Magnet Soldier Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 [spoiler=Plot]The world of Naruto in the Anime(With Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto) is just one of the many dimensions with chakra and Ninja's. You live in one of the other ones, where Jinchuuriki, Samurai and Other things like that never existed, including Naruto and Co. You are a Ninja and are a rogue ninja, a ninja in one of the villages, work with one of the Villages or Akatsuki; who are kind of a Village entity now, situated in the Land of fire, and plotting on total domination of all Ninja's using the Power of Masamune, the ultimate Ninja sword. No matter who you are you're main objective is to find this sword, for either the safety of the world(the Villages), to help Akatsuki to dominate the world(Akatsuki) or for your own personal gain(Other).[/spoiler] [spoiler=Rules]1) All Advanced clause rules apply, meaning a minimum of 4 lines per post. 2) All YCM and Rp rules apply. 4) A maximum of two Characters per person. However, you may make an Unlimited amount of NPCs. But these may be controlled by anyone in battle and I may take control of them for a plotline. The leader of Atatsuki is an NPC, but is uncontrollable except by me and the Co-owner(Malignant). 5) Minor Swearing allowed. 6) No GMing or PPing. I know I have had a reputation for this, but I have been limiting is for a while, so I've become less of a GMer. 7) To prove you have read the rules, Please post the missing Rule number at the bottom of your app. Every rules disobeyed gives a Strike. Three strikes and your out of the RP. 9) You have 2 trys on your App. If it is not up to standard after the third try, I'm sorry but your app. 10) I have final say in everything.[/spoiler] [spoiler=app]Name: (Obvious) Age: (Obvious) Gender: (obvious) Appearance: (Image or Description in spoiler Please) Personality: (1 1/2+ lines) Bio: (4+ lines) Rank: (Village Nin: Genin/Chunin/Jounin/A-Class Anbu/S-Class Anbu/Kage-level. Missing Nin: C-Class Missing Nin/B-Class Missing Nin/A-Class/S-Class. Akatsuki: Genin Level/Chunin level/Jounin Level/Anbu Level/Kage.) Home Village: (Obvious) Element: (Maximum Two. If Kekkei Genkai is a Mix(Eg. Wood) that is allowed as a third.) Clan: (Preferably Custom. Only three Hyuuga's and two Uchiha's are going to be allowed) Faction: (Home Village, Other Village, Akatsuki, Other(Say what it is), None.) Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: (Have Explanation how, and not OPed.) Weaponry/Extra Accessories: (Maximum of Three weapons. Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Etc. are not needed in here) Jutsu list: (In spoiler)(No OPed. Add Explanation to Customs. Underline Customs.)[/spoiler] [spoiler=My apps]Name: Akihiko Kenihona Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: [spoiler=Image]Coming soon[/spoiler] Personality: Coming soon Bio: Coming soon Rank: Chunin Level Home Village: Unknown Element: Earth, Fire, Weaponry Clan: None Faction: Akatsuki Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Has a mastery of weapons, so he can use Weaponry Jutsu and Summon Weapons when he needs them, but this costs chakra. Weaponry/Extra Accessories: [spoiler=Weapons]None[/spoiler] [spoiler=Accessories]1: Multiple Summoning Scrolls.[/spoiler] Jutsu list: [spoiler=Custom Jutsu]Coming soon[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=NPC Apps][spoiler=Akatsuki Leader]Name: Masachuhi Nigula Age: 32 Gender: Male Appearance: [spoiler=Image][img]http://s.bebo.com/app-image/7925698123/5411656627/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/04/04/%3Blaksegtt.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Personality: Masachuni is a Determined, formor warrior that doesn't like to be disobeyed. He is an intelligent man with a great love of power and he is very confident. He hates to be disappointed and usually punishes those who fail him. Bio: Masachuni was a Respected warrior in the Hidden stone Village, one of the best taijustu users and a great Ninjutsu user. However, when he got wind of a sword that could rule the world, he left in search of it. After 5 years of scouring the land, he returned to his village, scarred and injured. When asked what happened, he shrugged and pushed them aside. When he came before the Tsuchikage, he was banished for deserting his post without permission from the Tsuchikage because the village was attacked while he was away. They won, but lost many men. He left and swore revenge by creating an organisation to find the Masamune. He created an organisation that had been created by Madara Uchiha in Naruto's world. [b]Akatsuki[/b]. He located the Masamune once, but could not get past it and eventually it vanished to another place. Rank: Leader of Atatsuki. Home Village: Iwagakure Element: Earth, Metal. Clan: Nigula Clan Faction: Akatsuki Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Can use Metal Jutsu. Weaponry/Extra Accessories: [spoiler=Weapons]1) Nunchuck. 2) Claws(In Pic) 3) Long Decorated Knife.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Accessories]Summoning Scrolls[/spoiler] Jutsu list: [spoiler=Jutsu List]Shadow clone Jutsu Shuriken Shadow Clone Jutsu. Substitution Jutsu. Earth Style: Mud bomb Jutsu. [u]Chain Prison Jutsu. (By sacrificing a small amount of blood, Masuchini summons multiple chains which attach themselves to the opponent and imprison them. However, he cannot move in this state and slowly loses chakra.) Chain Paralysis Jutsu. (Summons a Single Chain which Paralyses anyone it touches. This only lasts for about a Minute.) Chain Whirlwind Jutsu. (Eight Chains erupt from Narda and start to spin around him, making him invunerable from the ground. However, he is immobile while using this and is vulnerable from above.)[/u][/spoiler] Will make more Jutsu.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ANBU Posted August 26, 2010 Report Share Posted August 26, 2010 reserve please.. ^^ [spoiler=App.] Name: Kano/Kazu Kurama (split Personality, the sane less dangerous is Kano) Age: 25 Gender: Male [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/054/b/4/__Ninja___by_Tatsu_Kamiyasha.