Eury Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Saint got it. :/ Common sense really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=My Shot at a Song]Life is full of choicesI have chose mineA life of destructionA life of pain Friends I once had, but now all goneI have turned on them with no remorseCan you see what I have done?Can you see my pain? Striker is goneWar Torn has comeThings are changingFor better or worse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I have to go eat right now. I'm still revising the plot, so be patient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=More lyrics]taught to walk, through the trash they talki dont stop when they drop so they call the copsbut i laugh it off, pass em offto the texas state pen. so they can gas em allim blastin off, cause im fast and hotpullin down the bastards like im Hasslehoffim on the top, with the beats i dropfunk these mutha fuckin bastards and their kennel coughfunk you and your expectationsfunk you and your worthless lifewaisting time with your judgement castingwho are you to critisizei go to sleep and count the sheepbut youz to busy out on the streetyou all stay neat, stay on beatwe got one set of footprints with a thousand feetso break the leash, leave the liesyou ignore the cries as your baby diesprimetime husbands with beaten wiveshiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesits your time to meet your deathbedgiving up was your demiseyou spineless mindless funking lab ratyou sat back and watched it get badstand up, man upget your life backcant you act like your brain is intactyou are a waist of lifegiving up was your demisehiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesbreak the leashleave the lies I cba to fix the grammar errors and cut out the parts that having nothing to do with this. But, interpret away. This one should be easier. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=More lyrics]taught to walk' date=' through the trash they talki dont stop when they drop so they call the copsbut i laugh it off, pass em offto the texas state pen. so they can gas em allim blastin off, cause im fast and hotpullin down the b****es like im Hasslehoffim on the top, with the beats i dropf*** these mutha fuckin b****es and their kennel coughf*** you and your expectationsf*** you and your worthless lifewaisting time with your judgement castingwho are you to critisizei go to sleep and count the sheepbut youz to busy out on the streetyou all stay neat, stay on beatwe got one set of footprints with a thousand feetso break the leash, leave the liesyou ignore the cries as your baby diesprimetime husbands with beaten wiveshiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesits your time to meet your deathbedgiving up was your demiseyou spineless mindless f***ing lab ratyou sat back and watched it get badstand up, man upget your life backcant you act like your brain is intactyou are a waist of lifegiving up was your demisehiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesbreak the leashleave the lies I cba to fix the grammar errors and cut out the parts that having nothing to do with this. But, interpret away. This one should be easier. :/[/quote'] Guessing that it has nothing to do with me. Dark, can you try to interpet this song and mine please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 you spineless mindless f***ing lab ratyou sat back and watched it get badstand up' date=' man upget your life backcant you act like your brain is intactyou are a waste of lifegiving up was your demisehiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesbreak the leashleave the lies[/quote'] This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 you spineless mindless f***ing lab ratyou sat back and watched it get badstand up' date=' man upget your life backcant you act like your brain is intactyou are a waste of lifegiving up was your demisehiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesbreak the leashleave the lies[/quote'] This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read. That looks like it is directed to me. Let me guess, stop the lies and become humble? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I have to go eat right now. I'm still revising the plot' date=' so be patient.[/quote'] That's fine Twig. I'm just glad you are doing it in the first place. you spineless mindless f***ing lab ratyou sat back and watched it get badstand up' date=' man upget your life backcant you act like your brain is intactyou are a waste of lifegiving up was your demisehiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyesbreak the leashleave the lies[/quote'] This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read. I'll try, give me a moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 My brother took the laptop where I was working on the plot revision. So I can't work on it until an hour or so... Dx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 My brother took the laptop where I was working on the plot revision. So I can't work on it until an hour or so... Dx That is fine. I should still be awake then, if you are that is. Also, here is my interpretation. you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat This is telling Striker that he hasn’t the strength needed. you sat back and watched it get bad This is saying he took no control. stand up, man up This is telling him to take control. get your life back And fix his mistakes. cant you act like your brain is intact This is telling him he hasn’t even acted like he could. you are a waste of life This is telling him you don’t like him and he shouldn’t be alive. giving up was your demise He gave up, and lost his only chance to redeem himself. hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes This I’m not too sure about. break the leash Telling him to break free from his old habits. leave the lies And to stop living the way he has been. Not too good at interpreting stuff, but there we go. Also, I've decided on my theme songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 When did this turn into song writing...