PikMan Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 After my failed attempts at a Zelda/Avatar crossover, I decided to do just a plain ol' Zelda fanfic. Please critique! New chapter every Week! [spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Link]Age: 12Personality: Withdrawn and self-contained, but has a sense of justice.Appearance: Blonde hair, green tunic and green floppy cap, blue eyesBio: Link lives with Navi the fairy in Kokiri Woods. He is not only a natural at swordfighting, but is a musical prodigy. He is curious by nature, so he ends up getting into scrapes by sticking around too long. [spoiler=Navi]Species: FairyPersonality: Talkative and observant.Appearance: Blue orb with wingsBio: Navi is a fairy who is Link's best friend. The two rarely part company, and when they do, it's only about 3 minutes before that changes. That doesn't change the fact that she's been kidnapped by Ganondorf, though. [spoiler=Saria]Age: 11Personality: Loyal and passive.Appearance: Dark green hair, green shirt and shorts, green eyesBio: Saria is Link's best friend, besides Navi. Both of them live by themselves in Kokiri Forest. Secretly, Saria has a slight crush on Link. Unfortunately for her, she rarely leaves her home and as one of the consequences, can't swim. [spoiler=Raven]Age: 17Personality: Aggressive and arrogant.Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, dark blue cloakBio: Raven's parents were killed by Ganondorf (cliche, I know) and Raven set out for revenge, Inigo Montoya style. He's a swordfighting master, and challenges any sword wielders he can find in preparation for his confrontation. [spoiler=Zelda]Age: 12Personality: Compassionate and thoughtful.Appearance: Blonde hair, white and pink dress, blue eyes [spoiler=Ganondorf]Age: UnknownPersonality: Power-hungry and aggresive.Appearance: Dark skin, red hair, black armor, red eyes, jewel in his foreheadBio: Ganondorf was once a member of the Gerudo race, before he was exiled for attempting to take over the tribe. More on his backstory in later chapters. [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Search Begins]Link woke up with a severe case of bedhead. He put on his floppy green cap, and went outside his treehouse. There was Navi, hovering on the doorstep. "Link, you overslept again", the annoying fairy said. "You need to stop staying up late." "Sorry, Navi," Link said. Every morning, this same thing happened; Link would oversleep, and Navi would lecture Link. It was the natural order of things, it seemed. An order that was about to be disturbed. Link and Navi often went out in the forest, gathering Deku Nuts. Link had a bag full of them, as he loved traveling and Deku Nuts were known to paralyze creatures of the wild. He expected this trip to be the same, but found that there was a higher concentration of monsters. In fact, the whole forest looked a bit darker. Suddenly, a carnivorous plant rose out of the foliage; A Deku Baba, Link realized. He had read about them, but he had never seen any before in New Hyrule. They had been abundant in Old Hyrule, before it was flooded. Link was about to throw a Deku Nut at the plant, but Navi interrupted. "Link, it's a PLANT. It can't move." Shrugging, Link ran off. The Deku Baba severed itself from its vine and chased after it. This time, Link didn't hesitate to use the Deku Nut. "What's going on? There are monsters everywhere!" Navi said. Link nodded, saying "We should figure out what the heck's going on." As he said that, the two had ran into a clearing. "Maybe we should head back to the forest", Link suggested. "Um, Link..." Navi started to say. Link slowly looked behind him, and whipped around. They had been followed. There was a man clad in black armor riding a black armored horse. He had dark skin, red hair, and a jewel in his forehead. Link would've taken the time to figure out his identity, but he decided the best decision was escape. Navi agreed, and the two bolted. The man pulled out a sword and fired a blast of dark magic from its blade, knocking Link unconscious. When he awoke, Link was alone. Navi was nowhere to be seen. Link tried to get up, but staggered in pain. He felt a painful scar in his chest. Trying to ignore the pain, he went back to his treehouse. After bandaging his wound, he got his wooden shield out and began his search for Navi. "Where do you think you're going?" Said a voice. Link looked back, and saw standing there was Saria, his best friend besides Navi. "I was going to look for Navi. I think she's been kidnapped, and I'm going to look for her." Saria smiled slightly. "Follow me", she said. Rummaging through her belongings, Saria was looking for something. "Where is it", she muttered. "Oh wait, there it is!" Turning back to Link, she pulled out a small sword. Handing it to Link, she said, "It's dangerous to go alone. Take this." Link took it, and swund it around a little. "This sword is... Well, it's cool!" Link said. "Made it myself", Saria replied. "Listen, if you're going to search for Navi, be careful." "I