Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Lol, I don't think that kind of stuff exists in the Yu-Gi-Oh Universe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Yeah, all they got in Yu-Gi-Oh Universe is cellphones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Can't they talk through cellphones and at tournaments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Who are those cards for? Anyone specific?  maybe kuro, he might get an even better deck, were he fuses these cards with his current deck?or another character in the DDO?anyone really.your choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 Yeah, Kuro sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 When is the next chappie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 Well, I'm planning on having it up by tomorrow night at the latest. If it's not, it'll definitly be up by Monday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickedgodfan1 Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 My internet's been screwing up, so I don't know how soon I can get any more chapters up. Hopefully I might be able to today, but no promises. Sorry for this, and to compensate I will be putting up 2 chapters for the price of one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 YES! HA! I did it, Chapters 8 and 9 are up ya fools! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!...................................................................................................................................................................................................................I'm done. Seriously, enjoy everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 YES! HA! I did it, Chapters 8 and 9 are up ya fools! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!...................................................................................................................................................................................................................I'm done. Seriously, enjoy everyoneI Just read chappies 8, 9 and I think I know what'll happen between Crim and Kenny. Crim steals Kenny's card bacuse of the Kunai with Chain thing, then later they find out X took it instead. BIG DUEL. They(Kenny and Crim) become buddies. THE ENDÂ 'Small and skinny' 5 year olds are small.... and skinny.... Virgil? Â Edit: when is chap 11 coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2010 I don't know when the next chapter will be up. I might do two again, and most likely if I do they'll be up within a week and a half Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 I hope to have the next chapters up by the weekend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Chapters 10 and 11 will be up by next Sunday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 .........BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 How about, instead of releasing both chapters on the same day, release one this weekend and the next next weekend. It'll give you more time to finish 12 and onwards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 I'll be fine with releasing both this weekend. Chapters 12 and 13 won't be hard at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Wasn't saying they would be, just that if you do you can space the chapters out properly. Regular releases of single chapters are better than somewhat sporadic releases of two chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Well, I can try to space them out by a couple of days. It's hard for me to wait after finishing them though. I automatically want to post them asap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Episode 10 is up! Comment on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 when is episode 11 up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 It will be up when two things happen. 1. People comment on Chapter 102. I finish writing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 [spoiler=Review]Chapter 10 : Cute but Deadly Nuthin' Wrong Here... Yet Slicing through the waters just outside of Domino City, a small speedboat flies over the gentle waves on it's way to an unknown location Steering it is a small kid, clothed in a black, silk cloak. Beside him is a small, evil looking puppet. A determined look on his face, the kid looks straight ahead as he gets ever closer to his destiny. He has been given his orders, and the target's location has been located. Today begins the fall of the Ancient Gear. And who in the hell let's a small kid drive a speed boat? Oh and you missed a period before 'location', and 'steering' Sitting in our room at the Ra Yellow dorm, I watch in curiosity as Kensuke quickly speeds around the room. Having just woken up, I'm not yet sure of what's going on. Nor am I sure of why he's in me and Hui's room, but by the frantic rush he seems to be in, I can tell it isn't good. So getting to my feet, I walk over to him as he digs underneath my bed and ask what's wrong. Okay nothing wrong on my radar "My Red Eyes Curse, it's gone!," he yells with unmistakable fear in his eyes, "I can't find it anywhere!" The sudden exclamation surprises me, as I knew he had it after the duel with Crim...wait! Could he have taken it? When the rest of us were making sure Kensuke was ok, Crim must have taken the card, and it was probably because of that stupid Kunai with Chain thing. I Saw That Coming Grabbing him by the shoulders, I calm him down and tell him it's alright. However, he only continues to cry out as he tells me, "You don't understand Tai. That card is extremely dangerous to use. You saw what it did to me, and I'm used to it. Imagine what could happen if it's in the wrong hands!" More exclamation, gives the sentence personality. "You don't understand Tai! That card is extremely dangerous to use! You