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Yes, yes you may. I'm not sure if Magnet will have any complaints, but it is good to me. It's a little satisfying to see that you've given the ninjutsu to one character while incorporating the expert taijutsu in another. And since they both are masters in their own arts, it doesn't really disappoint or overpower them, as they are both with weaknesses and strengths. And the split persona effect and the essential Light/Dark versions of your characters really bring a sense of recognition to the clear portrayal of gray, and how things can take a toll on people's minds, no matter how strong they are.

And if this wasn't actually the effect you were going for or even trying to show... well, now you know my view on this.

Obviously Accepted on my point. Awaiting Magnet's decision.
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Malignant, Co-owner does exactly what an owner does, except Owner usually decides main plot points. And you seem like the perfect co-owner. PM me if you ever decide to make an RP(Or if you already have an unstarted one. I dont like joining started ones.)

Mysterium, Accepted, But could you explain a little of the Crystal release, such as what elements it's made up of(such as the wood style is made of water and earth, and the ice style is water and wind.)

Visser, much better. But I did only say underline the custom jutsu. And you do realise you wont be able to use limelight without three other people who know it? (These aren't complaints just statements!)

I'm making my app(s) now. Will be up a soon as possible.
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[spoiler=Sosuei Uchiha]Name: Sosuei Uchiha (A.K.A. Konoha's Autumn Leaf)

Age: 29

Gender: Male

[spoiler=Appearance:]Sosuei is a tall man standing at 183 cm (6'00"). To most people in Konoha, his most striking feature is his dashing and handsome appearance. Sosuei has a very fit physique without appearing bulky. Sosuei has short, unkempt black hair, black eyes, and light skin. Sosuei, usually, keeps a calm and relaxed expression, but when it comes to being serious, any regular person can definately tell that his facial expression has changed to a more stern and intense look. Sosuei's attire consists of a red armor similar to the armor of Madara Uchiha. On the back of the torso armor is the Uchiha clan's symbol, and on the left shoulder pad is Konoha's symbol. Under the armor, Sosuei wears a thinner, modified version of the jounin flak jacket and under the jacket is a long-sleeved, grayish black shirt. Sosuei's wrists are covered in bandages as well as his right wrist having an Uchiha symbol bracelet. On his waist, Sosuei wears a fire-patterned, red sash with parts of the sash dangling freely on the left side of his waist. Two charms with red tassels hangs off the sash from the right side of Sosuei's waist. Sosuei wears grayish black trousers and black shinobi sandals. Other notable features include the two standard ninja tool pouches and the Konoha forehead protector on black cloth.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality:]Sosuei is a calm and relaxed individual. Sosuei always act in a calm and collected manner while on missions while also being relaxed and a little bit whimsical to keep others feeling comfortable around him. Sosuei is very intelligent and very skilled at combat, earning quite a reputation amongst many villages, although he acts in a rather humble and embarrased manner when anyone mentions his skills. During battle, Sosuei is not the type to rush in without thinking things through, and is always analyzing his opponent to pick up any details like mannerisms in movements and attacks to help him defeat his opponent in a quick manner. Sosuei also tends to joke around at times, especially in times of distress, to make his comrades feel at ease. He usually is the mature one and leads groups on missions. Though Sosuei may have his times of despair, he'll usually keep a smile to keep others from worrying too much.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Bio:]Being the son of a great hero of Konoha, at a young age Sosuei was expected of great things by many in Konoha, including the village elders. His father has died shortly after Sosuei's third birthday during a safeguard mission gone terribly wrong. Sosuei was devastated to learn of the news, but his mother suffered even more than he did. His mother soon succumbed to a terminal illness and Sosuei was left to live by himself with financial support provided by the Hokage who was a prominent friend of Sosuei's father. Sosuei soon graduated from the ninja academy at age five, being at the top of the class, and soon went on to become a high-ranking ANBU at age thirteen. Sosuei worked as an ANBU operative until the age of twenty-three where he decided to work as a Jounin to teach young shinobi. Sosuei soon earned quite the reputation as a shinobi and is highly praised amongst Konoha's elders. On one famous mission, Sosuei successfully save an entire village of people from a group of highly dangerous ninjas. The townspeople have never gotten to know Sosuei's name, but due to him being from Konoha and his red armor, the townspeople nicknamed him "Konoha's Autumn Leaf". The name soon spread throughout the nations and Sosuei became quite the popular hero figure for small villages. Sosuei attained his Mangekyo Sharingan by killing his best friend who was actually a ninja working under the Akatsuki's control. Sosuei rarely uses his Mangekyo Sharingan however due to its strain on both his eyes and body. During the course of his service as a Konoha shinobi, Sosuei has currently finished 197 D-Rank, 191 C-Rank, 303 B-Rank, 242 A-Rank, and 14 S-Rank missions.[/spoiler]

