The Amazing Card Contest! STARTING FINAL ROUND!

[SirtyStan]

3 more people still need to get their cards in! I will send all current Contestants the note, even if they have gotten their card in already!

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"I would just like to remind everyone to get their cards in by Monday, July 12.

 

I have sent this message to all remaining Contestants.

 

Contestants who do not have their card entries in by 11:59 p.m. will be disqualified.

 

I do not wish to be replied, unless somebody needs extra time."

 

I have sent the above message to everybody remaining, except for MMMKJM, who has Private Messaging disabled.

 

FriendlyHost will sadly not participate further in this contest because he has been banned.

 

That is all.

[touzaikokon]

Here's my entry:

 

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If this card would be used as a Synchro Material Monster, select 2 Synchro Monsters in your Extra Deck. Send this card and another monster(s) you control to the Graveyard whose total Levels are equal to the total Levels of the selected Synchro Monsters. Special Summon the selected Synchro Monsters from your Extra Deck. (This is not treated as a Synchro Summon.) Their effects are negated, and they cannnot declare an attack.[/align]

[Spikeball]

Bump.

 

@Spikeball: The OP'ed part. Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon. That is all.

 

Er, I think Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon is kinda OPed, too.

[SirtyStan]

Lolz. I know. He is.

 

By the way, dchi... I can sort of tell that you might be getting lazy. That card you made beforehand and created a thread for it, too... I know that because I commented on it...

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But it is still acceptable

[Spikeball]

dchi -Cockatwo

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 1,5/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 9,5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Okay, THIS is an original effect^^ Tuner are meant to synchronize theirselves with other monsters to create a new (Synchro) monster. The Image matches this philosophy perfectly (The 2 birds make the same sound together, so they are synchronized)! I just don't like that the pic appears kinda drawn. The effect seems to be UPed first but to get 2 Synchros on the field sure is awesome although they are only meant for defense. The costs are high but possible to pay, I think. All in all a great card.

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zmuzik - Cyber Plasma Parasite - Death Gazer Delta Papillon

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 2,5/3

Picture: 1,5/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 8/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: There are minor OCG errors. Although I like the pic it really doen't look like a winged-beast but more like an insect (even if you treat it in the lore as insect it doesn't fit). The card's effect (and name) is really creative (ya like long names and lores, don't ya?^^) but I think it's kinda OPed since you can also summon it easily by mother grizzly; it can be revived by its own effect; it forces the opponent's monster to attack; you choose attack target; burn damage is inflicted.... dangerous monster...

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You really signed the card with "Fuji Shusuke"! xD

Looks like he wants others to suffer with this monster^^ (Have to think of this interesting "Inui Juice") xDDDD

[touzaikokon]

Lolz. I know. He is.

 

By the way' date=' dchi... I can sort of tell that you might be getting lazy. That card you made beforehand and created a thread for it, too... I know that because I commented on it...[hr']

But it is still acceptable

 

Sorry about that. I don't mean to be lazy, I just don't make many Winged Beasts...and I wanted to see how it would do in a contest. I don't intend to be lazy, and I usually try to avoid re-using ideas...

[Zextra]

lol, thanks Spikeball (idk why I put his name, it's been a habit since I've been here, and I just never stopped doing it. Thanks for the rate (very thorough and analytic) :D

[PARANOiA_brother_Sparky]

Is that all contestants?

[Spikeball]

@ MMMKJM and Crocruler: If I were you I would post the cards. Tomorrow is the deadline! (11:59)

[SirtyStan]

Well... If they do not post, then they will be 2 of the 3 people disqualified...

[SirtyStan]

They have the rest of today to finish. I will now rate the current 4 cards:

 

Dementuo's card: Blackwing - Typhoon the Black Blur

 

Originality: 1/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 1/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 8.0/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Just what I'd expect of a Blackwing. I remember an old saying: "If it's not broken, it's not a Blackwing!". You have created a Blackwing. Against SOrocco, they would need a monster with 4100 ATK just to kill it... It's like a Kalut, only worse (for your opponent)... I don't really like the picture, though. It's a signed painting.

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Dranzer123's card: L-Drago the Ancient Dragon.

 

Originality: 1/2

Spelling/OCG: 1/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 7.0/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: I would like to show you the proper OCG for your card. Also, like Spikeball said... Why is this dragon a winged-beast?!?! Oh and...

 

@ Spikeball: It might just be flying *cough*...

