dzx9000 Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 here they are btw if your gonna put in offensive comments dont even bother please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Very good and while I can't completly give you correct OCG here's something I can correct you onatk=ATK, ATk and DEF are captilized same for monster types 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Picture: 2/10. There is no background for 3/5 of these cards. 2/5 of them are overused. The last one should not have that logo at the bottom. OCG: 1/10. Bad wording. Is the the problem of this. OCG corrections:: When saying another cards name in an effect this is how it should look: "Evo Water Dragon"The first card did not need that big space in it. Horrible Grammar. Use Capitals:: "Special Summon." ETC.Periods. ETC. Total: 1.5/10. Please try harder next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 i will try harderBTW these cards i made 1 year ago when i was (more)noobish so there defnetly not good anyway thx for the rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Armor Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Im sorry but there not that good.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Im sorry but there not that good.5/10i know lol anyway thx for rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Rating:Pictures-1st card: 4/102nd card: 3/103rd card: 3/104th card: 2/105th card: 5/10 ATK/DEF - ATK shouldn't be so high, understand, increasing your monster's ATK just because you love the pic or something isn't making them better, it makes them a bit worse. try making original effects combined with balanced stats.1st card: 6/102nd card: 6/103rd card: 4/105th card: 5/10 OCG: 2/10 - better than 1 I've saw (which tried to write a poem if someone remembers here) Effects: 3/10 nothing really original Overpowered: 2/10 Good Luck next time, show us some cards you have made today! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 Rating:Pictures-1st card: 4/102nd card: 3/103rd card: 3/104th card: 2/105th card: 5/10 ATK/DEF - ATK shouldn't be so high, understand, increasing your monster's ATK just because you love the pic or something isn't making them better, it makes them a bit worse. try making original effects combined with balanced stats.1st card: 6/102nd card: 6/103rd card: 4/105th card: 5/10 OCG: 2/10 - better than 1 I've saw (which tried to write a poem if someone remembers here) thx four the ratings will do Effects: 3/10 nothing really original Overpowered: 2/10 Good Luck next time, show us some cards you have made today! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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