will." With that, Link walked out and began his quest to find Navi. [spoiler=Chapter 2: A Legend Learned]The outskirts of the forest were more dangerous than Link expected. He had to deal with more dangerous creatures, not to mention that wound from earlier. But he pressed forward. Even though Navi had been kind of overly chatty, they had both been best friends. Link was distracted from his memories, when he saw a huge nut flying towards him. Thinking fast, he blocked it with his shield. But then another nut came. And another. Keeping his shield in front of him, Link went in the direction of the nuts to find a Big Deku Shrub. It spat another seed. Link defended, and the nut smacked the Deku Shrub in the face. The Deku Shrub fell underground. Then a ring of Deku Shrubs appeared around where the first had been. One word came easily to Link's mind: Run. And he did just that. After gaining enough distance, Link realized that he was standing on a small cliff. The cliff gave way, and Link tumbled down a steep hill. Upon picking himself up, he discovered that he stumbled upon an old sanctuary. Link stepped inside, and saw that there was someone in there. That person was a girl about his age. She had blond hair and a pink and white dress. Without looking, she said, "What do you want?" Link explained, "I don't know what I'm doing here. I was just out looking for something when I fell down this cliff. Who are you?" The girl got up and turned towards Link. "I am princess Zelda." Link was slightly embarrassed that he didn't recognize her, and had little to no idea what she would be doing out here in the forest, and he figured that the answer would be way over his head. But then he asked anyway. "I'll explain later." Zelda saw the Kokiri markings on Link's shield. "You were trying to find a fairy, weren't you?" Link nodded. She got up and walked toward Link. "I think that your fairy was kidnapped by Ganondorf." Link realized that the man in black was Ganondorf. Zelda continued. "He's been kidnapping a lot of fairies around Hyrule. He's planning to use their souls to give him enough power to take over Hyrule." "Is there any way to stop him?" Zelda looked around to make sure nobody was nearby. "Can you keep a secret?" Link nodded again. "OK, in Hyrule Castle, there is a secret chamber. When one obtains the seals of Forest, Fire, Water, Earth, and Wind, the chamber will be opened. The chamber contains a sword with magical powers, known as the Blade of Dimensions. Ganondorf is trying to steal it, but he cannot obtain the seals. Instead, he is trying to get the sword by force. If you get it first, you can use its power to send Ganondorf to the Mirror Dimension." Link had understood the conversation up to this point. "What's the Mirror Dimension?" "The Mirror Dimension is a world alongside ours where everything is twisted. All of its residents are opposite of their Light Dimension counterparts. The Blade of Dimensions is the only way to travel back and forth between them. "I think I understand." "If you're going to defeat Ganondorf, you'll need those 5 seals. And I know that you're capable of doing this." "Me? Why do you have so much faith in me?" Zelda glanced down at Link's left hand. Link looked and saw that his left hand had a marking that resembled the crest of Hyrule. "You were chosen by the sages to save us. That's what I was doing here- The sages told me you would be here." [spoiler=Chapter 3: The New Arrival]Walking away from the Sanctuary, Link realized that now he had 2 goals: To find/rescue Navi, and find the Elemental Seals. He knew that the Forest Seal would be, quite obviously, in Kokiri Forest. He would figure out the wherabouts of the other four as he went. But for now, Link would just have to stick with his immediate goal: Find the Forest Seal. Suddenly, Link felt a surging pain on his scar. Then, his mind completely blanked out.... Now I'm closer than ever. Soon both dimensions will be under control... "What was that all about?!" Link asked himself after regaining consciousness. He noticed that the pain had stopped. Getting to his feet, he decided that it would be best to find out after getting the seals. He wasn't very good at multitasking. Just then, Link heard snapping twigs behind him. He whipped around. There was nothing there. Cautiously, Link drew his sword. "Hey, aren't you a little young to be carrying a sword?" Link whipped around again, coming face to face with a young man (From the looks of it, roughly 16 years old) carrying a sword of his own. He had dirty blonde hair, wore a dark blue cloak, and had green eyes. "Well, you can't be THAT much older than me. What is it, sixteen?" "Seventeen, actually." "Eh, close enough." Link approached this mysterious person, gripping his sword tightly in his left hand. He wanted to find out who he was, and wanted to be prepared in case he wasn't on his side. "Don't tell me you actually want to FIGHT me!" What?! That's not what I was thinking, Link thought. I just wanted to know who the heck he was. Well, I've got myself