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I was just wondering if you want to read one of the fan fics I'm thinking of making, its kinda confusing though, b/c it is like an advance version of what might or might not be happening, a prediction if you will call it.

 

I'm not good with english(which is sad-b/c I'm american) but I hope this is at least a good start...

 

 

Warning...So far four pages, but scripted like a play for convenience

 

I hope it works, and if its not following the story line, thats alright, it'd be like a mis-concept or something.

 

 

[spoiler=Infinity Circuit Protectors...]

The resurrection of the two great legends….The legends finally appear, after the finish with the 5d signers and the polar gods, the two legends reveal themselves. They discover that the world they have been brought into has all become torn to pieces, the fabrics of time and space have been tampered with and the two legends have arrived to fix it. As shall the two legends will be revealed shortly, the 5ds signers will fight Team New World in the finale.

 

The two legends…

 

The miracles of which the universe rides on, has shown themselves. They are the universal time lords, which have been assigned the task of fixing the unnatural time link. They have felt enormous amount of unnatural and unpleasant powers within, they have come to settle the differences to keep the universe flowing, they are one of a kind, the time lords of the universes between the universes, has come to the universe giving off too much pain…

 

It’s finally here, the end… … … Or is it…

Unknown Figure 1: I have seen…

Unknown Figure 2: I have felt…

Unknown Figure 1: I have taught…

Unknown Figure 2: I have learned…

Unknown Figure 1: I have come to end this universe of its pain…

Unknown Figure 2: I have come to rid the universe of all evil and good…

Unknown Figure 1: We are here for reasons that even Yilaster do not know about

Unknown Figure 2: We are here to get rid of this universe, remember…

Hidden Figure in the corner of the room: uhh….awhhh…

Unknown Figure 1: Yea, you, in the corner, come here…(He magically pulled the victim to his face)

Unknown Figure 2: Now, why did you have to go about that, now that just interferes with our plans…

Unknown Figure 1: Yes, but he needs to learn his lesson, and this is how… (Tosses the intruder out the window and sucked into another universe)

Unknown Figure 2: Well, shall we?

Unknown Figure 1: Yes, we shall go and see…

 

Team 5d’s fight against Yliaster … … … Or shall it be something new?

 

Yusei: Finally, it time to end this once and for all…

Jack: Yes, Lets show them the power between the Crimson Dragon and the Universe!!!

Crow: Let’s not be too hasty, now…

Jack: Why you….

Yusei: Now is not the time, later…

Crow: Yea, lets go, underserved king…

Jack: Alright, dodo…

Crow: Why you…

Rua: Hey, come quick, look what’s on Tv.

Ruka: Did you get them, Rua?

Rua: Yea, is it ready?

Yusei: What is this, I feel pain, I feel weak, I feel hurt… (Tremendous power awakens-Yusei falls to his knee’s)

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God-to Yusei: Powers of the two legends are starting to tear down the universe, starting with Earth…You must run…Go to… “???”

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Yusei: (With oh sh*t face on) I think we are not done yet, Jose will have to wait, let’s go…

Rua, Ruka, Crow, and Aki: What the, wait Yusei…wait for us…

 

The Legends

 

Unknown Figure 1: Well, this working so far, half of this universe is about done…

Unknown Figure 2: Well, tell the two legendary teams show up, I’m excited to see them…

Unknown Figure 1: Well, lets hope not, but I feel they are close by, we better hurry… (Universe is being sucked into a bottle containing another universe, which causes all things to be end like they have never existed)

Unknown Figure 1: Well, here come intruders, once again…

Unknown Figure 2: Don’t worry, remember, they are not anything, not even a nuisance to us, like Team New World…

Unknown Figure 1: You know we were entrusted not to Speak of that.

Unknown Figure 2: Yea, sorry…

Unknown Figure 1: You think The three teams will figure out who we are?

Unknown Figure 2: No, not even we know that, even though we are rulers of all universes, this was has been corrupted enough that we can’t tell what will happen, that’s why we are destroying it, so it won’t exceed are limits and over power us…

Unknown Figure 1: Shut up, you fool, now we have to kill of those people…

Unknown Figure 2: Well, they are going to be destroyed anyhow, so why not…

Unknown Figure 1: That’s true…But I still want to make sure that the three teams will be in shock once they see us…

Unknown Figure 2: That’s for sure…

 

Team New World:

Jose: I feel a presence of something, but I can’t tell what.

Lucciano: it couldn’t be…could it?

Jose: I feel it is…the protectors of the infinity circuit.

