Newb Defense League III [locked because remake]

[Max Darkness]

Np.

Also I changed my avi/subtextthingy, how does it look?

 

Avi looks like something I wrench a card out of, so it's good. And the subtext/message reminds me of a Taoist principle for some reason. ("To return to the beginning, you must not be the light or the darkness, but the two together")

[Lexadin]

Avi looks like something I wrench a card out of, so it's good. And the subtext/message reminds me of a Taoist principle for some reason. ("To return to the beginning, you must not be the light or the darkness, but the two together")

 

It's from a series I'm watching (Alexander of Macedonia from Fate Zero), the text is one of his quotes. He was my fav character, but last epp he died D:

[Max Darkness]

It's from a series I'm watching (Alexander of Macedonia from Fate Zero), the text is one of his quotes. He was my fav character, but last epp he died D:

 

(Why couldn't they just call him 'Alexander the Great'...?)

 

It's always the way that the most popular characters turn out to be the ones the writers don't want you to remember.

[Lexadin]

(Why couldn't they just call him 'Alexander the Great'...?)

It's always the way that the most popular characters turn out to be the ones the writers don't want you to remember.

 

Actually that's just how I call him. He's actually know in the series as either Rider (too long to explain, plz, wiki summerise it or something) or Isklander.

 

Actually he died (presumably) near the end of the series. And was one of the few people the main villian respected (he does not do that very often). So I doubt the writers didn't want the watchers to remember him.

[Max Darkness]

Actually that's just how I call him. He's actually know in the series as either Rider (too long to explain, plz, wiki summerise it or something) or Isklander.

 

Actually he died (presumably) near the end of the series. And was one of the few people the main villian respected (he does not do that very often). So I doubt the writers didn't want the watchers to remember him.

 

Well, if he hasn't died on-screen, there's half a chance he'll reappear next series.

[Lexadin]

Well, if he hasn't died on-screen, there's half a chance he'll reappear next series.

 

His body was pierced by a lance, and then his body returned to the spirit world. I'm pretty shure he's dead. Beside, Fate Zero is a prequel of Fate/Night Stay (a better prequel by that) a serie that has been out there for a while. And he didn't appear in that one, so yeah.

[Max Darkness]

His body was pierced by a lance, and then his body returned to the spirit world. I'm pretty shure he's dead. Beside, Fate Zero is a prequel of Fate/Night Stay (a better prequel by that) a serie that has been out there for a while. And he didn't appear in that one, so yeah.

 

Well, Qui-Gon Jinn turned up in Star Wars: Episode 3, so...

[Lexadin]

Well, Qui-Gon Jinn turned up in Star Wars: Episode 3, so...

 

If you know the series, you'd know that the chance of him coming back is impossible.

[Max Darkness]

If you know the series, you'd know that the chance of him coming back is impossible.

 

Okay, okay.

 

I'll go back to updating my Geminis.

 

 

EDIT: Trying out a selection of ideas here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/284589-hylonome-a-gemini-xyz/

[Lexadin]

Okay, okay.

I'll go back to updating my Geminis.

EDIT: Trying out a selection of ideas here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/284589-hylonome-a-gemini-xyz/

 

My principles stop me from commenting on an Xyz, so I can't help yah there.

[Max Darkness]

My principles stop me from commenting on an Xyz, so I can't help yah there.

 

I know.

 

I managed to pull a "Scrap Archfiend" the other day, a card that has taken far too long to get hold of.

 

Also, how powerful do you think the general 'That target loses its effect' effect is?

[Master White]

@Lex: I'd have to hit myself if I wathed twilight and liked it. My dad had to wonder why I hated the show when I never even watched it and I predicted all of it before I even watched it and knew how dumb it was. Can't believe people watch it. One movie series where I'll have to say I'll never watch unless its to get a girl. Because all the girls I know of fall in love with it and so, best pick-up girl movie out there......lol.....That and spongebob squarenuts..... And according to a scientist, humans are meant to run up to 35-40 mph in theory but hasn't been accomplished yet. of course Usain Bolt almost ran 28 mph, which is unbelievable fast. Imagine how it would feel if you tripped. But your proly right, besides I need to work out anyhow, get rid of this fat. I just need to stop being lazy. Which for me is hard, ugh,...But I walk way differently to apparently according to my dad, which I really don't care, he claims I walk like a duck. I told him its all in his head....When I really run though, I surprise all the people at my house, because I normally don't. My dad took off ahead of me and I knew he wasn't going to close the gate in time, so I took off my weighted clothes and ran. Beat him to the gate and got it closed before the cow got away, and the distance was 200 yds I think. Not long but long enough.