Rank: Kage-Level Jounin

Home Village: Konoha

Element: Fire, Wind

Clan: Uchiha

Faction: Home Village

Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Sharingan, Mangekyo Sharingan

Weaponry/Extra Accessories: Kunai, Shuriken, Nature Scrolls

[spoiler=Jutsu list:][u]Basic:[/u]
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Body Flicker Technique
Substitution Jutsu
Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Summoning Jutsu
Shadow of the Dancing Leaf
Leaf Hurricane
Leaf Whirlwind

[u]Fire Release:[/u]
Fire Release: Big Flame Bullet
Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Fire Release: Fire Dragon Missile
Fire Release: Fire Tiger Explosion
Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Fire Release: Flame Flower
Fire Release: Roaring Flame Sphere
Fire Release: Running Fire
Wind Enhanced Fire Wave

[u]Wind Release:[/u]
Wind Release: Pressure Damage
Wind Release: Drilling Air Bullet
Wind Release: Beast Wave Violent Wind Palm
Wind Kunai Blade
Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
Wind Release: Vacuum Serial Waves
Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Wind Release: Wind Cutter
Wind Release: Whirlwind Fist

[u]Sharingan Techniques:[/u]
Amaterasu
Susanoo

[u]Custom Techniques:[/u]
Fire Release: Meteor Shot - The user jumps high up into the air and performs the tiger, ox, dragon, and horse handsigns then shoots a large fireball upwards from their mouth. The fireball then falls towards the opponent or ground and causes sufficient damage. If it doesn't directly hit the enemy, small waves of flames will lash outwards upon impact with the ground, having the potential of hitting the opponent. This technique is a B-Rank Ninjutsu with a high damage rating but with low accuracy.

Fire Release: Great Meteors From Heaven - Essentially the same as the Fire Release: Meteor Shot but the number of fireballs are multiplied by five improving the damage, accuracy, and range. However, it takes a substantial amount to perform this technique which labels it an A-Rank Ninjutsu.

Fire Release: Five Flame Pillars - The user performs the monkey, horse, dog, bird, boar, and ram handsigns then five flame pillars shoot up from the ground around the opponent and quickly closes in on them. The user must concentrate while performing this jutsu and cannot be disrupted. This technique can easily be cancled out by a water release technique. This ninjutsu has earned a classification of B-Rank.

Fire Release: Explosive Flame Orbs - The user performs the dragon and tiger symbols to form a stationary or slow-moving flame ball that explodes on contact. Due to its speed of movement, it's relatively easy to dodge or avoid and it's considered to be more useful as a trap. However, when it explodes, it has a fair range and inflicts great damage, being more powerful than a paperbomb. It has a C-Rank classificaion.

Wind Release: Divine Wind Spheres - The user performs the snake, dog, bird, and dragon handsigns to create one or two giant wind spheres than can be thrown, kicked, puched, or pushed towards the opponent like a giant ball that causes significant damage. The wind sphere will last for a while depending on how much chakra is infused into it. The opponent, however, can also rebound the ball towards the user. This technique's speed and power gives it an A-Rank.

