Wave_Sine Posted August 11, 2010 Report Share Posted August 11, 2010 I made these long before joining this forum and think that they need major improvement. [spoiler=Wireframe front lines]Wireframe SoldierLevel 4DARK/Machine/Effect1500/1300If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original ATK is 1900. Wireframe CommanderLevel 7DARK/Machine/Effect2400/2000This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Wireframe" monster that you control. You can only control "Wireframe" monsters. While this card is face-up on the field, you can control up to 10 monsters. If this card is removed from the field, destroy monsters you control until you control five or less monsters. Wireframe Soldier - αLevel 4DARK Machine/Effect1650/1300If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original ATK is 2050. Wireframe - Alpha ShovelEquipment SpellThis card can only be equipped to a "Wireframe Soldier" that you control. The equipped monster's name is treated as "Wireframe Soldier - α" Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 150. Wireframe Soldier - βLevel 4DARK Machine/Effect1800/1300If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original ATK is 2200. Wireframe - Beta DrillEquipment SpellThis card can only be equipped to a "Wireframe Soldier" that you control. The equipped monster's name is treated as "Wireframe Soldier - β" Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 300. Wireframe Soldier - γLevel 4DARK Machine/Effect1950/1300If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original ATK is 2350. Wireframe - Gamma ShurikenEquipment SpellThis card can only be equipped to a "Wireframe Soldier" that you control. The equipped monster's name is treated as "Wireframe Soldier - γ" Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 450. [spoiler=Delta + Support]Wireframe Elite - δLevel 9DARK Machine/Fusion/Effect3500/2600"Wireframe Soldier - α"+"Wireframe Soldier - β"+"Wireframe Soldier - γ"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, if your opponent controls more Spell or Trap cards and you control at least 2 Spell or Trap cards, discard one card from your hand to destroy Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls until both players control the same amount of Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can return this monster to the Extra Deck and Special Summon the Fusion Material Monsters from the Graveyard. Wireframe - Delta ClawEquipment SpellYou can only activate this card by sending "Wireframe - Alpha Shovel", "Wireframe - Beta Drill", and "Wireframe - Gamma Shuriken" from your side of the field or your hand to the Graveyard. You can only equip this card to a "Wireframe Soldier" that you control. The equipped card's name is treated as "Wireframe Elite - δ". Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 1600. Wireframe Delta FormationQuick-Play Spell CardSelect one of the following effects:•Send, from your Deck to the Graveyard, "Wireframe Soldier - α", "Wireframe Soldier - β", and "Wireframe Soldier - γ". Special Summon "Wireframe Elite - δ" from your Fusion Deck (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.)•Send, from your Deck to the Graveyard, "Wireframe - Alpha Shovel", "Wireframe - Beta Drill", and "Wireframe - Gamma Shuriken". Equip "Wireframe - Delta Claw" from your deck or your hand to a "Wireframe Soldier" on you control, ignoring the activation conditions. [spoiler=Wireframe Support Units]Wireframe TransportLevel 3DARK Machine/Effect500/1400When this card is Summoned, it is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard a card from your hand to Special Summon one Level 4 or lower "Wireframe" monster from your deck. If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original DEF is 2000. Wireframe Transport - εLevel 3DARK Machine/Effect500/1800When this card is Summoned, it is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can return one Spell or Trap card from your field to your hand to add one Level 5 or higher "Wireframe" monster from your deck to your hand. If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original DEF is 2400. Wireframe - Epsilon ShieldEquipment SpellThis card can only be equipped to a "Wireframe Transport" that you control. The equipped monster's name is treated as "Wireframe Transport - ε". Increase the DEF of the equipped monster by 400. Wireframe ArmoryLevel 3DARK Machine/Effect1000/1300When this card is Summoned, it is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard a card from your hand to add one "Wireframe" equipment spell card from your deck to your hand. If you control a Spell or Trap card, this card's original DEF is 1900. Wireframe Heavy ArsenalLevel 5DARK Machine/Union1500/2300You can Tribute one "Wireframe" monster you control with DEF higher than its ATK to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "Wireframe" monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, Equip cards you control don't count toward the 5 Spell or Trap card limit.. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) I will likely add more of the cards to this later, because drowning people with a 20-card starting post is bad. These likely need OCG fixes and the like. Link to comment
Wave_Sine Posted August 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2010 bump, srsly: rate, comment, feedback, help these cards be better Link to comment
PoliceCar Posted August 13, 2010 Report Share Posted August 13, 2010 I find these cards..."interesting", but I think you could improve them by making it so that they need specific a number of Spell/Trap cards to gain their effect, making it so the amount needed scales with how hard to summon they are, and maybe some would have effects activated instead of gaining/losing ATK; Ex: "While you control 2 or less Spell or Trap cards, this card's original ATK becomes (insert attack points here)" Ex: "While you control 3 or more Spell or Trap cards, your opponent cannot activate Counter-Trap Cards" Ex: "While you control 2 Face-up (you could make it face-down if you wanted, they are your cards after all) Spell or Trap cards, you may draw 1 card in addition to your normal draw". I think the Wireframe Set has potential, keep adding on to it and give us some peeks at what you've done every now and then. But be sure that you make some downsides and upsides to card effects, like "While you control 2 or less Spell or Trap cards, this card's original ATK becomes (insert attack points here)" but it would also say "If you control 3 or more Spell or Trap cards, destroy 2 of them." Best of Luck with the cards! Link to comment
Wave_Sine Posted August 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 edit: Added Delta and Support Units. Since these cards were made a long time ago, I am using your suggestions (sorta) to try to make the new ones better. [spoiler=Compare old Delta with new Delta]--old--Wireframe Elite - δLevel 8DARK Machine/Fusion/Effect3500/2600"Wireframe Soldier - α"+"Wireframe Soldier - β"+"Wireframe Soldier - γ"This monster may not be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. As long as this monster is on the field, the controller of this monster may not control any of the Fusion Material Monsters. During your Main Phase, you may return this monster to the Fusion Deck and Special Summon the Fusion Material Monsters from the Graveyard. --new--Wireframe Elite - δLevel 9DARK Machine/Fusion/Effect3500/2600"Wireframe Soldier - α"+"Wireframe Soldier - β"+"Wireframe Soldier - γ"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, if your opponent controls more Spell or Trap cards and you control at least 2 Spell or Trap cards, discard one card from your hand to destroy Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls until both players control the same amount of Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can return this monster to the Extra Deck and Special Summon the Fusion Material Monsters from the Graveyard. Link to comment
Wave_Sine Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 bump this board. why are there NO PEOPLE WHO WILL RATE, IMPROVE, INSULT, ETC. CARDS AT ALL here. [/rage]why is this the most ignored custom cards board? Link to comment
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