Akatsuki of YCM: Rising Dawn

[Fusion X. Denver]

*shrugs*

I'll read it after Kenichi, sure.

WAIT A SECOND.

I JUST FINISHED SUMMER READING!

...

Heh.

Heh heh.

Ha ha.

AHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!

BAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

0>0

I just realized I've never bothered to remove Black's lanza in my gut...I wonder when the blood lo-

*faints*

EDIT: Interesting poem BT. What unexpected depth :3

[Blake]

DL, I made the inb4 post.

I can't believe Black and I didn't realize it until now >.>

Since Cortez has been offline, he don't count.

Alright, I've almost caught up with my clubs, then I'll make my HB post then write rest of chapter 6.

Also, apparently Naruto won't be out until 3 in the morning ;____;

 

... I did not forget, I just could care less, TBH =/

[Fusion X. Denver]

Well, since you're the judge, it's your responsibility to keep it going :/

So mind doing your duty and bumping the contest saying El needs to finish it -___-

[BT]

EDIT: Interesting poem BT. What unexpected depth :3

 

Thnx... in religion class, we had to make something like a prayer of the holy trinity

 

like God the father son and holy spirit.... Oh yeah... I skipped a like *edits*

[Blake]

... May I post my poems, that DL was reviewing? They are here on YCM only, sadly, and there are only 2.

 

@Fuse: You bump it >_> Oh, and... KUBO DID IT PERFECTLY! D

EDIT

[spoiler=Poems~]

 

Oh, Humanity

Oh Humanity, what is your aim?

To yourself, you bring all sorts of shame.

Blame all you want, it does no good,

But maybe you are just misunderstood.

A being on danger and conflict,

To emotion, you are such an addict.

Life and Death; Love and Hate;

These are the things we cannot create.

Our happiness and misery abound,

But is that all that is around?

Are we demon with fork, or angel with horn?

Or maybe we are something to adorn?

Fallen from High, seduced down to Earth.

Cursed we are, from the moment of birth.

Life and Liberty are what we were given,

But are they kept 'til the moment we're quiverin'?

This thing called man, it needs to resound,

For such potential is to be found.

Raise your voice, shout it out.

Become what you are, without a doubt.

Ruthless and angry, they fight a fight,

Man will live to see another night.

But is he doing what he should?

Is it really all he could?

Did he leave agood footprint?

Or maybe he left a horrid dent.

Through it all, he rises and falls,

Yet mankind has many dolls.

Useless and placid, they have no view.

Are you one of their crew?

 

Tainted Black

A Sinner am I, fallen from high.

An Angel am I, who lost his wings.

A Liar am I, seeking the truth.

A Victim am I, of my own greed.

An Addict am I, of this sin seemingly sweet.

A Talker am I, of the things I do.

An Idiot am I, for I hurt those near me.

An Oddity am I, for I abhor myself

A New Being am I, stains to be taken away

 

 

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

well.... rending is taking out the BG (even if white) and shadows and saving as .PNG

 

I basically want a transparent BG.... only can be done on gimp or ps...

 

I shall see what I can do.

[Fusion X. Denver]

Ninjew, did you see the comment on your wall?

My HB post is set up, I just need the pictures of PM with the low level guard demons and the gate of Hell for descriptive purposes (I hate my Messenger)

[Mr.WHAM]

Whats going one everyone...I have a partial point in my fic...i was writing...not that you all care ^^

[Fusion X. Denver]

I was writing too and just added chapter 6 to DEF :P

Wham, did you check that out yet?

And uh, I don't remember if it was you or Shadow who was the last to post in HB, but in case it's you, mind retaliating?

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Ninjew, did you see the comment on your wall?

My HB post is set up, I just need the pictures of PM with the low level guard demons and the gate of Hell for descriptive purposes (I hate my Messenger)

 

Yes after two hours of attempting to reestablish my internet connection which is now flowling nicely.

 

Pictures sent in new PM, go check it.

 

And going to read your chapter 6.

