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It WAS good enough to get published, tho.

I mean, it's not like his parents would publish crap.




Fusion, I think what would be better is if you re-wrote DEF, worked more on some names (Daisuke Link my ass) and didn't use any references.


EDIT:

That's impressive. The most I've gotten is a poem published in some poetry book (in the first 4 pages, no less <3)
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All I need to do is change character's names and it's no longer them.
I couldn't sue Kishimoto because Naruto is the same exact person as me with a different name (not actually true, just an example).
And Cortez, I'm aware of all that. I told you, it'll be completely revamped for publication.
And books can make the unrealistic realistic. Especially with the FTK backing it.
Lastly, I didn't say I'd publish it anytime soon. Probably 10+ years from now when I'm more literate and a better writer.
I was also thinking about breaking it down to multiple parts actually.
EDIT: That's what I was gonna do =.=
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You were gonna publish a poem in a poetry book? Good luck, mate.



Also, you have talent, Fusion. And DEF gave you experience.


Now, I suggest, after DEF, you try to go for fantasy/sci-fi in your next fic.

Why?

To broaden your range.

Ashirogi Muto did it, man, you should too.
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That wouldn't be a bad idea.
Return to DEF after getting some experience with other works and shape it into a masterpiece.
And if I go back to it, since I'll have the whole story to work with, I can elaborate on certain relationships, develop more characters, connect future events to the beginning of the book.
If I work hard at it, I'll make it happen.
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Okay, I see somebody viewing this who will definitely question what I said, so I'm just going to give all the examples.
And my FF events I'm posting were made before Black mentioned ZEXAL or before ZONE's main three cards were revealed.
My Fanfic: "I Summon Astral Dragon!"
ZEXAL: "Introducing the new character Astral!"
My Fanfic: "Hey, its a gate..."
ZEXAL: *The kid sitting in front of an opening gate*
My Fanfic: Hiru: "My medallion's glowing..."
ZEXAL: "You broke my pendent..."
My Fanfic: "I Summon Temporal Jester."
5Ds: ZONE's Time/TEMPORAL Machine Gods...
My Fanfic: Zugai has his own Thresher Shark
ZEXAL: Ryoga. Nuff said.

-___-

EDIT: I expected to get ninja'd. Guess not.
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Everyone knew ZONE was Yusei, but it's a stupid plot twist, so we hoped agaisnt it =/

[quote name='Daisuke L. Hirako' timestamp='1295819031' post='4955248']
What creativity.

I miss Feral Imp.
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Yeah, the Creativity died a LONG time ago.

However, Tech Genus Halberd Cannon is <3 As are many synchros.
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Okay, so not every deck has to have Synchros to be good, but my point is: Synchros suck.

TOO easy to summon them.

WAY too easy.


Also, in YGO, I will say "Tiers R4 Queers" doesn't apply.

BUT

I still like E-heroes from the manga, they're cool.
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[quote name='Daisuke L. Hirako' timestamp='1295825957' post='4955706']
Koaki Meirus are evil in their entity.

They did hell to my dark deck.


Also, they suck as in, they are too cheap.


And those 3 are overpowered.


Well, Brionac, not so much when playing WC09, but I bet IRL it's hell to deal with.
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Those are Anti-Meta Meirus. I run Maxi/Rock Stun Meirus xD

They aren't cheap, save Drago ._.

Brio. Is. The. Spawn. Of. Hell.
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