The Final Messenger Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 AhemDeathdragoon I have a few questions and suggestions for you in making your fanfic.First of all what is the plotSecondly put more character descripions in your storythirdly Why does everyone get to Ra Yellow (Could it be, the Plot)last but not least add a 'personality' coulmn to your applications, because how do you know if the creator wanted them to be a psycho murderer or not that is all (note: I'm trying my hardest not to sound mean or angry) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 The plot? I can't tell you, because that would ruin it all...Um, everyone gets into Ra Yellow, because, well...yeah, it is the plot, actually. You'll get why. Sometime later in the story.More character descriptions...Hm...I don't really know what you mean by that.Personality? Well, everyone will get offered shadow power sooner or later; it's up to their creator if they accept it...that's probably going to spell out their personality.But um, right now it's time for the final entrance exam...Kirin's... 1st turn: Kirin Activates graceful charity. Discards Bronn, mad king of Dark World, and Fabled Kushano. Activates Polymerization, fuses together Yata-Garasu and Yata-Garasu to summon Rasu-Gio, Eagle of Fate. (400/300). When it is successfully fusion summoned, he is allowed to draw four cards, which he does. Special summons Chaos Emperor Dragon-Envoy of the End. Because of Rasu-Gio's effect, cards on his side of the field cannot be removed from play. Pays 1000 life points, removes from play all cards in their hands. CED-EotE and Rasu-Gio stay on the field. Proctor loses 3600 life points. Attacks with Rasu-Gio. Proctor loses another 400. Because of Rasu's effect, they both draw two cards. Kirin attacks with Chaos Emperor Dragon. Proctor has 1000 life points left. Activates CED-EotE's effect again. Proctor loses. Kirin gets offered Obelisk Blue, which he turns down, saying that since Ra is the strongest Egyptian God Card, that's the dorm he should be in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 The MM Battle Vale looks at his cards and smile's he activates Polymerization to summon (dun dun dun duuuuuuuuun) Dark Armed Judgement Dragon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He activates Foolish Burial to send Wulf to the Grave from his deckwhich summons Wulf He activates charge of the light brigade gets Lumina lightsworn summoner and sends Bottomless Trap Hole, Charge of the Light bRigade and WulfSpecial summons Wulf and sets a card (Trap Stun)and Sets Magic Jammer Attacks with 2 Wulfs and Dark Armed Judgement Dragon3400 + 4200 = 7600 Damage!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 MM discards Kuriboh to bring damage to 0. His turn: Summons The Fourth (0/0) uses it's effect. Changes it to level five. Activates Five Star Twilight, discards Kuron, to make sure no spells can be negated. Special summons the five Kuriboh Brothers!!! Discards three trap cards. Due to the effects of three of the Kuri-brothers, dark-armed judgement loses 2100 attack. (1400 attack) then activates Pyramid Energy. All kuris gain 200 attack. Special summons Kuribabylon. (2700/200) Uses Kuron's effect, after two spells have been successfully activated before the battle phase, he gets to draw a card. Card in hand: 1. Puts one card face-down. (DO NOT DESTROY IT) Attacks Dark-Armed-Judgement with Kuribabylon. Vale loses 600 life points. Ends his turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Vale uses (da na na naaa) MONSTER RE-F***ing-BORN!Gets DARK ARMED JUDGEMENT DRAGON back.He summons LuminaActivates DARK ArMED's Effect to Pay and Send to Distroy all cards on your field (MUAH HA HA) ATTACK!7600 + 1000 = WIN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 No, actually. MM reveals trap.RITUAL TRAP CARD: EMBODIMENT OF THE ABYSS!!!He returns the Kuriboh brothers to his deck, along with his KuriBabylon, and summons...DUHN-DUHN-DUHN...Ruler Of The Kuri Nation!!! (0/0), and the Ritual Trap automatically ends your turn and negates your attack...By the way, it can't be negated...or stopped...or destroyed. MM turn: Draws a card. Activates Ruler's first ability...he can shuffle a card back into his deck, and draw another. He then summons "Kuri-Priest", (300/200) activates it's effect. Searches for a Ritual Card. Use's Rulers second ability. Tributes Priest, and activates Ritual Trap: CREEPING SHADOWS!!! Returns Kuri-Priest and Ruler to summon...Deity Of The Kuris!!! (?/0) It's attack and defense are equal to every monster that was removed from play through the effect of a ritual trap when they were removed from play. (5400/1200), Then activates Kuri-Priest's second effect, when it is used for a ritual trap summon, the monster's attack is deducted from each player's life points. (1900/2600MM winning), then he looks off into the distance, and surrenders. Vale is shaken, then the Mysterious Man asks him if he would like to have Shadow Power or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Vale says what (Power) do i get if i do?\ He'll accept any way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Ah, okay.Well, it's funny.See, this is what the man says, and Vale and him have a convo. "You shall get power beyond your wildest dreams!""Okay, but what power?""Limitless power!""What power?!""Awesome power.""Just tell me what power I get.""Incredible power.""