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JOIN DAMMIT!

 

So I can interact with you using my offspring of Kakashi and Hinata!!

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I'm going to kill you >_>

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Done, go check if you don't believe meh

 

Also, if I may

 

Name: Stone Lee

Apperance: Normal seafoam green eyes, a small nose, and small lips. His hair is shaggy, and pink, as are his eyebrows, which are bushy, but not as much as his father's. He has a skinny build, with green spandex as clothing, but his is two pieces: A shirt and a pair of pants.

Pedigree: Rock Lee and Sakura Haruno Lee

Bio: Lee is the child of Sakura and Rock Lee. Being born to the most useless ninja Forgetting Moegi and Udon?

 

and the worst ninjutsu ninja, he came out with almost no physical strength. It was a miracle he could walk, they said. Still, Stone somehow managed to grow older OMFG! Someone was able to grow older, RUN FOR THE HILLS!

 

and get into the Ninja Academy. While a failure isexcessively Please don't make me point out what's wrong with this

 

powerful in Ninjutsu, but unable to do Tai/Ninjutsu. The bold is genious work

 

I know, it's odd, but go with it. More like a disturbing contradiction

 

So, he began ninja school. Once upon a time, he tried to do a Taijutsu.... He was roundhouse-kicked by a log. Later, that same log went up to him and mugged him.

 

Then, he tried to do Genjutsu. A giant chicken swallowed him whole, and he came out a day later. wtf

 

When he tried Ninjutsu, nothing happened, The ninjutsu he's so powerful at?

 

so he went with it. I'd rather have the chicken than the ninjutsu that does nothing

 

Since then, he has gone with Ninutsu, but he is not passing school due to being unable to do other jutsu. Because there aren't other requirements at all besides those, nope.

 

His mother calls him useless, ironically, I would too

 

and his father gives him oddly emotional speeches that make Stone roll his eyes, and ask him why he does them. Because every failure needs speeches in their life

 

Stone swears his father was 'abused' as a child by his Sensei. Kinda was

 

Now, he objects to not being allowed to wear the green spandex he has worn since, well, birth, despite his mother's disapproval. Why oh why would that be?

 

So, Oda shall feel his Green, Spandexy wrath. The spandexy wrath of ninjutsu that does nothing

 

Powers/favored Jutsu: Earth Style. Namely, keeping himself AWAY from people. Mostly defensive/caging techniques, with only one or two offensive jutsus. He also keeps a layer of earth, via jutsu, going around his legs, to strengthen them so he can keep up in fights. It can bend at the knee, and it does not hinder his movement. Oh, and there is this one where he can make rocks randomly explode for some unexplained reason.

Random items: A "Blanky" that is made of green spandex

Other silly things: He hates bunnies, medicine, and birds. He is afraid of potatoes, tomatoes, and Pikachus.

 

Alright, now my app is done.

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Yes, no one makes mistakes, DL. I made that late at night. I was tired. Sue me. Also, this is a comical RP.

 

Moegi and Udon are worth more than SAKURA.

 

The kid was born very weak, and almost unable to walk without crutches. How is that NOT a miracle?

 

I edited where it said Gen/Ninjutsu... I did the wrong one. Again, tired.

 

The log was for comedy.

 

The Chicken did not really swallow him... it was a Genjtsu gone wrong.

 

The Ninjutsu WORKED. Nothing BAD happened.

 

I SAID he's failing, DL. He can't do Gen or Taijutsu.

 

Sakura IS ironically doing that.

 

Rock Lee wwould be just like Gai, as a dad. Duh. So, speeches ahoy!

 

I know he was XD

 

Why do you think? >_>

 

'Twas a joke.

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@Fusion - I HAVE JOINED >:T

 

And my character is KakashixHinata's offspring.

 

Yes, no one makes mistakes, DL. I made that late at night. I was tired. Sue me. Also, this is a comical RP.

 

And my reacting to it was comical. I pointed out the errors in a funny way, thank me

 

Moegi and Udon are worth more than SAKURA.

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH*(@RH(*@RROFLROFLLOLOLOLOLOLLMAOMAOLMAOLBBQ

 

The kid was born very weak, and almost unable to walk without crutches. How is that NOT a miracle?

 

I said the fact he 'was able to grow older' was the odd part. Cause no one's ever done that before.

 

I edited where it said Gen/Ninjutsu... I did the wrong one. Again, tired.

 

The log was for comedy.

 

You think it's funny if people get roundhouse kicked by a log? You're cruel

 

The Chicken did not really swallow him... it was a Genjtsu gone wrong.

 

He was spit out by a genjutsu after A DAy? How much chakra does the dude HAVE?!

 

The Ninjutsu WORKED. Nothing BAD happened.

