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HOLY CRAP! I never really thought you would actually accept me, to be honest; but here it is!

 

[spoiler=My Application! Again!]Name: Hafuki Kotori

 

Gender: Male

[spoiler=Zanpakuto]Name: Hebidansu (Namely Snake Dance)

 

Release Phrase: Twist

 

 

 

Shikai: As Hafuki calls the release command he hands his sword to his left. Then, slides a finger through the blade as it splits like a zipper. When his finger hits the hilt the two pieces of the blade will glow golden and will start to overlap until reaching their tips. When the glow stops both pieces are now two-edged individual blades. He can summon snakes which will dissolve after biting or being cut. The bite is paralyzing, but is only local and will fade within some minutes. He can call his Shikai ability; Danrio, to separate both the hilt and blades into whips. These are poisonous. The poison consists of an odd neurotoxin. When the whip cuts through flesh, a snake-shaped tatto will appear to come out of the wound. Each time a wound is inflicted after the first, the serpent will creep a bit from where it came towards the back of the victim's head. When it reaches its destination; it bites, and the target dies. This is rendered useless in a way similar to Suzumebachi.

 

 

 

Bankai Name: Komiya no Hebidansu (Namely Forbidden Snake Dance)

 

Bankai Desctiption: As Hifuke calls Bakai he pierces his right hand with the tip of the overlapped blades. The blades unhatch from the hilt and run through his arms as golden streams of light and dissappear into the floor. Seconds later, two enormous golden snakes emerge from the ground below him. These huge serpents can release thousands of the small snakes released in Shikai, and they both have single and combined abilities:

-Kamagi: One of the snakes takes the form of a sealed Hebidansu and can go Shikai. It cannot use Danrio, but uses its poison as if in use. Due to the sword being a Reiatsu copy, it is as heavy as the original, but holds the strength of its current size.

-Sane: One of the snakes opens its mouth and the rest of the body opens with it. This forms a wing which Hifuke uses to fly as a defensive means.

-Haziga: Both snakes bite eachother and explode, supressing any reiatsu in a 200 meters radius for over an hour. After performing this ability the Zanpakuto goes back to sealed form and cannot go Shikai until the effect fades.

 

 

 

 

Zanpakuto Spirit: His Zanpakuto spirit reminds of a Gorgon: Woman chest, snakes as arms and hair, and a snake tail instead of legs. She rarely speaks to his master, and often bites him with her hands. She is of a slightly golden green colour.

[spoiler=Powers and Abilities]Expert Swordsmanship: Hafuki can easily keep up to any lieutenant; his many years of training have given him a superb sword experience. He is more experienced with using his sword in the shape of whips, but is skilled with the sword nonetheless.

 

Flash Step User: Considered the slowest of lieutenants, his flash steps were just enough to achieve the lieutenant position. Surprisingly enough, he has created a variation of it designed to deal repetitive kicks into one same spot, as an alternate way of attack to the usage of his life-draining Zanpakuto.

 

 

 

Spiritual Pressure: He out bests all lieutenants when it comes to Reiatsu. A unique technique of his is to channel his Reiatsu and send it in the shape of a hook into his opponent, cancelling out a portion of his opponent’s Reiatsu. This attack is unfortunately slow, and thus is a risky move. His Reiatsu glows a golden-yellow color and is shaped like a Cobra. He can compress it in one spot to maximize its effect, or to protect himself from others’.

 

 

 

Strength:He can hold up his bare hands in the Maggot’s Nest with the same ease as the 2nd Squad’s third seat. His blade can resist a Captain’s blow, but would not withstand longer combat. He can only keep his strength for small periods of time; as his unsheathed sword constantly drains his Reiatsu involuntarily.

 

 

 

Endurance: Conditioned by his Zanpakuto, his durability varies and fades through the fight faster than it should. His natural capabilities enroll little to no effort, and abilities he uses are designed to waste as little Reiatsu as possible, sometimes even draining it.

 

 

 

Durability: He is not really affected by injuries, unless they are localized in specific spots in his body, which are marked with snake tattoos all over him. Hitting these deals heavy damage to him. His personal mark in battle has reached ten minutes and six seconds.