...What power do I get?!""None.""THEN WHY WOULD I JOIN?!""You get cookies.""ALRIGHT IM IN!!!"P.S.: Sometime in the future, Kirin is going to tell Vale that if the man had continued, Vale would have won, since Ritual Trap monsters can't attack the turn that they are summoned. Next turn, Vale would have drawn "Rude Fusion", summoned Judgment, cleared the field, and won the duel. Just to make sure you don't think my villains are overpowered...which they aren't. Not only that, Vale is the one to defeat MM, the first major villain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 By character Descriptions I mean something like this:Bob was walking down the street when he saw a blonde-haired boy dueling on the street That's what I mean by charcter descriptions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 ...who names their child BOB?! That doesn't even make sense. And, by the way, I started to add that already...LOL....ALRIGHT!!!Darius...you have just been challenged by a fellow student, known as Isabell Adante!!!(You get to go first.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
internetreference123 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 He summons Sangan and activates Double SummonHe tributes Sangan which activates its effect to get card to your hand with 1500 or less ATKHe chooses masked dragonhe summons Genesis Dragon and uses its effect to get Prime Material in the GraveHe special summons REDMD and special summons Prime Material with itHe sets 2 cards and ends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Isabelle's turn. She draws. Tells him too many people are using dragons. She activates "Impromptu Wedding", which destroys all of his spells and traps that are face-down, and they both get to discard and draw cards equal to the number of cards destroyed. She discards Goldd and Silvia, Wu-Lord and Warlord of Dark World. Then activates "Mystic Plasma Zone", and special summons "Malefic Blue-Eyes White Dragon" to the field. (3000/2500). Attacks with Blue-Eyes, destroys PMD, and then activates "Card Destruction", discarding and re-drawing their entire hands. Special summon Beige, Vanguard of Dark World. Sacrifices all three to summon Aggiba, the Malevolent Sh'nn S'yo. (3000/3000). Sets three cards face-down. Ends turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
internetreference123 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Summons Decoy DragonSpecial Summons Chaos Emperor Dragon from his hand becasue of REDMDActivates Foolish Burial to get ANOTHER REDMD to the GraveSets 2 cardsEndSays something childlike to rspond to the dragon comment (You can choose what happens during my characters' turns) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Ah, okay. Her turn: Draws card. Laughs. Loudly. Eyes snap open, they are gunmetal gray. "YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I"VE BEEN THROUGH!!!" She yells at him. Activates three "Reckless Greed" Facedown cards. She draws six cards. Activates "Cold Wave" and discards Kuron so it cannot be negated. Activates "Different Dimension Hole", then activates "Black Hole". Since Malefic Blue-Eyes got destroyed, she halves her LP, then special summons Malefic Truth Dragon. 5000/5000. Activates "Graceful Charity". Discards Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World. It gets special summoned. She attacks with both of them. (Darius: 700, Isabelle: 4000). Then Daniel Defoe, the principal, sees them dueling, and breaks up the duel. Then tells them to get to their dorms for opening dinner night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Oh Yeah I Forgot Change All My Characters' Ages to 15I'm making a deck for Vale when later in the story he changes his deck Angelic Warriors (Custom Cards I'll PM You Sum) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Alright, sure, Night_Lock. But, um, I can only do that in changing the manner that they speak...it's not like there is an official place for age. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 I Know I Just Wanted to Make them Older Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 Ah, okay... OOC: DXDXUSER, Owen Stevens, you have just been challenged by a fellow student!!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 I couldnt find pics for the cards so you use your imagination to give descriptions for them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 ??? What cards??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 19, 2010 Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 IM GONNA PM YOU THE 1ST 5 OF THEM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Again you should probably write what the characters do in duels or you'lll get stopped in production Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathdragoon Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Yeah, I'm going to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 Post Chapter 5 Already! I'm in Anticipation for the Next Chappies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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