Akatsuki of YCM: Rising Dawn

[El Make]

I'd want to see what I plan on having Tenkai's ultimate move.

 

*imagines in manga form*

 

*penis explodes out of happiness*

 

XD

[DL]

You mean your MANGINA explodes.

 

 

Anyway, seriosuly, KS as a fic would be EPIC.

[El Make]

DL, I thought I'd let you know something about your role in my FF.

 

You're the crazed evil dude.

[DL]

>>

 

<<

 

[monotone]

Wow, I feel I completely feel that role

Yes, there is no doubt I am fitting for such a position

[/monotone]

 

 

WHERE THE HELL IS FUSION? >3<

[El Make]

But DL.... you're strong, crazed, and evil! Plus you are part of the BIGGEST plots in my whole FF! D:<

[Blake]

What do I get to be, Ecchi?

 

*Hopes to not be a villain*

[Fusion X. Denver]

DL's the bad guy?

Watch him be Daven...lol.

I had anatomy homework.

And what REALLY sucks, it's a workbook type thing, and I struggled to fill it all out.

Then I realized the answers were in the back.

-_________________-

But also, I have to go in a bit because my parents are out (sister got soccer)

But yes, Kyuubi Shards would be an epic doujin, El's possibly, I'll have to make that assessment later on.

Mine would probably be better for a reality TV thing, like Heroes or something.

[El Make]

No, Daven is created by me.... DL doesn't come in till later. I'm suprised I even brought Dra-man into this already...

 

And Black-kun, your role is WITHOUT A DOUBT NOT VILLIAN. You are EASILY the most pimped out person in the entire FF. >;D

[DL]

xD

 

Also, yeah man, Kyubi Shards Doujin FTW, or better, Kyubi Shards anime.

 

 

Now I just need to mail it to Masashi.

[El Make]

Speaking of Kyubi Shards.... new chapter DL?

 

>_________>

[Blake]

... Nex has officially pushed my, as Clair put it, "Magic button of raeg".

[Fusion X. Denver]

Link to where it's happening Black?

I would say the same to DL, but I can't talk <.<

[El Make]

Black-kun, I don't know whether to lol.... or RAEG!

 

:/

[DL]

@Black - What is it?

 

@El - I'll....get to working on it >>;;

[El Make]

You see DL, why can me and Fusion pump out a chapter a day with ease, yet you take... a week? :/

[Fusion X. Denver]

Especially when it's way shorter >.>

[El Make]

Inb4minearebetterquality

 

Anyways, yeah... logic no add up. XD

 

I actually churn out my chapters in like 20-30 minutes... and they're always longer than 3 Word Pages. >____>

[DL]

Cause I only work on it in short intervals.

 

I can probably get a chapter a day if I worked on it often. >>;;

 

 

remember back in the good ol'days, where I used to get like 6 in 2 days?

 

 

Also, Fusion's are better. Tho yours are good too.

[El Make]

DL... that was only when YCM was down... and I could have done 20 if I wanted to in that time period.... >.>

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And WHY are they better?

[DL]

Fusion's, altho get a lot of hate, have a lot of character to them.

 

It's a story that makes me want to keep readin.

 

Yours is the kind that is really mainstream, doesn't explore the character's feelings that much, and yet is still rpetty entertaining..

 

But I won't ever ask this of you, maybe.

 

 

Fusion, go make a new chaptah >:T

[DL]

Fusion's, altho get a lot of hate, have a lot of character to them.

 

It's a story that makes me want to keep readin.

 

Yours is the kind that is really mainstream, doesn't explore the character's feelings that much, and yet is still rpetty entertaining..

 

But I won't ever ask this of you, maybe.

 

 

Fusion, go make a new chaptah >:T

[El Make]

That's because

 

1. Fusion's is about high school

 

2. I haven't gotten to where my characters emotions are complex

 

>____>

[DL]

Fusion's only had 4 more chapters than yours.

 

And by chapter 3, I already felt emotion.

 

All I felt from yours was good mainstream entertainment >>;;

[El Make]

His is HIGH SCHOOL.

 

His is LIFE.

 

There's supposed to be that kind of emotion by the early chapters!

 

Action FFs are supposed to wait to form complex themes.

[DL]

His is still written better.

 

And it's more epic. His may just be a fast started, but I'm just sayin, his > yours.

 

And I took Creative writing, I should know.

 

He just needs to MAKE HIS CHAPTERS SHORTER >:T

 

BTW, I could get my chapters out MUCH quicker if I didn't write in "Fly in the Wall" fashion.