into a fight, so I may as well. Holding his shield in his right hand, Link nodded. "All right. Gimme your best shot." Link struck with his sword, but his opponent blocked it. With one hand, Link observed. He slashed three more times, but they were all blocked. Link was beginning to get annoyed. "You're just messing with me, aren't you." "Nah, I just wan't you to feel like you're doing well. I hate it when people die embarrassed." Link looked around him. "There's nobody around," he observed. "I'm pretty sure that there are. Isn't that right, Fourth Wall?" Link rolled his eyes, then attacked again. And again. And again. His adversary blocked every slash. Normally, someone would've given up by now. But Link decided that he got himself into this mess, and he was gonna get himself out. "Yawn", his rival said. "This is getting boring. I'll just finish you off then." That said, he began to stab, but Link, in panic, held out his shield. The sword got stuck in the shield. Link, upon seeing this, threw his shield and the sword away from his astonished opponent. "You seem to be a worthy opponent", his rival decided. "My name's Raven." "I'm Link." Without warning, Raven reclaimed his sword and attacked Link. Link parried the attack effortlessly, immediately knocking the sword back, and slashed. "Link, I'm fighting you right now so I'll be prepared to kill someone I've been chasing for a long time," Raven explained. "I'm on someone's trail, too." Link thrust his sword. Raven blocked it, and suddenly their swords locked. "Wow, you're good at swordfighting for a 12-year old," Raven noted. "It's my first time, actually." It was then that Raven saw the symbol on Link's left hand. "Hey, isn't that the Triforce?" Link glanced at it. "I don't know. Is it?" "If it is, that's probably why you're so good." "Yeah, that's a good evaluation." Raven pulled back his sword, and sheathed it. "I think we might be on the same side. Are you looking for someone named Ganondorf, by any chance?" "Yeah. So I guess we could get along then." Link and Raven shook hands. [spoiler=Chapter 4: The Scar]Link explained what the heck happened to Raven. After Link finished explaining, Raven told Link his motives. "A couple of years back, my father was a merchant in Castle Town. He had in his possession, at the time, the five elemental seals. Ganondorf saw them and demanded them. Unfortunately, Ganondorf couldn't afford them, so he just went ahead and killed my father and took the seals." "So how did the seals get scattered then?" "I don't know, but we'll figure it out eventually." Link nodded. "So where should we start looking for the Forest Seal?" Raven asked. Link shrugged. "Do you have a map or something?" Raven held out a small piece of paper. "I accidentally dropped it in the river, so I only have a small piece of it." "Well, isn't that inconvenient", Link muttered. "Well, at least it shows Kokiri Forest." Suddenly, Link noticed something in the west side of the forest shown on the map. "Aren't those ruins?" Raven nodded. "It's the remains of the ancient Forest Temple." "Maybe we should look there." The two set out to find the Forest Temple. On the way there, Link's scar started burning again. Link collapsed. "Um, Link? Are you all right?" Link didn't answer. He just laid there. About half a minute later, he woke up. "What happened?" Raven asked. "Some time ago, Ganondorf hit me with Dark Magic, and it wounded me. The wound starts hurting every now and then, and every time it does, I end up getting a vision about someone trying to take over our dimension." Raven pondered this. "I know someone who can help you." The cave had a layer of water about 2 inches deep. Link cautiously walked in. Sensing Link's nervousness, Raven reassured him, "Don't worry. We're perfectly safe." Walking further into the cave, Raven called out, "Hello? Ritore, are you in here?" A figure in a black cloak emerged from the shadows. "Hey, Raven! Who's your friend?" "He's Link. Anyway, you still have any Blue Potion, Ritore?" Ritore nodded. She led the two into a part of the cave that was illuminated from a hole in the ground. Taking a closer look, Link saw that Ritore had light blue hair and brown eyes. Link explained his situation, and Ritore replied, "I can't stop the visions, but I can get rid of the pain." She pulled out a stone from the wall, and grabbed a bottle in it, handing it to Link. "There should be enough Blue Potion for 2 doses. Red Potion is pretty common, but it can only treat physical wounds. Blue Potion can cure anything. Word to the wise, though; It tastes disgusting." Link was already drinking it. Ritore facepalmed. After suddenly realizing how gross the potion was, Link shuddered, "That's not one of my better decisions." Ritore rolled her eyes. "I can also tell you a bit about those visions of yours." Link listened carefully. "Although", Ritore continued, "I'm not completely sure, but this is my guess. Ganondorf must have some sort of power taken from the Mirror Dimension. When one comes in contact with energy from both dimensions, they can communicate with the Mirror Dimension." Leaving the cave, Link told Raven "Ganondorf must have made it to the Mirror Dimension somehow if he got energy from it." "I agree, but we should find out later if that's true. Our first priority is to find the Forest Temple." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted July 16, 2010 Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Once upon a time, a man named Theodore Sturgeon observed that ninety percent of everything is trash. Nowhere is this more evident than in the world of Fan Fiction, where the majority of works are garbage, riddled with endless clichés, plot holes, and character derailments and totally lacking in any redeeming qualities. The remaining ten percent, however, is to die for, and occasionally there arises a tale that transcends the standard fare. These masterpieces rival or even surpass the original work itself in terms of quality. They feature original, clever, epic plots, with rounded and dynamic characters populating a well-developed world. The dialogue is realistic and enjoyable to read; when exposition is necessary, it is introduced at a sensible pace and keeps the reader immersed; the characters remain sensibly true to their canon characterizations and are not forced to act like idiots to develop the plot; and the overall experience is something that leaves the reader feeling simultaneously satisfied and hungry for more. And it goes without saying that these brilliant works are heavily proofread to ensure the eradication of any errors. This is not one of those stories. If you are a fan of quality fanfics but you are a foe of mediocre-to-bad fanfics, then you've come to the wrong place - because today is a day for Foe Fiction. Let's see if we can top yesterday's success with a fanfic for a fandom other than Yu-Gi-Oh! that I actually know well: The Legend of Zelda, or, more specifically from the looks of it, The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time. And I'm sure this will be a good story because it helpfully opens with a Chapter Characters to inform us who these weird obscure figures like Link and Zelda and Parakoopa are, and which do so in the most meticulous detail I've ever seen, like this brilliant deconstruction of Ganondorf's character: GanondorfAge: UnknownPersonality: Power-hungry and aggresive.Appearance: Dark skin, red hair, black armor, red eyes, jewel in his forehead With such an economical efficiency with words, our author, who has proven his good taste in writing by being a fan of Pichu's brilliant, scathing, and downright hilarious reviews, begins his epic tale of romance, adventure, suspense, horror, and glory. Chapter 1: The Search BeginsLink woke up with a severe case of bedhead. He put on his floppy green cap, and went outside his treehouse. There was Navi, hovering on the doorstep. Already, we see the beginnings of our author's brilliant prose. Through the employment of such flowery descriptions, intricate character motivations filled with subtleties, and complex sentence structures, PikMan paints a wonderful tapestry of beauty. And he wasn't even phased by the fact that you're not supposed to paint tapestries. "Link, you overslept again", the annoying fairy said. "You need to stop staying up late." Those of you who have played a decent amount of Ocarina of Time or who are familiar with the fandom will know that Navi is widely considered by players to be incredibly annoying. Our artist included a reference to Navi being annoying in-universe, even though she is never characterized as such, because only a true master shatters the fourth wall in the second paragraph to include a cheap rehash of an ancient meme of which everyone has grown sick by now. Sadly, the strain on even a master such as PikMan in creating such an immaculate reference was great, so such details as what a Kokiri child would be regularly staying up late doing are ignored. Fortunately, only philistines who care about nonsense like sensible world-building will actually mind such omissions. "Sorry, Navi," Link said. Every morning, this same thing happened; Link would oversleep, and Navi would lecture Link. It was the natural order of things, it seemed. For those of you bamboozled by the elegant diction of this passage, allow me to summarize the natural order of things: 1) Link sleeps in. 2) Navi hovers outside his house, waiting for him to wake up and come outside on his own. 3) Navi most emphatically does not wake Link up herself, as depicted in the opening cutscene of Ocarina of Time and as would appear on the surface to be the sensible course of action. Such changes are where the brilliance of our artist's innovations shine. An order that was about to be disturbed. The less intelligent members of our audience might well wonder why Navi and Link are together at all. After all, in canon, Link is the Boy Without A Fairy, and Navi is sent to join him only when the Deku Tree summons him to go on his quest. Here, Navi is still not Link's natural fairy, since she