~Umbreon~ Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Prolouge: The Krakens are a guild of pirates, sailing the Caribbean in the early ages. The Krakens are all family, the Fee family. The latest addition to the family, Kat, has brought curses to the family. They can sacrifice their relative for the good of others, or keep her, and live through many curses. In this book, Kat is forced to set sail and free her family. Chapter OneThe Curse Begins I was so young when my family wanted to kill me. I know my death would benefit for others, I didn't mind. The fact was I didn't get to live normally. I always lived, waiting for the day to come where everyone gathers around to hang me. Many things soar through my mind, every day I think, take me now, sea. I was born Friday, October 13. The unluckiest day of all. My father says everything will be alright, but I knew it wouldn't be. I was destroying my family. The first week of my life was the worst. My uncle had fallen off the side of a ship. He had been attacked by a shark, couldn't be saved. "Kat, it's time to pack up, we're sailing tonight, must get off this island." my father, Will, interrupted. I thought of what she must do on this. I must sail away from her family, hopefully taking the curse with her. I nodded as my father left. She immediately grabbed her crate of clothes and walked into the packed living room, many people were gathered. All had a look of fear on their face. A bad force was coming, one that was aiming for me. I looked down as she walked in, avoiding eye contact. I opened the door of the shack they lived in and walked onto the beach. "Where ye goin, Kat?" Grandpa Nelson asked. I looked back at her old grandpa. I am surprised he was still up for sailing. Kat thought about what to say. "Um, just packing my stuff in the dinghy." I said. Many "ahh" sounds filled the room. I closed the shack door and walked slowly towards the water. Crabs were rising on the beach. The tide must have pulled them in. I walked over the wet sand, my boot against the sand made a small squishing noise. I put the crate next to the dinghy. As I looked in the distance, I spotted my old light sloop, the Sea Explorer. I thought of an idea. I can leave right now, with nobody knowing. Away on my light sloop. Although I am eight, I got it when I was six, I never got to sail though. I just sat along the deck, watching the waves splash. The smell of sea mist was my favorite. I grabbed my crate and practically sprinted across the beach's wet sand. I looked around the Sea Explorer. Only one error, the cabin door was broken. Not a problem for sailing. I tossed the crate of clothes inside the Sea Explorer. I hopped over the edge. A small creaking sound awoke as I stepped on the board. I untied the rope holding me to the land. As I did, a sound erupted. The shack door was opening. My father was outside, looking for me. "Kat! Where are you?" He yelled. He looked in my direction, I know he saw the rope falling. He sprinted in my direction. I quickly let the masts fall. The light sloop was slowly taking off into the unknown. "Kat, you get off that ship this instant!" he had jumped into the water, swimming towards the Sea Explorer. I had a great twenty feet on him, I had reached five knots. My dad was swimming about four, he would never catch up. I suddenly felt a long pulling sensation. I looked back, the anchor was down. It was holding me back. My father was fifteen feet behind. I quickly pulled the rope that held the anchor. IF YOUR LIKE CRAB, YOU'D THINK IM AN IDIOT FOR STOPPING, GOTTA GET OFF THE COMPUTER, A TORNADO WARNING CAME UP ON THE TV, WILL FINISH CHAP AND MAYBE ANOTHER TOMORROW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Sounds more like a Prologue to me. But okay, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 I love how you wrote one paragraph and then got bored and stopped writing. That's some real quality there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 He said he would finish it later. You must be blind for not seeing it in CAPS at the bottom of the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 22, 2010 Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Doesn't matter whether he says he will finish it later or not; the fact remains that he started writing, stopped after one measly paragraph, and then decided to throw it up on the internet anyhow. There's obviously nothing here worth reading. He obviously didn't put any time or effort into this topic. He obviously doesn't care at all about this story or any potential readers he might have had if he had bothered to create anything to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted July 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2010 Dude I had to get off -_- I was in a rush so I wrote that last sentence and left... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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