My Knight Monsters

[Danny92]

I think i have made all the OCG fixes. So please feel free to rate again.

I have also added 4 more cards to the set. Please tell me what you think. and i would be more than happy for anyone to give me ideas on how to improve the cards, or even cards to add. Thanks.

 

 

Syncrho monsters

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Effect Monsters

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tuner Monsters

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE NEW CARDS

 

 

Spell Cards

 

 

 

 

Trap Cards

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please Rate them. This is my first time at this.

[LiAM]

Nice images.

 

Good use of effects, some are quite unique.

 

Very dedicated to your cards =]

 

Lunar Knight is my fav atm.

 

Some OCG errors, but I can give you some help with that.

 

7.3/10

 

Some OCG fixes you might find useful:

normal summon = Normal Summon

special summon = Special Summon

spell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Card

monster effect card = monster Effect card

graveyard = Graveyard

deck = Deck

hand = hand

Field = field

atk/ def = ATK/ DEF

ATK points = ATK

remove ___ from play = remove from play ___

a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monster

opponents side of the field = opponent controls

your side of the field = you control

tribute = Tribute

level stars = Level

every = each

life points = Life Points

light/ dark = LIGHT/ DARK

warrior type = Warrior-Type

choose = select

???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEF

as a result of battle = by battle

one/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...

attack mode = Attack Position

his/ her = they/ their

may = can

face up = face-up

attribute = Attribute

type = Type

ritual = Ritual

monster card zone = Monster Card Zone

 

Hope this helps somehow, PM me if you need anything else.

[Danny92]

Thanks for the feedback. it is much appreciated. :)

 

Thank you for the OCG fixes and I will try to correct them soon and repost them. :)

[Danny92]

Nice images.

 

Good use of effects, some are quite unique.

 

Very dedicated to your cards =]

 

Lunar Knight is my fav atm.

 

Some OCG errors, but I can give you some help with that.

 

7.3/10

 

Some OCG fixes you might find useful:

normal summon = Normal Summon

special summon = Special Summon

spell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Card

monster effect card = monster Effect card

graveyard = Graveyard

deck = Deck

hand = hand

Field = field

atk/ def = ATK/ DEF

ATK points = ATK

remove ___ from play = remove from play ___

a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monster

opponents side of the field = opponent controls

your side of the field = you control

tribute = Tribute

level stars = Level

every = each

life points = Life Points

light/ dark = LIGHT/ DARK

warrior type = Warrior-Type

choose = select

???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEF

as a result of battle = by battle

one/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...

attack mode = Attack Position

his/ her = they/ their

may = can

face up = face-up

attribute = Attribute

type = Type

ritual = Ritual

monster card zone = Monster Card Zone

 

Hope this helps somehow, PM me if you need anything else.

 

 

 

First i must thank you for taking the time to rate the cards.

Secondly i have taken your advice and fixed the OCG terms.

I have also added 4 more cards and would be grateful if you would rate them again.

Thank you.

[Danny92]

Bump. please rate

[LiAM]

Still looking good.

 

New ones up to standard.

 

Refer to the guide wherever possible, I know it's long, but mastering it will get you favoured ;)

 

Keep it up.

[Smesh]

Successful newb is successful. you've got some really good cards for a new guy and very minor OCG. keep up the good work. the only problem which isnt really a BIG problem, is the images. use DeviantArt.

[Danny92]

Thanks for the feedback I will try to remember to use the correct OCG terms.

And thanks for the hint iSmesh!. i will use devianart next time

[duelistxynam]

Some of your synchro monsters should be Fusion monsters because the basics of synchro summoning is that of a pseudo-fusion summon, but instead of "DNA" it uses levels. Either remove the non-tuner specifity from both of those cards or make them fusion monsters.

[CMRenji]

Seems pretty okay to me. Pretty balanced, OCG is alright, pics are decent. 8.8/10

[Danny92]

thank you for the feedback once again.

To duelistxynam I was thinking about making those cards fusion monsters like the gladiator beasts. but I already have some ideas for some other cards and i would have to think of a whole new way to duel with them. as this deck is meant for synchro summoning fast.

 

And after all this is yugioh card creator why not try something different :P

 

but i might rethink the deck im just not sure yet

[Danny92]

bump

[ToXiC{REMIX}]

The Pictures are good like the others said you can improve on your OCG but there still good cards

 

 

8.68/10

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Really interesting set but some of them are overpowered.

The idea is nice.

But some of the pics arent good.

 

7.5/10

[Danny92]

Thanks for the feedback again.

 

Nightbane: This was my first time so im still getting used to the ocg but I hope to post a new set soon and hopefully the OCG will be abit better

 

MR.WoofWoof: would you mind specifing which ones you think are over powered?

[Danny92]

BUMP

[Danny92]

bump

[ss2phil]

Hey nice cards man! Were did you get the pics?

[Danny92]

thanks for the feedback. i am glad you like them. and i just found them on google by searching for knights.

[Danny92]

please rate

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

I guess I should add my opinion into this

 

Pic: 8/10 All the pics fit, I just see most of them way too much (not a big deal)

 

Template: 8/10 Normal Template

 

OCG: 9.5/10 Very well done, I'm impressed

 

Originality/Creativity: 7/10 The Knight archetype has been done before, but I give you props for redefining it with creative effects

 

Playability: 8/10 Could see some play, especially if you continue to expand on what you already have

 

Overall: 40.5/50 Sweet B) I like them, keep up the good work!

[Danny92]

thanks for rating them so good. :D

 

Pic: when i posted the cards it was my first time on the site so i didnt know which pics had been overused but thanks for rating them high.

 

Template: thanks but i dont understand there is only the one template :s

 

OCG: thankyou.

 

Originality: thankyou. and as mentioned above my first time on the site. But I have always had a fascination with knights and medievil times :P lol so i wanted to make a warrior archtype. as there isnt many good warrior archtypes if any. :s

 

Playability: Thanks. I created the cards to be the type of deck i would run. and to be used in real duels and become one of the top tier decks.

 

Overall: wow Thanks.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

thanks for rating them so good. :D

 

Pic: when i posted the cards it was my first time on the site so i didnt know which pics had been overused but thanks for rating them high.

 

Template: thanks but i dont understand there is only the one template :s

 

OCG: thankyou.

 

Originality: thankyou. and as mentioned above my first time on the site. But I have always had a fascination with knights and medievil times :P lol so i wanted to make a warrior archtype. as there isnt many good warrior archtypes if any. :s

 

Playability: Thanks. I created the cards to be the type of deck i would run. and to be used in real duels and become one of the top tier decks.

 

Overall: wow Thanks.

 

Their are a few various templates (check out JayJay cards, Max Darkness cards, etc.) that you can buy using points or borrow, but you have to ask, they have to approve and you should credit it as theirs. If you check out the shops you can buy various affects for your cards, or get your OCG looked at. Check it out sometime.

[sirAragorn]

I used pic for 1st one before you, White Knight is from Video Game White Knights, Seen many pics before.

[Danny92]

SirBobbert: I realized that a few where used before and i have seen the Ancient knight card on some cards before. but as stated above it was my first time on the site. And i know the picture is from a video game. But i just like the picture :P lol