Kuri Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 [align=center]Digimon Xros Wars[/align] [spoiler=Episode 1: Taiki Goes to Another World] As usual After school I go to basketball practice. This year Redland Middle's Loaders are going to the Championships. And I scored the winning shot! We had a party at my house later celebrating the first time in 7 years The Loaders went to the Championships. Coach said today we would go through a lot of hard practice. By the way my name is Taiki Kudou. I have never broken a promise and if you ever ask a favor from me I will do it as best as I can! "Hey Taiki are you going to join the kendo club?" One kid asks. "I don't know, maybe." I reply. "If you do I'll umm......ummm..I'll..." He says back. "Ok if its that important, I'll join. It is hosted in room 121 right?" "Yup! I'll see you later!" 12:10pm Lunch Period "Ok let's see room 119, 120, ok there! Room 121!" Taiki yells. "Hi my name is Taiki and I was wondering if you would let me join your club...of course I will train hard and participate in any activities." Taiki says opening the room door. "Sure, but we are full right now. But if you can beat Zenjirou we could let you in." One kid says with a grin. "Sure anything to join!" Taiki says getting the kendo gear. "So...if I can beat you then I'll join right?" "Yea" Zenjirou says ready to fight. "Arrrgh!!!" Both yell.12:20pm Lunch Period "Huff....huff...." Both panting after a series of attacks. "Wow the amateur is good....but not that good. Zenjirou is probably faking his exhausted panting.""Arrrgh...." Zenjirou yells charging at Taiki. "Nooooooooo" Zenjirou yells on the ground. "He lost to the amateur!!!!" "So am I in?" Taiki says laying down on the floor. "No....I won't allow you into my club." Zenjirou says angrily. "But I won fairly!-" Taiki yells before getting interrupted. "Get out....huff...huff..." "Fine...fine....." Taiki says walking out. "Zenjirou how could you lose to him he has no kendo experience at all?!" "The floor was slippery you expect me to win on a slippery floor, I ran towards him and I slipped." "But..." "No, I slipped. That's all. Club dismissed, remember meeting after school." Zenjirou says taking his gear off. That kid, Taiki...my eternal rival.....4:04pm Basketball Practice "If Taiki can finish this suicide in 30 seconds then practice is over." Coach says. "Alright, I'll do my best!" Taiki says with a determined face. "Go Taiki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" A girl watching says. "Ok Akari!" Taiki says running. Taiki finishes the suicide.... "So my time is?" Taiki asks. "23 seconds, good job. Practice is over. See you in the Championships everyone!" Coach says dismissing everyone. "Nice Taiki, nice!" Akari says happily. "Thanks, I need to do better because tomorrow coach says he is going to make us do 2 suicides in 30 seconds." Taiki says. "Then as your manager I say let's get you ready! We still have 30 minutes before I have to head home." Akari says grabbing Taiki's shirt. "Wait!! Akari I need to get my...umm shoes." Taiki says running. "Taiki!!!!!!" Akari yells trying to catch up. "Ahhhhh!" Taiki yells running. 4:15pm "I lost her....phew...." Taiki says panting.Help....help..... "Huh?" Taiki says staring at a musical note. FSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHH "Ack!" Taiki yells as a shape forms where the musical note was. "The Xros Loader has chosen you Taiki please help me!" A voice says.ZZZAATTAZZSATTTZZZZZZZZTASSAATTTTTZZZZZZSASTTTTTTTT "Ahhhhhh!" Where am I? Right now I didn't know what was happening but soon enough I found my self in a village filled with things called "Digimon". One Digimon in particular called me by my name. "Taiki come on! Help us." The voice says. And from that day on I was stuck in a place called the digital world. I was going to miss a lot. Like the basketball Championships. But this was more important than that as I later found out. I still have questions remaining but for now I'll solve them on my own..... Look out for more Digimon Xros Wars! This fan fic is based on the upcoming season 6 of Digimon please enjoy what I think how the series will be like. I'll stop making the fan fic once the series airs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 bump comments critism feel free to add to foe-fics just give me the link I want to lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Just saying, if you're planning to quit this once Xros Wars stars, you do realize that you barely have two weeks left till then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 yes I know I don't want to do the whole series because it would be a waste because I know it was coming out pretty soon so I just want to see if my fan fic is close to the original series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 bump needing more critique b4 crab helmet foe fics it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 I could do my style of Foe Fiction, since I'm a Digimon fan and Crab is not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 sure why not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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