Wind Release: Wind Prison - Similar to the Water Prison jutsu except for the fact that the user can freely move around without having to keep sustaining the jutsu.[/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Okikimi Umeboshi]Name: Okikimi Umeboshi (A.K.A. Savior of the Hidden Mist)

Age: 58

Gender: Male

[spoiler=Appearance:]Okikimi appears as a tall, large man at a height of 211 cm (6'11"). Okikimi is a large, round man who is extremely strong. Okikimi has long dark blue hair that reaches down to almost the middle of his legs. On the top of his head, his hair is tied into a bun under a back hat that resembles that of a Japanese emperor with the addition of two long cloth strands hanging off from behind the hat. Okikimi also has large sideburns, a goatee, and two long strands of hair hanging off from the side of his face. Okikimi has jade green eyes, light bluish gray skin, and like all members of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist, Okikimi has sharp teeth. Attire-wise, Okikimi wears the Mizukage robe over a zipped Kirigakure flak jacket. Under the flak jacket, Okikimi wears a smaller black robe, and under the black robe, Okikimi wears a sleeveless, light bluish gray striped shirt. He also wears long armbands with a lined pattern similar to those of Kisame or Zabuza. Okikimi wears long black trousers along with black shinobi sandals. Other things he wear includes a blue, ocean-patterned sash on his waist, standard ninja tool pouches, a large blue, ocean-patterned scarf wrapped around his neck, a large brown belt wrapped around his chest to carry his large sword, and his Mizukage hat placed behind his back covering a part of his sword. His Mizukage hat has a hole in the middle of it for his bun.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality:]Okikimi is an adventurous and silly man, always being the one to try and lighten up the mood in stressful situations. Okikimi is very relaxed and carefree, and tends to be very lazy as well as he always try to find excuses not to work. Okikimi enjoys traveling to different places and enjoying the local cuisine. He gets into big trouble however when he gets caught being lazy by his assistant who gives him a good scolding on hard work, dedication, and diligence. Okikimi however simply ignores the scolding and goes back to doing what he wants to do. Okikimi is quite a nice man and a hero to the people of Kirigakure who views him as a fatherly figure. Okikimi is dedicated to his village and hopes to be able to stop the Akatsuki from getting their hands on Masamune.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Bio:]Okikimi was born into a small family of artisans and dried plum makers thus the surname Umeboshi (梅干 Lit. Dried Plums) which is also quite a common trait amongst members of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist to have names referencing a fruit. While his first name Okikimi (海王子 Lit. Ocean Prince) references a certain marine animal. At a young age, Okikimi was destined by his family to be either an artisan or a dried plum maker, however, his real passion at that time was in ninja training. After years of convincing, his parents finally allowed him to enter the ninja academy. Okikimi excelled greatly and graduated at only eight years of age, although he entered the academy later than all other students. Okikimi soon promoted into a chunin at nine and went onto become a jounin at thirteen. Later on at the age of twenty-five, his entire family was killed by a group of rogue ninjas looking for a place to hideout. Okikimi was enraged and slaughtered every one of the rogue ninjas. He then left the village to work as a traveling ramen chef to discover the world. On his journey, Okikimi stumbled upon a strange temple in a large lake located within the Land of Water. After searching through the temple out of curiousity, Okikimi founded a weapon located in a large hall in the temple. Okikimi took the weapon and soon after was invited by the former Mizukage to be part of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist which Okikimi heartedly accepted. After years of dedication in the Seven Ninja Swordsmen, Okikimi once again left to pursue a dream of tasting foods around the world. Years later, Okikimi recieved news that Kirigakure's Mizukage was assassinated and now the village is being taken over by a group of powerful rogue ninjas from Iwagakure. Along with the help of the other Seven Ninja Swordsmen, Okikimi was able to save the village, and the people of Kirigakure made him the Mizukage. Since then, Okikimi has been dedicated to protect his village.[/spoiler]

