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Screw watching it from the front seat.

 

SAY YCM IS LIKE A MOVIE THEATRE.

I SIT UP THE BACK AND WATCH, BECAUSE I'M OBV. THE COOLEST ONE THERE.

 

AND I SIT UP FRONT, AND TALK THROUGH THE WHOLE MOVIE

 

As you guys PROBABLY saw, I like to be a PWOTAGONIST!

Mandark is best villain

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Offtopic:

I know no one is gonna be that interested, but...

 

I'm writing another Yugioh Fic, and I was hoping Powerforce would like to give me some characters for it? It'll kinda be like an insert fic, but it's not. idk.

 

This is your what, fourth attempt at one?

 

They never work... ;~;

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Anyways, here's a character for you. I'm giving you a condensed version of his full bio.

 

(Not an insert, btw. This guy's an OC.)

Name: Alistair (last name unknown, even to himself); goes under surname of Valtinas

Age: 17-ish

Personality: Keeps to himself mostly, but more due to loneliness than anything else. In truth, he's a kind-hearted, but somewhat shy boy. He'll protect his comrades to the death if driven to such a point, no matter what. He also loves the natural world; everything from the stars in the sky to what little plant life remains in the world.

 

Appearance: Of medium height, and somewhat thinner than most boys his age. Brown hair, with a splotch of bright red along the fringe of a long bang that comes down across his face. Wears a formal light blue shirt with fancy collar, white pants, and black boots. Almost always has a forest-green cloak draped around him and ALWAYS has a violin case (with violin inside, duh) slung across his back or carried in his hands.

 

Bio: Grew up in a moderate sort of family. Parents died in an incident long ago, of which he has no memory. He grew up by himself after that point, wandering the land in search of any bleak ray of hope in the world of turmoil. As a result, he's basically become a nomad, traveling all over looking for some way to start his life anew, but never finding that particular place that he feels an affinity to, and thus continues to travel.

 

Deck: Magical

 

Yeah, it's short. But I've addressed pretty much all of the main points for a character, so just go from there I guess. And if you do use him, I expect that proper credit to the owner be given.

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I think it's best to avoid inserts for fics. I know that sounds hypocritical, but if there's anything I learned about writing a self-insert fic is people tend to focus more on their insert rather than caring for the actual story and no author wants that.

Especially when they complain about what happens to their insert.

Ugh

 

Having characters share similarities with people you know isn't a bad thing though.

Like you could take Remo

But then you exaggerate his "idiocy" and make him into a goof character.

But when you explore his character further, you see he had a past where he was super srs because he had an annoying brother who yapped a lot and was all happy-go-lucky, or something.

And then the brother tragically gets killed in an accident saving Remo or something.

And he feels guilty since he felt his parents liked his bro better and it seemed like they'd never cheer up after his death. So he takes a total 180 and acts more like his brother did to fill the void and to take a better attitude on life, the biggest lesson his brother taught him.

 

And there you have a unique character...sort of.

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I think it's best to avoid inserts for fics. I know that sounds hypocritical, but if there's anything I learned about writing a self-insert fic is people tend to focus more on their insert rather than caring for the actual story and no author wants that.

Especially when they complain about what happens to their insert.

Ugh

 

Having characters share similarities with people you know isn't a bad thing though.

Like you could take Remo

But then you exaggerate his "idiocy" and make him into a goof character.

But when you explore his character further, you see he had a past where he was super srs because he had an annoying brother who yapped a lot and was all happy-go-lucky, or something.

And then the brother tragically gets killed in an accident saving Remo or something.

And he feels guilty since he felt his parents liked his bro better and it seemed like they'd never cheer up after his death. So he takes a total 180 and acts more like his brother did to fill the void and to take a better attitude on life, the biggest lesson his brother taught him.

 

And there you have a unique character...sort of.

 

I completely agree with that Fusion.

 

Which is why I have said and will continue to say, "I am writing this story, not you or anyone else. I'll gladly take suggestions but it is up to me to use them and any character I see. I will try to make you as realistic as possible, but if I mess up unless it is a royal f*ck up . . . I do not apologize."

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