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Zombire Comics(first 5 members get a rep)


VladAshram

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How about the beginning be like the kid from the first series manga grows up and is the president Industrial Illusions in America, right below Pegasus. He is sent to Egypt when a new discovery is made. The discovery involves Zombire and the an ancient temple or ruin or something dedicated to him. Upon entry there is a cave-in and he is trapped alone. Searching for a way out he discovers a scroll. He then takes out a pocket guide and starts to translate it. It says something like "Whom first gives his life to Zombire shall become cursed. The curse may only be a blessing in disguise. Only then would the destined one be free." He then notices a strange altar. He goes and says "If you free me, my life is yours through out the night." The entrance mysteriously opens as the rocks just fall right out. He then every night at 6:00PM(or when ever it turns dark) turns into Zombire, his favorite childhood hero. Every morning at 6:00AM(or whenever it turns light out) he becomes a man again. I know it is very lame and it is so generic but with some work it will be like Spawn or superman or batman or spiderman.

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Awesome end to a bad beginning, great. How about for the first few times he nearly obliterates them, but it zaps all his power so that when they come back, the Evil Heros destroy him down to the fact that he is on life support(ha, ha). He doesn't give up and is humiliated because they film it and show it across the world. He then very cheeply gathers enough strength for one last fight in which they are both destroyed. He then awakens to find that he never entered the building. END OF FIRST SEASON.

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