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Akatsuki of YCM: Rising Dawn


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well a Gentle fist wound is like a point of acupressure with Chakra, eventually the pressure goes out of the points with time, the thing about the Hyuga is that they fight to get rid of all points in the fight itself to incapacitate them quickly, so eventually the wound can actually heal itself

 

(Acupressure classes FTW)

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His is still written better.

 

And it's more epic. His may just be a fast started, but I'm just sayin, his > yours.

 

And I took Creative writing, I should know.

 

He just needs to MAKE HIS CHAPTERS SHORTER >:T

 

BTW, I could get my chapters out MUCH quicker if I didn't write in "Fly in the Wall" fashion.

 

1. You really don't get what view I'm coming from...

 

2. I've taken Creative Writing too, once in 9th grade, again in 11th. :/

 

Anyways, acupuncture wut?

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