saw what it did to me, and I'm used to it! Imagine what could happen if it's in the wrong hands!" THAT has personality I have to say, the thought intrugues me. To say the least, whomever had it could probably take over the world. It'd be the Millenium Items all over again. Then I get an idea. Telling Kensuke of my guess about Crim taking it, I then bring up Hui and his obsession with Pegasus, the creator of Duel Monsters. It's WHOEVER not WHOMEVER... Atleast I think so "If we can talk to Pegasus," I explain as he stares at me, utterly confused, "maybe we can learn the full extent of the cards power and how to stop it." So... 3 kids are gonna talk with the Michael Jackson of Yugioh... This Does Not End Well in my opinion The idea is fool proof, so fool proof that it couldn't possibly fail. Sighing, he nods and tells me to lead the way. Knowing Hui left earlier with Sakura, I tell him to follow me to the campus to find them. So, heading out, we make our way up the hill towards Duel Academy. Fool proof ALWAYS means 'Somebody is gonna mess it up As we run up the hill, I suddenly see a person staring at us out of the corner of my eye. Looking over, I see the same guy who had been watching us before and feel the sudden urge to confront him. Walking away from Kensuke, I head over towards the figure, who surprisingly stands there watching. As I get closer, I notice that it's a large guy, wearing a dark cloak. He looks menacing, but isn't advancing. STALKER! REPORT HIM TO THE FREAKING AUTHORITIES! "Taizen!," Kuro calls out, running up to me. Distracted, I tell him to hold on and look back to the figure, only to find him mysteriously gone. Who the hell is he, and why is he watching us. Shaking it off, Kensuke and I continue up. Kuro? When did he come? As we enter the campus, we almost instantly run into both Hui and Sakura, who had just been returning from a tag duel with two students named the Infinite Nuovo's. As Hui recounts the entire duel with me, Sakura turns to Kensuke and asks, "Where's Kuro?" But if- Uhh... ZOMG Kuro has a teleporter! "Still asleep," I reply, remembering why we came. Turning to Hui, my smile disappears as I ask, "Can you get in touch with Pegasus? Kensuke's Red Eyes Curse card disappeared. We need to know it's full powers before something bad happens." But- But if- But- if the above two statements of mine are correct... Shaking his head, he tells us that he has never personally spoken to him since the school year began. Moaning in fear, Kensuke drops to his knees, causing both Sakura and I to check on him to see if he's ok. At that moment, something seems to come to Hui, and he yells out, "I know who can help us!" Pegasus? A moment later we're standing in front of the Obelisk Blue ladies dorm. According to Hui, Crowler is at the dorm every day to have lunch with Fontaine. It's a mystery as to why they dine together, but Hui assumes they're dating. Laughing, I try to imagine Crowler being romantic and shudder a little. HOW does Crowler get a date? As we step forward to find him, we're suddenly apprehended by two Obelisk girls, who blindside and knock us down. Looking up, I recognize one of the girls from my class. Her name is Lili Zavan, and she's one of the most beautiful girls in the dorm. However, she isn't the brightest by far. LOL Dumb Blonde Stereotype? The other girl is a mystery to me, but I'm soon given an answer as Sakura asks, "Rei, what's going on!?" The girl is Rei de Nuovo, one of the Slifer Red's who dueled Hui and Sakura just a short time ago, but why's she here? The two stay silent as a third student approaches. Instantly I'm aware of who he is, mainly because of his unmistakable resemblance to his sister Rei. Nothing wrong here Kaoro de Nuovo is a young student who happens to be the son of a high ranking Kaiba Corp executive. He has the skills and intelligence of any Obelisk student, but for some unknown reason was placed in Slifer Red. Glarring down at us, he smirks and says, "So, you're the ones who've been sneaking over here. I was only informed of one, a big guy with a dark cloak. None of you match the profile. Interesting." GLARING, not GLARRING Realizing he's talking of the mysterious stalker, I try to bargain for a release, but he refuses. Telling us that he knows we're the ones who've been stealing Lili's undergarments, he informs us he's going to report us to Crowler and Fontaine, who are just inside. So a hooded adult... Adult, Undergarments... Pedo? "No, wait!," Kensuke yells, "we only came to talk to Crowler. We need to see him to get in touch with someone. Please let us go. If you want a duel, I can oblige if you'll let us go after." Common sense, you should have tried that first or came to the BOY'S DORM after the date? Rubbing his chin, Kaoro begins pondering the idea. As he does, Lili steps up and proclaims, "I'll be the one to duel! But I don't want you, I want to duel you Taizen." As she points to me, I can't believe it. No one ever wants to duel me, but hell, I'll take it. Lili vs Taizen, Taizen wins, The End of Chapter 11 Stepping forward, I agree. Kaoro then grins and says, "Then it's decided. Lili will duel Taizen. If Tai wins, you guys can see Crowler. If Lili wins however, you're through." I nod in agreement as his sister tosses me a duel disk. Standing across from me, Lili smirks and puts on her own disk. Taizen Wins "You're in for one hell of a duel Taizen. I may be cute, but believe me when I say, I'm one of the best duelists at this school. So, let's begin." Su-ure you are[/sarcasm]   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 Lol, I just realized that. When "Kuro" ran over when Taizen was advancing towards the stalker guy, it's supposed to be Kensuke. I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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