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NO Messanger it wasn't (=u=) Seriously seeing out of EVERYONE'S eyes within a "blah blah blah" radius is a bit too much in my book. Think you got the Rinnengan or something? No I would say limit it to being able to see out of ONE person's eyes only and even add on another condition like, had to be "mentally tagged" or something . . .

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OK let me explain it this way, ahem . . .

 

You are having to infiltrate an enemy stronghold with a few of your allies. The fortress is CRAWLING with guards and other highly armed individuals that'd kill you ON SIGHT! However you, having the amazingly stupendious ability to see through everyone else's eyes, can easily walk around and avoid being seen. How do you acomplish such a feat despite the massive force of your enemies? Well you can see throguh their eyes, so as long as you stay out of their sight you wont ever be seen- and this is done for anyone who comes in radius so you'll NEVER get caught!

 

Another example . . .

 

Someone is about to assassinate you in the middle of the night. They are silent and warry of the situation, their blade ready to strike you down at the drop of a leaf. However silently they lung for you- and you dodge! How did you know the assassin was coming despite his expertise in stealth?! Easy . . . you could see through his eyes and saw he had a knife out and was secretly behind you.

 

Same goes for a battle. You see them glance at where they are about to strike, you block them (=_=) Get my point?

 

EDIT: Seems I was ninja'd with another question. That can be easily solved by stating he has mastered the ability OR by having so few people around it doesn't act as a hinderance

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That was supposed to be the point of the entire power...

Edit: Aha! Loophole! If he doesn't maintain concentration it fails, so in battle, KAPUT. Storming a fortress, he has to be the guide of the people and not be in the fortress

Battle... Need I say?

 

Oky for sake of just getting accepted I'm changing the power, okay? *contemplating*

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I stole it from Struggle of Powers

 

[spoiler=app]Name: Lan Kisuki

 

Age: 17

 

Gender: Male

 

Appearance: Lan has very, very pale skin, a red eye, and long black hair that covers his left eye and reaches to the back of his neck. His left eye is a large black button and his left leg is a metal puppet-like appendage. Both of his arms have been chopped off and replaced with metal puppet-like appendages like his legs were. Lan wears a raggedy black long sleeved shirt. His black pants are a tad to big for him so he tied a rope to his waist to keep it up. He wears dark brown shoes with worn down soles.

 

Personality: Lan is generally a frail and tender soul, often shying away from loud noises and other people. Although he has a broken and sad expression, if you threaten anyone he cares about he will not cease to strike you down to protect his loved ones. Occasionally he will have flashbacks of his life if anything reminds him of his past life. Lan also suffers from

Sound-Color Synesthesia

 

Weapon or power: His power is Accelerated Healing, and his weapons are a kitchen knife and a customized black pistol

 

Bio: Lan was born the bastard child of a rich, aristocratic woman and a father he never got to know. Throughout his life he was teased and insulted by the general population of the city he lived in. When his mother and himself left the town to stop the constant bullying. Although unfortunately his mother started going in a downward spiral to madness and started punishing Lan severly for minor infractions. Somewhere along the line Lan got his eye stabbed out and replaced with a black button, his hands to elbow chopped off and replaced with metal puppet-like appendages, and right shin and foot replaced with a metal puppet-like appendage, just like his hands. Later when he was around twelve, he ran from home and joined a circus as a 'freak'. Throughout his life he lived there unhappily when he realized the ringmaster was almost as abusive as his mother when they were traveling, frequently making him and the newer 'curiosities' live in terrible conditions and whipping them like slaves.

 

 

Here's the edited one

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