Twig Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 [align=center]Six stars' date=' motherfuckers![/align] *Sprays pancake mix all over the place* f*** YES MY TWIGGY EVOLVED TIME TO KICK THE E4'S ASS Which generation? =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 [align=center]Six stars' date=' motherfuckers![/align] *Sprays pancake mix all over the place* f*** YES MY TWIGGY EVOLVED TIME TO KICK THE E4'S ASS Which generation? =D ALL OF THEM DAMMIT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 YAY TWIGGA! So Mark' date=' opinion of Fan Fic?[/quote'] Still reading. This is what happens when I am trying to spread your Wright meme to Super Mario World Central. I'm working on it now. hey guyz. how do i giv posts? One more post! Where should I post? Post in Pichu's thread trolling him! Ice. Light muttered something under his breath and ran towards' date=' whom he called “Amy’s” house.[/quote'] The last part of that line seemed a little weird to me. Why? It's the lack of a comma I believe. It seems as if there should be one after Amy, then again, I may be misreading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 YAY TWIGGA! So Mark' date=' opinion of Fan Fic?[/quote'] Still reading. This is what happens when I am trying to spread your Wright meme to Super Mario World Central. I'm working on it now. hey guyz. how do i giv posts? One more post! Where should I post? Post in Pichu's thread trolling him! Ice. Light muttered something under his breath and ran towards' date=' whom he called “Amy’s” house.[/quote'] The last part of that line seemed a little weird to me. Why? It's the lack of a comma I believe. It seems as if there should be one after Amy, then again, I may be misreading it. No, I think you're right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 [align=center]Six stars' date=' motherfuckers![/align] *Sprays pancake mix all over the place* f*** YES MY TWIGGY EVOLVED TIME TO KICK THE E4'S ASS Which generation? =D ALL OF THEM DAMMIT Hyper BeamEarthquakeWood HammerFlamethrower Manliest moveset ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 YAY TWIGGA! So Mark' date=' opinion of Fan Fic?[/quote'] Still reading. This is what happens when I am trying to spread your Wright meme to Super Mario World Central. I'm working on it now. hey guyz. how do i giv posts? One more post! Where should I post? Post in Pichu's thread trolling him! Ice. Light muttered something under his breath and ran towards' date=' whom he called “Amy’s” house.[/quote'] The last part of that line seemed a little weird to me. Why? It's the lack of a comma I believe. It seems as if there should be one after Amy, then again, I may be misreading it. No, I think you're right. He is talking about a "person" right? If so, why the 's after Amy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 Light muttered something under his breath and ran towards ---, whom he called “Amy’s” house. Where the bolded dashes are, I think you forgot a word. The sentence doesn't make much sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I already edited that Eury. It's "to", that I forgot. YAY TWIGGA! So Mark' date=' opinion of Fan Fic?[/quote'] Still reading. This is what happens when I am trying to spread your Wright meme to Super Mario World Central. I'm working on it now. hey guyz. how do i giv posts? One more post! Where should I post? Post in Pichu's thread trolling him! Ice. Light muttered something under his breath and ran towards' date=' whom he called “Amy’s” house.[/quote'] The last part of that line seemed a little weird to me. Why? It's the lack of a comma I believe. It seems as if there should be one after Amy, then again, I may be misreading it. No, I think you're right. He is talking about a "person" right? If so, why the 's after Amy? Amy's house? It shows possession? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that, but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that' date=' but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's"[/quote'] Ahh, I see. So, you think it should've been "Amy"'s house. But that looked weird to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 hey guyz. how do i giv posts? One more post! Where should I post?idk but wen u do find out give dem TO MEH. D:< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that' date=' but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's"[/quote'] Ahh, I see. So, you think it should've been "Amy"'s house. But that looked weird to me. Yes. English has always been one of my least favorite subjects because of things like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that' date=' but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's"[/quote'] Ahh, I see. So, you think it should've been "Amy"'s house. But that looked weird to me. Yes. English has always been one of my least favorite subjects because of things like this. Interesting, it's one of my favorites. Well, I'll keep it as it is. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that' date=' but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's"[/quote'] Ahh, I see. So, you think it should've been "Amy"'s house. But that looked weird to me. Yes. English has always been one of my least favorite subjects because of things like this. Interesting, it's one of my favorites. Well, I'll keep it as it is. Anything else? Aside from that, everything else seems fine. Maybe make the next chapter longer though. It was shorter then I thought it would be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 RAEG for what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I know that' date=' but having whom in the same part makes it odd. They way it's worded makes it sound as if he calls her "Amy's"[/quote'] Ahh, I see. So, you think it should've been "Amy"'s house. But that looked weird to me. Yes. English has always been one of my least favorite subjects because of things like this. Interesting, it's one of my favorites. Well, I'll keep it as it is. Anything else? Aside from that, everything else seems fine. Maybe make the next chapter longer though. It was shorter then I thought it would be. PENIS!!!! Ehh, I will. This was just introductory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? I figured it was Godot. I'll enjoy seeing the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? INDEED. THE SHOWER OF EURAEG AND ACE ATTORNEY IS APPROACHING. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 RAEG for what? eye ell oh elld TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? SAUTEED KINGLER WOULD BE NICE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? INDEED. THE SHOWER OF EURAEG AND ACE ATTORNEY IS APPROACHING. I FEEL AS IF MY NAME CHANGE SHALL BE HERE SOON! WHAT SHALL I ORDER? KINGLER FOR EURY, WHAT ABOUT YOU TWO? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? INDEED. THE SHOWER OF EURAEG AND ACE ATTORNEY IS APPROACHING. I FEEL AS IF MY NAME CHANGE SHALL BE HERE SOON! WHAT SHALL I ORDER? KINGLER FOR EURY' date=' WHAT ABOUT YOU TWO?[/quote'] FRIED PICHU WILL BE GREAT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 TIS NEARING DUSK RAEG METER IS GROWING I WANT TO SEE EURY RAEG PICHU!AS DO I SHALL I ORDER THE FEAST FOR THE RAEG SHOWING? INDEED. THE SHOWER OF EURAEG AND ACE ATTORNEY IS APPROACHING. I FEEL AS IF MY NAME CHANGE SHALL BE HERE SOON! WHAT SHALL I ORDER? KINGLER FOR EURY' date=' WHAT ABOUT YOU TWO?[/quote'] FRIED PICHU WILL BE GREAT. THAT'S WHAT I WANTED! I'M SURE WE CAN FIND ENOUGH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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