 

"This card cannot be Special Summoned. You must tribute a WIND monster to Tribute Summon this card. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy up to 2 face-up Spell Cards on the field. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, you can special summon 1 WIND monster from your graveyard. When this card is destroyed, you can destroy one WIND monster on your side of the field instead."

 

There you go. You really bombed on that... It might even be UP'ed... The picture is fine for me.

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Zmuzik's card: Cyber Plasma Parasite - Death Gazer Delta Papillo

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 0.5/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 8.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: I love the bordering. I only found 1 thing wrong with your card. If you can equip it to another monster, it should be a Union monster. Also, it should have this effect at the end: "(Only 1 monster may be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can destroy this card instead)."

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Dchi's card: Cockatwo

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 9.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Your card did VERY well. I found only 1 little thing with it... You get to Special Summon 2 Synchros... I know that was the whole point... But you could have an A.F.D. (3000 DEF blocker) Synchro plus another Level 7 Synchro... Maybe even 2 A.F.D.'s...

[SirtyStan]

Bump. The other 2 need to get their cards in by the end of today.

[Zextra]

They have the rest of today to finish. I will now rate the current 4 cards:

 

Dementuo's card: Blackwing - Typhoon the Black Blur

 

Originality: 1/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 1/2

Minor Details (Set name/number' date=' Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 8.0/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Just what I'd expect of a Blackwing. I remember an old saying: "If it's not broken, it's not a Blackwing!". You have created a Blackwing. Against SOrocco, they would need a monster with 4100 ATK just to kill it... It's like a Kalut, only worse (for your opponent)... I don't really like the picture, though. It's a [b']signed painting[/b].

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Dranzer123's card: L-Drago the Ancient Dragon.

 

Originality: 1/2

Spelling/OCG: 1/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 7.0/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: I would like to show you the proper OCG for your card. Also, like Spikeball said... Why is this dragon a winged-beast?!?! Oh and...

 

@ Spikeball: It might just be flying *cough*...

 

"This card cannot be Special Summoned. You must tribute a WIND monster to Tribute Summon this card. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy up to 2 face-up Spell Cards on the field. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's side of the field, you can special summon 1 WIND monster from your graveyard. When this card is destroyed, you can destroy one WIND monster on your side of the field instead."

 

There you go. You really bombed on that... It might even be UP'ed... The picture is fine for me.

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Zmuzik's card: Cyber Plasma Parasite - Death Gazer Delta Papillo

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 0.5/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 8.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: I love the bordering. I only found 1 thing wrong with your card. If you can equip it to another monster, it should be a Union monster. Also, it should have this effect at the end: "(Only 1 monster may be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can destroy this card instead)."

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Dchi's card: Cockatwo

 

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 9.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Your card did VERY well. I found only 1 little thing with it... You get to Special Summon 2 Synchros... I know that was the whole point... But you could have an A.F.D. (3000 DEF blocker) Synchro plus another Level 7 Synchro... Maybe even 2 A.F.D.'s...

 

Thanks for your comments. The only thing is that the card equips to an OPPONENT's monster, and union monsters only equip to your own. However, I can't complain, so thanks for the feedback! :D

[SirtyStan]

Okay then, zmuzik. I don't know much about insect monsters, even less about parasites (except for the fact that they raid your opponents field, you jolted my mind with your feedback). Well, it seems that the other 2 have not posted, or replied to my PM, so... They have been disqualified. The Final Round will begin shortly after I have found averages of each card.

[Spikeball]

Okay then' date=' zmuzik. I don't know much about insect monsters, even less about parasites (except for the fact that they raid your opponents field, you jolted my mind with your feedback). Well, it seems that the other 2 have not posted, or replied to my PM, so... They have been disqualified. The [b']Final Round[/b] will begin shortly after I have found averages of each card.

 

Er I think you forgot about crocruler (in your list of constentants he's still in the constant although he didn't send a card for round2). Looks like 3 got disqualified so the card-ratings don't matter in this round, huh?

[SirtyStan]

Actually, Spikeball, the reviews will count for this. I'll revert back to my 9-person original plan. The person in this round with the lowest rating will be disqualified. Not 3. Only 1. In the Final Round, all entries will receive rewards, but they still need to be ranked.

[Spikeball]

Ah, okay - this is reasonable - I did forget about they were actually 9^^

 

Okay, I think i've written all my ratings until now. see ya^^

[SirtyStan]

Bump. PARANOiA BETTER get his judging in...

[PARANOiA_brother_Sparky]

Sorry Sorry Sorry....

