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Max Darkness

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That's yet to be decided.

 

 

Lol, lets hope for the best though

 

No, it has too many holes in it yet. I've written a lot of the third part, but the first and second parts are much less complete and the fourth part hasn't been started.

 

Ok, anyways good luck with it.

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My Fan-fic is going very well. Part 1 is okay, Part 2 is formative, Parts 3A and 3B are almost done; but Part 4 is problematic.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: The Underworld]JAXA had been monitoring the anomaly for months, as had ESA and NASA. An unexplained disturbance in space-time, that appeared as both a black hole and a supernova at the same time to human satellites. Probes were sent to it, but they were months away when it happened. Nothing in humanity’s power could have stopped what many called judgement. An event that changed man’s destiny forever.

 

Ataxia.

 

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Chizuru looked with disgust at her dark grey surroundings. The dim lighting only served to illuminate the dank corners of the corridor, cracked and dripping with water. As she carried onward, the harsh chill of the stagnant air served to remind her that she was very far outside of her comfort zone. Used to the city’s almost perpetual light, be it from the sun or the myriad of artificial lamps, she had grown up in a world where the dark had been banished. Here, the opposite was true; shadows criss-crossed every opening and door, hiding almost everything from view. It wasn’t a situation Chizuru liked.

 

Nevertheless, she had agreed to come to this decrepit maze in order to find someone. Why her employers were so intent on finding him was beyond her. From what she had heard and researched, he was simply another duellist, like her. He was talented and celebrated, and enjoyed the fruits of his labours. However, there was one thing that set him apart from her. While she was from the city, he was from this place; a gigantic, underground complex of concrete and metal structures known by the city dwellers as the Underworld.

 

Her history lessons had told her that the Underworld was built from the ruins of an older part of Domino City, once called the Satellite. That too had been a slum, but it had been above ground; it didn’t condemn its inhabitants to spend their lives hidden from the rest of the world. All her life she had heard tales of the horrors of it; from vicious gang violence to mutants living in the lowest depths. While she could quickly dismiss the latter, the former lingered in her mind as she pressed on towards her destination.

 

The corridor opened up into a larger public place, albeit still the same monotone shades and in the same state of near-ruin. Above one of the exits was the crudely drawn outline of a duel disk, pointing Chizuru towards her target, the duelling ring. As she paced down the passage, she noticed the walls were coated in posters promoting various duels. Many looked very old, most were torn or only fragments remained.

 

As she drew nearer to the ring, she caught a glimpse of the man she had been sent to find in one of the newer pieces of artwork. His dark hair and piercing eyes were well-defined in the poster, but her analysis was cut short by a question.

 

“Looks good doesn’t he?” Chizuru swung round. “But that’s the point of these things. Glorious brings in the crowds.” The teenager couldn’t have been more than fourteen, and was dressed in a brown and black coat with similarly coloured trousers and shirt. The youth smiled and offered his hand.

 

“Hi. I’m Akira. If you need help, I’ll give it to you.” His beaming smile put Chizuru slightly off-balance; having been raised believing that those from the Underworld were deceitful and manipulative, but she put those feelings to the back of her mind, realising that not raising suspicion was key.

 

“I’m Chizuru. Nice to meet you…” The pair shook hands before Akira gestured to his left, pointing towards a large well-lit entrance in the grey mass.

“That’s the ring. Do you want someone to watch with? It’s more fun when you’re with people.”

“Uh…okay…I guess.” Chizuru hesitantly replied.

 

Akira led her into the duelling ring and Chizuru was taken aback at the sight that greeted her. The huge expanse was designed like the Ancient Roman arenas; a coliseum in brutalist style. In the middle was a flat expanse with faded duel arena markings and surrounding it on all sides but one were ranks of simple bench seating. The ‘roof’ stretched high above her, giving the claustrophobic space an ironic sense of freedom. As she stood marvelling the bizarre design, she noticed the seats beginning to fill up as people came to witness the offered entertainment. Akira led her to seats near the centreline of the arena and the pair sat down to wait for the off.

 

“Looks like it’ll be a full house.” Chizuru started, looking round at the quickly-filling seating.

“It’s as full as it normally is. I mean, this being only an exhibition duel, it won’t be as popular as the tournament matches, but it’ll still be lucrative.” Akira calmly replied. As Chizuru looked away, Akira turned to face her, with a look of distrust on his face. Returning to his position before the young woman looked back at him; he replaced his frown with a smile.