 

 

 

Hand to Hand: He prefers it to using his Zanpakuto, and has found ways to combine it with Kido and Flash Step. He is often seen walking eccentrically with his hands while hitting the floor. He says it’s ‘to train’. No one really believes that. His Captain often punishes him for doing so.

 

 

 

 

Kido Usage: He specializes in no type of Kido. He has never got his Grade from the Shinigami Academy because of his Kido. Instead, he uses what he call ‘negative level’ Kido to enhance his physical abilities.

Appearance: Hafuki’s hair is a very dark brown colour. He covers his left eye with several locks of his hair. His eyes are light green, his skin is little to white, yet he is constantly smiling. In the back of his head, his hair is messy and spreads to both sides of his neck. He is somehow skinny, but hides some muscle under his Shinigami Uniform. His Shinigami Uniform opens in his chest revealing one of his Snake Tattoos. He wears his Lieutenant badge in his left arm. His sandals are decorated with snakes. He seems to hiss when he sleeps, for some reason. His voice is light and undisturbed, much like Kyoraku’s was.

 

 

 

Personality: He is a light-hearted person, though he tends to be quite stingy in some of his comments. He looks at everyone with kind eyes, and he has a somehow good relationship with all other male Lieutenants. Anyway, he is really shy when it comes to women. He will blush and black out whenever the 3rd Squad Captain even looks at him. Despite all other Lieutenants trying to help him out, he hasn't made it up. He takes on odd training routines, strangely performing embarrassing acts in public. He greatly respects the Commander-Captain Kuchiki for his previous doings. He will always slip an unneeded word and end up disliked.He seems rather careless, often jumping from building to building in the Seireitei blindfolded, Zanpakuto unsheathed, and performing back flips. He has had awful injuries because of accidentally hitting his self-called ‘Snake Spots’. He has a good relationship with the Healing Division, because of often visiting the Nursery.

 

 

 

Bio: Once a neglected child in the Rukongai, he earned his life by acting as a thief for other people, while stealing some to himself. About to be killed by somebody who caught him, a white-clothed figure stopped the man’s hand. As the stranger turned he distinguished tattoos in his forehead, half covered in a white piece of cloth. The red-haired guy smiled at him and gave him an apple from the guy’s post and told him to go to the large door in the great walls. The man jumped in the air and vanished in a dark mesh. Ever since he’s tried to get through those walls, always failing. As he trained and trained he noticed weird markings coming out of his skin. Over the time he grew the Snake Spots, and realized his growing Reiatsu was being manifested in the shape of a blade. As he used it he got tired faster, and decided he would instead focus on Physical Strength. He never stopped training with his Sword though; he just practiced hand combat more often. As he became a grown-up, he became aware of his Zanpakuto’s presence; although couldn't manifest Shikai. That’s when he remembered what the White covered man told him. He enrolled into the Shinigami Academy and took the six-year course. He failed in Kido exams several times, and made it up by passing an Extra Credit Physical Combat Test against his Professor. He first came to the 6th Squad a year after he graduated. He was recruited by the Captain himself. A Renji Abarai who would meet his end fighting a Vasto Lorde many years later. Right after it, the position was filled by a supposed prodigy from the 3rd Squad. It was then when Hafuki became Lieutenant. Following his old Captain, he became very close to achieving his Bankai, and wanted to put it to test against this new Captain. His time is about to come…

 

 

 

RP Sample:

 

Meh, I’m so bored. I guess I’ll take a look at the shops to see if anybody wants my services.

 

He then began walking down the alley. It looked just like any alley in Rukongai, anyway. Crowded people, adults beating children, drunkards sitting on house walls, and one or another cart passing by every so often. An old man then spotted Hafuki. He lured him into his house with a shiny red apple. As he came in a voice echoed from inside the darkness; “Come here, child. I have something to discuss with you…”

 

Who the hell is this guy?