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Personality: Kano is usually laid-back, often letting the battles go by easily and trying not to involve himself in them believing most that aren't the goal of his mission are just small annoyances along the way trying to finish them faster so they can move on. Kazu however is often looking for a battle to find someone to hurt and/or kill, often mocking opponent's and playing with them before finishing them, the personality is more likely to become Kazu while in battle due to that personalities love of battle and it overpowering the first however when there is no-one around to fulfill Kano's Battle hunger it usually switches back quickly. Bio: Kano had lived as a normal ninja in konohagakure until at the age of 17 when his Kekkei Genkei showed while he was training using Demonic Illusion: Flower Head Death on another member of his squad killing them, this was the first time the split personality Kazu had shown, he had then run from the village, using the Bringer-Of-Darkness Technique to avoid the other nin along the way to the village gates, escaping into the forests. Kano had then thrown his headband on the ground near the edge of the forest wondering what had happened. He then began to travel trying to find a nin who could tell him what happened eventually coming across the Akatsuki and joining them hoping that they would be able to help him control it. Over the next 7 years he tried to control the change of his personality almost able to control it properly and using only Wind Release moves while fighting weaker opponent's so as not to encourage the other personality to take control with using genjutsu. He has come to terms with the split personality often taking over during battles and has tried to avoid them unless needed for the mission, trying to keep out of them if the target is needed alive. Rank: Akatsuki Jounin(Kano)/Kage-Rank(Kazu[due to his control of the Kekkei Genkei power and his skill in using it] Element: Wind Release Clan: Kurama Faction: Akatsuki Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Every few generations a member of the Kurama clan will be born with an incredible talent for genjutsu. The clan member's talent in that field is such that their genjutsu is completely irresistible. Furthermore, the genjutsu is so powerful that it causes the brain to make anything that happens to the victim within the genjutsu physically real, allowing the clan member to potentially kill their opponents with genjutsu. Such frightening power is not without its drawbacks, however. The user can rarely control the full extent of their abilities, and as such their subconscious will often regulate that power, leading to the creation of a second personality in control of that power. This personality then overwhelms the original, turning the individual into a monster that's a danger to everyone around them. (if it needs to be custom ill re-do) Weaponry/Extra Accessories: a dark black Katana and Black Soaring Short Blades [spoiler=Jutsu list:] Bringer-of-Darkness Technique Dusk Crow Genjutsu Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death Genjutsu Shiranui Genjutsu: Flower Petal Escape Poison Moth Genjutsu Soulbane Tyrant's Calling Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar Jibakugan Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique Ephemeral Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique Sly Mind Affect Technique String Bean Binding Illusion Wind Release Stream Peacock Whirlwind Wind Cutter Technique Rotating Ferocious Wind Great Vacuum Cannon [/spoiler] 3 [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Lord of Chaos Posted August 26, 2010 Report Share Posted August 26, 2010 ANBU's app is in his 1st post here is my app [spoiler=app]Name: Isamu Arakaki Age: 58 Gender: M [spoiler=Appearance:][IMG]http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll3/nekxus23/Ninja_2_by_hgjart.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Personality: Isamu is strong willed with a calm attitude, he lets few things fase him. He lets no emotion show in or out of battle, to his friends he is kind and good hearted, but unmerciful to his enimies giving them no give, he is slightly blunt and will point out the enemies flaws and strengths as the battle goes on [spoiler=Bio:] Isamu was part of the Uchiha clan, an branch that had thought to have been lost long ago, this part of the clan was held highly for its ability to control the power of the sharingan. Isamu was the weakling when he was growing up, he was disrespected and shunned by the entire village. Isamu always worried that he wasn't doing good enuf and this caused him to slowly slip into depresstion, he let his mind become ridden with thoughts of sadness. One day Isamu was confronted by a strong Genin who wanted him out of his way and gone for good, Hokage appeared infront of the Genin and stood up for thr young Isamu, he turned to Isamu saying "You have a spiecal gift, a power that will one day surpass my own." with those words Isamu became determined to train hard, and he did he would train untill he was on the ground unable to move. Isamu got strong his power unmatched by all at his level, he advanced quickly through the ranks of the village, and became the Hokage's personal body guard. When the Hokage was on his death bed he had said "You shall take my place, you will lead them, not as the Hokage, but as something greater, you....." the Hokage died before he could finish what he was saying, but it gave Isamu great pride that Hokage would say this about him, the nobody turn great ninja. From that day forth Isamu proteced the village with all his might, even when the knew Hokage came along, he let nothing harm his village. After those many years his true power emerge, his sharingan made itself known to its user, and Isamu trained his sharingan learning all of its strengths and weaknesses, even though he was not part of the main branch of the clan, his sharingan rivaled all in the main branch, besides Madara. On his forty nineth bith day Isamu's sharingan change into a more powerful Mangekyou Sharingan, making the shape of a black seven pointed star with a red pupil in his eyes. He called it Zetsumei[/spoiler] Rank: Kage Home Village: Konohagakure(leaf) Element: fire and earth Clan: Uchiha (last name is a lost branch of the clan) Faction: Home Village Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Sharingan- basic sharingan abillities Zetsumei(yet to be seen in battle)- increased sharingan abillities. allows the user to infuse black chakra with their jutsu, making the jutsu's abillity more powerful, also allows the user to use jutsus that can only be used while in this state (all jutsu listed as black chakra apply to this) Weaponry/Extra Accessories: two steel kantas(pic) dragon claws(pic) [spoiler=Jutsu list:] Genjutsu: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Magen • Kyouten Chiten - Demonic Illusion • Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique Shikumi no Jutsu - Death Viewing Technique (Killing Intent) Ninjutsu: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn Doryuudan - Earth Dragon Projectile Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile [u]Black chakra:(black chakra drains the users chakra twice as fast as regular chakra) rain dark senbon- creats a dark cloud over oponent and rains down black senbon shadow bomb jutsu- fires a small black ball at the oponent, when the ball comes in contact with something it releases a small explotion pure shade jutsu- the user must first touch the oponent to activate this jutsu, and user must remain in contact with target for jutsu to work, consently drains chakra. This jutsu traps the target in a black box black fog escape- user emits a thick black