@

Max: How's life for ya, hope its going good in that area and hope you are having fun while working. Nothing like a job you can't wait to get done.....lol.....Anywhoo, you have any new goals?

Meh, I might get back to making cards, but its going to be End Control deck per say.

[Max Darkness]

@ Max: How's life for ya, hope its going good in that area and hope you are having fun while working. Nothing like a job you can't wait to get done.....lol.....Anywhoo, you have any new goals?

Meh, I might get back to making cards, but its going to be End Control deck per say.

 

Things are alright at the moment. My contract runs out at the end of the month so I'm going back to looking for work. (I suppose that's my goal: Get a summer job)

[Master White]

You an I are in the same boat. I'm tired of working on the Ranch/Farm, but no other job seems suited with my problems. I like a work schedule of what times to show up and leave, and for lunch times. Then within those hours I wouldn't care what goes on as I normally don't like routine, and must finish one project instead of moving on. The only other thing is that I'm slow. It'd takes RJ 10 minutes to do something and it'd take me 20, as my brain don't move fast and I'm just born slow....Ironic I want to run fast....lol....and the only other problem is I'm trying to find a job I would like to do and be happy to show up to work, but not sure what yet....I did find greenhouse work enjoying when I did that for a while, but its hard to find those jobs as they are Seasonal.

[Max Darkness]

You an I are in the same boat. I'm tired of working on the Ranch/Farm, but no other job seems suited with my problems. I like a work schedule of what times to show up and leave, and for lunch times. Then within those hours I wouldn't care what goes on as I normally don't like routine, and must finish one project instead of moving on. The only other thing is that I'm slow. It'd takes RJ 10 minutes to do something and it'd take me 20, as my brain don't move fast and I'm just born slow....Ironic I want to run fast....lol....and the only other problem is I'm trying to find a job I would like to do and be happy to show up to work, but not sure what yet....I did find greenhouse work enjoying when I did that for a while, but its hard to find those jobs as they are Seasonal.

 

Well, with summer coming up, there should be more plant-based jobs right? Either that or working in a shop. The job I've got now is just a paycheck to me.

 

(And in case you missed it: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/284589-hylonome-a-gemini-xyz/)

[Master White]

[spoiler=Normal Talk]

True Max, but I eat about 800 dollars a month, yes I need to eat less, and closest greenhouse in in town and if I went back, i'd have to move out the house and get my home, and rent is about 500 dollars a month minus utilities and water, and I'd only get paid 8 dollars an hour mon-fri work time. 8 am to 6 pm minus lunch hour as I'm not working that time. And any other green houses other then Jordan offer more starting wage but are also 500+ miles away.

 

Also, can someone point me to new ocg as I have lost what I knew about it. It'd be very appreciative.

 

@Anyone wanting to listen:

Anyhow, tried to finsih mowing the lawn until I hit a rock big enough to wipe something out yet I still didn't see it for absolute no reason, then again I'm color blind to brown, like parts. I can see brown, but within brown I can see green. But I see green in a lot of colors where they don't belong, which makes me think I'm shade blind. Can't see anything within 2 colors that are merging together. So, don't dress in all black and hop in grass, chances are if I'm around I might run you ever more then once unless I hear screaming.....lol;

 

Also, one other thing, If you ended up dying, not trying to be mean, how would you want your body rested?

 

Me, to put in a giant magnifying glass whare you could see my bare naked body from space by getting launched up there and to orbit around earth. Yes, I'm cruel....At least everyone would have something to remember by.....

 

I also got up to 18 mph running speed today, was clocked by a four wheeler speed...I want to someday run as fast as my four wheeler goes, 40 mph, unless on a good day, then 50. I don't know the km/hr conversion, sorry.

 

But its improbably to run 35-40 mph hour right now as apparently our feet don't stay on the ground long enough, wierd, but thats the scientists exact words on runners world magazine....

 

 

 

[spoiler=Wirtten Cards Help and Effect Fix Help Please]

 

Anyhow, Seattelite help create this effect that applies to what it applies to.

 

This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by an card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

Meaning nothing can use it except for a level 1 monster was the goal. Not even for a Summon. And lot of these cards ahead will have this condition:

 

I'd like effect fixes and advice whter its op'd or up'd, don't change the effects; just fix them and tell me if they are op'd, I'd really appreciate it. I'll take in consideration how to lower the op'dness or make them stronger.

 

[spoiler=Cards]

Level: 1

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 0/0

Lore:

When this card is drawn: Skip your opponents next Battle Phase. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 100/100

Lore: When this card is Summoned: Destroy 1 card or skip your or your opponent’s next battle phase. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 100/100

Lore: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: End the Battle Phase; Increase your Life Points by 500. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

 

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 100/100

Lore: Once per duel: Destroy 1 card or skip your opponents next Battle Phase. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 100/100

Lore: When this card switches control: Your opponent destroys 1 card and you gain 1500 Life Points. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 monster.