 

Ignoring his thoughts, he blindly made his way through the dark house into a candle-lit room, filled with stuff you’d never expect someone in Rukongai to have. Before he could take his look away from all the gold in the chamber, the rusty voice of the old man was once more heard: “Do you like what you see? You can have all of this, if you only bring me some apples like the one in my hand… how does it sound?” “Well, I…” He didn't have the time to answer. The apple was already in his hand. “Bring me thirteen of these,” the old man said, “and the house is yours. Of course, there is this one thing–” “I don’t mind,” Hafuki replied, not taking his eyes away from the gold, “what you say, man.”

 

This is one hell of a deal. Gold for apples! It’s like a dream!

 

He never noticed the old man chuckling when he left. He got to the apple shop. He got the thirteen apples the old man asked. When he was preparing to make the run for it, he was caught by the arm; “Not planning to run away, are you kiddo?” “I…well…” “I thought so. Well, you can have the apples, but won’t need the head!” He was not nearly as fast as to react. He hadn't noticed the large knife in the shopkeeper’s hand either. Hafuki had been too busy thinking about gold. As the knife was coming down to him, he closed his eyes. Nothing happened.

 

Am I dead?

 

“Raise your head, kid.” The voice said. Hafuki did as it command. As he opened his eyes, he saw a white-clothed figure had stopped the guy’s hand about to kill him. He then spoke once more, this time to the shopkeeper. “Did he ever run?!” “…No…” “Did he ever steal anything from you!?” “…Not really…” “Then why the hell did you threaten him, eh?! Is it fun to abuse of a little child?! Begone!” The knifed man tried to stab the figure, only to be stopped by his other hand. “Don’t make me repeat myself. Begone. Now.” The shopkeeper stumbled over and ran away.

 

 

“Did he hurt you, son?” He turned. Hafuki distinguished black tattoos on his forehead, covered in a white cloth. “…Are you from Seireitei?” “Actually, heh heh… I’m from here too.”

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Blind monkey, it is fine for you to be the unconscious fourth lieutenant in my eyes; since I was a character I introd. She was meant to be a woman, but we can forget that and make her a man. If your gonna be my lieutenant your gonna have to be at least adequately skilled in healing kido as well so you may want to edit your app a bit now before andx gets it.

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@Black: When did we get an open Shinigami spot?

 

@BlindMonkey: App review time!

[spoiler=My Application! Again!]Name: Hafuki Kotori

 

Gender: Male

[spoiler=Zanpakuto]Name: Hebidansu (Namely Snake Dance)

 

Release Phrase: Twist

 

 

 

Shikai: As Hafuki calls the release command he hands his sword to his left. Then, slides a finger through the blade as it splits like a zipper. When his finger hits the hilt the two pieces of the blade will glow golden and will start to overlap until reaching their tips. When the glow stops both pieces are now two-edged individual blades. He can summon snakes which will dissolve after biting or being cut. The bite is paralyzing, but is only local and will fade within some minutes. He can call his Shikai ability; Danrio, to separate both the hilt and blades into whips. These are poisonous. The poison consists of an odd neurotoxin. When the whip cuts through flesh, a snake-shaped tatto will appear to come out of the wound. Each time a wound is inflicted after the first, the serpent will creep a bit from where it came towards the back of the victim's head. When it reaches its destination; it bites, and the target dies. This is rendered useless in a way similar to Suzumebachi.

 

 

 

Bankai Name: Komiya no Hebidansu (Namely Forbidden Snake Dance)

 

Bankai Desctiption: As Hifuke calls Bakai he pierces his right hand with the tip of the overlapped blades. The blades unhatch from the hilt and run through his arms as golden streams of light and dissappear into the floor. Seconds later, two enormous golden snakes emerge from the ground below him. These huge serpents can release thousands of the small snakes released in Shikai, and they both have single and combined abilities:

-Kamagi: One of the snakes takes the form of a sealed Hebidansu and can go Shikai. It cannot use Danrio, but uses its poison as if in use. Due to the sword being a Reiatsu copy, it is as heavy as the original, but holds the strength of its current size.

-Sane: One of the snakes opens its mouth and the rest of the body opens with it. This forms a wing which Hifuke uses to fly as a defensive means.