[Mr.WHAM]

Hey Fu....never mind. Um...I am still waiting fir JZ kuns release on my boy Cruchinex

 

Also...this weeks bleach chapter left me feeling meh...and the fcat that Ichigo didn't kill Aizen and he released the getsugas...which btw is sad...like he shouldabeen dead. it was about 4 pages of black in there

 

And I rsponded last woth the fight. Anyone can interrupt the fight if they want to ya know im just saying

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Yo BT.

 

 

 

 

Yes the little specs are pixels that are probably the hardest to get rid of.

[Mr.WHAM]

What is that for?

[Ultimate Assassin Ninjew]

Ask him, I just removed the background and such from it.

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

you need me to do what Wham? I haven't seen cru in months.....

[Dranzer]

[spoiler=New Naruto]Kishi is great at fight scenes,but sucks in making flashbacks.

And was it me or did that fan at the cover look like Naruto was jaking off.

Lolwtf with madara's new mask.

 

 

[spoiler=New Bleach]You've got to be shiting me.

The whole Ichigo powerup was useless and Aizen got beaten by Urahara.WTF.

I mean Ichigo lost his powers for nothing.Talk about DeusXMachina

Wors ending ever.

 

[Fusion X. Denver]

I'm glad someone agrees with me about Bleach.

Naruto was meh. But now we know Konan is dead.

AND KISHI DIDN'T HAVE HER LOSE THE ROBE. WHAT A BUTTMUNCH >:r

And Naruto is going on hiatus for one week...damn it Kishimoto.

And Madara's mask...I'm guessing he implanted the Rinnegan now, I'm betting he put in just one eye.

Unless he thought he should get rid of his sharingan >___>

At least One Piece is coming back next week..

[Blake]

[spoiler=New Bleach]You've got to be shiting me.

The whole Ichigo powerup was useless and Aizen got beaten by Urahara.WTF.

I mean Ichigo lost his powers for nothing.Talk about DeusXMachina

Wors ending ever.

 

 

... WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU??!

 

If Ichigo had not attacked Aizen, Aizen would not have been weak enough for Kisuke to finish off.

Also, Ichigo NEEDS to lose his powers. Did you really want the Deus Ex Machina king to get the victory? I didn't, so, this is perfect.

Urahara spurred Aizen to completely lose whatever sanity and calmness he had, and made Aizen have a hysterical breakdown aas he died, rather, was sealed.

 

Bleach... was perfect this and last week

[Fusion X. Denver]

You're the only one who seems to think so >.>

Ohey, when you publishing the first chapter of your fanfic Black?

[Blake]

Tell that to DL, Roxas, the other people in the Official Bleach thread, etc.

 

YOU and DRANZER are the odd guys out.

 

The only complaints I've heard are about not seeing Aizen's Bankai, and I don't think he truly had one.

 

Anyways, I dunno when.

[Fusion X. Denver]

...

Wait.

You're right! We never did see his Bankai!

I hate Kubo.

[Blake]

I'm going to put it in Cherry's words.... "It's like Kubo is apologizing =O"

 

He is. Kubo ROCKS right now.

[Fusion X. Denver]

It's occurred to me this is probably because all members here hate Ichigo or something.

He's my favorite character and he just lost all his powers, had a crappy final battle, and had the limelight stolen from him by Kisuke.

Of course I hate the chapter >___>

And also for poorly handling the storytelling, but that's just me.

[BT]

i think madara has 3 eyes now... btw his mask ressembles the jubi's eyes

[DL]

@Fusion -

 

First, Ichigo SUCKS.

 

Second, DID YOU SERIOUSLY FUCKIN HAVE DMG CALL ME LINKY? DIE!!!!

 

SUPER ULTRA HENTAI EROERO CANNON!!!!!!! *shoots Fusion with perv-energy cannon*

 

Only girls can call me that.

 

Namely Kari.

 

@Black - I haven't read the chapte yet, but apparently it's good?

 

I'd be happy with how things turned out, from what I heard.