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Bleach: Re- History and Birth OOC [NOT Accepting/Not Started] {PG-16}

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What! His personality is pretty much the exact opposite, his Bio has pretty much nothing to do with him. All thats similar to hisagi is that his Zanpaktou is two long weapons(Mine spear, his scythe) attached by something, and Shuhei Hisagi's is chains, mine is a cord. I asked you before, what is it about mine and Shuhei's that is familiar?

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What! His personality is pretty much the exact opposite, his Bio has pretty much nothing to do with him. All thats similar to hisagi is that his Zanpaktou is two long weapons(Mine spear, his scythe) attached by something, and Shuhei Hisagi's is chains, mine is a cord. I asked you before, what is it about mine and Shuhei's that is familiar?

I'll answer as simply as I can. True the personality is not too close to Shuhei's but the entire app gives off the feeling that had Black not said anything against using cannon characters, you would be using Shuhei right now. It feels like you had already made the entire app for Shuhei and then when you were told you couldn't use him, you changed some things around. And those feelings are making us unsure on whether or not to accept your app.

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I believe the main problem here is finding a meeting point on the issue. I'm sure you don't want to completely redo the app, most people wouldn't. But as it stands we feel it's too much like Shuhei to be accepted. I think the main thing that needs some changing would be the shikai form of his sword. Though to show you why I suppose I'll have to show how similar yours is to Shuhei's.

 

Shukei's

-Two scythes

-Connected by long chain

-Controls wind to a degree, or at the least makes use of it to move the weapon around

 

Kazuki's

-Two spears

-Connected by long cord

-Controls wind to a degree, making use of it for small attacks.

 

There's really only the slightest of differences of them.

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2 things.

1) Kazeshini Never controlled wind. He was simply two scythes which Shuhei threw, one at a time. At no point does he use wind.

2) So your not accepting me because I have a Zanpakuto that is similar to a different character's, that character having nothing to do with this Roleplay. That seems pretty unfair.

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Let's se...

 

*Points at rules on first post*

 

IV. Your app can be rejected at any time.

 

Also, denied for having a similar weapon? *Le gasp* Who has ever done that before?! We denied a guy for making a Kuchiki who did not fit into this story's Byakuya. Your point?

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Let's se...

 

*Points at rules on first post*

 

IV. Your app can be rejected at any time.

 

Also, denied for having a similar weapon? *Le gasp* Who has ever done that before?! We denied a guy for making a Kuchiki who did not fit into this story's Byakuya. Your point?

 

First, I realise that. I'm just stating that you've wasted my time just because I have a weapon similar to a different character's weapon, and that character isn't even in this RP, meaning that it wont interfere with the story and/or other characters at all.

Second, The Kuchiki thing is perfectly reasonable, as it effects the story and/or other characters.

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Why Bio Ninjew? And it doesn't matter Any more. I'm not wasting anymore time for idiots like these.

 

Just thought other people might want to see my app.

 

Name: Kazuki Hisagi

Gender: Male

[spoiler=Zanpaktou]

Name: KageHari (Literally: Shadow needle)

Release Phrase: Impale

Shikai description: Kagehari's Shikai form is shaped as two Spears attached by a thin, but near unbreakable, cord that can stretch for an extremely long distance(A little bit like Zangetsu's bandage-like cloth). Each spear having a small blade on either side at the base of the spear head. Also Kagehari can manipulate wind slightly when in Shikai, allowing Kazuki to create miniature tornadoes and shockwaves similar to Getsuga Tensho, just not as deadly.

Bankai Name: Rensa KageHari

Bankai Description: Kazuki's kimono changes into a suit similar to Ichigo bankai, without the long cloak, and is dark brown in colour, with black stripes. He also has chains hanging from many parts of his body, including the shoulders, waist, ankles and wrists. He also retains his spears, but has four and each one can move without Kazuki having to touch them. In his Bankai, Kazuki can manipulate wind to an incredible stage, and although he isn't the fastest shinigami normally, one of them but not the fastest, he is easily the fastest in this form. He can also move the chains attached to him telekinetically, and anyone that touches them is paralyzed for a few minutes, the exact amount of time they are paralyzed depends on the force of the impact of the chains, and the amount of time the chains spent touching the opponent.

Description of Zanpakuto Spirit: Kagehari is a tall humanoid figure with blood red skin and a long, bright white scar down his left arm. He wears long, dark brown robes and a long black cloak and has slanted eyes and slightly pointed ears. He has a bloodlust that makes Kazuki dislike him, but is very wise and powerful.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Powers & Abilities]

 

Swordsmanship: Kazuki is an exceptional Swordsman, sometimes reffered to the best in the soul society, but he knows this isnt true, but is aware he is very good, and believes this to be because of his preference to fight with his blade rather than his shikai.

Flash Step: Kazuki is an incredibly fast Shinigami, and is capable of unimaginable speeds in Bankai. However, without his shikai or bankai, he isn't as fast. He is one of the fastest Shinigami, but the second squad captain and Byakuya are faster and can shunpo longer distances.