Lucciano: How, it hasn’t been opened yet…

Jose: Rememer…they have the power to do such sort of things…

Lucciano: Well, I guess, but why…

Jose: I’m not sure, but I’m sure it’s worse than all given.

The Legends revealed…

The legendary protectors, they are protectors of the infinity circuit, they do now want it destroyed, b/c it has a secret…

Legendary Protector 1: Ah, Yusei and their gain have arrived…

Legendary Protector 2: Ah, I also see Team Ragnarock has arrived…

Legendary Protector 1: I feel that Team New World can sense us…They know we are here…

Legendary Protector 2: Should we do something?

Legendary Protector 1: No, we just go on with our business…

Legendary Protector 2: Okay…

Legendary Protector 1: Here they come…

Legendary Protector 2: Bring Them on…

 

The Fight between all the legends and the infinity protectors…Who shall be victory…

 

 

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Yes Wham. I have been testing my Crystal Fairy Deck against my brother. Also, with the bucket load of cards my brother showed me yesturday, I have access to a lot of Monsters, Spells, and Traps now.

 

[spoiler=For those who wish to see my Crystal Fairy Deck]

Monsters (14)

 

Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle x2

Airknight Parshath

Bountiful Artemis

Crystal Beast Amethyst Car

Hysteric Fairy

Sky Scourge Invicil

Asura Priest

Soistu

Doistu

Element Valkyrie

Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus

Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise

Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth

 

Spells (16)

 

Mystical Space Typhoon x2

Crystal Becon

Card Rotator

Heart of Clear Water

Gravity Axe - Grarl

Crystal Blessing

Shield & Sword

Giant Trunade

Shooting Star Bow - Ceal

Linear Accelerator Cannon

Convulsion of Nature

Fissure

Crystal Abundance

Creature Swap

Block Attack

 

Traps (12)

 

Torrential Tribute

Roll Out!

Dust Tornado

Compulsory Evacuation Device x2

Fairy Box

Crystal Raigeki

Reckless Greed x3

Call of the Haunted

Cemetery Bomb

 

Total (42)

 

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@Lexadin: I'm not sure, it just said I couldn't reach the driver for this domain, which confused my senses, it works now, but I thought that was weird. I'm going to fix my one post and then see, do you all think my to bad, my fan fic so far?

 

Its just an prediction, b/c I can't read any language but my native one, which I still suck at, yet I think I confused the English Factory with my bullsh*t. lol.

 

I'm sure there is different things happening, but this is how I comprehend what might happen, is it close?

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Thats alright, I'm sure its cr*p b/c it is just an prediction, as all the ones that can speak and listen japanese know exactly whats going to happen, b/c I am on episode 126 japanese subbed yugioh and no more subbed or non-subbed japanese shows, so i have to wait, maybe I should watch naruto while waiting.

 

Yugioh 5ds english subbed 126

Naruto Shippuden English converted - Ep 240 I think.

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DragonballGT? hmm, I play the games, b/c thats How I learn from those shows, but when I had satellite, I was watching the new series, Dragon Ball Z kai. That all my games combined, which made me almost Sh*t when i saw that, I'm wondering where in the series they ran into the ultimate alien bug thing, call Hirudegarn, the bug I used to defeat the tourney with on my game, that was fun.

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YGO continues to suck ass. Not only are the antagonists cheating, but they're using DIVINE Synchros and no-one seems to realise that "Soul Release", "Disappear" or any other RFP card would be the answer to all their problems.

 

5Ds doesn't even recognise that the Removed from Play Zone even exists. Only Team Unicorn have used it, and that was to accelerate their Synchro Summons...

 

And as for "Sleeping Giant Thud"...how stupid are Team 5Ds? They seem to think it's immortal because it can't be targeted by Spells, Traps or Monster Effects. ...Can't be targeted... So cards like "Mirror Force", "Lightning Vortex" and any other non-targeting card would happily chew on it. Not to mention "Skill Drain" would turn it into a Level 10 window to your opponent's Life Points...

 

The current meta is clearly having problems defeating itself. It's time for the old meta to come back and show them how it's done. The "Gladiator Beasts" and "Monarchs" would have a field day going through Team Ragnarok's Deck...

 

In short, 5Ds is terrible. Even more so than the original series. At least back then it was interesting...

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@Max: I know, but its still just to be interesting, but I wish they'd make an effect monster that is an accel monster, make it interesting, or something like that.

 

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@Anyone:

Well, anyhow, Could I get an effect fix, I'm sure it don't help the meta of this, but its just for fun, I still think its underpowered or whatnot, though.