 

THAT'S the proper way to write it :3

 

I SAID he's failing, DL. He can't do Gen or Taijutsu.

 

Those aren't the only quotas to fill >_>

 

Sakura IS ironically doing that.

 

Rock Lee wwould be just like Gai, as a dad. Duh. So, speeches ahoy!

 

And remember, if you're a failure in the Naruto world, you auto-have to listen to speeches

 

I know he was XD

 

Why do you think? >_>

 

I was bein sarcastic

 

'Twas a joke.

Now Black, Rag wants you on MSN D:

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Touche.

 

XD You're right... but, they probably got useful as they got older.

 

I was saying he got to the Ninja Academy >_> Despite the fact of his physical issues, he survived and made it.

 

C'Mon! It's funny when Sasuke gets it XD

 

Oh, no. He was TRAPPED in it for a day.

 

...

 

OK, written tests too. That's... about it. Besides weapons.

 

The speeches are because his father is ROCK F****** LEE!

 

Touche, again.

 

Oh? Headed there.

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Touche.

 

XD You're right... but, they probably got useful as they got older.

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHLOLOLOLLOLOLXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDOMFG, you're funny/ Yeah, about as more useful as Sakura

 

I was saying he got to the Ninja Academy >_> Despite the fact of his physical issues, he survived and made it.

 

And I'm saying how he's a genious for learning how to grow older

 

C'Mon! It's funny when Sasuke gets it XD

 

But Sasuke's a douche.

 

Oh, no. He was TRAPPED in it for a day.

 

Still implies he can keep up a jutsu for a day. WHICH IS SCARY

 

...

 

OK, written tests too. That's... about it. Besides weapons.

 

The speeches are because his father is ROCK F****** LEE!

 

So calling that saying

 

Touche, again.

 

Oh? Headed there.

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NO ONE is useless like her.

 

Tenten would say hi, but she hasn't been seen in the story since 2009, so sadly she cannot

 

He didn't learn how to ,he just did.

 

NUH-UH, dón't twist your words, you said he somehow managed to grow older.

 

Touche

 

Not really. Some Genjutsus can trap people, and just put them into a mini-coma.

 

You said trapped for a day, not trapped for a bit, then put in a coma for a day. Oh yes, I am good.

 

You like it? O.O

 

Of course, because I'm ROCK F****** LEE!

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She actually can FIGHT though. Without Kishi help.

 

The MAIN object of that sentence was joining the NINJA ACADEMY. You twisted MY words, and took them out of context.

 

Naruto was put into a Genjutsu that trapped him in a Genjutsu in a Coma until he was woken up. Filler, yes, but this is Satire, so go with it.

 

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@Zero - You're not a proper plot. ¬¬

 

She actually can FIGHT though. Without Kishi help.

 

At least ONE of them GETS fight scenes. And it sure isn't Tenten. Plus, Sakura can fight, she just sucks too much to be really useful. Tenten can fight, sorta, but kinda...does not appear. I'd rather have Sakura than a number (AKA, 1010-1800, the number you call when you just want to dissapear from a story)

 

The MAIN object of that sentence was joining the NINJA ACADEMY. You twisted MY words, and took them out of context.

 

I never mentioned the ninja academy. I just mentioned the act of him able to growing older was amazing. You just went on a whole other tangent.

 

Naruto was put into a Genjutsu that trapped him in a Genjutsu in a Coma until he was woken up. Filler, yes, but this is Satire, so go with it.

 

Keyword: Naruto. The guy who has chakra even when he doesn't (64 palms)

 

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Fine, Agree to disagree.

 

No, there was a comma after grow older, and there was a comma BEFORE grow older. Thus, it meant the part about grfowwing older was extraneous, and not the true point of the sentence at all.

 

I said PUT into it. not put SOMEONE into it.

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Fine, Agree to disagree.

 

How about we just agree they're both as useless as the other?

 

No, there was a comma after grow older, and there was a comma BEFORE grow older. Thus, it meant the part about grfowwing older was extraneous, and not the true point of the sentence at all.

 

You still wrote it. In fact, parts between commas stand out the most. So yeah, good luck finding a case where people don't grow older.

 

I said PUT into it. not put SOMEONE into it.

 

Then that Naruto example was pretty fail, considering it contradicts what you just said :3

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Nope.

 

Benjamin Button.

 

Okay, warn me when your character starts reverse aging.

 

Also, in proper grammar, putting things in commas, such as this right here, makes it extraneous.

 

Still part of the sentence

 

... I said Generic Ninja #1 put him into a Trance Genjutsu Coma >_>

 

But the kid put himself in a coma. In fact, not even. He trapped himself in a genjutsu a whole day. So that example fails.

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