was waiting outside for him rather than sleeping with him, but they seem to be together in ordinary peacetime when this Link has never gone on an adventure before - a skim confirms that, no, this does not take place immediately after the events of Ocarina of Time. So why is Link with Navi? Well, foolish mortal, the answer is perfectly logical, but it's so obvious that it isn't even worth mentioning. PikMan feels the same way, which is why he never explains this either. Link and Navi often went out in the forest, gathering Deku Nuts. Link had a bag full of them, as he loved traveling and Deku Nuts were known to paralyze creatures of the wild. I can relate to that. It's sort of like how I regularly roam through the woods near my house to collect nerve gas so that I can use it to paralyze the local wildlife. That way, I get to simultaneously enjoy my two loves: hiking and unnecessary animal cruelty. He expected this trip to be the same, but found that there was a higher concentration of monsters. In fact, the whole forest looked a bit shady. You see, this is a pun on the two meanings of the word "shady", which can be used to mean either that the forest looked suspicious or that the forest had lots of shade from the sun, since it's a forest and it has trees that create shade. Such clever elements are included to enhance the reading experience. Suddenly, a carnivorous plant rose out of the foilage; A Deku Baba, Link realized. The misspelling of "foliage" in a way that a simple spellcheck would have noticed is truly a masterstroke, for it powerfully deconstructs our modern society's tragic descent into relying on people actually spelling words properly, as compared to far simpler times such as Link's era in which few were literate and those who were literate spelled stuff however they wanted. He had read about them, but he had never seen any before in New Hyrule. They had been abundant in Old Hyrule, before it was flooded. The presence of Link's treehouse, Navi, and, if Chapter Characters is any indication, Saria all make it clear that this is the Link of Ocarina of Time, but this talk about the flood and New and Old Hyrule makes it clear that this is instead a Wink Waker-era Link. And unlike Link, Zelda, and Ganondorf, characters like Saria and Navi do not reincarnate or last between different time periods. The artist here flaunts his expertise by making the Legend of Zelda timeline even more confusing than it already is. Link threw a Deku Nut into the plant's open mouth, paralyzing it. Link ran, with Navi close behind. Running away is absolutely vital, for though one might think that, given Deku Babas' inability to move their heads outside of the tiny radii their stalks provide, such rapid fleeing would be entirely unwarranted, as a mere single step backward would suffice to take our heroes out of danger's reach, the truth is that... well, I'm sure PikMan knows what he's doing. "What's going on? There are monsters everywhere!" Navi said. Link nodded, saying "We should figure out what the heck's going on." This is the high point of the dialogue's quality. As he said that, the two had ran into a clearing. Mirroring his previous declaration of independence from conventional spelling, PikMan here continues to demonstrate his freedom from the encumbrance of mere commonplace and unimaginative grammar. "Maybe we should head back to the village", Link suggested. "Um, Link..." Navi started to say. Link slowly looked behind him, and whipped around. They had been followed. There was a man clad in black armor riding a black armored horse. He had dark skin, red hair, and a jewel in his forehead. I can relate to this guy. Whenever I want to stalk some people through a forest, I mount a horse and dress myself and my horse in pure black noisy metal armour, with some red decorations just eliminate any unfair advantage the shadows might give me. Since I stalk five-year-old children with mental illnesses, my cunning stealth tactics have never failed me. "Who are you?" Asked Link. "Why are you following us?" The man didn't answer; Instead, he pulled out a sword and fired a blast of dark magic from its blade, knocking Link unconscious. Speaking as an unarmed twelve-year-old who has just discovered that he has been stalked by a towering black horseman, I feel that the most sensible course of action is to ask demanding questions. I applaud the realistic characterization. When he awoke, Link was alone. Navi was nowhere to be seen. Link tried to get up, but staggered in pain. He felt a painful scar in his chest. Trying to ignore the pain, he went back to his treehouse. After bandaging his wound, he got his wooden shield out and began his search for Navi. Personally, I wouldn't tell any of the other Kokiri that I was attacked by a dark warlord, my fairy completely vanished, and I was in need of medical attention. The best course of action would obviously be to administer myself a bit of first aid and set off to find my fairy - who, from all appearances, was kidnapped by a magical black knight