fog from mouth allowing user and friends to escape[/u][/spoiler] 3[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted August 27, 2010 Report Share Posted August 27, 2010 Name: Zakuza Age: 21 Gender: male [spoiler=Appearance] http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://api.ning.com/files/oFa*pEL7gKcXS-8TgsoLpHuV5Qw8DV5uhxpg7EB--IHeXa*A7hs2OIqFJWiQKYTX6gPagZ84lxyNMnsaYXsSi8NoNnVaSoMN/AKatsuki_Team_7__Naruto_by_vinrylgrave.jpg&imgrefurl=http://theuchihahideout.ning.com/xn/detail/2338342:Photo:14178%3Fxg_source%3Dactivity&usg=__wBrcwxR7uGgOx2uhOmyXzZsUrEA=&h=1581&w=1280&sz=231&hl=en&start=0&zoom=1&tbnid=lZyfCHsNGp9qBM:&tbnh=138&tbnw=109&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dnaruto%2Bin%2Bthe%2Bakatsuki%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26biw%3D1362%26bih%3D559%26gbv%3D2%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C3&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=979&vpy=46&dur=12589&hovh=250&hovw=202&tx=80&ty=107&ei=gMtvTMGnMYjGugPCz6hB&oei=gMtvTMGnMYjGugPCz6hB&esq=1&page=1&ndsp=20&ved=1t:429,r:5,s:0&biw=1362&bih=559 but without the red akatsuki clouds on the clothes [/spoiler] Personality: keeps to himself, as a missing nin he trusts only in himself, he often looks angered for no reason, he is however forgiving in his own way, but still is filled with hatred that can be seen in his eyes. Bio: Growing up in the leaf village he was a normal klid, apart from his unique clan and kekkei genkeii ability he often outcasted himself from others to train, growin up he was incredibly fast, no one understood why except his father, his chakra was a golden colour and due to his kekkei genkei he was able to dash at superspeeds. When he was kickedout of the leaf village for accusations against him dictated that he had killed a child, he was only 8 at the time, for 13 years he has lived as an S-Ranked Missing Nin Rank: Missing Nin/S-Class Home Village: was hidden leaf Element: Lightning and Wind = Spark Clan: The Toro clan Faction: ? Missing nin Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: He has the ability of incredible speed. This comes with a price however his chakra inflicts pain when it is forced to increase his speed. His father was the first creatior of this ability, he suffered an attack through 6 elemental jutsus at the same time, the result caused an effect on his existing lightning and wind elements, allowing them to combine forming the Sprak element which turns the users chakra gold. This allows them to borderline teleport at rapid speeds. Weaponry/Extra Accessories: No weapons Jutsu list: Shadow Clone Jutsu Replacement Jutsu Rasengan Gargantu Rasengan Chidori Focused Chidori (Chidori with controlled movement (late sasuke)) Full Body Chidori 1,000 Bird Thunderclap Lightning Style: 1,000 Bird Thunderstorm [spoiler= Customer jutsu] Ultimate Move: Name: Duel Spark Style: Rasengan Chidori, Concentrated Voltage Rank: S Rank What it does: Requires a clone, the user starts the chidori while the clone does the rasengun, the 2 attacks are then combined causing an orb of concentrated power, when released it causes a widespread circular explosion, if released early the orb expands in the air absorbing wind causing it to go circular forming a typhoon like creation and sucking things in, it then explodes. he is only able to perform this Jutsu 1 time in each battle Name: Spark Style: 1,000 Volt Thundershot Rank: S Rank What it does: A thunderstorm occurs when the move charges in the users right arm, the lightning is retracted to the right arm of the user, the user then shoots the gathered thunder at the opponent. The thunder gathered dissrupts his chakra flow however causing him to struggle to move properly Name: Instant Spark Rank: S Rank What it does: Allows for unbelievably fast movement almost like teleportation. This is at the cost of harsh pain (more to come) [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted August 27, 2010 Report Share Posted August 27, 2010 [spoiler=Name: Daichi Niwa/Kurai] Age: 24 Gender: Male [spoiler=Appearance: ][spoiler=Daichi][IMG]http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s125/viserlord/anime2520boy5B15D.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=[b]Kurai[/b](the wings are one of Wiz's transformations)][img]http://img2.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4/05262008/a/5/b/9/a5b9335304d9e0_full.png[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality: ]Daichiis a very kind person and prefers to do things without fighting, however he will not hesitate to take up arms to protect his comrades. [b]Kurai is a very bloodthirsty ninja who never shows any mercy to his opponents(his ruthlessness is on par with 2 tails Naruto). Despite this he is willing to do anything to make Daichi happy, which often leads him to putting his life on the line for people Daichi considers comrades.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Bio: ]Daichi has always been a skilled ninja, to the point that he was able to achieve the rank of jonin when he was 16 years old. Despite his strength he often failed missions that required him to fight or kill others. The only time he did complete missions was when it was to protect somebody or something. Not long after becoming a jonin he was on a mission to capture an S-level criminal during his fight he came to realize that he could not defeat the ninja without killing him, which is something he swore he would never do. This caused the negative emotions inside Daichi to awaken and create Kurai, in the end Daichi still failed the mission because Kurai killed the ninja that was supposed to be captured alive.[/spoiler] Rank: S-Class Anbu Home Village: Leaf Element: Wind [spoiler=Clan: Niwa]The Niwa Clan is a clan that specializes in setting up & avoiding traps. All members of this clan are not only able to set up traps that are almost impossible to notice by anything less than a jonin, they are also able to instinctively avoid traps, often without even noticing it was there.