Spleko Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Third version (I'm drifting away from Wailmer, huh?)I did this and started a scratch while setting up our new wirelessI like it. Only cc I have is that the.....well I don't want to call it a leg, but on the bottom, the left side of the ice, the left...chunk? leg? idk. but the left looks like it goes down a little far. I don't know. that might be how you want it, but it seems to throw mess up the perspective of the overall sprite for me. Otherwise nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 That... actually is what took up most of the time with this one. I know I still couldn't get it right, but it was either sprite while working on the wifi or eat while working on the wifi (heaven forbid I do all three at once) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Yeah, the one extra long side on the left looks weird, shading and position. Perhaps if you made it and the right one reach down the same length it would look a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Final version: I'm starting to hate this sprite... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spleko Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Final version: I'm starting to hate this sprite...Moving that bit the slightest bit (only a pixel or so right?) made a world of difference! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Gah, the stone cap is bugging me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 ok this is a quick splice... I got bored and made something strange...... Peliper, Magmar, Regirock, Dusclops, Foretress & some scratching = Dave Dave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spleko Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Could really use CC on this oneThe idea is suposed to be similar to that electric hound I did before (the one in my sig)Like a super intense hound overflowing with it's given element. Its not like suposed to be a new entei or anything, just like the other one is no raikou. (I'm prolly doing poison next, not water). But yeh. What I had trouble with is the fire. I mean, the top two look good, but the left one looks too much like a souped up flareon, and the right one kinda like a beast jolteon -_-And then the bottom two are more in the ballpark, but the fire doesn't really look like intense fire. Basically what I'm saying is that I suck at scratching fire somehow. Anyways, cc please EDIT: I effectively tought myself how to scratch Fire by staring at a rapidash sprite for about 10 minutes. Basically done with it now. But its not perfect yet, so I could use some more c&c if anyone has ideas on how to improve it or if anyone sees any flaws. Thanks!Also, which color do you think is better. With the new fire that is. I personally like the gold much better. It provides a more exciting contrast of color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 What did you do with all the black borders? Also you dither a little too much, it breaks away from the Pokemon style. Also fire creates light, be mindful of tat when shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spleko Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 What did you do with all the black borders? Also you dither a little too much, it breaks away from the Pokemon style. Also fire creates light, be mindful of tat when shading.Regarding the black borders, I just tend to try to get rid of them. Its just a preference thing. I'm not really going for the "Pokemon Style" so much as just a good general sprite. That also explains the dithering, though I should probably tone it down some. But yeh, I just don't like the black borders, though admittedly after taking a second look at the sprite I see some places where I use too light a color for too much of the border. Also thanks for pointing out the fire lighting thing :D I completely didn't think of that, since I basically just did the fire over what was there, erased some old edges and re-posted it. Okay, went back and made some changes following the things Jappio Pointed out.1.) What I had before2.) I fixed the shading for the fire. I think it came out nicely, though there are a few spots I still may touch up. I also greatly reduced the dithering, which looks fine to me.3.) Took #2 and replaced much of (but not all) the black bordering that would have been there. It still looks decent to me, but I prefer the version without the black. I don't know, I just think the black looks silly. Opinions, CC? EDIT:Also finished the ghost oneI simply don't like how this one came out. I should have found something better for the head >.>No need to cc, I dislike this one so much i don't even want to go back and make it better. Its not that I think its really bad, I just don't like how it came out. EDIT(again): Made some minor additions to the ghost one. Still don't like it a whole lot, but it's a little better. (i think the reason I don't like it is because it looks more like a rodent than the dog its supposed to :P ) Just noticed some places behind the head and ears and whatnot that should be darker from shadorws. Will fix later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Nice spelko! I figured out what winrar's for. It stores archives on the internet. I now keep all my templates in a winrar archive, like templates and holo sheets. Downloading rpg maker vx free trial now. Where do you get to it from after the free trial is downloaded? Do u just type rpg maker in the start menu? Just in case I get a virus, I'm running a webroot sweep right now, so if it gives me one, it will get rid of it immedietely. It's also tested and has no spyware viruses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 ok this is a quick splice... I got bored and made something strange...... Peliper, Magmar, Regirock, Dusclops, Foretress & some scratching = Dave Dave Not bad your getting better but I think the tummy is a bit blank and you have left the shading the same on every pice you used apart from that it's awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunter. Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 i should sprite soon or i lose the little skill i've retained. someone give me a random combo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Thanks Neries, and I like your Signature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 i should sprite soon or i lose the little skill i've retained. someone give me a random combo? Left Hook Uppercut Right Kick Hadouken Kamahamaha!!!!! Did that help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 Left Hook Uppercut Right Kick Hadouken Kamahamaha!!!!! Did that help. and don't forget charge Down for 2 secs, Up + any Kicka classic SF xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunter. Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 i've got barely any sense of humor. so don't try that on me. i meant a random sprite combo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spleko Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 i should sprite soon or i lose the little skill i've retained. someone give me a random combo? T.A.P. Combo Generator: http://theanimplanet.com/cg/ Also, finalized the ghostly hound and the fire one. Fixed some shadows and the mouth on the ghost one, so now its decent, but Its still not what I had hoped. And I found a good balance for the black borders with the fire one. Places like the bottom line of its stomach where the darker colors were, and the far back leg, really did benefit from the black border, but there is still definitely less black on it than your average pokemon sprite. Anyways, unless there's some minor changes I need to make (some stray pixels are a wierd color, or something), these are basically finalized.Criticize, Rate, Comment, Suggest Things, Hate, Love, Print then Burn, Claim as your own only to later have your arse handed to you by yours truly. Do what you will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 9, 2010 Report Share Posted August 9, 2010 i've got barely any sense of humor. so don't try that on me. i meant a random sprite combo. Oh sorry I seem to have herd you rong you ment sprite combo. How about Ryu and Chun Li. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorbak55 Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 Yay! I've had a good couple of days. I learned what winrar is for, and downloaded the 30 day trial of rpg maker vx! I started making a game, and starting tomorrow, my bro and I will work on it and make it a really long fun game! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 You finding rpg maker easy to use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 Trigger the minature Reaper Pokemon done this splice in mono-paint on linux. it kinda has the feel of paint.NET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 Two new splices. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dhultzer Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 Hallo, ich bin neu hier, habe ich dont Spleißen eine Verbindungsstelle noch nicht fertig.Ich habe nicht vor allem clipart. aber ich werde beginnen einige Pixel-Kunst sehr bald. username: Shultz splicer example: TBA how good a splicer would you rate yourself: Anfänger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 10, 2010 Report Share Posted August 10, 2010 Nice splices Neries. I done a scratch sprite still working on the rest for my game this one is IceQube's son "Pincicle" The game is going to be a simple maze puzzle game. Still working on the map imaging and stuff.currently writing it in gcc for LINUX. but will be porting it to windows after the first alpha release. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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