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One Piece: The Second Race! PG-16+[Owned by: Hotaru987][Not started/Accepting]-OOC


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You weren't accepted because you never read the rules.

So go back, read all the rules carefully, and then edit you're app.

Do that and Hotaru might consider accepting you.


Name: Riki

Age: 19

[spoiler=Appearance: ]anime151-2.jpg

 

[spoiler=Weapon: Jueru Jueru no Mi (Jewel Jewel Fruit)]This fruit allows Riki to transform any raw minerals(rock, sand, ect) as well as his body in to any kind of crustal or jewel, including, but not limited to, Crystals, Diamonds and many others and can be controlled at will. The harder the substance it, the longer it will take to create, a normal crystal can be created almost instantly, however a Diamond could take up to 4-5 seconds.

The transformations can be that of a powdered or a solid substance, depending on how it is used.

 

[spoiler=Biography: ]Riki grew up as the child of an officer in the world government. For many many years Riki Dreamed of becoming a Marine and climbing the ranks to be an admiral, however this dream was quickly destroyed. When Riki was only 10 years old he started receiving hands on training to join the navy, however it didn't take long to realize how corrupt the government was. When he was 12 Riki was forced to take part in the massacre of a small village that was said to be filled with pirates. After the massacre Riki threw away his Uniform and his name and ran away, but not before taking a devil fruit from the marine ship he was sailing on. After running away Riki met up with Daichi and Arashi, after hearing there dreams of being pirates, Riki decided that he too would become one. Riki helped Daichi and Arashi create the morph morph fruit. One day a golden box floated to shore and was found by the three boys. Inside the box was three keys, and a letter. After reading the letter they realized that the keys belonged to something that resided at the Red line, the halfway mark to one peice. Each f the three boys took one of the keys and made a promise to meet up at the grand line one day. In order to remember there promise each boy carried a necklace with two pendants.

Daichi carries a cross to represent Arashi and a Heart to represent Riki. Arashi caries the same heart and he also caries a ring to represent his brother. Riki caries the cross and the ring. Riki never did like the idea of the heart representing him, but they had few options and he was outvoted.

 

Position on crew: Cooks

Which crew do you belong to?: Anomaly Pirates

Name of (my) fav pie: Sweet potato

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You weren't accepted because you never read the rules.

So go back' date=' read all the rules carefully, and then edit you're app.

Do that and Hotaru might consider accepting you.[hr']

 

I wasn't asking you!!!!

 

but even though following the rules and trying to stay with in the guidelines of my character vision an the fan-fic rules.

i have edited my app not once,not twice,but three times!!!

i went though all this trouble to update,format and spell-check my entire character app only to to be told i couldn't be accepted by someone who doesn't run this fan-fic!!!!!!

 

i was asking hotaru987 if he accept could my character application.

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derr he's helping you duel tester' date=' i bet without even looking at ur app i know what u did wrong. Read the rules on this threads first page and find out for yourself[hr']

 

-_-..........

you should check out my character app it is also on the first page so even if it i made a mistake i could just scroll up and check the rules!!!!!!

i am trying my best to follow the rules and trying to stay with in the guidelines of my character vision and the fan-fic rules.

but but i am getting only criticism when i want reply's !!!!

*0* (screams out of frustration!!!!!!)

Heres this for a idea just go to my app review it and tell me what is wrong! Its the first page scroll down to the third post and then tell me what did wrong instead of just posting "go read the rules!!!!!!"

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LOL! All of that over a pie. Althoug it couldve ben avoided if you read the rules. Blu is right on three points.

1) I am FEMALE!! Lol

2) No hidden warlords....I think that's kind of dumb....

3) You can have the last spot. I just haven't gotten around to changing it.

Duel Tester I will acept you now. I was just on to say that, but I'll be on later to actually post. Sorry if I'm holding anybody up.

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Speaking to .:♦BLU-DAWN♦:. Fleet Admiral Kami is a funny and interesting name to give a person.

 

Kami is a type o paper and means "god"

 

it would be funny if you are using a Japanese pun to make a joke about his Power

Choki Choki no Mi AKA Snip-Snip Fruit

 

to cut threw anything like paper.

http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Snip-Snip_Fruit

 

just thought that was weired.

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