The Final Messenger Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Name: Kaito SuzuragiAge: 16Dorm: (Works for)DDO, (Stays in)YellowDeck: (Secondary:)Batterymen (Main:)Watts (Combo:) BatterywattsGood or Bad: BadBio:His parents died in a horrible car accident when he wasa toddler. He was Taizen's bestfriend until Taizen went to Duel Academy. He is competitive and somewhat agressive, but overly assertive would be better. He isn't afraid to speak his mind. He is an albino, has 3, 2 centimeter scars on his right cheek, and wears his trademark red(Back, top and sides), white(front), and black(flap) baseball cap.Friends: (Pretends to be friends with)Taizen and KuroEnemies: (But Hates)Taizen and Kuro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted September 19, 2010 Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 has anyone noticed that i have added 5 characters to the fan fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 Keep em coming everyone. Most new students and all will now be mainly for the second and third seasons, since the first season is pretty much taken care of. I plan to have somewhere in the vicinity of 25 to 30 chapters in a season. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted September 20, 2010 Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 When are the DDOs appearing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 They will start appearing in Chapters 8 and 9, but only in the shadows. They will actually start appearing and dueling in Chapters 10 and 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Update***********I'm working on Chapters 10 and 11 now. They will feature THREE characters from the Dark Demons Organization, two of whom will be involved in duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexsuncion Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Name: Mortimer DeAires (D.D. Survivor)Age: Appears 20Dorm: DDO (No Dorm)Deck: Wind and Darkness deck, focused on removing cards from play and the negative effects revolving around it.Good or Bad: Neutral, but follows the DDO commands(mostly)Bio:--As the power of the Dark Demons grew, so did their ability to to tap into the Shadow Realm, and the Spirit World. Mortimer is the result of pulling Different Dimension Survivor's Spirit from the transitive point of being "removed from play" and being "In play" while in a duel with <Incert Character here>. His natural affinity with Darkness and Negitivity made him the perfect grunt for brute-force for the organization. While he resents the conditions which brought him into being, he has a strange fixation on watching the development of others, which proves to be problematic for the Dark Demons at times. --He, being a warrior, has a strong sense of nobility and fairness of a fight, and to protect the ideal of honor will even go as far as to directly oppose the Dark Demons. Despite this seemingly good inclination, he doesn't feel that anything lasts forever. His time on the human's world is just another transitive state between dimensions, which he will undoubtedly survive. Because of this view, he refuses to make friends, or attach himself to people and puts little value on his own personal well-being.--Overall, he is waiting for the day in which he continues his travels across the dimensions, and hopes to find a being who's ability to transcend their current situation matches or surpasses his own. To this end, he constantly challenges the heroes of the story in an attempt to make them stronger, without completely destroying them and stopping their ability to travel onward. He strongly opposes sending humans, good or evil, to the shadow realm.Friends: Anyone who can agree with his ideals of honor and justice.Enemies: Heroes of the story. Name: Dorthy Dane (D.D. Warrior Lady)Age: Appears 20Dorm: Obelisk Blue Deck: Light and Fire deck, based on removing things from play, and their positive effects.Good or Bad: Good, but has her own agendaBio:--The upset in balance caused by the Dark Demons by pulling spirits from the Spirit realm's in-between points caused a major upset. In a duel between <Obelisk Blue Member>, and <Female Obelisk Blue Member>, D.D. Warrior Lady forced her way into the human's world. She was sent as a warden of the Different Dimension, whose purpose was to seal the Dark Demon's organization's ability to summon spirits from the spirit realm, and return the summoned spirits to their rightful place. However, the world of humans is very awkward, and instead of stabbing her enemies with a pulsing white blade, she has to duel them with cards and spirits, which is almost hypocritical!--After coming to the world, the students immediately put her in a female Obelisk Blue uniform, and attempt to hide her from the staff at every turn while aiding her in her quest to protect the spirit world. Like any spirit monster brought into the human's world, she is an amazing duelist, due to her natural bond with the cards she uses. Because of this, she's a prime offensive force for fighting the other duel spirits the Dark Demons bring into the world.--For the most part, she feels no special attachments to humans. She regards their loyalty as noble and worth respect, just as a person would praise a dog. Her purpose on the human's world is to restore balance, and then leave to complete that goal. While she enjoys the company of her companions, and fights to protect them, she has no intention of going out of her way to have fun, or form bonds of friendship.Friends: Heroes of Story, esspecially the two duelists she initially meets.Enemies: DDO, specifically summoned spirits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Uh...wow. I don't know if I'm good enough a writer to pull something like that off. Plus, I don't like the entire duel spirit coming to life thing. It's a little corny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexsuncion Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Corny Indeed! However, with proper flare and device, it can be a well-applied sub-plot, considering the already heavily focused Spirit/Heart-of-the-cards theme of YuGiOh. Also... *Dramatic Pose!