Rank: Mizukage/Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist

Home Village: Kirigakure

Element: Water, Earth

Clan: N/A

Faction: Home Village but is willing to ally with other villages

Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: N/A

[spoiler=Weaponry/Extra Accessories:]Kunai
Nature Scrolls
[spoiler=Nemurikujira]Nemurikujira (眠鯨 Lit. Sleeping Whale) is an incredibly large spade-like sword that is larger and longer than the Samehada from Kisame and Hiramekarei from Chojuro. Nemurikujira is incredibly powerful being able to completely destroy a building or a large part of the ground with enough effort from its wielder. Nemurikujira has the ability to absorb any nature transformation ninjutsu and transform it into another nature transformation ninjutsu or pure chakra if Okikimi chooses so. Nemurikujira is also wide enough for Okikimi to surf on when he needs to use it so.

[spoiler=Nemurikujira's Picture][IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/wsoajk.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Jutsu list:][u]Basic:[/u]
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu

[u]Water Release:[/u]
Grudge Rain
Water Prison Technique
Water Clone Technique
Hidden Mist Technique
Hydration Technique
Water Release: Demon Fish Wave Crash
Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique
Water Release: Gunshot
Water Release: Huge Explosion Technique
Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Water Release: Violent Water Wave
Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Water Release: Water Encampment Wall
Water Release: Water Shockwave
Water Release: Water Hardened Drill

[u]Earth Release:[/u]
Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Earth Clone Technique
Earth Release: Mud Indulgence
Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears
Earth Release: Earth Spear
Earth Release: Rock Trail

[u]Customs:[/u]
Water Release: Water Prison Hammer - The user first floods the battlefield with a Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave. Next, the user traps the opponent with the Water Prison Technique. Finally, the user slams their sword into the water prison forcing the pressure created by the shockwave of the slam to break a lot bones or even cause death.

Water Release: Exploding Great Whale Missle - The user performs the snake, horse, and ram handsigns to summon a giant water whale that crashes into the opponent to cause substantial damage.

Water Release: Five Formed Attacks of Killer Whales - The user performs the ram, ox, dragon, and monkey handsigns to summon a water wave to flood the battlefield and then summons five water killer whales that attacks the opponent in perfect synchronization.

Water Release: Falling Pilot Whales - The user performs the horse and boar handsigns to summon a large field of water above the opponent. Five water pilot whales then fall from the water field and onto the opponent.

Water Release: Drilling Narwhale - The user summons a water narwhale that shoots towards the opponent while rapidly spinning its body and drilling the opponent.

Water Release: Great Pressure Hammer - The user floods the battlefield then slams the flowing water creating a large shockwave through the water that can break many bones or even cause death.

Water Release: Pressured Water - The user wraps his water around his weapon to increase the strength of each blow.

Earth Release: Great Quake - The user gathers chakra into their weapon and then slam their weapon into the ground creating a giant quake.[/spoiler] [/spoiler]
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Bad news. My computer broke down just recently, and I don't think I'll be able to post much. I'll be on as much as possible, but it probably won't be a whole lot. D:

And ~Supra~ , Please explain how your first character(The uchiha) got his Mangekyou Sharingan, or if it's to be shown later, then please state it at least. I've also some problems with the whole nature scrolls since I've no clue on what they do, and the fact that both of your characters are "Geniuses" so to speak. Both had graduated early, and became high in position at a young age, and still manage to retain their sanity so to speak. I suggest you tone it down, as both are incredibly powerful(Though the Mizukage one is acceptable in those terms) and possess amazing abilities. My suggestions for downplaying the abilities, is to merely put away one or two jutsus from the Uchiha, and to show some failure and remove some hundred mission count since I believe even A-Ranks require several days of work and rest, not to mention the fact that there can be a shortage of missions or whatever. It's just not that believable you know, even if a character is considered a genius. And to do all of that without going insane? Even more unlikely then.

