Help meh with mah Dragon Deck please! D:

[YORK]

okay,so i realize most people think dragons are just for noobs...but i can actually pull them off

Hers my deck

 

Monsters:

Blue Eyes White Dragon x 3

Red Eyes Wyvern x 2

Armed Dragon Lvl 3 x 2

Armed Dragon Lvl 5 x 2

Armed Dragon Lvl 7 x 1

Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon x 2

Red Eyes B. Dragon x 1

Totem Dragon x 1

Luster Dragon x 1

Spear Dragon x 1

Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lvl 6 x 1

Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lvl 8 x 1

Red Eyes B. Chick x 1

Montage Dragon x 1

 

Spells and Traps:

Trade In x 2

Star Blast x 1

Torrential Tribute x 1

Dust Tornado x 2

Waboku x 2

Sakuretsu Armor x 1

Fissure x 1

Mountain x 1

Mystical Space Typhoon x 1

Giant Trunade x 1

Lightning Vortex x 1

Back To Square One x 1

Compulsory Evacuation Device x 1

Future Fusion x 1

Level Up! x 1

Twin Swords of Flashing Light-Tryce x 1

Dimensional Prison x 1

Heavy Storm x 1

Final Destiny x 1

 

Fusions:

Five Headed Dragon x 1

Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon x 1

 

what can i do to improve this?

[Zauls]

Well for starters, please could you seperate the spells from the traps, it makes it much easier to read. You have the basic idea of the deck, but Armed Dragons are bad and Red-Eyes B. Dragon is bad. If you want a Dragon deck, run this:

 

Monsters: 19

Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon X3

Dark Horus X2

Blue-Eyes X3

Prime Material Dragon

Chaos Sorcerer

Exploder Dragon

Red-Eyes Wyvern X2

Dread Dragon X2

The White Stone of Legend X3

Flamvell Guard

Morphing Jar

 

Spells: 12

Future Fusion

Allure of Darkness

Trade-In X3

D.D.R. X2

Cards of Consonance X2

Heavy Storm

Giant Trunade

Brain Control

 

Traps: 8

Bottomless Trap Hole X2

Burst Breath X2

Mirror Force

Torrential Tribute

Solemn Judgment

Trap Dustshoot

 

Extra Deck:

Five-Headed Dragon X2

Exploder Dragonwing X2

Trident Dragion X2

Ally of Justice Catastor

Magical Android

Goyo Guardian

Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier

Black Rose Dragon

Stardust Dragon X2

Red Dragon Archfiend

Trishula, Dragon of the Ice Barrier

(some of the Synchros are OCG, but they are coming out in TCG some time soon)