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 When did this turn into song writing...? Eury brought it up, I made one, then Eury made another. Dark, try interpreting my song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Eh...How about poems?I got poems! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=My Shot at a Song]Life is full of choicesI have chose mineA life of destructionA life of pain Friends I once had' date=' but now all goneI have turned on them with no remorseCan you see what I have done?Can you see my pain? Striker is goneWar Torn has comeThings are changingFor better or worse [/quote'] Anyone wish to interpret this? A Rep goes to the person who does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Life is full of choicesI have chose mineA life of destructionA life of pain This is telling of the 'complications' you've had here. Friends I once had, but now all goneI have turned on them with no remorseCan you see what I have done?Can you see my pain? This tells the result of your choices. Striker is goneWar Torn has comeThings are changingFor better or worse And this is opening up the future. Anyway, here are my theme songs. Normal.And insanity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 So...my poem thing was ignored...DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 So...my poem thing was ignored...DX I was ninja'd twice... I'M SO SORRY T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Lust, did you even read this? I needz somebody DX icwutudidthar Actually...I didn't do anything DX You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Correct Dark. [spoiler=More of it]An outsider I becameKicked out of every place I was inLife was going bad Got tired of the trollsDecided to take actionChallenged the leader, but lost Lost on the broken roadI can't see where I'm goingHumility is what I'm trying to find, but sadly I can't see it Wish to help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Lust' date=' did you even read this? I needz somebody DX icwutudidthar Actually...I didn't do anything DX You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist'] Actually...that's true o.0 I WANT TO POST POEMS HERE. WHO WANTS TO READ MINE!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Lust' date=' did you even read this? I needz somebody DX icwutudidthar Actually...I didn't do anything DX You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist'] Actually...that's true o.0 Wait wut? I was joking... I WANT TO POST POEMS HERE. WHO WANTS TO READ MINE!? +1 Cookie if it's about lust. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Guise click my sig and order sumtin. or: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-212654-post-4356346.html#pid4356346 For the Lazy folk. Oh and Lust is a meanii pants D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Actually, I think my insanity theme shall be this. All I know I know is that it shall be from Majora's Mask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 <3 U Clair! *hug* ^_\\\ teehee <3 guise. breloom is eury's new god.andlucario is my new god. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 [spoiler=The Poems of Love]Are they just simply words of false hope,leaving my heart broken and torn,teasing my heart with what they show,only leading me to cry and mope,until I finally quiet down and mourn? Or is it something more?Is It something that I feel?Is it something that reaches the core,of the soul and be there for,the time that I open my seal? The sad truth is,that it is both of these,that cause me to miss,and case me to press,for a taste of those birds and bees. So strange, so mean,this feeling of love.So red, so green,so pretty to be seen.To beautiful to stop, so I must... [spoiler=My Love's Wind]The wind cries for her voice,it yearns for her touch.It calls for her once, and it calls for her twice,But still her beutiful hand, it cannot clutch Her voice has long sense drifted awayInto the Earth that she gave her heart.Even still, the wind calls her name,it still searches for that wounderful work of art. Soon enough, the wind will learnThat the one it loves is gone.Until that day, it will continue to yearn,and search for its only one. [spoiler=Is There Any Flower More Ugly Than A Rose?]Is there any flower more ugly than a rose?They just grow, and grow, and grow,As if they are the ones that the world had choseTo be the one that shined for thoseNot looking at that wicked crow. That black death that surrounds us all, Waiting to show its power.Making us slow to a crawl,Until we finally fallIn front of loves black tower. And as the world continues to move, the rest of us complainFor we are the ones that sit by the coastThat watch the waves, and dream of a different today.For those of us, the question remains,Is there any flower more ugly than a rose? ...Those are all the poems I've ever written...they...good? ...DX<3 U Clair! *hug* ^_\\\ teehee <3 guise. breloom is eury's new god.andlucario is my new god. D: Awww...What about me, love!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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