[/spoiler] Faction: Anbu [spoiler=Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability:] Daichi & Kurai are alter Ego's. When Daichi transforms in to Kurai his appearance changes completely & he becomes a completely different person. Kurai was created by all of the suppressed negative emotions that Daichi refused to release. Daichi is a very kind person and prefers to do things without fighting, however he will not hesitate to take up arms to protect his comrades. Kurai is a very bloodthirsty ninja who never shows any mercy to his opponents(his ruthlessness is on par with 2 tails Naruto). Despite this he is willing to do anything to make Daichi happy, which often leads him to putting his life on the line for people Daichi considers comrades. [spoiler=Daichi & Kurai's special techniques]-Daichi- Daichi is capable of creating alternate dimensions which he is able to use to trap enemies, or he can use then for training & other things. When inside the alternate dimension Daichi & Kurai gain 2 separate bodies. in order to create the alternate dimension Daichi mist first draw a picture, drawing the picture usually takes days or even weeks, which will be used as the gate to the other dimension. Daichi can also use painting that other people have drawn if they are available. In order to send an opponent to one of his other dimensions Daichi must also travel there himself, and when he leaves, the target will also be set free. When in the dimension Daichi is able to control all the elements. In addition to this he is also able to remove people and creatures from paintings. the amount of chakra used for this would be the same as if a summoning jutsu is used, meaning that removing large creatures will use a lot of chakra. Although any human he pulls out will obey his commands, most animals he removes will not listen unless they where pulled from a painting that he drew himself. [b]-Kurai-[/b] Kurai has an almost demon like chakra that gives him a large arsenal of techniques. However when he uses it it will severely damage Daichi's body. Because of this he does not use this chakra except as a last resort.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Weaponry/Extra Accessories: ] Daichi also caries scrolls which allow him to store paintings so that he can use them in combat. Some of the scrolls have blank pages for him to draw on, others have ready to use paintings. He also caries a paint brush and paint for when he has spare time. [spoiler=Name: Wiz] [spoiler=Appearance: ][img]http://img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire3/01012008/1/6/8/5/1685a133bae490_full.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Ability: Wiz is able to transform in to almost anything by using Daichi's and Kurai's. When used with Daichi the weapons are limited to basic ninja gear and turning in to people, however when used with Kurai Wiz can turn in to almost anything. Because Kurai's chakra if stronger Wiz's transformations are much stronger and dark natures than when used with Daichi. Unlike with normal transformations Wiz will only return to his normal form when Daichi or kurai are completely out of chakra or when he wants to return. Wiz, like most ninja animals, has an ability to sense chakra. This can be very useful in many occasions, however it can only be used when with is in his normal form. Bio: With is Daichi's pet. Wiz is a very playful animal & is scared easily. Wiz also lacks the ability to swim.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] Jutsu list: Kurai or Daichi have very few jutsu except there unique abilities and the basic ninja techniques (Transform, substitute, Ecx). However they are both exceptionally skilled in Taijutsu & wind element.[/spoiler]3 [spoiler=Name: Arashi] Age: 25 Gender: Male [spoiler=Appearance: ][IMG]http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/113096/464991622.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality: ]At times Arashi can be very laid back and even childish. However Arashi always knows when it is time to get serious. Arashi never lets his anger overcome him and refuses to kill unless there is no other option. He is often seen putting himself in dangerous situations in order to save only one or two people that he doesn't know or does not like.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Bio: ]Ever sense Arashi was a child he has always had a strong sense of justice and has always trained hard to become a powerful ninja. Arashi became a jonin when he was 15 years old. Not long after becoming a jonin Arashi was sent on an a level mission when he received aid from one of the 7 swordsman of the mist. The mission lasted for 2 weeks, in that time Arashi and the mist ninja became good friends, however the mist ninja was killed in a battle. Arashi used the mist ninjas sword to defeat the opponent and he still caries it to this day.[/spoiler] Rank: Kage-level Jonin Home Village: Leaf Element: Water, Lightning, Storm Clan: (Nothing here) Faction: None Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: none [spoiler=Weaponry/Extra Accessories: ]Special sword that uses water in the surrounding area to create a blade. Arashi is able to manipulate the water by moving the handle. This blade used to belong to one of the 7 swordsman of the mist, however Arashi now uses it (more in bio).[/spoiler] [spoiler=All jutsus: ] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release_Armor]Lightning Release Armor[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Hound]Lightning Hound[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Electromagnetic_Murder]Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_False_Darkness]Lightning Release: False Darkness[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Flying_Thunder_God]Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Four_Pillar_Bind]Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Sixteen_Pillar_Bind]Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Thunder_Binding]Lightning Release: Thunder Binding[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Limelight]Limelight[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Important_Body_Points_Disturbance]Body Points Disturbance[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Kirin]Kirin[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release_Shadow_Clone]Lightning clone[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Waterfall_Technique]Water vortex[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Encampment_Wall]Water wall[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Dragon_Bullet_Technique]Water dragon[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Prison_Technique]Water Prison[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Clone_Technique]Water clone[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hidden_Mist_Technique]Hidden Mist Jutsu[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Takigakure_Style:_Watercutting_Sword]water cutting sword[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Black_Rain_Technique]Black rain[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Thousand_Flying_Water_Needles_of_Death]Thousand Needles of Death[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Prison_Shark_Dance_Technique]Water Prison Shark Dance Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Shark_Missile_Technique]Water Release: Water Shark Missile Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Five_Feeding_Sharks]Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Gunshot]Water Style: Liquid Bullet [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Fang_Bullet]Water Release: Water Fang Bullet[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Whip]Water Release: Water Whip[/url] [url=]Shadow Shuriken[/url] [u]Zakeru[/u]=After preforming the hand seals fires a lightning blast from his hands. [u]Zakeruga[/u]=This is a condensed version of Zakeru which is fired from the ringer tips and as a much faster speed. With the high level of compression this technique is able to go for large distances, even through solid objects, without stopping. [u]Turtle shield[/u]=Creates a shield of water in the shape of a turtle shell. This can be small to defend one person or a large for a group of people. [u]Water compression[/u]=Compresses large amounts of water in the area. When the water is released all of it will be forced outwards with a force equivalent to a large wave, or even a tsunami if enough water is used. If the the user is unable to maintain the jutsu, such as running out of chakra or being attacked, the water will be immediately released, rather than simply fall to the ground like most water jutsu. This technique is a double edged sword because it will effect everybody in rang [u]Rain cloud jutsu[/u]-Causes a large rain cloud to form in the sky which will make it start raining.