 

Dementuo's Blackwing - typhoon the Black Blur

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 2.5/3

Picture: 1.5/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1.5/2

 

Total: 8.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: I must say, this is quite the card. Rare is it that there are good defending Winged-Beasts. The pic could have been a bit more vibrant, but given it look like a painting would, it make me think this card is of Native American Lore. The effect did not really seem to be worth it. Creative, yes but in some instances playing a 2000-DEF card is better than using for haling attack, unless discarding is your thing, so even the effect still works out.

 

Dranzer123's L-Drago the Ancient Dragon

Originality: 1.5/2

Spelling/OCG: 1/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 6.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Dranzer, your card makin' skills are definitely on the up and up since you joined. There were a lot of text errors though, so I put up what it would look like in more OCG terms:

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by sacrificing 2 monsters on your side of the field, with at least one of them being a WIND monster. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy 2 face-up Spell Cards on the field. When this card destroys one of your opponent's monsters, you can Special Summon 1 WIND monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position. When this card is destroyed, you must destroy one WIND monster on your side of the field.

Other than that, love the image, but i would have made him a bit weaker, like say 2800/2550, given his effect.

 

zmuzik's Cyber Plasma Parasite with a really long name (LOL)

Originality: 2/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 1.5/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 1/2

 

Total: 8.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: @.@ How is this a Winged-Beast? No offense, but the image makes it look like Revival Jam swallowed Thousand Eyes Idol.....*thinking* Excellent. Anyways, the image is fitting....no matter how much i am scared of it. The effect was hard to keep up with....removing this level and that. Creative and very original no doubt, and part of the Parasite group you make I bet, but stand alone it would seem like a harder card to use. Very damaging though.

 

dchi's Cockatwo (moar LOL)

Originality: 1.5/2

Spelling/OCG: 3/3

Picture: 2/2

Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1

OP'edness/Effect: 2/2

 

Total: 9.5/10.

 

FINAL NOTES: Cute, real cute. Srsly. and looks nice.....whoa, double Synchro Summon????? now that's an effect I would love to use, no attacks or otherwise. A damn good card, I says. Damn good.

[SirtyStan]

Thank you VERY much. I will shortly do this...

[SirtyStan]

Well... I am right now calculating the results! BUT WAIT! It was all just a waste of time! Dementuo got BANNED! *gasp* so he is now disqualified and we will be moving on to the Final Round, where each remaining Contestant will get a prize! I am sending Judges the reps for helping out in this round.

 

 

@ Dementuo: No sarcasm intended.

[Zextra]

OK, here's my card:

 

[spoiler=Burst Dragonic Colosseum]

 

 

Lore:

When this card is activated, place 1 "White Release" Counter on it (max.10). Dragon-Type monsters gain 100 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type monster to place a number of "White Release" Counters on this card equal to half the Level (rounded down) of the discarded monster. When there are no "White Release" Counters on this card, destroy it. Once per turn, you can remove a number of "White Release" Counters from this card to activate 1 of the following effects:

- 3: Negate 1 attack that targets a Dragon-Type monster you control

- 6: Halve the ATK of 1 Dragon-Type monster you control. During this turn, the selected monster can attack your opponent directly.

- 10: Destroy all cards on the field except for Dragon-Type monsters.

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks! :D

[SirtyStan]

Try again, Zmuzik. You used that card in another contest (I'm in it too XD).

[Zextra]

Oh, I have to use a completely new card?

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Also, I kinda edited the effect: It used to target Blue-Eyes only, but I changed it to make it support all dragons

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OK, here's my new card then:

 

[spoiler=Immortal Elemental Release Grounds]

 

 

Lore:

All EARTH, WIND, FIRE, and WATER monsters on the field gain ATK equal to the number of cards in your Hand x100. When an EARTH, WIND, FIRE, or WATER monster you control is destroyed, you can remove from play 2 monsters in your Graveyard with the same Attribute as the destroyed monster to Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. When this card is destroyed, your opponent can Special Summon up to 2 monsters in their Graveyard with the same Attributes to their side of the field in face-up Defense Position.

 

 

 

 

Thanks! :D

[Kuroda Kaito]

[spoiler=Here is my card for the Final Round]

 

Lore: This card can only be activate by sending one Warrior-type monster from your field to your graveyard. When this card is activated, all the monster on the field except Warrior-type monsters are halve its ATK. When a Warrior-type on your side of the field deal damage to your opponent, you can special summon one Warrior-type monster from your graveyard to your field.