Reiatsu: Kazuki has a surprisingly large amount of Reiatsu, one of the largest in the soul society, but hides it very well and has never fully used it, leading most enemies to believe he has low Reiatsu. It usually appears as a murky green or Brown colour, and is a Wind element like his Zanpaktou. He also has an unusual ability to manipulate the wind slightly using his Reiatsu.

Strength: Kazuki isn't the strongest Captain, but isn't the weakest. However, this doesn't make him bad at fighting. In fact, most people fear him for this, for although he isn't as strong as other captains, he is highly intelligent-only losing in intelligence only to the 12th squad captain, obviously the most intelligent-and can use his incredibly sharp and deceptive mind to discover weaknesses and faults in the opponents battle style and defences, and has rarely had to use his shikai to defeat even strong opponents.

Endurance: Kazuki has a high endurance and can continuously use flash steps, under lever 50 Kido and basic versions of his own technique for many hours without tiring.

Durability: Kazuki is surprisingly durable and can continuously fight with multiple injuries.

Kido: Kazuki is one of the most proficient Kido users in then soul society, as he prefere's Kido to his zanpaktou. He can use up to Kido level 85 without a phrase and can use up to level 98, struggling on 99.

Hand to Hand: Kazuki is one of the best hand to hand fighters outside of Squad two. However, this has nothing to do with Strength, as said before Kazuki isn't the strongest Captain. It is to do with his impresive speed and his very clever and sharp mind.

 

 

 

Appearance: [spoiler=Image]Anime_Warrior_by_chaotixwol.jpg

 

Personality: Kazuki is a friendly and talktive person, and a very lax captain. Many people believe he is more likely to be related to Captain Kyoraku than his Uncle, Shuhei Hisagi. Many people also believe he has no talent and only got the position because his Uncle was the former captain. Mayumi takes no notice of people insulting him, and always seems to have a smile on his face. He likes to talk and usually finds himself thinking his is a normal shinigami, unnerving those in his squad. When in battle he likes to focus on one opponent and takes them out one by one. However, as much as he is different compared to his uncle, he does share one feature. Both disliked using their Zanpaktou's, and for the same reason. Both disliked their Zanpaktou's for the bloodlust each has.

Bio: Kazuki was born to Shuhei's unknown sister, Mayusu Hisagi, and his father was never found, so he was named after his mother. However, his mother died soon after his birth, in an attack of Menos grande on the Soul society, just after Aisen was defeated, and just after Shuhei was promoted to captain rank after learning Bankai. Shuhei had no choice but to raise Kazuki, and tried to raise Kazuki to be a obedient, and honourable man. The Honourable thing half worked, but Kazuki was a born troublemaker. However, he was found to have Spiritual talent, having quite a high reiatsu when he entered the academy. He passed with flying colours, becoming a shinigami a year and a half before he was supposed to, already knowing Kido up to 50 and being able to use kido up to 33(Sokatsui) without a phrase. He was a talented Shinigami when he arrived in Shuhei's squad, Squad 9, and quickly progressed in ranks, becoming almost famous in the soul society, as he was almost as young as Toshiro was when Toshiro gained the rank of Leiutenant when he gained it. When Shuhei became part of the Royal guard, Kazuki was chosen to be the Captain of his squad. Many believed that this was just because he was related to Shuhei, but Kazuki had master Bankai the year before, taking half as long as it normally took. Nothing major has happened in his time as Captain, and as he isn't very active, many believe he wants it to stay that way. Really he's very bored, and is waiting for something exciting to happen.

RP Sample: Eragon's head snapped to the place where he'd heard the voice come from. But he was too late. Faster than any elf Eragon had ever seen, the shade jumped next to the Rider and his blade snapped upwards towards Holly's neck. As the blade touched holly's skin, the Shade's other arm sprang out and coils of black ropes jumped out of the Shades fingers, wrapping themselves around Holly's dragon and pinning her. "Stupid girl." The shade hissed softly, his hand pinning Holly's hand before she could do anything. "A young human rider, hardly any Magical power at the moment aswell. However, plenty of potential." Eragon took a step forward, but as he did three things happened. The first was that Saphira bounded into the clearing, and oak tree caught in her jaw. She dropped the oak and it rolled towards the shade. The second was that the shade jumped away from the oak, leaving Eragon to rescue Holly. And the third was a group of humans in cloaks appeared, all clutching bows. One accidently let loose an arrow, which was caught in Eragon's free hand. Saphira growled at the Shade as she saw the other dragon trapped in rope. Eragon let Holly onto the floor, then uttered a few words under his breath, cutting the ropes holding the dragon, just before he noticed a large wound in Saphira's shoulder.. "Shade. I dont know who you are, but hurting Saphira makes you my enemy. Waise heill." The wounds on saphira healed quickly, and saphira roared at the hooded archers. They tryed to shoot me down. Saphira snarled, anger rising in her. Yes, and I think they work for the shade. Eragon said. He was about to draw brisingr, when the archers ran backwards out of the woods. "Well, I think I've learnt all I'll need at the moment. Good day." The shade said, bowing and vanishing. Eragon turned to Holly. "Who are you, and why did you shout me with a shade there? He could have killed you!"

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