[/u] [u]Five element pentagon attack[/u]=This is an S-level technique that attacks the opponent with all five elements. This is very difficult to use in battle do to the amount of time and preparation required to set up the technique as well as the fact that the target must be in the center of all of the scrolls. This technique uses five sealing scrolls, each one carrying a large amount of elemental chakra. The scrolls are placed in a pentagon shape with the target in the middle. After the scrolls are set up and the target is in position a large blast of elemental chakra will attack the opponent. An advantage to this technique is that it requires almost no chakra outside of what is put in to the scrolls. The element chakra can also be taken from opponents element based attacks if they hit the scroll. 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Magnet Soldier Posted August 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2010 Anbu and lord, accepted, but underline the custom jutsu. Everyone else, read the rules. Also, Soul, Having both Rasengan and Chidori is over powered. First, you need Sharigan to use Chidori. Kakashi explains that when he teaches sasuke. Second, you need a massive amount of chakra to use Rasengan, which is why only the fourth hokage, Jiraiya and Naruto have learnt it. So ideally, you would have neither. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted August 27, 2010 Report Share Posted August 27, 2010 .......that makes no sense...and i dont think remember kakashi saying u need sharingun for chidori...its a lightning based elemental jutsu, and are u serious no rasengun??? No thanks if you consider that op'd even though i add the drawback of can only use once, then i'm leaving byeee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted August 27, 2010 Report Share Posted August 27, 2010 [quote name='magnet soldier' timestamp='1282930910' post='4571401'] Anbu and lord, accepted, but underline the custom jutsu. Everyone else, read the rules. Also, Soul, Having both Rasengan and Chidori is over powered. [b]First, you need Sharigan to use Chidori. [/b]Kakashi explains that when he teaches sasuke. Second, [b]you need a massive amount of chakra to use Rasengan[/b], which is why only the fourth hokage, Jiraiya and Naruto have learn it. So ideally, you would have neither. [/quote] Actually you don't need sharingan in order to use Chidori. It's just easier if you do because normal eyes can't see what your doing, because of the speed, and you can't tell if the opponent is going to make a counter attack..... or something like that And Rasengan doesn't require a lot of chakra. It just requires allot of control. notice how Kakashi and even konahamaru(3rds grand kid) are both able to use it also. Anyways. I wasn't sure which of my jutsu where costume or not, because I get all of them from a website where people tend to put up fake jutsu. so i just underlined all of then that I haven't seen in the anime/Manga. I also provided a short description for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malignant Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 Application for this RP... Name: Houka Katsuryu Age: 20 Gender: Male [spoiler=Appearance][img]http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd162/zeldarell/Male%20Anime/ShadowWarrior4.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality]Incredibly alert and cunning in missions or battle situations, he never seems to give his opponent a break of any kind, only waiting when an enemy was using a jutsu so he could analyze the main sequences of Hand Seals used to eventually recreate it. Outside of missions, he is calm and a tad laid-back, opting to rest and recuperate from any stressful activities as much as possible.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Bio] Living alone for the most of his ninja career, he had taken the ninja exams during the time of the Bloody Mist, where you had to kill your friend to pass. At the normal age of 12, he passed the exam, using his kunai to carve a swath through his friend's face. Feeling numb, he was told by his Jounin Sensei that the shock would leave and he would either become a killer who reveled in the blood, or a detached killer with no real qualms about taking another life. Two years past, and his Jounin sensei had taught him and his team a few sword skills and normal jutsu for Genin in the Hidden Mist. Chunin exams passed, and his teammate was killed in the final part of the exam. Never really close to his teammate at the time, he shrugged her off when she nearly killed him for the lack of reaction. He was promoted though, and he was sent out on harder missions outside of Hidden Mist until he stumbled across a battle between high ranking ninjas. Caught in the cross fire, he was struck with an astray jutsu, and was declared dead a few days later. However, he had been tended to and cared by a hermit who had also stumbled across the field, the battle over and his motionless body laying there, soon to be his patient for the week. After the week with the old man, they grew close like a student about to take on the world for the first time, and the guide that was about to retire forever. Given a shroud cloak and a scroll of fire techniques, he set out to travel in his lighter injuries back to Hidden Mist. He reached there and was given a stern welcome and a reassignment to another new chuunin, who was his old teammate. She still hated him, but she was desperate for something to hold onto after their Jounin Sensei was killed from protecting his chuunin girlfriend from enemy ninjas, both dead within seconds facing an S-ranked missing nin. Although he hated the fact that she was becoming clingy, he felt like he had an obligation to help her as a teammate. Three years passed and something happened between the two that wasn't exactly love, but was getting to it. Training desperately each day, Houka grew by leaps and bounds before getting a offer to be a Seven Swordsman. Taking that title with gusto, he bled and sweated even more than ever, determined to retain the title. After two more years, now 19, he married his teammate was happy until she suddenly vanished a few months later. A different man than five years ago, Houka knew it had something to do with his change of attitude, and the Rumored Sword. He promised to himself and her that he would find her, even if he had to resort to using the Rumored Sword to do so.