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Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Monsters: NagareBoshi [PG-13]: Chapters 42 + 43 added!


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Chapters 31 and 32 added!
And I'm going to have a lot of fun with the next few chapters.
Team Armageddon vs Team Go is going to be one of the best systems of Duels I've written.
Team Creation vs Team Solar Wind is going to be the most evenly matched.
Which makes me wonder, out of the whole FF, anybody who's reading, what's your favorite Duel?
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Lolbaseball
And for some reason, I laughed at that line about the dueling childhoods due to no surnames..
Found an error though. Kea attacked Lancelot directly in her first turn, but the next time Lancelot takes damage, it's as if it never happened.
Good chapter, psyched for Team Go vs Team Armageddon. Sennith vs Brendan is going to be a sweet duel.
Also, my favorite duels are Zugai vs Gouzen (2nd time) and Hiru vs Kosoru (both times).
Zugai vs Hiru is a close 3rd.
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Triple Chapter update!
Oh, and by the way, I'm thinking of having a base schedule for chapter releases.
Keep in mind that the schedule may change based on events happening in my life.
1 or 2 Chapters released weekly Sunday.
If I cannot release a chapter for a certain reason on Sunday, then I'll release 2 or 3 on the closest Wednesday.
Afterwards, I'll release 1 or 2 chapters the following Sunday, but most likely only one.
So, enjoy the most epic Duels that I've written so far.
Shadow continues to be Shadow even in my FF.
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Green Wisdom?
Fusion Burst?
=.=
Thank God I had the restraint for a chant..
But yeah, that duel was awesome, and so were the rest.
Plus I liked the scant moments of comedy that only lasted a moment, not laid on thick at all.
"He's done this before...
*facepalm* You think?"
"American...culture?
Wasn't looking for an oxymoron."
Couple typing errors, but nothing bad.
The only thing I didn't really like was Ranmyaku sparing Ayra. Not even sure Shadow's THAT cocky. But then again, Ranmyaku doesn't necessarily need to be the exact same as Shadow, right ;P
I liked the chapters, this was good stuff Cortez.
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Fusion. Pressure.
If you haven't noticed, it's making fun of every "new _____" post made in DEF.
And... that's odd.
On my word doc, it's fine...
I'll just quickly fix that.

EDIT: The thing about Ranmyaku is...
You'll find out that he's mentally off because of experimentations on him.
He's the Deadpool of the series.
And I'm just gonna leave it.
Once I finish Battle City, I'll go through and fix everything.
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When I say typing errors, I mean some stuff was missing. Like for one effect, I think there was something with levels x 800, but the 800 was left out. I was able to figure out what was missing from the rest of the context, so it wasn't a DERPTY DERP mistake.
Ranmyaku is Deadpool?
...
Okay >.>
Forgot one thing, I liked the flashback, since it was half-based IRL =P
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Okay, I finished the 3 chapters...
And after reading the 3 chapters, please read the section below...
Oh yeah, credit goes to Black for the Synchro Oaths of Shooting Star and Red Nova.

[spoiler=After reading the 3]
And thus ends this arc!
Next up is the Interstellars fighting random fans in Geneva!
And the Zugai-eye thing is because of the injury I just got.
And Black, I know you're probably going to comment on the inaccuracy of your personality.
There are reasons to that. First of all, if you haven't figured this out, but in this FF (not saying you are on YCM, you're far from it), you're bipolar.
Also, you're acting kind of depressing because, well... reasons I can't say because of spoilers.
So, yeah.
And also, I learned that it's really difficult to write about awkward moments.[/spoiler]
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Nice duels bro, is the reason Kosoru lost gonna be explained later?
Zugai vs Black was pro, just wish it was super insane like flying through the air and giant explosions. Still pro though.
Filler chapter was good, but it's kinda dawned on me...Ayra's kinda b*tchy .-.
Awesome chapters man, looking forward to next arc.
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