Zorbak55 Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 I said yeah just so the creator knew that it was true. If only one person said that and nobody else pointed it out, then the creator will think it's not that big of a deal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Or the creator could just look at his/her sprite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Lol. I guess that is true, part of it anyways. Lots of times no matter how hard you look, you cant notice the mistake. But if more than one person points it out, it wont be as hard to notice it. And even if she cant, she'll still know that it's there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 The whole point of criticism is to determine what went well and what needs improved. The glory of a digital media is that it means you can change what needs to be changed quickly and easily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lover Bat Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh, my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh' date=' my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage[/quote'] Alright, so the biggest flaw is that you eliminated literally all the shading. Your borders aren't recolored, and there are instances of them missing. Finally, the wings and head look like they aren't attached right, and seem to be disconected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lover Bat Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh' date=' my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage[/quote'] Alright, so the biggest flaw is that you eliminated literally all the shading. Your borders aren't recolored, and there are instances of them missing. Finally, the wings and head look like they aren't attached right, and seem to be disconected.well, i had to elimanate most of murkrows lower body to put flygons tail on. the neck is supposed to be very long like flygons even though it looks disconected, and what do you mean be borders? and could you be a bit less rude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh' date=' my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage[/quote'] Alright, so the biggest flaw is that you eliminated literally all the shading. Your borders aren't recolored, and there are instances of them missing. Finally, the wings and head look like they aren't attached right, and seem to be disconected.well, i had to elimanate most of murkrows lower body to put flygons tail on. the neck is supposed to be very long like flygons even though it looks disconected, and what do you mean be borders? and could you be a bit less rude. Not being rude. Pointing out where you need improvement. Rude would be something along the lines of "Dude, that sucks ass. Just give up spriting, noob" or refusing helpful criticism from two more experienced spriters. The outline usually has 2-3 colors, black and 2 colors related to the palate of the part. You need to recolor these to match the new palate of the recolor. Nextly, you still eliminated shading and highlights which is a big no no. Also, you need to edit the sprite (usually by hand) so that it doesn't look disconected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 This isn't related to the topic, but you guys should check out http://www.doctoroctoroc.com/ It has some cool pixel art if you are interested. I hope this doesn't go against the no advertising rule. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 This isn't related to the topic' date=' but you guys should check out http://www.doctoroctoroc.com/ It has some cool pixel art if you are interested. I hope this doesn't go against the no advertising rule.[/quote'] Meh, he doesn't work in 16-32 bit like pokemon splicing does... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 If we're sharing awesome sprite art, Arkeis's ability to splice is surely something to behold: http://www.arkeis.com/pokemonsprites.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lover Bat Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh' date=' my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage[/quote'] Alright, so the biggest flaw is that you eliminated literally all the shading. Your borders aren't recolored, and there are instances of them missing. Finally, the wings and head look like they aren't attached right, and seem to be disconected.well, i had to elimanate most of murkrows lower body to put flygons tail on. the neck is supposed to be very long like flygons even though it looks disconected, and what do you mean be borders? and could you be a bit less rude. Not being rude. Pointing out where you need improvement. Rude would be something along the lines of "Dude, that sucks ass. Just give up spriting, noob" or refusing helpful criticism from two more experienced spriters. The outline usually has 2-3 colors, black and 2 colors related to the palate of the part. You need to recolor these to match the new palate of the recolor. Nextly, you still eliminated shading and highlights which is a big no no. Also, you need to edit the sprite (usually by hand) so that it doesn't look disconected. ok all i got from that is to not take highlights out. we should also take this in pm. and, am i in the club or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 username: johiohsplicer example: how good a splicer would you rate yourself: eh' date=' my above one i belive is my best so....quite below avarage[/quote'] Alright, so the biggest flaw is that you eliminated literally all the shading. Your borders aren't recolored, and there are instances of them missing. Finally, the wings and head look like they aren't attached right, and seem to be disconected.well, i had to elimanate most of murkrows lower body to put flygons tail on. the neck is supposed to be very long like flygons even though it looks disconected, and what do you mean be borders? and could you be a bit less rude. Not being rude. Pointing out where you need improvement. Rude would be something along the lines of "Dude, that sucks ass. Just give up spriting, noob" or