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Info]Rank: Seven Swordsman of the Mist/Elite Jounin Home Village: Hidden Village in the Mist Element: Primary - Fire, Secondary - Water Clan: None. Faction: Land of Water[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability] Nature Shroud- His cloak was made of materials naturally created and gifted to him from a Sage of Spiders, whom was growing old and without a successor. Despite not having the affinity to spiders, the Sage left him this gift in emergency situations. Since the cloak was created by the Elder Spiders using their own silk, the natural energy potential in the cloak was obscenely high for a seemingly man made item, and that was enough to give it special properties. The cloak could blend with the Natural Chakra around and effectively hide the wearer from chakra sensors and those who could see chakra. However, the effect was only useful in espionage situations, as if the cloak was overloaded with foreign chakra like the user's, it would begin to activate a type of premature sage mode, causing the wearer to become petrified and turned into a statue.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Weaponry/Extra Accessories] A medium sized broadsword with a chakra storing ability large enough to store three kage level chakras. Also carries seven scrolls and two ink brushes.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Jutsu List] Combat Jutsu- Suiton: Mizurappa(Water Release: Violent Water Wave) Suiton: Bakusui Shōha(Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave) Suiton: Suihachi(Water Release: Water Wave Palm) Suiton: Haran Banshō(Water Release: Stormy Blockade) Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu(Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique) Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu(Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique) Suiton: Suikōdan no Jutsu(Water Release: Water Shark Missile Technique) Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu(Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique) Katon: Gōenkyū(Fire Release: Roaring Flame Sphere) Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu(Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique) Supplementary Jutsu- Henge no Jutsu(Transformation Technique) Kawarimi no Jutsu(Replacement Technique) Shunshin no Jutsu(Body Flicker Technique) Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu(Water Clone Technique) Suiton: Takitsubo no Jutsu(Water Release: Waterfall Basin Technique) Kirigakure no Jutsu(Hidden Mist Technique) [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 [quote name='magnet soldier' timestamp='1282930910' post='4571401'] Anbu and lord, accepted, but underline the custom jutsu. [/quote] i have no custom jutsu..(atleast i dont think i do) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted August 28, 2010 Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 I thought of something to add to one of my characters. Hope this is okay. He can also use paintings that other people drew if they are available. In addition to going in to paintings he is also able to remove people and creatures from paintings. The amount of chakra used for this would be the same as if a summoning jutsu is used, meaning that removing large creatures will use a lot of chakra. Almost any human he pulls out will obey his commands, however most animals he removes will not listen unless they where pulled from a painting that he drew himself. I already added it to the app. If you think this is too much then I'll just take it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted August 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2010 @Anbu: Sorry. I assumed some would be custom. Never mind. @Soul: Proves you dont truly want to be in this RP. All you'd have to do was change it a little. @Visser: Ok, there accepted. And since only people with Sharingan have used Chidori, I'm going to assume that it's needed, or at least needed for a very good Chidori. He wouldn't be able to do all them variations without Sharingan. And Kakashi also has higher than normal Chakra. And I haven't seen Konohamaru use it(Neither have I seen Kakashi, but Kakashi would be able to copy it), but he is the grandson of the third Hokage so He would also have higher than normal Chakra, even if it was only by a little. @Malignant: Great app. Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 @magnet soldier: You clearly don't know enough about Naruto to run an RP about it, the chidori is used only by kakashi and Sasuke to improve or show the student/teacher relationship, just because you assume soemthng doesn't make it true. Also many ninja eg: Akatsuki members or S-rank ninja have normally got a good amount of chakra to, your reasons for not allowing Rasengan and chidori are both appauling and idiotic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malignant Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 This doesn't really seem to be my place to even strike up a reply in the midst of everyone's fact wars here but... The place is a land of NINJAS. Jutsus, Style forms, important weapons/skills... all of it get stolen every so often. Take a look at the Sharingan: It can copy handsigns, predict the possible outcomes of the future, and copy muscle coordination. The Uchiha Clan(who were the ONLY ones who possessed this skill naturally) could NOT copy the Fourth's Rasengan, no matter how hard they would try. Why? Because it is purely Chakra manipulation and condensation, and it requires a shitload of practice on EACH and EVERY stage to even ATTEMPT to use it. Remember the Water balloon, Rubber balloon, and Normal balloon sequences Naruto had to go through? That taught the proper manipulation and power of the technique, not to mention that it was a technique only usable to Naruto, Jiraiya, Minato, Kakashi, and Konohamaru, and I don't really think they'd pass it off to some stranger. But if we take account Honoku(Daichi's ability), it would still require the proper training for the Rasengan, seeing as the Rasengan is described as a "swirling mass of chakra" which doesn't give much details other than the fact that it swirls, and the chakra has to be compact and near perfectly shaped, giving it that 'bright light emitting sphere' look. And in my opinion, still isn't enough to replicate it. Possibly a new jutsu based off of it, but not the actual technique. And Chidori... It has handseals, yes, but it also requires Elemental Manipulation and