 

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Xyz

ATK/DEF: 100/100

Lore: 2 Level 1 Beast-type Monsters.

Once per turn, increase your Life Points by 200 for every level 1 monster in your Graveyard. Detach 1 card: During your opponents next Battle Phase; End it. When this card has no Xyz Material Cards, destroy all cards in your opponents hand. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 or Rank 1 monsters.

 

 

Level 1:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Xyz

ATK/DEF: 500/1000

Lore: 5 Level 1 Beast-type Monsters.

You cannot summon this unless you use the above listed materials with at least 1 level 1 Xyz Material. Detach 1 Card: Once per turn; return up to 2 cards in your opponents hand or field to bottom of their Deck and increase this cards ATK by the amount of cards returned by this effect by 1000. When this card has no Xyz Material Cards, send it to the Graveyard face-down. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 1 or Rank 1 monsters.

 

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Spell/Continous

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

During each of your Battle Phases, you destroy 1 card you control or in your hand; End the Battle Phase.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Trap/Continous

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

During each of your Battle Phases, you can return 1 card you control to your hand; End the Battle Phase.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Spell/Quickplay

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

When your opponent attacks an level 1 monster you control: Return the attacking monster to their hand and increase their Life Points by 500.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Spell/Quickplay

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

End the Battle Phase: Destroy 1 card you control.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Trap/Normal

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

All level 1 monsters you control gain 100 ATK for each level 1 monster in your graveyard until the End Phase.

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 1200/1000

Lore: When this card is Summoned: Add 1 spell or trap card from your deck to your Hand. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 4 monster.

 

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 1000/1000

Lore: When this card is destroyed: Return 1 spell or trap card from your opponents hand to their Deck. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 4 monster.

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 1000/1000

Lore: When this card is attacked and your opponent inflicted Battle Damage to your Life Points: Return 1 spell or trap card from your opponents field to their Deck. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect, except from a Level 4 monster."

 

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 800/800

Lore: When this card is Summoned: Increase your Life Points by 500.

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Earth

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 800/800

Lore: When this card is Destroyed: End the Battle Phase. This card cannot be used for an Xyz or Synchro Material monster.

 

Level 4:

Attribute: Wind

Type: Beast/Effect

ATK/DEF: 0/0

Lore: While this card remains on the field, neither player can enter their Battle Phase. This card cannot be used for an Xyz, Synchro, or amy effect or Normal monster except for an level 8.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Trap/Continous

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

While this card remains on the field: All level 1 or 4 or 8 monsters or Spell and Trap cards cannot be selected as an target. If this card remains on the field for more then 6 turns, destroy it and inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points.

 

Level 10:

Attribute: Wind

Type: Beast/Effect/Tuner

ATK/DEF: 1200/1000

Lore: Cannot be Special Summoned. You must Tribute 3 level 4 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and the effects of other cards cannot be activated. Twice per turn; you can enter your next Battle Phase twice. Once per turn: During either player’s turn; End the Battle Phase. If this card was Normal Summoned: If this card is removed from the field; Inflict 2000 Damage to your Life Points. This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by a card effect, except from a Level 10 monster.

 

Level: N/A

Attribute: N/A

Type: Trap/Continous

ATK/DEF: N/A

Lore:

This card can only be activated by having at least 10 level 1 cards in your Graveyard.

If you have 5 level 1 beast-type monsters on the field with this condition, “This card cannot be used for the summon/set of a monster or the cost of an effect or be Summoned by an card effect, except from a Level 1 monster”, you win the duel.

 

 

 

 

Well, if you don't want to, its fine, just thought I might ask.

Last card is suppose to be the win condition card as its pretty hard to pull off Sense the 5 cards with the effect can't even be Summoned by Special Summoning, and you have to Summon them all on the field. Once they are put in your hand that is.

 

 

[Lexadin]

I know.

I managed to pull a "Scrap Archfiend" the other day, a card that has taken far too long to get hold of.

Also, how powerful do you think the general 'That target loses its effect' effect is?

 

You mean as in 'One monsters effect is negated.' Then I gues rather powerful. If you mean your Gemini's are treated as Normal Monsters again, then I'd say not too powerfull.