refusing helpful criticism from two more experienced spriters. The outline usually has 2-3 colors, black and 2 colors related to the palate of the part. You need to recolor these to match the new palate of the recolor. Nextly, you still eliminated shading and highlights which is a big no no. Also, you need to edit the sprite (usually by hand) so that it doesn't look disconected. ok all i got from that is to not take highlights out. we should also take this in pm. and, am i in the club or not? Or shading. And zoom in to see what the outlines look like on a regular sprite, and recolor the ones on this one as such. Also, you need to hand correct (with the pencil/paintbrush tool) the neck and wing bases to make it look like one thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 sorry johio i've been gone for a little while but your in its ok for those advertisements just don't overflow the thread.and jumpking,promo i'm going to ask you to stop again this isn't a fight but its about to be i'm not gonna give you a warning just for the fact of that but i might not be so kind next time you 2 or gonna have to stop posting to each other for a few days or something cuz everytime you just start leading up to attacking each other.the compatition ends tommorow and i will announce the winner.EDIT:new ranks added check em out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I've been trying to get into scratching and this is my first sprite that's even remotely okay. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 To be fair Miachael, he and I were talking too. I'd bother to continue arguing with him, but I can only assume he's at the *Stick fingers into ears and loudly going "lalalala"* stage. Ended up using nothing but legendaries I suppose. Pokemon Spliced Together:Dialga+Suicune+Shaymin+Regigas+ZapdosFinished Splice: Going to have a video up eventually that will have me making this sprite too. I'll probably have another splice or two on the same video. Edit:Your sprite Winternights, I won't go into anything in depth here, but as with most sprites, you need some work with the shading.Beyond getting a solid light source down, you could also use a bit of touching up on your palette. Make a few of the shades contrast more, get the brighter ones a bit brighter essentially. I would also recommend doing something with the arms. The way they curve is very odd, not to mention the claws look oddly attached, almost if snapped on in the wrong direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Smiley Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I think we all know the winner here, but just to make it more clear for you newbs out there, "Jappio picked us up, flattened us into pancakes, rolled us into tiny balls, tossed us aside, and while he was doing all of this, he created an awesome splice that just beat all of ours." Good job Jappio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I've been updating the mario superstore michael, so I've been gone for awhile. Hi everybody!I think we all know the winner here' date=' but just to make it more clear for you newbs out there, "Jappio picked us up, flattened us into pancakes, rolled us into tiny balls, tossed us aside, and while he was doing all of this, he created an awesome splice that just beat all of ours." Good job Jappio.[/quote'] Now that's not even close to true. I may have forgot the border recouler on zapdos's wings, but I recoulered the rest of it. That's the only thing that his beats me at. (In my opinion) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 D= For the third time within the last 2 or so days I've had my sprites stolen. THIRD! It must be an unlucky week for me )= Two I caught here, and the third someone else actually pointed out for me. Yet since it happened on what is now a dead forum, I sadly have no proof except eye witness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 I'm still working on mine. It should be done before tomorrow morning...1:08 amWhile it is technically morning, it is still "night time" so I'm saying this counts (Fixed version) Legendaries used are Entei Zapdos and RayquazaGengar and Gardevoir were used as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michael91 Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 jappio:ecellent splice thats gonna bring some compatition and who stole splices from you here. PrometheusMFD:oo thats a very interesting splice AND THE WINNER IS....JAPPIO with his all legendary splice you win...your splice in the great splices spoiler and $200,000,000,000,000,000,000...that 10 points for ycm money Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ӞŁǚ℮Ӟ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ♥ Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 OK......Here's my second splice ever!its Blaziken + Charizard=Blazizard! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 It looks great! (for your second one anyways) I think it could go without the three flames though. Other than that, it's pretty good.You even did the border recoulers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 What, is Jappio going to be the only one to give feedback on my splice? (Because there is a good chance he will, he likes helping people like that) OK......Here's my second splice ever!its Blaziken + Charizard=Blazizard! Charaizard wings have random recolored pixels but are otherwise unchanged. You highlighted areas where they should have been shaded, and completely left the darkest shading unrecolored. You have lighter tones in your border, as well as the fact that you just slapped wings on. Also, the fires look awkward and unnecessary (fininally agreeing with jumpking). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 No one in the club stole from me. It was some guy in showcase. He was banned and the thread was locked. Stole some revamps I did a way long time ago. He took them and spliced with them. Was a pretty open and shut case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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