Super Singles! 2/???

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Super Singles!

 

Hello all, and welcome to my new set. It is not completed yet. Heck, it's no where near completed. I only just started. But, hopefully I can get quite a few cards here.

Basically, this is just a place where I will post all my singles. I decided to just make it one post though, so, if I ever make an Archive, I'll be able to put this there, and it saves me from cluttering up the board, so it's win-win.

Anyway, I am an amateur at card making, so I wouldn't be surprised if I have OCG errors and the like. I have only made about 5 cards, ever, on this site so far, so yeah. Well, here they are. If you want effects for any of them, just pm me!

 

Strawberry's Competition Cards

 

[Frunk]

To be honest, that girl looks way too submissive to be seductive (I'm guessing you meant seductive, anyway). :P The third option on it is a little overpowered in my opinion. It might be better if it was "Destroy one Spell or Trap card on your Opponent's side of the field", or "Destroy one face-up Monster card with an ATK of 2000 or less on your Opponent's side of the field", or something. Being able to choose from any card is too much. 6/10.

 

The second card seems good. The only thing I can say is that the wording could probably be better. I've been out of the game too long to give OCG suggestions here. 7/10.

[Sotos]

The 1st card's third effect is a little OP'D... Also, you need to correct some mistakes on both cards:

 

[spoiler=1st card]

1: "You may choose can select and activate 1 of the following effects..."

2: "Add one Level 3 or lower card monster..."

3: "...from your Deck to your hand."

4: "...on your opponent's side..."

 

 

[spoiler=2nd card]

1: "This card must be equipped Equip only to a..."

2: "...cannot be destroyed..."

3: "However, it gains this The equipped monster gets the following effect."

4: "When this card battles an opponent's monster, the defending monster An opponent's monster that battles with this card has its ATK reduced to 0.

 

 

Nice cards, though! I'll give the first one a 7/10 and the second one a 6/10