VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 I hope that this is better because if it was any bigger it would be too blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 i would like to be a writer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 ok let start with a begging haris how does the book or comic start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 im not sure whats this comic about when i figure out i will think of a start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 ............ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 How about the beginning be like the kid from the first series manga grows up and is the president Industrial Illusions in America, right below Pegasus. He is sent to Egypt when a new discovery is made. The discovery involves Zombire and the an ancient temple or ruin or something dedicated to him. Upon entry there is a cave-in and he is trapped alone. Searching for a way out he discovers a scroll. He then takes out a pocket guide and starts to translate it. It says something like "Whom first gives his life to Zombire shall become cursed. The curse may only be a blessing in disguise. Only then would the destined one be free." He then notices a strange altar. He goes and says "If you free me, my life is yours through out the night." The entrance mysteriously opens as the rocks just fall right out. He then every night at 6:00PM(or when ever it turns dark) turns into Zombire, his favorite childhood hero. Every morning at 6:00AM(or whenever it turns light out) he becomes a man again. I know it is very lame and it is so generic but with some work it will be like Spawn or superman or batman or spiderman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 ok ill addbut then something went wrongworker"oh no"evil guy"hahahaha the evil hero"inferno wing"are mission is to drestoy zombrie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 how do they come in though? Is he like on the look out for crime one night? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 (is that part of the comic)if so he comes in he is a person that searches the egyptains writing and found out how to bring them to the world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Awesome end to a bad beginning, great. How about for the first few times he nearly obliterates them, but it zaps all his power so that when they come back, the Evil Heros destroy him down to the fact that he is on life support(ha, ha). He doesn't give up and is humiliated because they film it and show it across the world. He then very cheeply gathers enough strength for one last fight in which they are both destroyed. He then awakens to find that he never entered the building. END OF FIRST SEASON. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 sounds awsome but confusing when he never entered the buildingalso when the evil hero lose they fuse with each other to make a fusion evil hero more powerful(preview of season 2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 then that monster leaves and says that you may have beaten me but I shall get the next one. and after he is back he hears zombire tell him to pick another one by the end of a decade to fight the new evil hero. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 yeah and thats when zombire loses then of the end of that season him magically gains power then dies at the end of season 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 right before he dies he picks the next person to be called Zombire and they are the new one who has to find the destiny heros and dies right after finding their human counterparts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 yeah then at the end they make a statue of zombire and his quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 yeah, but to truely understand him go to this link about the character he is based off of http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spawn_%28comics%29 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 why did you show me this?(hehehehe i was looking at yugioh gx) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VladAshram Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 If you want more of an idea of his persona, that way you can understand that it is not only funny when he dies it is extremely funny because he is like this cool shady guy that like you always expect to win but dies terribly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 oh ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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