Newb Defense League III [locked because remake]

[Max Darkness]

Yeah! Great idea, could you post some cards so I can look for fitting artwork?

 

Here you go. Three base monsters and a pair of the Fusions.

 

 

 

[Lexadin]

Mhhh, yeah. I think I can find something that would fit.

 

In the meantime, your opponions plz on me newest Hybrid + Story.

 

[spoiler=New Hybrid + story]

1 "Alien" monster OR 1 monster with a A-Counter on it + 1 "Elemental Hero" monster.

This card is also treated as a "Elemental Hero" monster. Each time your opponent activates an effect that would destroy 1 or more cards you control, by revealing 1 "Alien" monster in your hand, negate that card's effect and destroy it. Then inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

 

In thier everlasting search for more power, they asked the Worms to get them a earthling and preverably a strong one. And as the Worms continued thier conquest to conquer the earth they came to the Skyscrapers of the E-Heroes. The heroes prevormed many fusions in an attempt to repel the invaders, but the Worms used thier hive to swarm the city and took many prisoners. And delivered them to the Aliens. Where they created thier very own "Hero".

 

 

 

Is it any good?

 

EDIT: Ok I've finished the AlienxDelphic Hybrid. Though I'm not shure about the artwork yet. So can you say which one's better?

 

[spoiler=Alien Hybrid - Delphic + story]

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. A monster destroyed in battle by this monster is removed from play. Once per turn, you can remove 1 card in your Graveyard from play to remove 1 card your opponent controls from play. While you control this face-up monster, cards removed from play by this cards effects cannot be returned to the game.

 

In on of the many travels the Aliens made, they discovered a Spacial Rift to another dimension. And as curious as they are, after telling the home planet over it.

An exploration & colonization team along with some guards where send in. There they discovered the misterious world of the Different Dimension, and it seemed fit to colonize. However the Delphics, who are the protectors of the D.D. did not like the Alien Invaders, and so a still lasting war started between the 2.

Both of them had thier losses and both of them took thier trophies. One day the Aliens decided to use the technilogie to thier advantige, and combined some Dephic part with thier A-Cells to create a new Interdimensional Alien Hybrid.

 

 

[Max Darkness]

The "Hero" hybrid is overpowered in my opinion, since "Super Polymerization" is your best friend in pulling these to the field, ie when your opponent summons "Neos" or a fusion, simply eat it with "S.P." and get this out. As such, I think it should only negate the effect, not destroy the card. As for the story, I feel the "Worms" are more passive than the "Aliens" and have slowly consumed some of the "Heroes" into "Worm Zero". I'm sure there was probably some conflict when they first arrived, but given that "Worm Zero" seems rather isolated above "Skyscraper", I would say the "Heroes" have left "Skyscraper" and fled to "Skyscraper 2". As such, the "Worms" would have detailed information on the "Heroes" and their strategies and that's how the "Aliens" got their hands on the information.

 

For "Alien Hybrid - Delphic", the second artwork is much better. Also, it should be a card your opponent controls that has an "A" Counter on it (there's an opportunity for putting "A" Counters on Spells and Traps) that gets removed from play, at the cost of an "Alien" monster. Reasoning being, this hybrid isn't perfect; it's reverse-engineered and clumsily fused together with little knowledge of the technology that powers it. It will need specific fuel.

 

Also, I don't think the"Aliens" would be curious. They'd be aggressive. They'd see the rift and see an opportunity for conquest. It would be warships they'd send in, not colony ships and it would be those ships that would clash with the "Delphics". Realising the "Delphics", although cyborgs, were too mechanical to be brainwashed, they engaged in traditional conflict and lost a large portion of that first fleet to the mysterious creatures. The surviving ships escaped with minimal information on their foe, but by now, the "Allies of Justice" were making severe expansions into "Worm" territory and the decision, although risky, was made to drag some of the "Delphics" out of the Different Dimension to study, and gain some information that could help them in their ally's fight.

 

Allowing some of their ships to be caught in the Different Dimension caused a trio of ships to arrive, including a "Delphic Babel". Bearly defeating them, its technology was grafted onto various "Alien" soldiers to create a hybrid with the ability to open holes in the dimensional plane, at a cost.

 

As such, the war continues. The "Allies of Justice" continue to arrive from their enigmatic birthplace, slowly pushing into "Worm" territory, but suffering losses at the hands of the "Aliens", dragging the conflict to a painful stalemate.

