Jake the Sage Posted July 20, 2010 Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 *shoves Shadow over* I am not feeling well so shut it. Now Zelman *ahem* For starters if you have a pic, a general description is not needed then. On another note Zero is write with the spelling errors, too much and too often- please try to work on that in the future. As for the bio I feel like I have read it before and, after some searching, found that I have. I do not mind if a character has the same name in a different rpg or has different powers, but a character with the same bio is NOT something I want to see- a copy-n-paste character. As for the personality you begin with him loving murder and violence, yet claim he is a hero? Possibly an anti hero, but certainly not a real super hero. For the powers I don't mind you using the force, star wars referance or not, as it is something that I personally see you putting restrictions on. However your final power, Unknown Force, I want either explained for removed; as I do not want some secret omnipotent power in your backpocket without me or Shadow knowing. The weapons are alright with me. So in total your character sounds like more of a violent anti hero than an actual hero, but tomATO/TOMato . . . His powers I really se no problem with and the weapons are alright. But the bio is what you've flopped on. Unless I see a different bio I will have to say- Not Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2010 I see, I thought it was something other then just the misspellings that was bothering me, although I didn't know what. Zelmen, if you could please change the Bio, then you would most likely be accepted, but no copy pasta please and thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I posted, please tell me if it doesn't make sense, which it prolly doesn't >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Whenever the leader guy calls for Kousei and his demon they will appear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Um, the summons was silent? This would be apparent if you were reading the thread. It's more like getting the feeling that you've been summoned and that you are expected to heed those summons, so just act as though your character has been summoned and make an entrance post with you character, please and thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Are you secretly implying that i'm a tard? >_> Ok so where are you all? l know you're walking or w/e so do l just come on in like a party crasher? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 No, I am secretly implying that you weren't fully paying attention? xD Anyway, yeah, go ahead and be a party crasher. You reserve that right as the head of the bad guys, being second only before the Dark General. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 ... >.> Fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 21, 2010 Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 OK I haven't been paying attention XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 I suppose not Sammael. Perhaps you could post now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted October 13, 2010 Report Share Posted October 13, 2010 Im sorry for the bio. I'll have it done and done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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