a affinity to Lightning Nature Chakra, as well as incredible speed to pierce and it's tunnel vision. And if you remember the Chunin Exams, you'd see that Kakashi taught Sasuke the Chidori to "Protect his comrades", not to mention the fact that Sasuke needed a piercing jutsu strong enough to bypass Gaara's sand defenses, as well as the fact that Gaara was a homicidal maniac at the time, and Neji was a Konoha Genin who wasn't a crazed, bloodthirsty jinchuuriki. The Kakashi Gaiden also shows that when Kakashi was using it without his Sharingan, he couldn't even see anything around him, save for the things directly in front of him, hence the tunnel vision, and later on, clarity with the Sharingan in his eye. And for the whole Student/Teacher relationship bit? If you remember in the manga properly(since any scans online have been removed), it shows in the hospital battle that Kakashi was trying to teach Naruto the Chidori as well after the fight, but Naruto didn't have the aptitude to learn it, not that it was to show favoritism. At the time, he tried teaching Naruto the Chidori cause of his use of Rasengan and his improved Chakra Manipulation. Not that the move is easily taught or hard to learn, but there is a large wall in learning it as well as it IS a Unique Jutsu like the Rasengan and such. And as for why these techniques are banned from this RP...? It's cause of this: Let's have the whole RP group with impossibly Uber skills and jutsus. Now, all normal shinobi are going to get defeated right? Yes. And will all of the wars and be easily won with them? Most likely. This restriction is to promote a sense of BALANCE, and to ensure that none of the RPers are going God-Mode or Overtly Mary Sueish, like how I believe some of your characters are being... No offense. On other notes I may have left out... Chidori is NOT a Lightning-Based Elemental Jutsu. It can be considered as one, but it is a Lightning Chakra MANIPULATION Jutsu. There IS a difference you know. The Elemental Jutsu is more of using your chakra to use what's in the surroundings to form fire, or lightning to whatever, and that goes for even Water Type Elemental Jutsu, as they require a source of water nearby as well. Lightning Manipulation is using your Chakra Nature as your chakra catalyst to FORM the Elemental Chakra, and then you have to control the whole thing with Advanced Chakra Control. Same goes to the rest of the Elements. Leaf Cutting, Waterfall Splitting, Turning Coal into a Diamond... All those are a vital part of Elemental Chakra Manipulation. I've just been annoyed with how you all are taking this stuff... I mean, THIS JUTSU ARSENAL?!?! (SoulCiety's) Shadow Clone Jutsu Replacement Jutsu Rasengan Gargantu Rasengan Chidori Focused Chidori (Chidori with controlled movement (late sasuke)) Full Body Chidori 1,000 Bird Thunderclap Lightning Style: 1,000 Bird Thunderstorm (Visser's) hedori Chedori current Full body Chedori Lightning blade Lightning clone Zakeru=After preforming the hand seals fires a lightning blast from his hands. Zakeruga=This is a condensed version of Zakeru which is fired from the ringer tips and as a much faster speed. With the high level of compression this technique is able to go for large distances, even through solid objects, without stopping. Water vortex Water wall Turtle shield=Creates a shield of water in the shape of a turtle shell. This can be small to defend one person or a large for a group of people. Water dragon Water Prison Water compression=Compresses large amounts of water in the area. When the water is released all of it will be forced outwards with a force equivalent to a large wave, or even a tsunami if enough water is used. If the the user is unable to maintain the jutsu, such as running out of chakra or being attacked, the water will be immediately released, rather than simply fall to the ground like most water jutsu. This technique is a double edged sword because it will effect everybody in rang Water clone Black rain-Makes oil rain from the sky. Hidden Mist Jutsu Water Shark Bomb water slicing blade Shadow Shuriken [u]Rain cloud jutsu-Causes a large rain cloud to form in the sky which will make it start raining. When combined with a lightning technique, powerful lightning bolts will shoot down from the clouds. It's... OIAHET JOIJHDILUHW HRIDF ADSFAFJ WWRHI UARUIWR JTAEOTIWR!!!! It's unbelievable, and in the not-so-good way. I've also spotted flaws in Apps like... 1. SoulCiety's Bio- "When he was kickedout of the leaf village for accusations against him dictated that he had killed a child, he was only 8 at the time, for 13 years he has lived as an S-Ranked Missing Nin" Alright, how the heck does an EIGHT year old become an [b]S[/b]-Ranked Missing Nin, when he wasn't even a Ninja in the first place?! And why is it that he was kicked out for the death of another child? It should have been a Juvenile hall of sorts or the Prison instead of THAT. Come on, it's like stepping on the grass and having to serve a life sentence in jail; it's overly harsh and excessive, and also in Konoha/Leaf Village, where normal children are happy, bloodline children are treated with respect, and jinchuuriki's are merely ignored and not beaten. 2. SoulCiety's Bloodline/Unique ability- "...suffered an attack through 6 elemental jutsus at the same time, the result caused an effect on his existing lightning and wind elements, allowing them to combine forming the Sprak element which turns the users chakra gold. This allows them to borderline teleport at rapid speeds." Alright, here's the problem: How does one get hit by SIX Elemental jutsus AT THE SAME TIME and SURVIVE, let alone combine only TWO specific elements after said ordeal?! Spark element?! BORDERLINE TELEPORTATION?! What are you trying to make him become the next Yellow Flash, only... having Dark moments all the time except when a 'good' moment comes along?! I also never knew that having your chakra turn GOLD made you super fast as well! And there's a SIXTH element?! Note the sarcasm. Tone the effects down, and make it so that it properly explains how the father got it and passed it on, as well as a believable age and reason for the exile, not when the kid hasn't even gone through puberty yet. 3. Visser's Bloodline/Unique Ability- "The main ability of the Honoku is that the user will immediately know the answer to any question that pops in to his head." This puts me off. Immediately know the answer to any question that pops into his head? Impossible in all ways. It would have been better if it was more of a "brain quickly shifts through known info about possible uses, effects, or other info regarding the technique, and attempts to decipher possible ways of using the jutsu/skill." type of thing instead. "By asking the question 'what will he/she do next, Daichi can literally know what the opponent is going to do before they do it." Alright, so when they decide to feint at the last moment, would Daichi know that too? Or would he also be anticipating that and several other options, creating a cloud of doubt of what they would do next, and fail against the actual attack? This is more of an instinctual ability progressed with experience and time instead of a unique ability/bloodline. 