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Arion Gale

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This is my first pack, I'm still adding more to it and I need ideas... Rate 'em and give me some ideas on how to improve them and what to do for my next card!

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While the effect itself may not be OP'd, the Summon conditions certainly are. Try and make the required monster either harder to get out, or make this card weaker.

 

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Not much to say. Nice target for Junk Synchron, if nothing else.

 

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Again, a tad OP'd. Maybe the cost should be something a little more...solvent. Loss of card advantage is always good.

 

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As much as I'm tempted to call OP'd because of how quickly you could just keep stacking the LV on top of each other, I'm actually going to say they're UP'd, as you need to commit too much resources for nothing more than a beatstick.

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LV 6, 2500 generic? Not bad, not good. Decent.

 

 

All in all, your cards need some fine-tuning. Some effects need costs fixed, others need effects period. Good start, though.

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Thanks! But, I have no idea what OP'd and UP'd are... It took me an hour just to figure out what YCM stood for!

I'll take out some of the levels so that you'll be able to get to the LV 10 one easier

 

-I've added more and edited others-

it took me a day to even figure out what circulation is and i was messing up with the type thing i was putting the attribute in it

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