[Lexadin]

The "Hero" hybrid is overpowered in my opinion, since "Super Polymerization" is your best friend in pulling these to the field, ie when your opponent summons "Neos" or a fusion, simply eat it with "S.P." and get this out. As such, I think it should only negate the effect, not destroy the card. As for the story, I feel the "Worms" are more passive than the "Aliens" and have slowly consumed some of the "Heroes" into "Worm Zero". I'm sure there was probably some conflict when they first arrived, but given that "Worm Zero" seems rather isolated above "Skyscraper", I would say the "Heroes" have left "Skyscraper" and fled to "Skyscraper 2". As such, the "Worms" would have detailed information on the "Heroes" and their strategies and that's how the "Aliens" got their hands on the information.

 

Ok, sounds fair.

 

Mhh, yeah that does sound better. And it does fit more with the part where the Worms first need to flip before activating thier effect.

 

For "Alien Hybrid - Delphic", the second artwork is much better. Also, it should be a card your opponent controls that has an "A" Counter on it (there's an opportunity for putting "A" Counters on Spells and Traps) that gets removed from play, at the cost of an "Alien" monster. Reasoning being, this hybrid isn't perfect; it's reverse-engineered and clumsily fused together with little knowledge of the technology that powers it. It will need specific fuel.

 

Sounds good, so I'll edit it some more. But will it also aply to the battle RFP effect?

 

Also, I don't think the "Aliens" would be curious. They'd be aggressive. They'd see the rift and see an opportunity for conquest. It would be warships they'd send in, not colony ships and it would be those ships that would clash with the "Delphics". Realising the "Delphics", although cyborgs, were too mechanical to be brainwashed, they engaged in traditional conflict and lost a large portion of that first fleet to the mysterious creatures. The surviving ships escaped with minimal information on their foe, but by now, the "Allies of Justice" were making severe expansions into "Worm" territory and the decision, although risky, was made to drag some of the "Delphics" out of the Different Dimension to study, and gain some information that could help them in their ally's fight.

 

Allowing some of their ships to be caught in the Different Dimension caused a trio of ships to arrive, including a "Delphic Babel". Bearly defeating them, its technology was grafted onto various "Alien" soldiers to create a hybrid with the ability to open holes in the dimensional plane, at a cost.

 

As such, the war continues. The "Allies of Justice" continue to arrive from their enigmatic birthplace, slowly pushing into "Worm" territory, but suffering losses at the hands of the "Aliens", dragging the conflict to a painful stalemate.

 

Your story-making abillities are truely great. This does sound a more plausible way. Though I really think they also would send colonization ships to, colonize a conquered world.

[Lord Ursus]

Your Delphic set is ever so epic, Max.

 

Could you please post a thread with the entire set? Or point me to where I can find it?

[Max Darkness]

I just bought the old "Ancient Fairy Dragon" tin since it was in the sale. In the boosters that came with it, I pulled a Super Rare "Core Compression" and "Dark Strike Fighter"; and best of all, an Ultimate Rare "Koa'ki Meiru Drago"!

 

 

Ok, sounds fair.

 

Mhh, yeah that does sound better. And it does fit more with the part where the Worms first need to flip before activating thier effect.

 

Sounds good, so I'll edit it some more. But will it also aply to the battle RFP effect?

 

Your story-making abillities are truely great. This does sound a more plausible way. Though I really think they also would send colonization ships to, colonize a conquered world.

 

The battle RFP is fine. I was just concerned with the Main Phase removal effect.

 

Possibly, but I would have hoped my "Delphics" would have been able to hold them off before they held a world. But if you want that, then so be it.

 

 

 

Your Delphic set is ever so epic, Max.

 

Could you please post a thread with the entire set? Or point me to where I can find it?

 

Thanks.

 

I'm still in the midst of re-doing a few of their effects (having realised that a few of them become a little broken when combo-ed with "Dark Hole" and "Dimensional Fissure"/"Macro Cosmos"), but I'll post them in a while.

[Lexadin]

I just bought the old "Ancient Fairy Dragon" tin since it was in the sale. In the boosters that came with it, I pulled a Super Rare "Core Compression" and "Dark Strike Fighter"; and best of all, an Ultimate Rare "Koa'ki Meiru Drago"!

 

 

Nice, a "Koa'ki Meiru Drago is a nessary element in LV Dragon Decks.

 

The battle RFP is fine. I was just concerned with the Main Phase removal effect.

 

Possibly, but I would have hoped my "Delphics" would have been able to hold them off before they held a world. But if you want that, then so be it.

 

Ok.

 

Oh no, I didn't try to say that they lost. But that the Aliens overconfident as they where already send some colonizing ships along with thier warships.

[Max Darkness]

Nice, a "Koa'ki Meiru Drago is a nessary element in LV Dragon Decks.

 

I'm just happy for getting the Ultimate Rare version.

 

 

Oh no, I didn't try to say that they lost. But that the Aliens overconfident as they where already send some colonizing ships along with thier warships.

 

Okay. That does sound workable.

[Lexadin]

Yeah, understandable. Also I'm redoing one of my first sets, called the Solarics. As a new part of the Alien Hybrid sequence.