4. Visser's Character info- This is simple, but I thought that your other character was called Arashi and Kurai, not Daichi and Kurai. That's all I have to say for this WALL OF TEXT, but I hope you all learned a bit from it and don't pointlessly flame it for the fact that I have stated stuff about your App. P.S. SoulCiety, for your last post, you've got some details wrong that would be corrected if you check on sites with Naruto info or this post's previous information. You also spelt appalling wrong. And please don't insult one's knowledge if some information of yours is missing or wrong as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heliosora Posted August 29, 2010 Report Share Posted August 29, 2010 Could you reserve me a spot please and thank you. actually forget about reserving me a spot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Helio, dont spam. (Also, posts on this forum(OOC) dont give you any post counts or points.) Soul, Goodbye, get off my thread and take a [b]loooooooong[/b] holiday from YCM to read up on your info. Malignant, Thank you. For that(And for your obvious passion for Naruto) I offer you the place of Co-owner. If you want it of course. Also, I have watch pretty much the whole [i]Naruto[/i] Season, but have yet to complete the Shippuden. But I do know just having Rasengan or Chidori is almost Godmodding, and having both(and a load of additional, related jutsu) is Just over the top. Also, Visser, I have just noticed the Honoka that Malignant pointed out, and think you need to down grade it a bit. It is a bit god modding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heliosora Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Magnet i wasn't trying to spam and i know posts count don't work i wanted to join but then i realised i barely know anything about naruto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malignant Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 ... Co-owner. Me. Co-Owner. ... I'm speechless really. In actuality, I expected to merely be a passenger in this Thread but Co-Owner? I accept the position of course, but I have no real clue what the co-owner does, as you can see about my relative lack of experience about this. Unless you want me to continue with my usual duties of merely pointing out things I believe are problems in characters. By the way, I do have a passion for Naruto, but I merely have a larger passion for correct details and the desire to have high level work, along with a balanced and non-Godmod situation to suit the needs of all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='Malignant' timestamp='1283294663' post='4586335'] ... Co-owner. Me. Co-Owner.... I'm speechless really. In actuality, I expected to merely be a passenger in this Thread but Co-Owner? I accept the position of course, but I have no real clue what the co-owner does, as you can see about my relative lack of experience about this.Unless you want me to continue with my usual duties of merely pointing out things I believe are problems in characters.By the way, I do have a passion for Naruto, but I merely have a larger passion for correct details and the desire to have high level work, along with a balanced and non-Godmod situation to suit the needs of all. [/quote] Sounds like Co-owner material to me. Name: Edan Age: 18 Gender: Male Appearance: [Spoiler] [img]http://s.bebo.com/app-image/7954020514/5411656627/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/06/23/anime241.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler] Personality: o Calm, collected, and ruthless. He approaches problems with a level head and attitude. One defining trait of Edan is that he's terrible with any money he procures, sometimes buying useless things on impulse. Bio: o Not much is known about Edan, he first appeared in the Land of Lightning causing minor problems, such as minor thefts. As the years went on however, he started moving across lands and commiting more advanced crimes. He survived by attacking merchant caravans and stealing from vendors to eat. When he was 15, he carried out his first assassination of a high noble in the land of fire and from than on survived on assassinations that people inconspicuously hired him for. Edan found out about his Crystal Kekkei genkai when he was 7, but hid it well until he started moving across the lands, baffling those that find specks from his Crystal Jutus. Rank: A - S Class Missing Ninja Home Village: Unknown Element: Crystal Release Clan: Unknown Faction: None Kekkei Genkai/Unique Ability: Crystal Release Weaponry/Extra Accessories: Shuriken and Kunai [Spoiler=Jutsu list:] o [b]Crystal Armor[/b] This jutsu allows the user to become encased in a thin sheet of crystal to protect from blunt force trauma. This armor can also aid in performing stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it. o [b]Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade[/b] Used to quickly form a blade made of crystal on an arm. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed. o [b]Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings Technique[/b] This jutsu will create a long stream of sharp crystals to bind or pierce a target o [b]Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon[/b] The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once. o [b]Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror[/b] Forms a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which she can then use to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Technique. o [b]Jade Crystal Clone Technique[/b] Makes multiple clones emerge from the mirror. These clones are made of crystal, so they crumble into many crystals when defeated. Clones made by this jutsu are also able to deceive Byakugan users. The Chakra Pathway System of the clone can be seen. o [u][b]Secret Jutsu - Crystal Release: Great Crystal Impact Armor[/b][/u] A heavier verion of the Crystal Armor. Covers the user in a suit made of crystal. The armor is much harder to maintain and thus uses up a lot of chakra, but provides a near impenetrable defense. o [b]Crystal: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken[/b] Creates a giant crystal shuriken, resembling a snowflake, and throws it at the enemy. o [u][b]Crystal Release: Crystal Shield Wall[/b][/u] Encases the user in a hard, hollow Crystal. [/Spoiler] 3.) Missing Rule I tried my best with this, its a little outside the regular so not entirely sure its ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 I changed the application post. Would I be able to assume that nobody has any complaints this time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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