The Fourth god card

[Haxor]

Legend:

The three gods, The Winged Dragon of Ra, Slifer the Sky Dragon, and Obelisk the Tormentor, were all three brothers, but it wasn't just those three. They had one other brother, named Zeblash the Dark One. Zeblash used to be very close to all of his brothers until his brothers kicked him out of the Heavens and was cast into the Dark World and was forced to feed on others fear and pain. Nobody knows why though. But now, Zeblash is trying to get back on his brothers and make them suffer.

 

Here is the Fourth god card.... Zeblash!

 

 

If you are going to post rude comments, then don't post at all, and move along...

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

So... You could logically OTK with this card right on the spot?

 

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You don't even need to Special Summon it. Just do your standard two Tributes for the Tribute Summon.

 

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[Guest JoshIcy]

I ask you. How does this hold to Egyptian Mythos?

[Haxor]

Ugh! You guys make me so mad! What is so wrong me making this one card? and if your going to use abbreviations, a least spell them out somewhere, because I have no clue what OTK means!

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

This def isn't an Egyptian God but whatever.

 

Pic: 6/10 Just kinda weird, blurry or something. Edit it and it'll fit right.

 

Template: 8/10 Normal Template

 

OCG: 6/10 Needs work (ex "Specially summoned" should be Special Summoned, "Equal" should be equal, etc.). Zeblash isn't Egyptian...but then again neither is Slifer so I guess it's cool.

 

Originality/Creativity: 3/10 Not Original at all and not too creative

 

Playability: 4/10 I'm probably never going to see it played in a tournament or something.

 

Overall: 28/50 It's coming along :) Just keep fixing it and listen to everyone's comments and it'll improve, just as your skill will.

[Kuri]

they were brothers? o rly?

OCG fix: Specially Summon> Special Summon trap> Trap spell> Spell I think monster is ok...

 

This card is the reason why God cards are pretty much banned (OTK 1st turn summoned, maybe), either way its effect is good for being a God card. This card would only be helpful if your deck is filled with monsters which equals a pretty crappy deck. Anyways 7/10

[Haxor]

they were brothers? o rly?

OCG fix: Specially Summon> Special Summon trap> Trap spell> Spell I think monster is ok...

 

This card is the reason why God cards are pretty much banned (OTK 1st turn summoned, maybe), either way its effect is good for being a God card. This card would only be helpful if your deck is filled with monsters which equals a pretty crappy deck. Anyways 7/10

 

It wouldn't only be helpful if your deck is full of Monsters.. It only says tribute 3 Dark Type Monsters, that's it. Oh and thanks for the rate. And maybe they weren't brothers, it's just a myth.

[Kuri]

wow I misread it would be useful in a deck full of cards >.< with DARK monsters oh yea change Dark> DARK

[Smesh]

What is wrong:

Dark is not a Type, DARK is an attribute.

Why is this a Beast?

In What way does this resemble Egyptian Mythology?

Specially Summoned = Special Summoned

spell and trap = Spell and Trap

[Guest JoshIcy]

Ugh! You guys make me so mad! What is so wrong me making this one card? and if your going to use abbreviations, a least spell them out somewhere, because I have no clue what OTK means!

 

I did not use Abbreviations. I ask you again, what does this hold to Egyptian Mythos?

[Haxor]

I did not use Abbreviations. I ask you again, what does this hold to Egyptian Mythos?

 

I was talking to the first poster.

[Guest JoshIcy]

I ask you one last time. What does this have to do with Egyptian Mythology?

[Dandelo]

The actual "Egyptian God Cards" themselves hardly posses any real standing in Egyptian mythology, other than being called Egyptian Gods. The Winged Dragon of Ra may prove the only exception... only because its name mentions an actual Egyptian God. But then again, I never watched the anime series, so what do I know?

 

As for the poster's backstory, it seems to have more of a tie with Greek myth, i.e. Zues, Poseidon, and Hades being kin, and Hades being cast into the Underworld to feed off fear while the other gods gained power through worship.

 

And as for the card itself, it's Summoning conditions are not really that difficult, and it can't be destroyed by anything except battle, which isn't saying much, seeing as this card can gain ridiculously amounts of ATK. It's overpowered, obviously; but it's a "God Card", as you say, so it would probably be banned anyways.

[CMRenji]

It's alright, but God Cards should probably be in Any Other Cards not Realistic Cards.

 

Though, it's actually a decent God Card(not like some new members make).

 

And how are three completely different creatures brothers? 7.8/10

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Hey hey guys chill.

 

Anyways, @Josh this card has nothing to do with Egyptian Mythos...just like Slifer (even though it was originally Osiris)

 

@Haxor don't mind it so much, these things happen and OTK refers to One Turn Kill which means this card as part of a combo could cause you to win the game. This is not to be confused with FTK which is a First Turn Kill. For more info go to:

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/One_Turn_Kill

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/First_Turn_Kill

 

I hope this helps.

[Guest JoshIcy]

The actual "Egyptian God Cards" themselves hardly posses any real standing in Egyptian mythology, other than being called Egyptian Gods. The Winged Dragon of Ra may prove the only exception... only because its name mentions an actual Egyptian God. But then again, I never watched the anime series, so what do I know?

 

 

Slifer's original name was Osiris. Clearly a god in Ancient Egypt.

Whereas Obelisk's were most often placed at the entrance of temples and are inscribed with text of some kind. Being possibly perceived as a Guard.

 

@Above: Then locked, for purposely dodging a question. Normally I'd spare it and move it. But he purposely dodged the question after being asked 3 times.