 

Also I added a new pokecomic to my sig instead of the YGO X-mas one.

[Max Darkness]

I really like the last part where Blue and Gary are talking and simply realise both of them are incredible.

 

 

EDIT: The last part of the Crow-whupping.

 

[spoiler=[b]Deux Machina[/b]]

 

The gales intensified and the lightning storm grew in ferocity as the dimensional fissures heralded the arrival of something unholy.

 

“What the hell have you summoned?”

“A challenger to the gods. He fought the powers that be and lost. They cast him into the different dimension, thinking he would be destroyed by the twisted creatures there. They were wrong. He continued to gain power and in this new form, he returned to our realm to unleash his vengeance. His very presence disturbs the balance of our world. The longer he stays in this duel, the more damage he will cause.” The winds continued to intensify, at times almost blowing Crow off his feet.

 

As he struggled to stay upright, he noticed the cannons of ‘Delphic Commandant’ aiming at him. This time, coupled with the force of the winds, he was easily thrown to the ground. As he lay dazed, he saw the silhouettes of ‘Blackwing – Gram the Shining Star’, ‘Blackwing – Silverwind the Ascendant’ and ‘Black-Winged Dragon’ slowly vanish into the turbulent air.

 

Back on his feet, and looking through his Extra Deck, he realised he only had one Synchro monster left to summon. Putting it back, his attention was caught by Erika’s attack declaration.

 

“It’s time to finish this duel! ‘Delphic Destroyer’, annihilate ‘Blackwing Armed Wing’! The myriad of cannons fired, shredding Crow’s monster instantly. (Crow LP: 4000 -> 3600)

“I activate the Trap Card ‘Black Thunder’. When a ‘Blackwing’ monster I control is destroyed by battle, this inflicts 400 points of damage for each card you control.” Six bolts of black lightning flew out of the revealed card, striking Erika in quick succession. (Erika LP: 3400 -> 1000)

 

“Courageous to the end. I suppose that’s one good point about you.”

“I never give up. And when I win this, you will change Aki back to normal.”

“It doesn’t matter what you think, you will lose. ‘Delphic Gotomelig’! Direct attack! The lights shone bright before focussing into a single beam. As it scythed towards Crow, he smirked.

“I activate the Trap Card ‘Mirror Force’. Say goodbye to all your attacking monsters!”

 

The aquamarine blast struck the rainbow-coloured shield and was reflected back at Erika’s army, detonating on impact. Crow heard the mechanical devices screeching as they fell, before hearing the scraping of metal as the creatures collapsed and died. Crow’s confidence grew as he could now picture his victory more clearly. With her strongest monsters gone and an empty hand, Erika would have to hide behind her remaining monsters for some time, during which he could strike back and control the duel.

 

However, a gust ripped away the black smoke, revealing ‘Delphic Gotomelig’, still pulsating with energy.

“How…?”

“I told you ‘Gotomelig’ challenged the gods. He’d hardly fall to a mortal’s trap. As such, he is immune to destruction effects! Therefore, his attack continues! The beam was charged again, this time hitting its target and surging through Crow. He screamed as the power lanced through his body. Collapsing, and shuddering from the electrical discharge, he gasped for air. (Crow LP: 3600 -> 400)

 

“I end.”

 

Crow:

 

“My…turn. Draw.” Crow struggled with his words, still shaking from the pulse of energy. “Since you control a monster with 2000 or more ATK, I can Special Summon ‘Blackwing – Sanga the Last Quarter” from my hand. And now, because I control a ‘Blackwing’ monster, I can Special Summon ‘Blackwing – Bora the Spear’.”

 

“Finally, I activate the effect of ‘Blackwing – Vayu the Emblem of Honor’ your ‘Card Destruction’ sent to my Graveyard. By removing it, and a ‘Blackwing’ non-Tuner in my Graveyard from play, I can Synchro Summon a ‘Blackwing’ monster whose Level equals their combined Levels. I remove ‘Vayu’ and ‘Blackwing Armed Wing’ to Synchro Summon ‘Blackwing Tamer – Joe Hawk the Pitch Dark’. Turn end.”

 

“Your wall of monsters will not help you. I’ve won this.”

“You’ll still need to get through them.”

“That won’t be as drawn-out as you think it will.”

 

 

Turn 5

 

Erika:

“My turn. I activate my face-down card, ‘Aberrant Oppression’. This card removes one Level 4 or lower monster from both our Decks before allowing me to select one ‘Delphic’ monster I control. I remove my ‘Banisher of the Radiance’. I won’t ask what you removed, since it has no impact on this fight. It’s time to finish this! ‘Delphic Gotomelig’, attack ‘Blackwing Tamer – Joe Hawk the Pitch Dark’! And because of ‘Aberrant Oppression’, ‘Gotomelig’ gains Piercing Damage during this turn! Be cast into hell!” (Crow LP: 400 -> 0)

 

The dark machine’s power lines glowed again, launching a barrage of energy beams through Crow’s monster. Slicing through the ground, and tearing the earth apart, Crow stumbled, before falling through a resulting hole. Reaching out and managing to find a hand-hold, Crow dangled atop the crevice.