-Haziga: Both snakes bite eachother and explode, supressing any reiatsu in a 200 meters radius for over an hour. After performing this ability the Zanpakuto goes back to sealed form and cannot go Shikai until the effect fades.

 

 

 

 

Zanpakuto Spirit: His Zanpakuto spirit reminds of a Gorgon: Woman chest, snakes as arms and hair, and a snake tail instead of legs. She rarely speaks to his master, and often bites him with her hands. She is of a slightly golden green colour.

[spoiler=Powers and Abilities]Expert Swordsmanship: Hafuki can easily keep up to any lieutenant; his many years of training have given him a superb sword experience. He is more experienced with using his sword in the shape of whips, but is skilled with the sword nonetheless.

 

Flash Step User: Considered the slowest of lieutenants, his flash steps were just enough to achieve the lieutenant position. Surprisingly enough, he has created a variation of it designed to deal repetitive kicks into one same spot, as an alternate way of attack to the usage of his life-draining Zanpakuto.

 

 

 

Spiritual Pressure: He out bests all lieutenants when it comes to Reiatsu. A unique technique of his is to channel his Reiatsu and send it in the shape of a hook into his opponent, cancelling out a portion of his opponent’s Reiatsu. This attack is unfortunately slow, and thus is a risky move. His Reiatsu glows a golden-yellow color and is shaped like a Cobra. He can compress it in one spot to maximize its effect, or to protect himself from others’.

 

 

 

Strength:He can hold up his bare hands in the Maggot’s Nest with the same ease as the 2nd Squad’s third seat. His blade can resist a Captain’s blow, but would not withstand longer combat. He can only keep his strength for small periods of time; as his unsheathed sword constantly drains his Reiatsu involuntarily.

 

 

 

Endurance: Conditioned by his Zanpakuto, his durability varies and fades through the fight faster than it should. His natural capabilities enroll little to no effort, and abilities he uses are designed to waste as little Reiatsu as possible, sometimes even draining it.

 

 

 

Durability: He is not really affected by injuries, unless they are localized in specific spots in his body, which are marked with snake tattoos all over him. Hitting these deals heavy damage to him. His personal mark in battle has reached ten minutes and six seconds.

 

 

 

Hand to Hand: He prefers it to using his Zanpakuto, and has found ways to combine it with Kido and Flash Step. He is often seen walking eccentrically with his hands while hitting the floor. He says it’s ‘to train’. No one really believes that. His Captain often punishes him for doing so.

 

 

 

 

Kido Usage: He specializes in no type of Kido. He has never got his Grade from the Shinigami Academy because of his Kido. Instead, he uses what he call ‘negative level’ Kido to enhance his physical abilities.

Appearance: Hafuki’s hair is a very dark brown colour. He covers his left eye with several locks of his hair. His eyes are light green, his skin is little to white, yet he is constantly smiling. In the back of his head, his hair is messy and spreads to both sides of his neck. He is somehow skinny, but hides some muscle under his Shinigami Uniform. His Shinigami Uniform opens in his chest revealing one of his Snake Tattoos. He wears his Lieutenant badge in his left arm. His sandals are decorated with snakes. He seems to hiss when he sleeps, for some reason. His voice is light and undisturbed, much like Kyoraku’s was.

 

 

 

Personality: He is a light-hearted person, though he tends to be quite stingy in some of his comments. He looks at everyone with kind eyes, and he has a somehow good relationship with all other male Lieutenants. Anyway, he is really shy when it comes to women. He will blush and black out whenever the 3rd Squad Captain even looks at him. Despite all other Lieutenants trying to help him out, he hasn't made it up. He takes on odd training routines, strangely performing embarrassing acts in public. He greatly respects the Commander-Captain Kuchiki for his previous doings. He will always slip an unneeded word and end up disliked.He seems rather careless, often jumping from building to building in the Seireitei blindfolded, Zanpakuto unsheathed, and performing back flips. He has had awful injuries because of accidentally hitting his self-called ‘Snake Spots’. He has a good relationship with the Healing Division, because of often visiting the Nursery.

