bozataaaaa Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 IF YOU ARE NOT INTERESTED IN THE STORY JUST SKIP TO THE CARDS. Part Three of the cards I am making connected with Diablo 2. In this part the hero must collect Khalim's artefacts and combine them to form a Flail with which he smashed an orb that opens his way to reach Mephisto. Next will be Diablo the Lord of Terror and his Chaos Sanctuary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Some capitalization errors, the picture with the words in it needs editing, and the effects could be reworded a little. Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozataaaaa Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 thanks it's good to finally see a comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Well it is pretty cool bbut you have a couple of capatalizeation* errors as metioned by Glasstin10! 8/10*And i spelt that really big word wrong did'nt i, lol.^^^^^^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bozataaaaa Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 I know my English is bad but what can I do We Bulgarians are slackers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I few OCG and grammar errors again. Ok tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mysterious Dude Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 can anyone tell me how to put cards in a post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 There are some oCG errors and some other errors, but they're still good 7.8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mysterious Dude Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Awesome cards. here's my version of Mephisto.http://yugiohcardmaker.net/createcard.php?name=Mephisto&cardtype=Ritual&divine=true&effect=true&attribute=Fire&level=10&magictraptype=Equip&rarity=Ultimate Rare&picture=http://www.gondiaz.com/Phill_Blizzard/Diablo_Mephisto_001.jpg&set1=57839&set2=45789&type=&description=This%20card%20may%20only%20be%20summoned%20under%20the%20effects%20of%20%22Ritual%20of%20Hell%22.&circulation=&atk=4000&def=4500&creator=yugiohcomedy&year=2008&serial=11155230Sorry if nothing's there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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