Newb Defense League III [locked because remake]

[Max Darkness]

@ Anyone: One card for my FIRE Geminis, and one card to help Spirits (both a test to see if they're useable/balanced):

 

 

Effect: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. When a FIRE Gemini Monster you control is targeted by an opponent's Monster Card Effect: You can send this card (in your hand) to the Graveyard; Negate that effect, and it cannot be activated again while the targeted monster remains face-up on the field.

 

 

 

Effect: While you control a Spirit Monster: This card cannot be destroyed. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control no monsters: You can place 1 Level 4 or lower Spirit Monster on your side of the field (from your hand). If you place a monster with this card's effect: During your opponent's next Battle Phase; You can negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls.

[Tormented]

Ohai everyone I just came back to say this statement in the hopes that you would understand what I'm going through and why I'm not being able to get on so first things first I'm juggling with doing GFX for a few people who do YouTube and various other things and so juggling all of that as well as YCM, School Work and a Job is on the difficult side, but I do have some good news; seeing as my final School Term is nearly over so in theory I should be able to actually come back to YCM for a while before something pops up again because that's how my life works, but it is good news however.

 

Anyway I would like to say that I will be on all the time but that would just be physically and mentally impossible on my half so I will however come on when I find that I have the free time, So thanks for taking the time to read this and Hello once again :D

[WeebYGO]

I wasn't sure if i had to post this app here or in pm, so i will post it here sorry if it isn't supposed to be here.

Username: CharlesScene

 

Why you want to join:Well, im new to YCM so this club sounds perfect to me!

I like to create cards alot, and im willing to help other people with balancing their cards. (which im already trying to do.)

Yeah, thats basically the reason.

 

Favorite Card:Not sure if you guys mean a custom card or a normal yu-gi-oh card?

Well, in real yu-gi-oh i think its Stealth Bird, simply because i used the card in all my burn decks, and the amount of damage it did was amazing, the average damage was 4k per stealth bird.

For custom cards,i would choose my

[spoiler=Ninja Beast]

 

 

 

Do you play the game in real life:Not really, since i dont have the money. Used to play back when synchro's were a couple months old, and played a time when elemental heroes were just new.

 

 

How you were referred to the club:I saw the name of this topic and thought it was some kind of game xD

[Tormented]

I wasn't sure if i had to post this app here or in pm, so i will post it here sorry if it isn't supposed to be here.

 

I'm not sure if I'm still qualified to accept apps, but if I am welcome to NDL.

[WeebYGO]

I'm not sure if I'm still qualified to accept apps, but if I am welcome to NDL.

You are in the list of moderators, so i think you posses that might :P

Thanks.

Im planning on making a new roleplay currently, but for my idea i must make alot of custom cards(gonna be focused around a card i call Speed World 4, which even controls the effect monsters),and im talking about 100ths of cards. Its basically gonna be a duel academy, but it focusses on cardgames in cars. So yeah, gonna be very busy with that XD

Also, if you guys want to see my first realist set( which isn't finished, but i tried to make it good though) check my signature soon.

[Tormented]

Sounds good from where i'm standing; so it's like a transformers kind of type card game? XD

[WeebYGO]

Sounds good from where i'm standing; so it's like a transformers kind of type card game? XD

More like season 1 combined with 5d's.

It will focus alot more on actually battle between monsters, instead of getting 1 op card on the field and instant win in like 2 turns XD

also, when summoning a lvl 4 monster, you need to pay 4 speed counters for example, and when you reach 0 counters you lose the duel, so you must make good choices too :P

gonna make some more cards soon and then i'll post the worked out idea on the ooc section, together with like 150 cards or something XD

I hope it won't die before my roleplay even starts though XD

[Tormented]

Alas, if you hope for something It can come true, I guess you just need to stay true to yourself and it can't go wrong,

[WeebYGO]

Alas, if you hope for something It can come true, I guess you just need to stay true to yourself and it can't go wrong,

Also, could you check the link in my signature and tell me if the cards are any good?

[Tormented]

I'll do it when I'm free, a bit busy atm sorry for the inconvenience.

[WeebYGO]

I'll do it when I'm free, a bit busy atm sorry for the inconvenience.

Thanks in advance, i didn't even get a serious review in like 4 days, so i would like to know where i can improve etc.

Also, gonna start watching Yu-Gi-Oh 5D tonight, because i think its awesome judging from the games. The japanese spoken english subbed version ofcourse.

[Master White]

Hi charleschene, welcome....hope you are enjoying this place.....

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@Anyone who can give good long constructive criticism would be appreciative....No effect fixes, really don't care much anymore....

 

[spoiler=Cards]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My theory behind it is that pretty much you can't use its effect unless you Attach Summon it. In the 2 monsters above, I wanted to make it that you can't summon except by Attach Summon. Attach Summon falls under Special Summon, so it don't avoid those cards, i believe. And there will be many more cards that aid this archetype, I just need to find silver creatures with wings or lightning floating around its body.....They are Silverwing monsters, they rapidly Summon themselves to steal other creatures effect, but drawback is needing cards in the hand and/or being summoned via card effect. Some of them will have effects, but gain even more if Attach Summoned.