*Never doubt Your ability to write, my friend! With practice, time, and devotion to the story, you can only become better! Never give up, and one day, you could be among the best! *More flashy posing and flexing and such!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv: D's Knight Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 uh...you kinda messed up my charcter. 1.his wings can fly(he also has hollow bones). 2.He´s an adult Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Who's your character? If you're talking about Sheng Fanchu, I never mentioned his age at all in the bio I put up. I fixed it though. And you never mentioned the wings could fly. Here's the thing though, I want this to be somewhat realistic. There's already going to be Shadow Realm stuff, and honestly isn't that enough unrealistic stuff? It is impossible for wings to be placed on a living being and giving that being the ability to fly. Science cannot do that, so it wouldn't make much sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Chapter 10 is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Name: Kisuke SuzukaAge: 16Dorm: DDODeck: Vision Heroes, Spirit Monsters(Main) <all decks have duel spirits but his main duel spirit is Yatagarasu>Short Biography: Kisuke never wanted to be in his father's evil organization, he just wanted to be normal like other kids and join duel academy, but alas his father discovered his dueling ability that could put Kaiba to shame and drafted him into his organization. Kisuke is blind, but he doesn't wear the shades for the blind, or use a seeing-eye dog, or use a seeing stick. He sometimes talks to his cards and claims his cards have spirits which guide and protect him...Good or Bad: GoodFriend: Taizen, Kuro, Kensuke, Kaito, Virgil(not his puppet the actual person), when they realize he was forced to join the DDO, well except Virgil and Kaito, his only friends in the DDOEnemy: Baitou Suzuka and most of the DDO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 I'll add him when I can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 EDIT: Removed both characters and came up with a new one. Details below Name: Zedan VulzahAge: 38Dorm: DDODeck: Dependant entirely on his opponent. Zedan carries 3 copies of each card that was ever created in a briefcase, that he carries at all times.Short Biography: Zedan bears psychic powers like his sister Xiva. But rather than the ability to see into the future, his psychic powers give him the ability to read minds. Zedan also doesn't suffer any migraines as a side effect. Perhaps he's used to the side effects to such an extent that they barely affect him. Unlike the other members of the Dark Demons Organization not named Kisuke, Zedan plans to back-stab Baitou Suzuka when he believes the time is right. In truth, the only reason he even joined the organization is so then he could find out when Baitou plans to strike. From there, he believes he can put an end to his assault once and for all.Good or Bad: Good, believe it or notFriend: No one. Zedan does attempt to tell the protagonists that he's not their enemy though, but to no availEnemy: The entirety of the DDO, minus himself and Kisuke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 No robots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Damn... I'll work on the human tomorrow. I'll edit this post when I'm finished. EDIT: Finished. Check #140 for details Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Ok. Sorry, but robots is really, REALLY corny. Besides, I have enough trouble writing the duel part of the chapters as it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Touché, I can always save the robot I just dished out for another fanfic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 EDIT: Removed both characters and came up with a new one. Details below Name: Zedan VulzahAge: 38Dorm: DDODeck: Dependant entirely on his opponent. Zedan carries 3 copies of each card that was ever created in a briefcase, that he carries at all times.Short Biography: Zedan bears psychic powers like his sister Xiva. But rather than the ability to see into the future, his psychic powers give him the ability to read minds. Zedan also doesn't suffer any migraines as a side effect. Perhaps he's used to the side effects to such an extent that they barely affect him. Unlike the other members of the Dark Demons Organization, Zedan plans to back-stab Baitou Suzuka when he believes the time is right. In truth, the only reason he even joined the organization is so then he could find out when Baitou plans to strike. From there, he believes he can put an end to his assault once and for all.Good or Bad: Good, believe it or notFriend: No one. Zedan does attempt to tell the protagonists that he's not their enemy though, but to no availEnemy: The entirety of the DDO, minus himselfYou forgot about Kisuke, the other DDO Member that hates the DDO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Whoops... editing that detail in now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 They're both added. NEWS**********No more season 1 characters will be accepted. If you send in a character, he/she will be in season 2 or 3. This also means NO MORE DDO characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Final Messenger Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 When do you think chap 11 will be up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockin' Rollin' Duelist Posted October 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2010 No one's even commenting on Chapter 10. It makes me sad..... Chapter 11 should be up by the weekend. Possibly with Chapter 12 as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 16, 2010 Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 in a tribute to deadmichael:Name: michael deathron Age : 15Dorm : Obelisk Deck : guardians Short Biography : a budding writer, made enough money to get to duel academy.Good or Bad : goodFriend : everyoneEnemy : ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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