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Role Patroling, with Tainted Black {I'm gonna kill this Sage}


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Simple. It's because this trhead was made after the change in servers. <_< For some reason or another, the conversion process compeltely effed over any chance in being able to change the title of any thread that was in existence before the change in servers. :angry:

 

EDIT: Also, you say I don't review because I don't say how to improve? That's not reviewing, that's critiquing. Reviewing is examining something, and saying good, bad, or neutral, in detail.

And that is why you are teh Nostagia Critic of YCM.

Note: He does reviews, not critiques.

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I was reading the review you gave sage...and i do agree on many points....

 

However as for the powers, I think its up to the ptience of the person & the skill of the RPer to determine whether you can godmod....b/ some of those powers would prove interesting to fight against...

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I was reading the review you gave sage...and i do agree on many points....

 

However as for the powers, I think its up to the ptience of the person & the skill of the RPer to determine whether you can godmod....b/ some of those powers would prove interesting to fight against...

So... the thing with powers is that it's fun to fight an idiot with them but godmod if they canuse them right?

 

I'm confused, I could MERGE with the very air and choke everyone, and even dodging it somehow would be godmod since that's excatly what air can do to you.

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Funnily enough, I considered doing a roleplay review thing like this. I even hammered out a concept for it, wherein Individual components of an RP would be scrutinized by various characters, with the overall theme of bad RPs being compared to fine wine and the critics being connoisseurs of the finest in bad roleplaying. I thought it was neat, but ultimately decided not to jump on the reviewing bandwagon.

 

In anycase, your reviews are... adequate. I mean, they're not bad, and you give some decent advice, but it's just... eh. Sorry, nothing against you personally, and maybe it's just the growing pains of a newborn series, but it didn't seem that entertaining or informative to me.

 

But keep going, and I'll keep an eye out for how you improve as it goes on.

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Funnily enough, I considered doing a roleplay review thing like this. I even hammered out a concept for it, wherein Individual components of an RP would be scrutinized by various characters, with the overall theme of bad RPs being compared to fine wine and the critics being connoisseurs of the finest in bad roleplaying. I thought it was neat, but ultimately decided not to jump on the reviewing bandwagon.

 

In anycase, your reviews are... adequate. I mean, they're not bad, and you give some decent advice, but it's just... eh. Sorry, nothing against you personally, and maybe it's just the growing pains of a newborn series, but it didn't seem that entertaining or informative to me.

 

But keep going, and I'll keep an eye out for how you improve as it goes on.

 

I know I'm just starting, and I don't expect to be Crab from the start, at all. I'm just doing what I feel I should for the section.

 

Thanks for your opions, and I will try to work on the aspects you mentioned briefly ^-^

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Actually, you insulted ME so that is breaking the counter clause. Also, you posted a chapter of YOUR Fic in my thread. Spamming. You are flaming and you just won't admit it. You are pursuing me. Guess what? I wrote an improvements sequel to that first review. Did you see it? No. So get out.

 

Hang on a second.....where was this when Crab Helmet was doing her reviews? No one mentioned anything like this? Why now? She did the exact same thing except worse?

 

Anyway on topic: After i read the first few on the 1st thread page I thought they were alright, but when I saw the improvements I thought that it was really well done, seriously take one of those reviews and pin it in the OOC, because I know i struggle sometimes with maintaining an RP's fluency and building prior attraction to it, and i think that review can really help me. The improvements clearly aimed alot more to improve the Rp creator's skills then to simply insult them, which is what is needed. + Rep

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Hang on a second.....where was this when Crab Helmet was doing her reviews? No one mentioned anything like this? Why now? She did the exact same thing except worse?

 

Because the best critic should be the only critic in the world. Everyone has different opinions, so it's good to get criticism from different views just as long as it's constructive criticism.

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