who can knock me out and badly wound me in a single shot - with only a wooden shield. I'm glad to see that this story follows standard logical conventions. "Where do you think you're going?" Said a voice. You bloody moron! Don't you DARE pull this stupid "Said" nonsense on me again! I have absolutely had it with all of these idiots on this stupid forum pulling this same nonsense! You lot always use "Said" as your dialogue word, which is pathetic enough for anyone who has passed third grade, but then you have the audacity to go and capitalize it after all of these quotations for no reason! What is wrong with you fools!? Have you never been to school!? Have you never read a book!? What about this extremely basic principle is so hard for you cretins to wrap your thick skulls around!? Screw you! Screw you, you twit! Screw you all! ...I, uh, think I broke character there for a moment. Link looked back, and saw standing there was Saria, his best friend besides Navi. "I was going to look for Navi. I think he's been kidnapped, and I'm going to look for him." In this universe, Navi is male rather than female! Our brilliant composer here presents his staggering social commentary on the unforgivable negative treatment of transsexuals in modern society! Saria smiled slightly. "Follow me", she said. I should here note what a kind stylistic choice the artist made in restricting the maximum length of each paragraph to two lines. This averts any amateurish mistakes like having too much description, or too much depth, or too interesting a dialogue. Rummaging through her belongings, Saria was looking for something. "Where is it", she muttered. "Oh wait, there it is!" I'm glad that it explained that Saria was looking for something, since there are a lot of reasons why one might rummage through one's own belongings saying "Where is it?" and similar phrases. PikMan prides himself on his epic's accessibility even to those with such disabilities as not having a functioning brain. Turning back to Link, she pulled out a small sword. Handing it to Link, she said, "It's dangerous to go alone. Take this." Ah, rehashing old memes from this iconic scene in the original Legend of Zelda never gets old. Link took it, and swund it around a little. Lin's so awesome they needed to invent a new word just to describe his epic sword skills. This is the best story ever. "This sword is great!" Link said. Shut up. This sword's greatness pales in comparison to this epic masterpiece's magnificence. "Made it myself", Saria replied. Well, that explains why the sword is merely "great" and not "unspeakably awesome". I know PikMan, and you, Saria, are no PikMan. "Listen, if you're going to search for Navi, be careful." "I will." With that, Link walked out and began his quest to find Navi. And with that, I must sadly bring this review of this fabulous tale to a close. Everything here is absolutely perfect. There are no spelling and grammar errors, so this was obviously heavily proofread and run through a spellchecker, rather than just lazily thrown up on the internet without a care for such concerns as quality. The breathtaking description and amazing dialogue really draws you into the world of the story. Moreover, the plot is highly original, and all the characters are multi-dimensional with complex personalities and motivations. For example, as Chapter Characters so kindly notes, Saria is both loyal and supportive simultaneously. That's deep rounded character design there. And of course, the author never messes up by getting canon wrong and certainly doesn't stoop so low as to throw in terrible internet references that even GameFAQs knows aren't funny anymore. Really, what is there to complain about? This is all just too perfect. On a scale of zero to five stars, I give this six stars. No, ten. No, eleven. No, twenty-two. You know what? I'll give this all of the stars in the sky. If you don't read this amazing story, you are stupid. That may sound insulting, but it's the truth, you- Crab Helmet, come quickly! You are urgently needed immediately, now, in the future! What are you doing here!? You're dead! I'll explain later. Quick, get in this time machine with me. Seven years from now, after Link came of age and was released from the Sacred Realm to wield the Master Sword against Ganondorf's armies, you became incapacitated and unable to perform the next review, and it needs to be done immediately! How can it be so urgent? We're in the present; the future isn't going anywhere. I'll explain later. Now, follow me! Certainly, certainly. Oh, by the way, what review number have I reached after seven more years? Fifty-three. ...fifty-three? Your schedule started slipping just a tiny bit. Now, let's go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I fixed some of the stuff, including:-Link's encounter with Ganondorf-Navi's gender-Link's reaction to the swordI will fix the Deku Baba part and some of the typos later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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