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No. I wanted it to be Stained Black, but everyone else said Tainted. I wanted a Fallen theme.

 

Here are MY poems, one of which named after my Username, and FOR my Username.

 

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Oh, Humanity

Oh Humanity, what is your aim?

To yourself, you bring all sorts of shame.

Blame all you want, it does no good,

But maybe you are just misunderstood.

A being on danger and conflict,

To emotion, you are such an addict.

Life and Death; Love and Hate;

These are the things we cannot create.

Our happiness and misery abound,

But is that all that is around?

Are we demon with fork, or angel with horn?

Or maybe we are something to adorn?

Fallen from High, seduced down to Earth.

Cursed we are, from the moment of birth.

Life and Liberty are what we were given,

But are they kept 'til the moment we're quiverin'?

This thing called man, it needs to resound,

For such potential is to be found.

Raise your voice, shout it out.

Become what you are, without a doubt.

Ruthless and angry, they fight a fight,

Man will live to see another night.

But is he doing what he should?

Is it really all he could?

Did he leave agood footprint?

Or maybe he left a horrid dent.

Through it all, he rises and falls,

Yet mankind has many dolls.

Useless and placid, they have no view.

Are you one of their crew?

 

Tainted Black

A Sinner am I, fallen from high.

An Angel am I, who lost his wings.

A Liar am I, seeking the truth.

A Victim am I, of my own greed.

An Addict am I, of this sin seemingly sweet.

A Talker am I, of the things I do.

An Idiot am I, for I hurt those near me.

An Oddity am I, for I abhor myself

A New Being am I, stains to be taken away

 

 

 

In Tainted Black, there's a hidden message.

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XD Just in the Poem. Sirius is a Star, so a Black star is a no. Plus, black is from Marsuvees, and it is tainted.

 

Tainted Black

A Sinner am I, fallen from high.

An Angel am I, who lost his wings.

A Liar am I, seeking the truth.

A Victim am I, of my own greed.

An Addict am I, of this sin seemingly sweet.

A Talker am I, of the things I do.

An Idiot am I, for I hurt those near me.

An Oddity am I, for I abhor myself

A New being am I, stains to be taken away

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