 

[spoiler=Brionac's Servant]

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2 "Ice Barrier" tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner "Ice Barrier" monsters. You can discard any number of cards to return the same number of cards from the field to the top of the owners deck. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Lv 3 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Graveyard. When This card is removed from the field, remove from play this card and inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points for ever card in your opponent's hand.

 

 

I do not want to change the picture, b/c I made that picture using gimp....

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@Max: I know, but its still just to be interesting, but I wish they'd make an effect monster that is an accel monster, make it interesting, or something like that.

 

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@Anyone:

Well, anyhow, Could I get an effect fix, I'm sure it don't help the meta of this, but its just for fun, I still think its underpowered or whatnot, though.

 

[spoiler=Brionac's Servant]

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2 "Ice Barrier" tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner "Ice Barrier" monsters. You can discard any number of cards to return the same number of cards from the field to the top of the owners deck. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Lv 3 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Graveyard. When This card is removed from the field, remove from play this card and inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points for ever card in your opponent's hand.

 

 

I do not want to change the picture, b/c I made that picture using gimp....

 

 

"Shooting Star Dragon" is a Accel Synchro Effect monster. What are you going on about?

 

As for the card, why is the servant higher in level than its master? After all, "Horus' Servant" is Level 1 while the lowest-level "Horus" is Level 4. Also, I despise Level 12 monsters that are not gods or are only Level 12 for convienence. The very point of the highest Level is that it's for monsters that have a link to the ultimate power.

 

"Five God Dragon" is the ultimate dark power, while "Dragon Master Knight" is its antithesis. "Blue-Eyes Ultimate" was the original 'god-monster', having 4500 ATK. "Yubel-The Ultimate Nightmare" is the final form of a Level 10 monster, which goes through Level 11 as well. Anime-wise, "Scar-Red Nova Dragon" is the sealed avatar form of an ancient evil god, 'Scar-Red Nova'.

 

Your card is Level 12, and if anything, should be lower than the dragons of the Ice Barrier. It should be a low-level Synchro support for the larger monsters. It should also probably be a Spellcaster-Type.

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@Max:Thats just its name, you took the name for literal...Thats a first in awhile, I can simply change the name, and it really isn't meant to be a servant, I couldn't think of a good name for it, but its effect is s'posed to be stronger than Brionac to replace him, you see. So, please, next time, do not take names literraly...But can I get an effect fix, or am I being an a*ss which I'm trying hard not to be, I'm in just a lot of pain...

 

about the effect monster, I was going to make something very new, here shortly...

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@Max:Thats just its name, you took the name for literal...Thats a first in awhile, I can simply change the name, and it really isn't meant to be a servant, I couldn't think of a good name for it, but its effect is s'posed to be stronger than Brionac to replace him, you see. So, please, next time, do not take names literraly...But can I get an effect fix, or am I being an a*ss which I'm trying hard not to be, I'm in just a lot of pain...

 

about the effect monster, I was going to make something very new, here shortly...

 

So use words that imply superiority, like "Transcend", "Neo" and "Master". And if names are not to be taken literally, how can they be read?

 

 

I rather like to watch 5d's, though it's bad, I know.

 

At any rate, over the week, I am going to attend a leader course, so I will not have any opportunity to communicate with you until then.

 

It's terrible, but you'll have to watch it to understand the newest stuff.

 

Well, anyway have fun with that.

 

 

5d's sucks indeed. Though I still watch it to get more informed.

 

Indeed. I've been trying to make a few more "Gladiator Beasts" in order to try to cover their final weakpoints. Here are a pair.

 

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Effect: When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladiator Beast" monster, inflict 600 damage to your opponent. At the end of the Battle Phase, if this card attacked or was attacked, you can return it to the Deck to Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Velite".

 

 

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Effect: When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladiator Beast" monster return 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster in your Graveyard or Removed from Play Zone to your Deck. At the end of the Battle Phase, if this card attacked or was attacked, you can return it to the Deck to Special Summon 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladiator Beast Rudari".

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So I'm starting a Pop Culture set. I have fallen in love with a game called Eternal Sonata, in fact, the character picture in my sig is from it. So is the quote. I've got one card finished, since I just started it, but I'll have hopefully around sixty once the set is done.

 

The set will also introduce an idea called Echos I want to make a reality. In the game, Echos are given as you attack the enemy. Every attack that isn't blocked is worth one (or two depending on the circumstances) Echo, and you can get up to thirty-two Echos. Echos are used when you attack an enemy with a special attack, and increase the power of the attack. Echos can build by both regular attacks, and special attacks. Also, each character has a Shadow attack, that occurs when they are in the shadows, and a Light attack when they aren't. I'm going to try to add in this as well in some way. I have high hopes for this, and I don't plan on letting it die.