 

So, before I continue, are the cards op'd, up'd, and etc? And yes, I need tweakin' on the lores, just not very good but its still pretty understandable.....Silverwings are pretty much closely related to Xyz's, except they rely on other cards instead of having an rule saying how to Summon them....

 

You could say these monsters are an relation to Rituals for Summoning, Relations to Xyz's for Summoning, and Blackwings for Special Summoning themselves....

[WeebYGO]

Hi charleschene, welcome....hope you are enjoying this place.....

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@Anyone who can give good long constructive criticism would be appreciative....No effect fixes, really don't care much anymore....

 

[spoiler=Cards]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My theory behind it is that pretty much you can't use its effect unless you Attach Summon it. In the 2 monsters above, I wanted to make it that you can't summon except by Attach Summon. Attach Summon falls under Special Summon, so it don't avoid those cards, i believe. And there will be many more cards that aid this archetype, I just need to find silver creatures with wings or lightning floating around its body.....They are Silverwing monsters, they rapidly Summon themselves to steal other creatures effect, but drawback is needing cards in the hand and/or being summoned via card effect. Some of them will have effects, but gain even more if Attach Summoned.

 

So, before I continue, are the cards op'd, up'd, and etc? And yes, I need tweakin' on the lores, just not very good but its still pretty understandable.....Silverwings are pretty much closely related to Xyz's, except they rely on other cards instead of having an rule saying how to Summon them....

 

You could say these monsters are an relation to Rituals for Summoning, Relations to Xyz's for Summoning, and Blackwings for Special Summoning themselves....

Thank you.

Welll, i would like to give my opinion, but i don't understand it tbh.

for example, the silverwing Lightning.

When a card is attached summoned, is it attached to another card, i don't understand that.

If you actually attach them, lightining's effect forces him to be attached to a 2k or higher atk monster.

And yeah, the last effect is still unclear too imo.

[Master White]

@charlesschene: Umm, no forcing, in order to attach summon, you either need the 2 spell cards which are created or the other cards that allow you to attach summon.

 

apparently you are not familiar with Xyz's, which is fine, heres the link.

and for rituals, here is the link:

read those 2 and then you may be able to understand how these work, as though they are not Xyz's or Rituals, they are more inbetween the 2.

 

Example: Lightning attachment effect activates, select the card in your hand and the 1 or more cards on the field whose total levels combined equal lets say thunder theif, so 2 level 2 monsters, or 4 level 1 monsters, or 1 level 1 monster + 1 level 3 monster or etc, and the card in the hand is Special Summoned to the field and the cards on the field are attached to it, are underlayed beneath just like an Xyz. its confusing as attach cards are not considered to be on the field afterword, yet Dark hole destroys all cards, even them....And they aren't like union monsters, as those would be equipped taking up an card zone, attached cards do not....

 

If I need to, I might just make it a whole new monster, but I know I won't, and MAx will understand this and I hope will give critique as soon as he can, same with the rest of you all if you want, you don't have to...

 

Umm, I'm not positive on lightnings effect, I'd believe your right, but I'm not certain, but I'll find out.

[WeebYGO]

@charlesschene: Umm, no forcing, in order to attach summon, you either need the 2 spell cards which are created or the other cards that allow you to attach summon.

 

apparently you are not familiar with Xyz's, which is fine, heres the link.

and for rituals, here is the link:

read those 2 and then you may be able to understand how these work, as though they are not Xyz's or Rituals, they are more inbetween the 2.

 

Example: Lightning attachment effect activates, select the card in your hand and the 1 or more cards on the field whose total levels combined equal lets say thunder theif, so 2 level 2 monsters, or 4 level 1 monsters, or 1 level 1 monster + 1 level 3 monster or etc, and the card in the hand is Special Summoned to the field and the cards on the field are attached to it, are underlayed beneath just like an Xyz. its confusing as attach cards are not considered to be on the field afterword, yet Dark hole destroys all cards, even them....And they aren't like union monsters, as those would be equipped taking up an card zone, attached cards do not....

 

If I need to, I might just make it a whole new monster, but I know I won't, and MAx will understand this and I hope will give critique as soon as he can, same with the rest of you all if you want, you don't have to...

 

Umm, I'm not positive on lightnings effect, I'd believe your right, but I'm not certain, but I'll find out.

Ah yes, the XYZ monsters... i always thought yu-gi-oh was getting better and better, synchro's were really bad for the game imo, but i think these XYZ monsters just totally ruined it.

Say goodbye to almost all stall burn decks.

But anyways, now it makes sense to me yeah.

Imo the summon requirements are kinda high, and lightnings effect is really situational so i don't know, maybe force it to flip all cards face-up ignoring their effects first or something?

The other cards are probably balanced, never played against XYZ so i can't really judge.

[Master White]

Ah, yea, a few might be underpowered, but whats better then having weak cards climb with other cards aiding it to destroy 1 or more superly duperly bad card. And when I continue, these cards are going to look pretty much been either left behind or to strong to kill....

