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[spoiler=My Shot at a Song]

Life is full of choices

I have chose mine

A life of destruction

A life of pain

 

Friends I once had, but now all gone

I have turned on them with no remorse

Can you see what I have done?

Can you see my pain?

 

Striker is gone

War Torn has come

Things are changing

For better or worse

 

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[spoiler=More lyrics]taught to walk, through the trash they talk

i dont stop when they drop so they call the cops

but i laugh it off, pass em off

to the texas state pen. so they can gas em all

im blastin off, cause im fast and hot

pullin down the bastards like im Hasslehoff

im on the top, with the beats i drop

funk these mutha fuckin bastards and their kennel cough

funk you and your expectations

funk you and your worthless life

waisting time with your judgement casting

who are you to critisize

i go to sleep and count the sheep

but youz to busy out on the street

you all stay neat, stay on beat

we got one set of footprints with a thousand feet

so break the leash, leave the lies

you ignore the cries as your baby dies

primetime husbands with beaten wives

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

its your time to meet your deathbed

giving up was your demise

you spineless mindless funking lab rat

you sat back and watched it get bad

stand up, man up

get your life back

cant you act like your brain is intact

you are a waist of life

giving up was your demise

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

break the leash

leave the lies

 

 

 

I cba to fix the grammar errors and cut out the parts that having nothing to do with this.

 

But, interpret away. This one should be easier. :/

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[spoiler=More lyrics]taught to walk' date=' through the trash they talk

i dont stop when they drop so they call the cops

but i laugh it off, pass em off

to the texas state pen. so they can gas em all

im blastin off, cause im fast and hot

pullin down the b****es like im Hasslehoff

im on the top, with the beats i drop

f*** these mutha fuckin b****es and their kennel cough

f*** you and your expectations

f*** you and your worthless life

waisting time with your judgement casting

who are you to critisize

i go to sleep and count the sheep

but youz to busy out on the street

you all stay neat, stay on beat

we got one set of footprints with a thousand feet

so break the leash, leave the lies

you ignore the cries as your baby dies

primetime husbands with beaten wives

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

its your time to meet your deathbed

giving up was your demise

you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat

you sat back and watched it get bad

stand up, man up

get your life back

cant you act like your brain is intact

you are a waist of life

giving up was your demise

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

break the leash

leave the lies

 

 

 

I cba to fix the grammar errors and cut out the parts that having nothing to do with this.

 

But, interpret away. This one should be easier. :/

[/quote']

 

Guessing that it has nothing to do with me.

 

Dark, can you try to interpet this song and mine please.

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you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat

you sat back and watched it get bad

stand up' date=' man up

get your life back

cant you act like your brain is intact

you are a waste of life

giving up was your demise

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

break the leash

leave the lies

[/quote']

 

This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read.

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you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat

you sat back and watched it get bad

stand up' date=' man up

get your life back

cant you act like your brain is intact

you are a waste of life

giving up was your demise

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

break the leash

leave the lies

[/quote']

 

This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read.

 

That looks like it is directed to me. Let me guess, stop the lies and become humble?

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I have to go eat right now. I'm still revising the plot' date=' so be patient.

[/quote']

 

That's fine Twig. I'm just glad you are doing it in the first place.

 

you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat

you sat back and watched it get bad

stand up' date=' man up

get your life back

cant you act like your brain is intact

you are a waste of life

giving up was your demise

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

break the leash

leave the lies

[/quote']

 

This is the main part of the song that I was wanting to be read.

 

I'll try, give me a moment.

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My brother took the laptop where I was working on the plot revision. So I can't work on it until an hour or so... Dx

 

That is fine. I should still be awake then, if you are that is.

 

Also, here is my interpretation.

 

 

 

you spineless mindless f***ing lab rat

 

This is telling Striker that he hasn’t the strength needed.

 

you sat back and watched it get bad

 

This is saying he took no control.

 

stand up, man up

 

This is telling him to take control.

 

get your life back

 

And fix his mistakes.

 

cant you act like your brain is intact

 

This is telling him he hasn’t even acted like he could.

 

you are a waste of life

 

This is telling him you don’t like him and he shouldn’t be alive.

 

giving up was your demise

 

He gave up, and lost his only chance to redeem himself.

