Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 HOPE YOU LIKE THE SET SO FAR. PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL ME HOW I CAN MAKE THEM BETTER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YC developer Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Nice Cards Good pics 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Why did u make a new thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 because the other one was in the wrong section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 u could of just got frunk to move it ^_^ instead of locking it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Updated. please rateadded 13-17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dim Sim Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Awsome 8/10 still ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ean98 Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Cool nukyasu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villojody R. Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ean98 Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Well, ive posted the last cards of tonight so i hope you enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaden Yuki Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 nice the effects match their powers in anime and you can make super sayan goku 1, 2, 3, and 4.so far 9/10 and misspelled Future trunks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 i will. im doing them and then all they're transformations Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villojody R. Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 And some of them because of me!\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 yes. well not because of you, you gave me some effects. Updating the set ID. accidentaly stuffed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villojody R. Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 It's Nicer now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 realy like them:D:D:D ... budokay tenkaichi images right ... 8/10... make more..make the ssj forms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Hello, they are ok cards i sorta like them and ok pics good OCG ang grammar. 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsoldier Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Pretty good cards. Not the best grammar in the world. The pics are quite nice, I like the idea of using screenshots from the games. I'm guessing these pics are BT3. Some of the effects are worded improperly. Overall, nice cards. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 9, 2008 Report Share Posted January 9, 2008 Um, these are ok but the grammar is bad.6/10Sry to end the streak =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 :x anyway, i updated with 3 more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Uhhhhhh. The OCG and pics are pretty bad. The grammar is flawed too. 5/10. Sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoyon91 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Okay, so yeah the grammar here is bad, I won't rate, but I will go through each card in order on what i think should be changed. I'm just putting it out there, you don't have to take the advice... *Goku-get rid of the first sentence, not only is it gramatically wrong, its redundant because of the second sentence *Vegeta-get rid of the first sentence, not only is it gramatically wrong, its redundant because of the second sentence *Nappa-This one's really a matter of your opinion, because yc cards just capitalize types in descriptions like LIGHT, but I prefer "Light." Either way, the way you have it now is fine if you like it. *Raditz- its spelled "successfully" *Tien- its spelled "successfully" *Piccolo- its spelled "opponent's" *Son Gohan- I don't know about this one, if you DO have a "Goten" in your hand, your opponent wouldn't know (or they're not supposed to) so you could easily get away with cheating unless it says something like "show your opponent your hand, if there is a 'Goten' in your hand..." That is, given you're basing this around how yc cards are normally played. *Teen Gohan- Same as above *Great Saiyaman- On the last line, this would sound a bit better: "The sum of the tributed cards' ATK and DEF become this card's ATK and DEF." Following the card's effect, the ATK & DEF should be ?'s *Trunks- First off, why is his ATK/? DEF/? ? His effect doesn't determine his ATK/DEF, so unless you plan on introducing another card to work in sync with this, I think they should be changed to ATK/0 DEF/0. Also, "...special summon "Vegeta" from your deck, graveyard, or hand."Or, if you mean this: "...special summon "Vegeta" from your deck or graveyard." *Kid Trunks- "...may send one card from your hand to the graveyard..." *Evil Vegeta- "If this card is destroyed, discard one card from your hand to special summon "Vegeta" from your hand. *Dodoria- "When this card is destroyed as a result of battle..." *Captain Ginyu- "either" replaces "eiter" and "your" replaces "our" *Jeice- "are" replaces "is" subject-verb agreement ftw! Also, for turn effects, I suggest something like: "...Life Points each standby phase." It makes things much clearer if you're going by yc cards. Thats all I really got to say. If you think this has been at all helpful, I'd gladly look at more of your cards. This is a cakewalk compared to correcting english essays ^^ lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 thankyou for this. ill make about 100 more. i need to :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoyon91 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 np, ill be rolling out with a few samples of my first cards (bleach set) in a few days, you better post :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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