 

Looking up, he saw Erika, smiling sadistically. Silently, she raised her hand, and her dark marks flared. Crow watched as the flame circle closed in on him. Losing consciousness, he felt his grip loosen, before feeling the heat of the purple flames encircle him.

 

***

 

 

[Lexadin]

Yeah, that part makes me lol everytime I read it.

[Max Darkness]

Added part 3 of the Crow-whupping. See my last post.

[Lexadin]

Awesome, Crow lost. :lol:

 

What actually happens when you lose a... Nevermind, your soul will be fed to the EBI(s), right?

[Max Darkness]

Awesome, Crow lost. :lol:

 

I know. It's almost as if I don't like him...

 

 

What actually happens when you lose a... Nevermind, your soul will be fed to the EBI(s), right?

 

Different things. You can be fed to an Earthbound, but in this case, Hiro is using the power of those the Dark Signers defeat (by funneling their energy into the rebuilt Old Momentum) to fuel the revival of Allocuaymec, his ultimate weapon.

[Lexadin]

Different things. You can be fed to an Earthbound, but in this case, Hiro is using the power of those the Dark Signers defeat (by funneling their energy into the rebuilt Old Momentum) to fuel the revival of Allocuaymec, his ultimate weapon.

 

That's the Dark Synchro EBI you made before, right?

[Max Darkness]

That's the Dark Synchro EBI you made before, right?

 

Yes. But it needs "Scar-Red Nova Dragon" to be sacrificed before it can be released. So, Hiro has Akira ("Uru" Dark Signer) defeat Jack (not using full strength so he may survive to be killed by the new "EB") and steal both "Red Dragon Archfiend" and "Scar-Red Nova Dragon". Then, Hiro uses the "Goetia" Archetype against Jack to facilitate the summoning of "Allocuaymec". "Allocuaymec" is, in the end, destroyed by "Crimson Star Dragon".

[Lexadin]

Ah yes, now I remeber. Though I can't remeber the "Allocuaymec" being destroyed, part though.

[Max Darkness]

Ah yes, now I remeber. Though I can't remeber the "Allocuaymec" being destroyed, part though.

 

That's new. I've got the last part of Yusei vs. Hiro duel done. Hiro uses my "Seven Sins" Ritual archetype for that duel.

 

Roughly, "Crimson Star Dragon's" effect goes as such:

 

LIGHT/Level 12/Dragon/Synchro/Effect

 

4000/3500

 

"Crimson Spirit" + "Majestic Star Dragon" + 1 non-Tuner monster

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon and from the Graveyard during the turn it is Synchro Summoned. This card's effect and activation cannot be negated. Card effects cannot be activated in response to this card's Summon or activation. You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards your opponent controls. During the End Phase, return this card to the Extra Deck.

[Lexadin]

So basicly a free field cleaner. Yeah, perhaps somewhat UP imo. As it needs 1 Material who's a Synchro of a Synchro which only remains on the field for 1 turn + 2 other card including 1 Specific one.

[Max Darkness]

So basicly a free field cleaner. Yeah, perhaps somewhat UP imo. As it needs 1 Material who's a Synchro of a Synchro which only remains on the field for 1 turn + 2 other card including 1 Specific one.

 

"Crimson Spirit" can Special Summon itself while you control a "Majestic" monster and the other monster will be that one Yusei used to Summon "Majestic Star" against Harald that Special Summoned a Level 1 token when used as a Synchro Material Monster.

 

And it's only going to be used in one duel, for one turn, so it's alright. And it might have other, unused effects. (If you were purely using the anime as a reference, you wouldn't know that "Majestic Star" could tribute itself for a field nuke until Yusei used it against Harald)

[Lexadin]

Meh, I gues its ok then. Anyways tell me when you finish your fan-fic.

[Max Darkness]

Meh, I gues its ok then. Anyways tell me when you finish your fan-fic.

 

This whole 'Neo Dark Signers' thing is just bits and pieces.

 

The big fic is the "Emissaries" one. But that will take some time... The duels can be done in an hour. It's the bits between those that take the time.

[Lexadin]

Oh? Perhaps you should gather them into a bundel. I'm pretty shure it will be awesome.

 

Yeah, of course, that's that new one you where working on, I almost forgot about that one.

[Alexis Rhodes]

Maybe I should write a fan-fic...

[Lexadin]

Shure why not. But what will it be about?