the chance of beating Scott! [u]Cards mentioned in this chapter[/u] (In order) Herald of Perfection Amazoness Archer ([b]NEW[/b]) D.D. Warrior Lady Backup Gardna ([b]NEW[/b]) Gift of the Mystical Elf ([b]NEW[/b]) Pot of Greed ([b]NEW[/b]) Dark Hole ([b]NEW[/b]) Black Luster Soldier Black Luster Ritual Amazoness Chain Master ([b]NEW[/b]) Armageddon Knight ([b]NEW[/b])[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Chapter Three][u]Chapter Three[/u] "[b]Black Luster Soldier[/b]! Attack his face-down monster card!" Harry shouted. The massive 3000 ATK point Warrior just did as his master had told him to do. Immediately, the monster was destroyed, and Scott flinched. Noticing this, Harry calmed down and started teasing him. "Is that a flinch I see?" Immediately, Scott just smirked. "No it isn't, weakling!" he shouted. harry, hearing this, started to become angrier again. He hated being called names, and he hated other people being called names - especially the young first-years being called things like 'weakling' or 'baby', etcetera, etcetera. "What did you just call me?" Harry asked in the same tone of voice as he had shouted to Scott before the start of their duel. Scott just smiled and put his hands up in an emotional manner. "Well you are weak," he answered. "Remember the duel with Sebastian?" A flashback started to appear in Harries' head. Sebastian had summoned his trump card - [b]Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem[/b] - and Harry had a lot of monsters in Defence before his rival used three Limiter Removals to increase his monsters' ATK to 8800, then 17600, then 35200 and to win the duel by attacking Black Luster Soldier in DEF mode. The flashback suddenly stopped, and Harry growled at Sebastian, indicating that he was angry. He ran through the hologram of Black Luster Soldier, but a [b]Gaia Soul the Combustible Collector[/b] was in his way. Harry was about to command Black Luster Soldier to attack Scott until he was too scared to duel, when, out of the blue, Mary Zorro appeared. He looked into those big eyes for ten seconds, and then he walked back to the duel spot where he was standing before the incident had happened. A few seconds later, and Black Luster Soldier was nowhere to be seen. After another ten seconds, everybody around the duel spot saw Harry walking away. "I have no time to duel to a loser like you," he finally announced. With everyone cheering for him because he stood up to the toughest person in the school, Scott slinked away into the darkness - and suddenly blacked out. [u]Cards mentioned in this chapter[/u] (In order) Black Luster Soldier Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem ([b]NEW[/b]) Gaia Soul The Combustible Collector ([b]NEW[/b])[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 This is a parody, right? Please tell me it's a parody. Because it's too awful and uninspired to be anything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haberdashery1 Posted August 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 [quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1283032574' post='4576082'] This is a parody, right? Please tell me it's a parody. Because it's too awful and uninspired to be anything else. [/quote] It is not a parody - it is the first chapter of a big storyline, so it will not be the best. Wait until the later chapters come about - you and other members might be amazed at what comes soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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