Akatsuki of YCM's OOC and Planning Site

[El Make]

JZ = inactive

 

Black-kun = not here

 

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[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Well my idea for my new member would be of something different and fun in a way and another for a tournament style. However it wouldnt fit any story line at all that we currently have going on for the first one and would have to wait until after the tournament arc and dragon lord return arc.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Oh I gotchu Ninjew

By the way, my 3rd app that I'll be using for a little

[spoiler=Fusion's 3rd guy]

Name: Satan

Aliases: Lucifer, The Devil, Lord of Darkness,

Age: Unknown

Personality: His reputation precedes him, a b*stard who relishes torture, vengeance, and won't think twice about killing his son.

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Powers:

Controls demonic energy-dark energy compressed into destructive blasts, similar to the "cero", can only be used a few times in his weakened state

Superhuman strength and endurance (weakened by Azera)

Control of HellFire-black flames that are far more lethal than normal ones, normally they can never be put out, but in his weakened state, they do not burn for too long

Bio: Satan was the King of Hell for as long as the universe existed, until one day his son Azera Karnon overthrew his reign and stripped him of his powers. He only now controls demonic energy and HellFire and is trying to reclaim the rest of his power and throne back by allying himself with Fusion X. Denver.

 

I know it's simple, but hey, I'm not using him for too long >__>

[El Make]

Fusion, if you're just doing that with him, you could have just kept him a NPC you control... >.>

[Fusion X. Denver]

Eh. Doesn't make a difference though, so whatever.

[Mr.WHAM]

I'm not to worried about the poisoning effects b/c as you said it'll just make more poison that I can't touch...This will litreally be turning the area in to a volatile wasteland....

[Shadow Zero]

Only while the Phazon is there. my character can easily remove the Phazon from the land, it's just that he's using it to fight you at the moment.

[Mr.WHAM]

Yeah shadow I owned you in a post but it was erased so I quit. Continue with your story after the fight im leaving the world of RPing indefinately

[Shadow Zero]

Hn? Why are you leaving the rp world?

[Mr.WHAM]

Well in my missing post I managed to escape trap you as you came out chaos control, accelerating the half-life of Phazon with supercharged black lightning, and become magneto all in one and it erased and im frankly very tired of that happenin

Im also not good any more. Im uninspired as an RPer

I miss Demensia a lot. and all my efforts have been in vain. By the way i might still do that...thats abou it

I have to learn how to mangae time

Im very lazy

Did I mention Im not a good RPer anymore

And well I just dont feel like posting rigth no...its all...meaningless.../sadness

[Shadow Zero]

................*uncles Wham* PULL IT TOGETHER MAN! MY post got deleted as well, but I still kept going! What kind of campass excuse is that?!

[Mr.WHAM]

*dodges uncling*

 

And what about the rest of those reasons?

 

Look I don't wanna quit Rping but I don't think I should right now until I can actually be consistent with something. Sorry bud.

[Shadow Zero]

At least write your character out in such a way as he is able to return. Use a senkaimon or something.

 

Also, you don't dodge uncle, uncle dodges you, and then hits you, because it is just that epic.

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Fusion, these are the large guards who you saw when you entered the prision. They are so much taller and stronger then you claimed. You should edit your post to escaping with Satan into the prision and then escape from there to retrieve your weapons.

 

Otherwise they will pick you up and crush the soul out of you.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Ok my b, I thought they were the black angel ones.

I will do that in a little bit, sure.

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

I did describe them anyways. Also ALL the large guard demons [old ones, vampiric ones, angel ones] are huge. Taller then the large gate you saw when you entered..That's why they entered the courtyard by basicly hopping over the wall.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Alright, I edited with them entering the prison tower.

Mind giving me a description of the tower's layout and where important rooms are, or do I make those up myself?

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Any bolded will be where I have some issue which I'll address after it.

 

Fusion looked around to see guards had came in and effectively put a halt to the riot. Damn! Too spontaneous...we need to keep up our assault now, or Azera could separate us and we'll never break free. Fusion then noticed the guard swinging at him. He instinctively tried to charge a Thunderhand, but the seal kept it in and he had to dodge the attack at the last second. He did this by ducking quickly, but the speed of doing so caused him to fall back on his butt. He looked up to see the guard making a downward stabbing motion, so he leaned back on his arms and thrust his feet up to catch the sword and wrench it out of the guard's hands. At that moment, he used his arm strength to propel himself off the ground and kick the guard in the face with both feet.

 

At that moment, Satan laughed at the situation and yelled to the female, "You insolent whelp! For all you know, I probably procreated you with some demon whore in the past millennium!" He didn't bother to look at the guard who successfully slashed through Satan's chest to the point where it was stuck in between his ribs. He turned to the demon and said, "You may not be able to die, but you'll wish you could." With that, he reached forward with quick speed and grabbed the demon's head with his hand. He should have been able to do this as the sword was still in him and this occurred right after the demon slashed it into there and could not pull it out. He then slammed the guard's head into the ground, pulled out the sword, then ran toward the prison tower.

 

"Fusion, are you quite finished?" Fusion had just kicked the guard a bit away, saw Stan rushing, then ran into the prison. The two of them were in the corridor running at top speed, with Satan holding the sword he stole from the guard and his gaping wound which secretly hurt, and Fusion running on deep in thought. "I guess we should find a way to remove these seals and to recover our weapons, but I wonder where they are?" Fusion asked aloud.

 

Ok first bolded area: how can you catch a sword being stabbed at you from such a large entity and wrench it out of his hands??? Then you go to kick him in the face?? He is like 30ft. tall and his strength is strong.

 

Second bolded area: Once again, the demon's arm length is like 12ft. I don't think satan would reach since the sword is longer then the arm not to mention the strike would have him skid across the ground. Again, getting the blade out after it dug in would be quite hard. the sword is long and heavy.

[Fusion X. Denver]

1st thing: Ah ok I'll edit.

2nd thing: The guard demon may be huge, but wouldn't Satan be taller? I pictured him being a giant figure of sorts too, unless being stripped of his powers shrunk him or something. Just clarify that and I'll edit.

[Shadow Zero]

Guys, Wham has decided to quit rping for a while, so I'm not quite sure what to do at the moment. I mean, should I just take control of his character long enough to have him return to wherever using a Senkaimon so that my character can go and do whatever?

[Fusion X. Denver]

Can't Wham just make an exit post?

If he doesn't or says no, then yeah, just have him escape.

But DO NOT do anything else, ONLY have him leave.

[Shadow Zero]

Well, I WOULD prefer it if he made his OWN exit post, but I don't know if that's going to happen, so yeah.

[Fusion X. Denver]

I'll give him until tonight.

If the case leads to you controlling him Shadow, just have him exit for unknown reasons, no claiming victories or losses.

[Shadow Zero]

Yeah, that's basically what I had in mind.

[Mr.WHAM]

I'll make an exit. The reason whuy I'm mostly quitting RPing is because

1. Some bad ish has happened no my college. This year has been particularly lethal.

2. It has result drained most of my happiness and well feelings. I just need some time off. If I do come back, I'll remain independent of what you all are doing.

3. The RP, which after some thought, I have decided not to give up on, is Demensia. I'll be in discussion with Shadow on this, so if you guys are interested. Text me(seriously, you'll get to me faster) or add me on FB. My name on FB is Ze'borova Preyn. *yes....I named myself after my char.*

 

4. I'm well...idk what I'm doing after this...