 

 

 

Bio: Once a neglected child in the Rukongai, he earned his life by acting as a thief for other people, while stealing some to himself. About to be killed by somebody who caught him, a white-clothed figure stopped the man’s hand. As the stranger turned he distinguished tattoos in his forehead, half covered in a white piece of cloth. The red-haired guy smiled at him and gave him an apple from the guy’s post and told him to go to the large door in the great walls. The man jumped in the air and vanished in a dark mesh. Ever since he’s tried to get through those walls, always failing. As he trained and trained he noticed weird markings coming out of his skin. Over the time he grew the Snake Spots, and realized his growing Reiatsu was being manifested in the shape of a blade. As he used it he got tired faster, and decided he would instead focus on Physical Strength. He never stopped training with his Sword though; he just practiced hand combat more often. As he became a grown-up, he became aware of his Zanpakuto’s presence; although couldn't manifest Shikai. That’s when he remembered what the White covered man told him. He enrolled into the Shinigami Academy and took the six-year course. He failed in Kido exams several times, and made it up by passing an Extra Credit Physical Combat Test against his Professor. He first came to the 6th Squad a year after he graduated. He was recruited by the Captain himself. A Renji Abarai who would meet his end fighting a Vasto Lorde many years later. Right after it, the position was filled by a supposed prodigy from the 3rd Squad. It was then when Hafuki became Lieutenant. Following his old Captain, he became very close to achieving his Bankai, and wanted to put it to test against this new Captain. His time is about to come…

 

 

 

RP Sample:

 

Meh, I’m so bored. I guess I’ll take a look at the shops to see if anybody wants my services.

 

He then began walking down the alley. It looked just like any alley in Rukongai, anyway. Crowded people, adults beating children, drunkards sitting on house walls, and one or another cart passing by every so often. An old man then spotted Hafuki. He lured him into his house with a shiny red apple. As he came in a voice echoed from inside the darkness; “Come here, child. I have something to discuss with you…”

 

Who the hell is this guy?

 

Ignoring his thoughts, he blindly made his way through the dark house into a candle-lit room, filled with stuff you’d never expect someone in Rukongai to have. Before he could take his look away from all the gold in the chamber, the rusty voice of the old man was once more heard: “Do you like what you see? You can have all of this, if you only bring me some apples like the one in my hand… how does it sound?” “Well, I…” He didn't have the time to answer. The apple was already in his hand. “Bring me thirteen of these,” the old man said, “and the house is yours. Of course, there is this one thing–” “I don’t mind,” Hafuki replied, not taking his eyes away from the gold, “what you say, man.”

 

This is one hell of a deal. Gold for apples! It’s like a dream!

 

He never noticed the old man chuckling when he left. He got to the apple shop. He got the thirteen apples the old man asked. When he was preparing to make the run for it, he was caught by the arm; “Not planning to run away, are you kiddo?” “I…well…” “I thought so. Well, you can have the apples, but won’t need the head!” He was not nearly as fast as to react. He hadn't noticed the large knife in the shopkeeper’s hand either. Hafuki had been too busy thinking about gold. As the knife was coming down to him, he closed his eyes. Nothing happened.

 

Am I dead?

 

“Raise your head, kid.” The voice said. Hafuki did as it command. As he opened his eyes, he saw a white-clothed figure had stopped the guy’s hand about to kill him. He then spoke once more, this time to the shopkeeper. “Did he ever run?!” “…No…” “Did he ever steal anything from you!?” “…Not really…” “Then why the hell did you threaten him, eh?! Is it fun to abuse of a little child?! Begone!” The knifed man tried to stab the figure, only to be stopped by his other hand. “Don’t make me repeat myself. Begone. Now.” The shopkeeper stumbled over and ran away.

 

 

“Did he hurt you, son?” He turned. Hafuki distinguished black tattoos on his forehead, covered in a white cloth. “…Are you from Seireitei?” “Actually, heh heh… I’m from here too.”

 

Well honestly I can't find anything wrong with it. Perhaps the bankai seems like it could be a little overpowered but since you've wanted to be in this so badly I doubt you'd do something as foolish as god-mod and get kicked out.

 

Your final call Black, but I have no objections to the newest would-be shinigami.

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