 

Since all of the have special attacks in the Light and Shadows, all of the characters will be treated as LIGHT and DARK monsters.

 

[spoiler=Eternal Sonata Frederic]

ECHO SYSTEM: The Echo System works much like the counter system, but it is not placed on a card. Instead, it’s a separate counter that is only used by this set of cards. The Echo Counter is pretty much just written down on a sheet of paper for however many you may have at the moment. It is placed next to your Deck, and the opponent has the right to know how many Echos you have. When you have a certain number of Echos, they can all be removed to activate a monsters effect. Most increase attack, but not all do.

 

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Card Lore:

This card is also treated as a DARK monster. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can add 1 Echo to your Echo Counter. If this card attacks, and you When you have 4, 8, 16, or 32 Echos you can remove them all to activate the corresponding effect.

*4: Increase this card's ATK by 300 during the Battle Phase only. *8: Increase this card's ATK by 600 during the Battle Phase only. *16 If the attack target is not destroyed in battle, it cannot attack or activate its effect during the next turn. *32 When this card attacks, add 3 Echos to your Echo Counter instead of 1. This card's ATK is increased by 800.

 

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You might want to make it either a personal effect to make it easier, otherwise it's a troublesome mechanic:

 

Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Echo Counter on this card. Once per turn, when this card declares an attack, you can remove (Insert number here) Echo Counters from this card to (Insert effect here).

 

 

Or, just make a Field Spell like "Magicial Citadel of Endymion" that accumilates counters everytime a monster is destroyed by battle with an "E.S." monster. And then have the monsters remove the counters.

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@max: Usually I correct card by the basis of their effect, and not judge the card on the name, or say vise versa. A name is a name, not a symbol of representive power, if it is meant to be a powerful creature, look at attack, if it isn't, but a very strong guardian, than def. I rate by the efect, creativity, balance of the card and I don't assume that the card is meant to be a weaker or stronger version of another card just by the name, granted that mine had that in it, I will change though, b/c you gave me a better name, which I give my thanks to. Also, sorry I was rude to you yesterday, my pain is going aay finally, so I am much better mood as of lately, sorry if I was an a**. So, I'll rename the card and let you correct it the way you normaly do, with the name. New name on its way...

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I thought about doing it that way, but I didn't like it. It would have made them entirely dependent on the Field Spell.

 

Thanks for the fix.

 

Problem then is that your opponent has no way to stop the gaining of Echo Counters. Every set needs a weakness. After all, a 'Spell Counter' Deck can be very powerful, but has a severe strength and weakness in "Magical Citadel". If your opponent cannot stop your Echo Counter gain, then the set is broken, because it has no weakness.

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Problem then is that your opponent has no way to stop the gaining of Echo Counters. Every set needs a weakness. After all, a 'Spell Counter' Deck can be very powerful, but has a severe strength and weakness in "Magical Citadel". If your opponent cannot stop your Echo Counter gain, then the set is broken, because it has no weakness.

 

And this set will have one. It's not as if I'm going to make it near impossible to beat. The cards only gain echos during your turn, and they can't activate echo effects during the opponent's turn. This leaves them vulnerable during the opponent's turn. Before you go all "attack negation" people run negation, and people run removal. It'll take around five or your turns to get the monsters, since these don't swarm, and another four to get all the counters you can. That's plenty off time to kill off the monsters, so this weakness is the speed it goes. It's not fast by any means, and most decks go much faster then this.

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@Max: Sorry if i was being a little harsh, I wasn't trying to be. But here is the Ice barrier card and a new one, if you would, please fix the effects, I'd appreciate it.

 

[spoiler=Trionac, Master of Brionac]

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2 "Ice Barrier" tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner "Ice Barrier" monsters. You can discard any number of cards to return the same number of cards from the field to the top of the owners deck + 1. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Ice Barrier" monster from your Graveyard. When This card is removed from the field, remove this card from play.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Accel monster -Drago Lady]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Synchro monsters you control as the same level of this card during either players turn from your hand or deck. The Special Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Special Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. When this card is Special Summoned, you can destroy all cards on the field, except this card and draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. When this card is destroyed, inflict 1500 damage to the owner of this card and 1000 to the owner of the card that destroyed this card.

 

 

@Anyone:

Well, hows everyones friday going for them, today?

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