 

At that moment, the lights dimmed, becoming two spotlights on opposite ends of the duel arena. From the end to the left of Chizuru and Akira came a well-built man wearing what looked like a biker’s clothes; leather jacket, trousers and gloves. Some of the crowd cheered for him when he appeared, but a majority remained silent.

 

At the other end, the lights went dark. Chizuru was confused at this before they re-lit. In the space where there was nothing was the man she was hunting. Philip Arcan.

 

 

 

 

Just a taster to see if I can write non-duel sections.

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Thats what it is called, is a meta deck? hmmm, okay, I guess for a blackwing deck I'm looking for is something to defeat my best friends decks.

 

Meta Deck is a term used for a Deck using any Archetype/Strategy that was at some point meta. Examples include Lightsworns, Blackwings, Gyzarus Gladiator Beasts and Froggy Monarchs.

 

Just use a generic Blackwing build. After all, the cards are scripted and almost all are broken so you should be fine.

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oh, okay Max, Thank you. Now I will have to read all of their effects, shoot. Oh well, I'll was going for a blackwing deck for this reason, "Fight fire with Fire" term.

 

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At everyone, will you tell me how this is going so far and OCG Fixes, seeing if this group so far isn't to op'd.

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Once per turn, you can remove from play two monsters you control to increase 1 monster on the field by 1 of those monsters combined ATK/DEF until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, you can activate 1 ritual spell card in your deck that has "Legendary" in it.

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This ritual card cannot be activated except by the effect of "A Legend Unfolds". This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mordore' of Maruading". You must also Tribute monsters whose total levels equal 10 that you control. Monsters used are sent to your opponents hand instead of going to the Graveyard.

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This card cannot be Ritual Summoned except by the effect of "Legendary of Mordore'". This card cannot be targeted by the effects of your opponents Spell or Trap cards. During your 2nd Standby Phase, you can destroy this card and Special Summon 1 "Master of Mordore'". (The Special Summon of this card is treated as Ritual Summon)

 

I haven't got the final card done, but I just wondering if this is a good start? Need some help and idea's and so on.

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So, I use up 10 Levels of monsters (ie a couple of 1-Tributers, or a selection of Level 4s) which my opponent gets instead of me, and in return I get a 0 ATK / 1200 DEF that can still be destroyed by "Lightning Vortex", which blows itself up after 2 turns. What are the good points?

 

As for 5Ds, the new intro shows that there's a fourth "Machine Emperor", possibly a Fusion or a Level 1 Nomi of the original trio. And during the intro, everything turns into "Tron" and then "Scar-Red Nova Dragon", "Shooting Star Dragon" and "Blackwing Dragon" battle this new "Machine Emperor" and their attacks basically bounce off.

 

I can't help wishing an 'Old Meta' team would enter the WRGP, the battle becoming the "Machine Emperor" vs. "Gladiator Beast Gyzarus", "Caius the Shadow Monarch" and "VWXYZ Dragon Catapult Cannon", which would make it much more one-sided; "Caius" RFPing one of the parts, "Gyzarus" blowing up another two, and "VWXYZ" RFPing the fourth part and then when it attacks, switching the remaining part to Attack Position.

 

Why can't Konami see that the old meta has some real power?

 

Oh, and as for the new ending, Faithshipping is now canon...

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The "Cybers" have a use of some DARK monsters (like the "Genex" monsters), so an opening hand can yield this and "Cyber Dragon". And "Power Bond" gives a 5400 ATK piercer (if your opponent is using meta) that won't deal too much damage to you at the end of the turn. And since it's DARK, "Overload Fusion" works just as well.

 

Plus, with the anime-only "Recycling Plant" ("Dark Calling" for Machine-Types) it becomes easier to summon. And given that that's how it will be summoned when it appears, I think it works. Otherwise, what would be your suggestions?

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Mhh, perhaps let its pierce power work agains all monsters, becouse imo it isn't really something that will give you "the winning edge in battle".

With that said, I must say I love the art. Can you tell me the artist? (search words are also ok).

 

If that's the case, I would like to add another anti-LIGHT and DARK effect, since that alone would seem pretty bland.

 

As for the artist: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=7780

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