 

Stall burn deck? Wouldn't you rather face on either stalling or just on burning then both, as stalling burn is really not a great build, trust me, I went there and done that. and stall decks need a winning way, final countdown or dsestiny board or etc. But anyhow, I got to go to work, soo toodles......And yea, they are probably underpowered, I usually don't make cards op'd on purpose....

[WeebYGO]

Ah, yea, a few might be underpowered, but whats better then having weak cards climb with other cards aiding it to destroy 1 or more superly duperly bad card. And when I continue, these cards are going to look pretty much been either left behind or to strong to kill....

 

Stall burn deck? Wouldn't you rather face on either stalling or just on burning then both, as stalling burn is really not a great build, trust me, I went there and done that. and stall decks need a winning way, final countdown or dsestiny board or etc. But anyhow, I got to go to work, soo toodles......And yea, they are probably underpowered, I usually don't make cards op'd on purpose....

Mweh, its not really stall burn, more normal burn, but i call it stall because there is also OTK burn.

But yeah, stealth bird, des koala, secret barrel and stuff together with messenger,level limit, gravity worked good, but most of these don't work against XYZ monsters making it even harder for these decks.

 

Also,i know that problem too, everybody calls a card i made underpowered, but it basically can deal 4k damage and cant be countered with effects, but it destroys your field if you cant remove from play 10 cards from your grave, so its kinda balanced imo.

[Master White]

@Charle: Gotcha, hope you don't mind me calling you charle, if you do, I apologise in advance.....Anyhow, other then effects, should I continue it? If so, I could use help finding pics. Lightning Fish, Lightning Cat, Lightning Dragon, all these animals and more with any color lightning surrounding it.

[WeebYGO]

@Charle: Gotcha, hope you don't mind me calling you charle, if you do, I apologise in advance.....Anyhow, other then effects, should I continue it? If so, I could use help finding pics. Lightning Fish, Lightning Cat, Lightning Dragon, all these animals and more with any color lightning surrounding it.

Its fine.

Well, it sounds original to say at least, so sure, continue it!

Well, i can't help you there, you can try to draw some thunder on the cards yourself or something

[Max Darkness]

@ Skylie: What I don't understand is how you're meant to attach one card to two monsters. Do they share the attached monster? If so, if one uses the attached card or leaves the field, do they both loose it, or is it transferred to the other?

 

http://tbib.org//images/1598/f622febdaea9329f9bf2e3d1ea0e4873fb38e29a.jpg?2111776

 

^ Something you might be able to use...maybe as a boss.

 

 

 

@ CharlesScene: I'll have a look in a bit.

[Tormented]

Never Fear! the Image finding King is here; Skylie you do remember that I can help you in anyway shape or form? hell I could even make you your own custom image if you wanted :D

 

Just let me know what you want done and we can work from there :3

[Master White]

@Max: Meh, I think I wrote lightning Attachments effect wrong. Basically, Attach Summon is a Special Summon conducted by Summoning a monster in your hand, lets say level 4, and then attaching 1 or more cards whose total levels equal the level 4 monster on the field. Reverse ritual with Xyz mechanics pretty much.So, instead of 2 level 2 monsters, or 3 level 3 monsters and an Rank, its an Level Version of an Xyz Monster, so you need 1 level 3 + 1 level 1 monster on the field to Attach Summon the card in your hand if its level 4. So, all rules apply the same as an Xyz Monster, except its level and the condition are different. Maybe an picture will help you, and I know how to do it....

 

@Tormented: Lovely, even though I have gimp, it don't help much when finding pictures, only editing them to a point. SO, if you can and will and be lovely helpful, I'd appreciate.....

 

Fish

Bear

Eagle

Owl

A small little kitty, like rescue cat, except lightning floating round.

Ogre

mermaid

human

 

 

WIth all those above, except if you can, find lightning floating around all of them, so like a lightning tiger, which I found.....

If you need to, you can find them as renders without white, I can always add the rest.....especially when I know how to get lightning.

[Tormented]

Will try my best my love; I'll see what I can do after work, see y'all later.

[WeebYGO]

I think im gonna change my ninja deck into a fusion-type deck, and i will change most of the effects when i do it.

[Max Darkness]

@Max: Meh, I think I wrote lightning Attachments effect wrong. Basically, Attach Summon is a Special Summon conducted by Summoning a monster in your hand, lets say level 4, and then attaching 1 or more cards whose total levels equal the level 4 monster on the field. Reverse ritual with Xyz mechanics pretty much.So, instead of 2 level 2 monsters, or 3 level 3 monsters and an Rank, its an Level Version of an Xyz Monster, so you need 1 level 3 + 1 level 1 monster on the field to Attach Summon the card in your hand if its level 4. So, all rules apply the same as an Xyz Monster, except its level and the condition are different. Maybe an picture will help you, and I know how to do it....

 

So if I understand correctly, the effect is more akin to this:

 

'Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by attaching 1 or more monsters you control whose total Level(s) equal 10, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.'

 

If so, look at the "Neptunian Princess" card in my sig for another way of wording such an effect.