 

@Lex: I'd have to hit myself if I wathed twilight and liked it. My dad had to wonder why I hated the show when I never even watched it and I predicted all of it before I even watched it and knew how dumb it was. Can't believe people watch it. One movie series where I'll have to say I'll never watch unless its to get a girl. Because all the girls I know of fall in love with it and so, best pick-up girl movie out there......lol.....That and spongebob squarenuts..... And according to a scientist, humans are meant to run up to 35-40 mph in theory but hasn't been accomplished yet. of course Usain Bolt almost ran 28 mph, which is unbelievable fast. Imagine how it would feel if you tripped. But your proly right, besides I need to work out anyhow, get rid of this fat. I just need to stop being lazy. Which for me is hard, ugh,...But I walk way differently to apparently according to my dad, which I really don't care, he claims I walk like a duck. I told him its all in his head....When I really run though, I surprise all the people at my house, because I normally don't. My dad took off ahead of me and I knew he wasn't going to close the gate in time, so I took off my weighted clothes and ran. Beat him to the gate and got it closed before the cow got away, and the distance was 200 yds I think. Not long but long enough.

 

That's indeed one of the more legit reasons for someone to watch it.

That's probebly out max. speed then as I don't see any reasons to ever run that fast (still nothing compared to the animal kingdom though).

Better then walking like a penguin, but not being able to run that fast is a feature many contortionists share. But as I might've said before, fat won't be burned off if you run, as running uses carbohydrates as fuel (considerin they need quick energy while running and carbo's are more easily turned into energy then fat). So you should be better off walking instead of running if you want to lose weight (building muscles will let you gain wait as muscles are heavier then fat).

 

Yeah, my father is a sporting/training fanatic, so I do know a lot about these things.

[Master White]

@Lexadin: Yea, i know walking is better, but I want to run as fast as possible while having big muscles to see if I can, so you did help me learn something I need to do, thanks....Hippotamus I heard could run 50 mph on a good day and yet they are made of pure muscle, plus they do use all fours, but so what. Oh well, I've been getting faster, and apparently an hour before running, eating peanut butter jelly sandwiches actually is helping.

 

Well, I hope all is going well where you live to and hope your goals are working out to for ya, but I gotta get going to work; so see ya all later.....

 

For me, I've been in love with speed, I really wish I could fly an F22, but that wont happen, even if I did get into the airforce, it would not happen of my physical stature of being to tall apparently, whe I'm 5' 7 1/2" tall. lol. So, running I decided to settle on as, my dad knows, any movie I watch is either gonna have action or some sort of thing moving extremely fast.

[Lexadin]

Acually Hippo's still have quite some fat on thier bodies. And red sweat!

 

Since I put up my Mosquito net around my bed, I've finally been able to sleep properly, so I'm doing great.

 

Wait, 5'7" is too high for running? Tell that to the Masaï.

[Max Darkness]

@ Skylie: Your OCG fix:

 

This card cannot be applied for other cards, except Level 1 monsters.

 

 

@ Anyone: Another odd effect I'm trying, mainly because I'm trying to steer away from effect-based destruction:

 

 

Effect: Equip only to a Gemini Monster. When your opponent's monster is applied for an effect that prevents it from being destroyed by battle: You can send this face-up to the Graveyard; That effect is negated. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by a Gemini Monster's effect: Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; Your opponent loses Life Points equal to half that monster's ATK or original ATK, whichever is higher.

[Lexadin]

@Max: So does the effect only work on things like 'No. 09' or does it also work on things like 'Marshmellon'?

[Max Darkness]

@Max: So does the effect only work on things like 'No. 09' or does it also work on things like 'Marshmellon'?

 

Both. Whenever a card has '...cannot be destroyed by battle...' in its effect, this can negate it.

 

I'm also thinking of making it a continuous effect (as in, not needing to send itself as a cost). Maybe only while it's equipped to a Level 5 or higher monster?

[Lexadin]

Both. Whenever a card has '...cannot be destroyed by battle...' in its effect, this can negate it.

I'm also thinking of making it a continuous effect (as in, not needing to send itself as a cost). Maybe only while it's equipped to a Level 5 or higher monster?

 

Continuous eff sounds ballanced enough on itself, no nerving required there. Considering it only works on Gemini's and 'indestructable' monsters aren't all that common. So it'll probebly be used for it's 2nd eff.

[Max Darkness]

Continuous eff sounds ballanced enough on itself, no nerving required there. Considering it only works on Gemini's and 'indestructable' monsters aren't all that common. So it'll probebly be used for it's 2nd eff.

 

That's good. I'll reword it somewhat. And is a counterpart to "Earthbound Revival" a good idea?

 

 

 

Effect: Send 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard: Target, in your Graveyard, 1 FIRE Gemini Monster, and 1 Spell or Trap Card that can be equipped to a Gemini Monster while face-up on the field; Add those targets to your hand.

[Lexadin]

It's a +0, so it should be good. Though I'm not shure if it's OP or not.