However, I must commend you on your detail and organized application. Unfortunately, your first character is not accepted, but your second is. If you want the first to be accepted by me, please do what I stated before and get the approval of Magnet as well.

1st Char: Not accepted. Votes in- 0/2

2nd Char: Accepted. Votes so far- 2/2

Second Character is in.
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Sorry I didn't get to answer back, my internet was down. Well, for my first character, I took off the blaze release, took off some techniques, explained how he has gotten his sharingan, and downgraded the missions as asked. I was trying to make my first character kind of Kakashi-ish so that's why I made him like that lol. And the nature scrolls, I don't know the actual name but it's those kind of scrolls where you can use a nature transformation jutsu without having the nature affinity for the certain jutsu. So if there's any more problems then just tell me and I'll do my best.
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27 S Rank missions? I'm not even Sure Anbu Captains or Sannin have done that many. And how can he have done more A ranks than B or C ranks? The Uchiha is seriously over powered, which is why I didn't want to do them as they always end up extremely OPed. The First one is still unaccepted. One more try sadly. And I'm going to start today(hopefully.)
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Here's my app. I got my character's name from GTO.

[spoiler='App'][b]Name:[/b] Yoshito Kikuchi (likes to be called by his last name)
[b]Age:[/b] 27
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Appearance:[/b] Kikuchi is 6'2" with a muscular build. His black hair covers half of his face. He wears a blue short sleeve shirt under his flak jacket instead of a regular Jounin sweatshirt. He wears his Hidden Leaf head protector around his neck. He has a large number of scars on his body that came from his father and siblings.
[b]Personality:[/b] Kikuchi is a powerful and reliable ninja. He very rarely thinks about his opponents moves during battle. He only cares about destroying his enemies with his kanabo. Occasionaly, he makes idiotic comments, but can be serious when he needs to. He never takes his anger out on anyone other than his enemies. He is respectful to his superiors and is kind to those who aren't a threat to the village.
[b]Bio:[/b] Kikuchi grew up with his adoptive parents in a farm. He was beaten up on a daily basis by his adoptive father and his adoptive siblings. He was treated like a slave most of the time. He was forced to work all day with little time to rest. His adoptive mother, who was kind and caring to Kikuchi, tried to run away and bring him with her, but his brothers caught him, and only his mother escaped. One night, his mother came back for him, and brought him to where she stayed, near Konohagakure. When his mother died four years later, Kikuchi was already a Chuunin. He was taught how to use ninjutsu and taijutsu by a ninja from Yukigakure (Hidden Snow Village) who made visits to the village. He loves using his kanabo, which his mother gave him two years before her death. He became Jounin at age 20. He lives in an apartment in the Hidden Leaf Village. He also sometimes works at a ramen shop, just to earn some extra money.
[b]Rank:[/b] Jounin
[b]Home Village:[/b] Konohagakure
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (Wind and Water)
[b]Clan:[/b] none
[b]Faction:[/b] Home Village
[b]Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability:[/b] none
[b]Weaponry/Extra Accessories:[/b] A kanabo (Japanese war club) that he carries with him everywhere.
[spoiler='Jutsu List:']
-[u] Ice Release: Frozen Battleground - The user creates a field of ice that he can use for his Ice based jutsus. Uses up a certain amount of chakra every 20 seconds, depending on the length of the field.[/u]
- Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu
- [u] Ice Manipulation - The user can transform ice and control it, costing a small amount of chakra. [/u]
- [u] Ice Release: Frost Cube - The user creates a small, cube shaped room of ice, which can be used to trap or protect someone. [/u]
- [u] Icy Skin - The user covers his weapon with a layer of ice that improves the damage dealt by it. [/u]
- Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard
- Ice Release: Twin Dragon Blizzard
- Ice Release: One Horned White Whale
- Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm
- Ice Release: Tearing Dragon Fierce Tiger[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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