 

hiding worthless lives behind bloodshot eyes

 

This I’m not too sure about.

 

break the leash

 

Telling him to break free from his old habits.

 

leave the lies

 

And to stop living the way he has been.

 

 

Not too good at interpreting stuff, but there we go. Also, I've decided on my theme songs.

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[spoiler=My Shot at a Song]

Life is full of choices

I have chose mine

A life of destruction

A life of pain

 

Friends I once had' date=' but now all gone

I have turned on them with no remorse

Can you see what I have done?

Can you see my pain?

 

Striker is gone

War Torn has come

Things are changing

For better or worse

 

[/quote']

 

Anyone wish to interpret this? A Rep goes to the person who does.

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Life is full of choices

I have chose mine

A life of destruction

A life of pain

 

This is telling of the 'complications' you've had here.

 

Friends I once had, but now all gone

I have turned on them with no remorse

Can you see what I have done?

Can you see my pain?

 

This tells the result of your choices.

 

Striker is gone

War Torn has come

Things are changing

For better or worse

 

And this is opening up the future.

 

 

Anyway, here are my theme songs.

 

Normal.

And insanity.

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Lust, did you even read this?

 

I needz somebody DX

 

icwutudidthar

 

Actually...I didn't do anything DX

 

You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist']

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Correct Dark.

 

[spoiler=More of it]An outsider I became

Kicked out of every place I was in

Life was going bad

 

Got tired of the trolls

Decided to take action

Challenged the leader, but lost

 

Lost on the broken road

I can't see where I'm going

Humility is what I'm trying to find, but sadly I can't see it

 

 

 

Wish to help?

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Lust' date=' did you even read this?

 

I needz somebody DX

 

icwutudidthar

 

Actually...I didn't do anything DX

 

You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist']

 

Actually...that's true o.0

 

 

I WANT TO POST POEMS HERE.

WHO WANTS TO READ MINE!?

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Lust' date=' did you even read this?

 

I needz somebody DX

 

icwutudidthar

 

Actually...I didn't do anything DX

 

You're full of lust' date=' Lust. You need someone every second. You want attention. You can't stand it when you don't get what you want. You go crazy after a long time of not having what you want. [/therapist']

 

Actually...that's true o.0

 

Wait wut? I was joking...

 

I WANT TO POST POEMS HERE.

WHO WANTS TO READ MINE!?

 

+1 Cookie if it's about lust.

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[spoiler=The Poems of Love]

Are they just simply words of false hope,

leaving my heart broken and torn,

teasing my heart with what they show,

only leading me to cry and mope,

until I finally quiet down and mourn?

 

Or is it something more?

Is It something that I feel?

Is it something that reaches the core,

of the soul and be there for,

the time that I open my seal?

 

The sad truth is,

that it is both of these,

that cause me to miss,

and case me to press,

for a taste of those birds and bees.

 

So strange, so mean,

this feeling of love.

So red, so green,

so pretty to be seen.

To beautiful to stop, so I must...

 

 

[spoiler=My Love's Wind]

The wind cries for her voice,

it yearns for her touch.

It calls for her once, and it calls for her twice,

But still her beutiful hand, it cannot clutch

 

Her voice has long sense drifted away

Into the Earth that she gave her heart.

Even still, the wind calls her name,

it still searches for that wounderful work of art.

 

Soon enough, the wind will learn

That the one it loves is gone.

Until that day, it will continue to yearn,

and search for its only one.

 

 

[spoiler=Is There Any Flower More Ugly Than A Rose?]

Is there any flower more ugly than a rose?

They just grow, and grow, and grow,

As if they are the ones that the world had chose

To be the one that shined for those

Not looking at that wicked crow.

 

That black death that surrounds us all,

Waiting to show its power.

Making us slow to a crawl,

Until we finally fall

In front of loves black tower.

 

And as the world continues to move, the rest of us complain

For we are the ones that sit by the coast

That watch the waves, and dream of a different today.

For those of us, the question remains,

Is there any flower more ugly than a rose?

 

 

...Those are all the poems I've ever written...they...good?

 

...DX


<3 U Clair! *hug* ^_\\\

 

teehee

 

<3

 

guise.

 

breloom is eury's new god.

and

lucario is my new god. D:

 

Awww...What about me, love!?

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